You are a jewel in the junkyard of the opposite sex who litter the Earth baring their teeth in a steely primitive display to convince us that they are friendly and would make a good parent, – but all they really want Is a few years under the bed sheets and the emotional warmth of another human next to them. –which is enough to trap them and make them fall in love, for eternity, but you are a cut above that, sculpted to make us fall in love first and then yearn for you forever. |
Copyright ©2014 Ashi Shadow - 9/22/14 on Binal.
Originally said "women" instead of "opposite sex".
Maybe should remove the words "fall in" and just have "love first".
It looks like that is what I intended in my original writing.
Probably should remove the comma after eternity, not sure if I should capitalize "but"