"Snip". That must have been the sound the scissors made so far away as you cut the string to my heart. I felt the string falling, slowly, even though I didn't see or hear the snip. My soul didn't fall precipitously. It fell into the water. Sinking, rising, submerged. Sometimes the waves rolled me over roughly, and I felt and tasted the salt water in my nose coughing, hacking, coming up gasping for air. Other times it simply rolled me gently under the surface. And as I looked around this watery wasteland, I sobbed, looking for reasons to live life. I moved my arms and legs pointlessly ten feet below the ocean's surface. Water was above me and to all sides of me. All I could see was the blurry green-blue unless I closed my eyes and saw black with a hint of green. I swam to the surface and looked around. Still nothing. Maybe a beach far away, but what was the point while this colossal emptiness resode in my heart? I closed my eyes and let the ocean carry me beneath the surface. My cocoon again, to try and dampen the pain until it goes away. But I know it will never go away. If only you hadn't gone 'snip.' |
Copyright ©2013 Ashi Shadow -- -6/21/13 on PM.
Have been wanting to write this for a few days now. It came out reasonably well, though a little different than I intended.
Longer and... more vivid imagery perhaps.
But I think it's better this way.
I also hadn't thought about where it would go towards the end.
The "Still nothing" and after that was totally new since I knew I had to build a bridge to an end.
The 2nd to 4th last lines were not a surprise, though the last line was completely unplanned until near the end of writing the poem.