And in troops the long-awaited (snort), revised chapter three, complete with a different title. Be forewarned, everyone, this is yet another "intro" chapter, in which not a lot happens but you get a glimpse of major characters.^^;; Chapter four will see some action, I believe, but as for now, enjoy this shorter revision for what it's worth. :D
I feel I must also clarify: the Sentinel and Charon (albeit with different names) belong to Matsumoto-sensei. Nemesis, Thanatos, and the three new characters, however, belong to me. DO NOT TAKE, or the demons will eat you!
In an old, deserted parking lot,
bare and forlornly silent, there was nothing.
Or at least there was nothing a
mortal eye could see.
If one were immortal though, or had
that special empathy awarded to some humans, suddenly the worn lot held a lone
dweller. He (or at least most would
assume it was a ‘he’) stood over six feet, imposing and completely hidden in
the death-black cloak which was his attire.
A hood shadowed his face and any distinguishing features, so he was
strangely without identity. A few locks
of hair, startlingly bone-white against the fabric, slid out from the depths of
his cowl.
Death, personified, would probably
look like him. But Charon, Guide of
Stable Souls, was not Death, nor was he in any way related to the immortal who
held that title. At the moment he was
scowling blackly at a glowing sphere in his hand—the epistle Hermes had just
delivered to him.
He did not want to open it, though that would’ve
been the logical thing to do. From past
experience these little messages were always the heralds of trouble, especially when they came from one
particular golden-haired Goddess. Charon
could recall numerous instances, far too many to count, of when opening these
epistles brought a mess on his hands: the time with that elven princess, for
one, or the episode with Satan, or…
It occurred to Charon that maybe he should pretend
Hermes never found him at all. But the
faint hope vanished as quickly as it came.
Hermes was an immortal with a duty.
Immortals with duties always performed
those said duties to perfection. So if
Hermes wanted to find him, he would and, quite frankly, that was the end of
that. No one would ever believe Charon
if he said Hermes failed to deliver a message.
It was as preposterous as saying Charon missed a stable soul somewhere
and forgot to guide it to its resting
place.
Speaking of duties, he had his own to perform. At this very moment, in fact, Charon could
sense the imminent death of a truck driver in
A scrap of some yellowed newspaper
bounced across the pavement, tumbling ungracefully toward Charon, and blew
right through the immortal without meeting a bit of resistance. The Guide of Souls didn’t even notice. He looked at the epistle narrowly, as if it
were a timed curse that would go off at any minute, and deepened his
scowl. He was a busy immortal, with no
time to spare for fickle goddesses who invited people to Upperworld out of
inane whim.
Was
it inane whim?
Nemesis couldn’t even stand him, and the feeling was
hotly reciprocated. So why this epistle
of invitation?
Maybe she
needs help.
If she did need help, Thanatos was right there in
Upperworld to do just that. And she
should ask the Sentinel. Helping was
right up that busybody’s alley.
She probably did ask all of them. And now she is
asking you.
Charon opened the epistle, wishing
he could eat his conscience and be rid of it.
* *
*
The words of the epistle were very
clear, and very significant, to the immortal who surveyed the shining orb while
seated on his throne. He reviewed the
short message once more in his head, heaved a sigh, and slumped against the
soft back of the large chair. The
epistle shimmered once, then vanished at his silent command. There could only be one reason why Nemesis
would send a message asking (more like commanding) him to come, instead of just
waiting for him to drop by like he often did.
Something was wrong with Upperworld—again—and
she did not think she could handle it herself.
Thanatos, the God of Death, bowed
his head slightly and let glittering coal-black eyes be shaded by equally dark
bangs. But what could be amiss? Quickly he ran a list through his mind—the
Dungeons harbored no powerful and malicious prisoner currently, so that wasn’t
it. Nemesis’ duty as the Goddess of
Vengeance never needed his assistance.
Any problems with her work as a scourer, she could take to her fellow in
that field—Lux.
One long, pale finger traced the
lines upon the single thick tassel draped down the front of his deep purple
robes. Now his thoughts wandered
purposefully back to a little oddity which had happened only a few days
earlier. He remembered the event
clearly, as only immortals could, and saw once again: the two low-class Daitra, huddled on the ground, trembling in abject
terror. One had fainted upon his
arrival, the other was nearly insane from fear, and Thanatos could make little
sense of what was being said in huge, gasping sobs. Eventually he had given them up as lost and
teleported both to Elusius, the Healing Houses adjacent to Sagacity Hall. There he had waited, half-curious and
half-worried, hoping for some reason for their inexplicable horror. But it seemed that no amount of healing could
cure them; one—the immortal who had fainted—eventually faded away and vanished
without ever regaining consciousness.
