EPISODE 23
A pretty crappy “drawn” comic, but it does the job. Anyway, it looks like they’re a team now. Wondering who these people are, and if you should recognize them? Well, maybe-- maybe not. But aren’t they missing something? Namely: minions.
Heh, don’t worry. We’ll have minions and boss-guys soon enough, possibly next episode.
Light says:
Good. A little more plot development and plot development.
EPISODE 23b
Okay, this comic went through a bunch of remakes while I was trying to do so many things in one episode.
• Trying to incorporate the D.lord’s new outfit (no one really liked his armor, including myself)
• A relatively good reason for the D.lord to change his outfit
• Some new slash visuals I was working on
• A good enough punchline
• Enough plot to lead into a continuation
• Getting the D.lord more into character (all characters except for Gram haven’t been acting right)
The solution ended up being to make it double length. Action just takes too panels for a single episode.
Like Hemlock, the D.lord’s look is different than anyone probably expected, but I really like it, and we’ll see more of it next bonus.
Light says:
Wonderful. Nice sword effects, love the outfit. Really brings out Dzur's personality. The only advice is make Dzur's hair silver.
