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There are leaves that fall
inside my heart, like a quiet fanfare of trumpets every time that you walk by signalling the coming and going of cherished happiness that makes my heart flutter and makes me want to hold you in the cold beneath the maple trees. |
Copyright ©2007 Ashi Shadow 11/06/07
beginning loosely based on Katie
I didn't like the cherished happiness line and the heart flutter line originally, I originally only wrote them so I could keep going to the lines after them, and figured I could come back to them and fix them as long as I wrote them with the right mood. But I like the flutter line because I think it helps setup the tone for the following lines, so I might just change nothing at all.