The other was reduced to a hysterical, incoherent mess…the Healer to
whom Thanatos had spoken had shrugged helplessly and said—
“There is nothing more I can do. If she does not recover soon, then there is
only madness or Daitra waiting for her.”
Madness or Daitra… Those were not good choices. To drive an immortal insane is an astonishing
feat, considering their mental capacities were far greater than even the
strongest mortal. To go mad, to live in
a false world made of the delusional ravings of one’s own head…the very idea
gave Thanatos shivers. And as much as
I revere the Darkness, I have no wish to join it prematurely! The thought crossed his mind and he
nearly laughed aloud at the irony. As
the God of Death, it was his duty to decide when a mortal’s lifespan was
over. He was the cause of their
sicknesses, their old age, their accidents, their
fate. And here he was, feeling squeamish
just by thinking of joining Daitra—an immortal’s death! Thanatos shook his head in a vain attempt to
clear it of his disturbing train of thought and finally sighed again. Nemesis was the scourer; she was the one who
was supposed to deal with accidents like this.
Thanatos, as her ‘freelance assistant’ (meaning he helped when he felt
like it), didn’t particularly enjoy the times when scouring duties were thrust
on him. He wondered if there were
something else he could have done to help those two low-class. Perhaps if he had brought them to Elusius
more quickly, they might have been saved.
Most likely trying to get an explanation out of them first was a stupid
thing to do.
Thanatos rubbed his forehead
tiredly. Now that he thought about it,
the incident was the only plausible thing she would have to discuss with
him. What he had seen that day, if it
occurred as the latest in a chain of ‘accidents,’ was certainly enough cause to
alarm a scourer. Maybe she wanted to
know why he didn’t report the event to her immediately. And Thanatos really didn’t know how to answer
that question, if she asked.
With another shake of his head,
Thanatos stood and surreptitiously swept his hands over his robes, smoothing
them out. Better hurry over to the
Vindicar and find out what Nemesis wanted.
He’d had enough of speculating.
* *
*
The waning cries of the phoenixes lightened
the air as he walked briskly through the forest. Looking up through the canopy of intertwined
leaves, the Sentinel could make out bits of clear blue sky, and wished
fleetingly that he could move at a slower pace and enjoy the beauty he’d been
away from for so long. But he could not,
in good conscience, take in Upperworld’s loveliness when immortals like Erian
and Vesha were blatantly terrorizing weaker citizens of the metropolis. He was certain from his observation of those
two that they considered their cruelty a game, and would resume their sordid
amusement soon enough. And of course the
punishment they had suffered at his hand would have no effect; he had wiped
their memories away before they escaped to protect his own identity.
The Sentinel ducked beneath a
too-low branch agilely, skirted around a fallen tree, and moved just in time to
avoid a patch of choke-weed. His nearly
perfect sense of direction aided him best in these situations; most other
immortals, so intent on avoiding the natural traps and bereft of their energy-sensing
ability in the forest, wind up hopelessly ensnared in the largest trap of all:
Greenmyst Minor itself. For a few seconds
the Sentinel stopped, glancing around to get his bearings back.
There. The Vindicar was now directly to his
left. Turning, the Sentinel quickly
moved off in that direction. Nemesis, as
one of the Chief Scourers and the Warden of Upperworld, definitely needed to
hear of Erian and Vesha. If he,
Thanatos, and maybe even Charon took over whatever problem she was currently
having, Nemesis herself could make certain that the two Beryllus never harmed
another immortal again.
* *
*
“What is going on…?” Nemesis squeezed her eyes shut in a vain
attempt to ward off her increasing frustration, then finally threw aside the
scroll—a report from one of the scourers under her command. She was sick of its contents.
But after a while her hand crept out
and slowly pulled the scroll toward her again.
It was times like now that she seriously regretted taking on the duties
of a Chief Scourer in addition to her already demanding work as the Warden and
the Goddess of Vengeance. It was times
like now, when Upperworld just couldn’t seem to remain untroubled, that she
agreed with her lazy best friend, Thanatos—“You must be some kind of masochist,
to take so much work on yourself!” At
least with her work as the Goddess, she only had to deal with evil mortals—no
match for her power—by killing those who manage to escape the punishment of the
human justice system. And being a Warden
was easy compared to Chief Scourer, because the immortal criminals were brought
to her and she only needed to delegate cells.
Nemesis exhaled on a deep, self-suffering note and opened the
scroll. As distasteful as this report
was, she really should reread it, if only to look for a possible variance in
the torrent of ominous accounts she’d been besieged with lately.
My Lady Nemesis, it began, there
has been another unusual disappearance on the southern outskirts of the
metropolis. The missing one is still a
Daitra low-class, this time Dorian of the Grand River-Dale. Once again the characteristics of this
unfortunate occurrence are the same: the immortal’s home is undisturbed, the
belongings untouched, all furniture remains neatly arranged, no trace of foul
play could be found. It is as if this
low-class simply ambled out of his dwellings and never returned…
The scourer who had written this report went
on to speculate, apparently worried that the length of it would not be enough
to satisfy her otherwise. She ignored
his ramblings and concentrated on his facts.
Nothing. This report was just like the jumble of
others on her writing table, all dealing with the disappearances of low-class
Daitra immortals, and all completely devoid of clues as to who the perpetrator
might be. Nemesis resisted the urge to
tear apart this scourer’s painstakingly crafted report into minute shreds, and
instead tossed it aside, where it sat with its discarded fellows. Maybe the Sentinel could see light where it
was all dark to her. Resting her head in
her hands, Nemesis tried to comfort herself with that thought while she waited
for at least two of her colleagues to show up.
And maybe, just maybe, if he weren’t too busy being rude and
arrogant, Charon might listen to her request and help out also.
* *
*
Timere lifted her basket of flowers,
turned, and ambled cheerily back to her little cottage. “Today is a fine day to be blooming, my
friends,” she told the flowers when she reached her doorway. “Now, let’s see how you all look.”
Reaching into her basket, she gently
pulled out a handful of blossoms.
Whispering a low, soft incantation, she tossed the flowers onto the wall
left of her door. Remarkably, instead of
falling to the ground, they stayed where they were thrown as if drawn there by
some force. Timere spoke another low
word, and small motes of white light surrounded the flowers, blurring their
shape. In the next instant the light
vanished, and the flowers were artfully embedded into the wall, forming
beautiful patterns with the blooms already there.
“Finally, all patched,” Timere
sighed in satisfaction as she surveyed her work. The previous flowers living in her walls had
finally worn out, her magic no longer sufficient to sustain them. So she had made a quick trip to her garden
and gathered the necessary ingredients—her little cottage was now as good as
new.
“What a splendid job you’ve done
here!”
Timere started and turned from her
house. Then her eyes widened in
delighted surprise, “Lady Vera!” and as an afterthought to her companion, who
was the other’s shadow: “Lady Valera!”
Before her stood a tall, graceful
immortal-maiden—the Lady Vera—whose most striking
feature was easily a head of long silver hair cascading in waves down her
back. She was clothed in a simple and
elegant gown of white that hung loose over her figure, the perfection of which
was nevertheless very obvious. A single
starstone hung at her throat, winking like a bright eye at all who looked upon
its owner. Slightly behind her was
“I hope we are not disturbing you,”
Vera said graciously.
“Never, Lady Vera,” Timere replied
in earnest. “I always welcome your
visits.”
* *
*
Vera cast a penetrating gaze in the
young immortal’s direction, making certain that her examination of the child
was covert. She had not risen in the
Sages’ favor by being indiscreet and careless.
After a period of observation during which she’d thoroughly investigated
Timere’s personality, Vera had finally come to the conclusion that the girl was
quite suitable for the role she wanted her to play. Certainly there was a nice mixture of
discretion and curiosity that completely fit her idea of the perfect
handmaiden. Granted,
But besides
“She lives in
the outskirts, my Lady, and if she is anything like her mother before her, she
would be ideal for your task.”
So Vera and
* *
*
“You have lived in the outskirts for
far too long, Timere, my child,” Vera said.
“And though it is very beautiful I wonder if you don’t tire of it.”
“No, never!” Timere protested, but there was a false note
in her voice that the Beryllus high-class detected.
“There is nothing wrong with
discontent!” Vera laughed gently. “As long as you don’t suffer too much from
it. Ambition, after all, springs from
discontent, and I admire and respect immortals with ambition.”
“But I am very contented!” Timere tried to explain herself, feeling
rather foolish in the meantime. “I love
my home…it’s just that…well, once in a while it would be nice to…to… see new
things…”
“And so I offer you that chance,
Timere,” Vera continued when the girl faltered.
“I wonder if you would like to visit the metropolis. I know you were there in your youth, but it
was only for a very brief period of time, and there are many sights you have yet to see.”
“Oh, but…” Timere was so completely overwhelmed that she
could barely form a coherent sentence.
“But I have no place to stay!”
“Nonsense!” Vera admonished sternly, with a smile to take
the sting from her voice. “You will live
in my humble dwelling, of course. I knew
your dear mother, child, and I grieved when she left my service to begin her
new life with you and your father.”
The mention of her parents brought a
tingle of pain to Timere’s heart. They
had vanished eons ago, both without a trace, and she had lived alone ever
since, for she knew of no relatives.
Lady Vera, whom her mother had happily served as handmaiden, was
probably the closest thing she had to family, and so her heart warmed toward
the immortal, though her mind constantly reminded her that she, as a low-class,
deserved very little notice from such a powerful presence. Hearing Vera make the suggestion of living in
her home almost wiped away the ache
in her chest. “I…I would love to, my
Lady,” she stammered shyly, looking to the ground.
“Then it is settled,” Vera declared
grandly. “When will you come? I will have
“I…I…” Timere cast around frantically for some
suitable answer. “I don’t know. I suppose any time would be fine. Two…two days from now, perhaps. I do have to cast a spell around my cottage
to keep out intruders.” Here she
suddenly blushed, realizing that with Lady Vera and Lady Valera’s skill, they
could probably cast such a spell in a matter of minutes. “I…with the size of my dwelling…I’m afraid I
cannot go any faster…”
“We could help you…” Vera offered
quietly, gazing with a keen perception at Timere that the other immortal, in
her agitation, missed entirely.
“No, no!” Timere refused the offer, flushing. It was one thing to admire the likes of Lady
Vera and Lady Valera, wielding powers far beyond her. It was quite another to accept help from them
when she was perfectly capable of doing things herself. She was not so devoid of pride… But then, aware that Vera was only trying to
help and her outburst was unforgivably rude, she hastened to apologize and
explain. “It’s just that…forgive me, but
I like shielding my own home. It makes
me feel more secure…” Foolishness!
Complete and utter foolishness!
She cursed at herself inwardly. Thus distracted by her own thoughts, she did
not notice the fleeting smile of satisfaction which crossed Vera’s face at her
refusal. I am a low-class, and I actually said that I felt safer with my own
shield than with the shield of Lady Vera!
Bowing her head, Timere mumbled, “I’m sorry about the delay this will
cause…”
“Don’t be silly, child!” Vera cried, astonishment in her tone and
features at Timere’s shame. “I have
plenty of time. And so does
“No, of course not!” Timere cried, almost vehemently, before she
remembered who she was speaking to. Her
flush began again, and she mentally kicked herself for it. Why must she always be blushing??
Vera smiled again, this time
fondly. “You are just like your mother,
Timere. She blushed often, and I’m
told…” She leaned forward conspiratorially,
“…your father fell for her because of those blushes. Maybe your own love will do the same for
you!”
This did nothing to ease Timere’s
red face, though now she flushed in pleasure too at the new information about
her parents. “You are so kind to me,
Lady Vera. I…I don’t think I deserve your
time… I…” She fumbled for appropriate words, wishing
she had more skill in this aspect.
Finally she managed—“I thank you.
For this invitation…and…and for always visiting me. It must be so far out of your way…”
“It is the least I can do for the
daughter of my best handmaiden,” Vera replied warmly. “I owe your mother a great deal. In fact,” she laughed lightly, “I’m still not
sure I forgive your father for carrying her away like that!”
A hesitant, soft, child-like love
for the immortal coursed through Timere after hearing Vera’s teasing
words. She had very little friends, living
in this part of the outskirts, away from the small villages. But Lady Vera sometimes visited her, when she
wasn’t too busy with her important duties in the metropolis, and whenever she
did Timere felt her loneliness lift. And
though Lady Vera often seemed too beyond her for a heart-to-heart talk, it was
comforting to know that in this wide, impersonal world, there was another
immortal who knew she existed.
When Vera and
Upperworld’s metropolis—the great
city her mother had lived in before Timere’s birth. Where immortals dwelled whose power taxed her
meager imagination. Where the
She could hardly wait to look upon
its splendor.
And so seven differently colored
threads become entwined, slowly at first and almost imperceptible in their
delicate weaving. But another pattern
has begun with these threads, changing again the tapestry of Upperworld.