Kimagure Orange Road
"The Shooting Blues"
Volume 1, Story 2
WB Volume 1, Story 2
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty.
Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)
Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty
Additional translation & Full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Andrew Wilson
Gary Kacmarcik
Scott Henry
Peter Norby
Last revision : 11-11-94
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on
which one you have there may be a few extra items.
Examples: The subtitles on page 39 (37) are only in the WB'S!
The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first
six chapters are omitted in the WB's!
Comments on the revision (CN): Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing
lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing
FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines
were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes
of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without
the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is
not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating
yourself...]
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p 39 (37)--TITLE PAGE
[Kyousuke stands in the foreground, unhappy, arms crossed, in P.E. sweats,
but the number on his chest is replaced by a question mark. Madoka sits
in the background on a rail in shorts and sweat top. Her hair is tied up
to one side.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _______ ______
The Shooting Blues shu--to wa buru--
shoot (T) blue
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ___________
Whimsical or Just Pretending. kimagure sore to mo puritenda--
whimsical or/or-else pretender
The Mood of That Girl Is ano KO no KOKORO wa
Like a Spring Mist. that-girl 's mood/heart/mind/spirit
HARU no KIRI
spring 's mist/fog/spray
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p 40 (38)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Takashi: [off]
KYOUSUKE! KYOUSUKE!
2
Takashi: [smoking and reading the paper]
I hear you used the Power omae kinou GAKKOU de
at school yesterday! you yesterday at-school
_chikara_
NOURYOKU TSUKAtta sou da na!
used-the-Power (hearsay)
[Kyousuke is pulling on his school jacket, toast jammed in his mouth.
In reaction, he starts to sweat.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
3
Takashi: [looking up from the paper] ____________
It goes without saying YUu made mo naku kurasume--to ga
that it was a good thing it-goes-without-saying classmate (S)
to put out your classmate's ______
cigarette, but... sutte-ita tabako no HI o
was-smoking cigarette 's flame (O)
KEsu no wa KANSHIN na koto da
putting-out (T) admirable-thing be
shikashi
but
newspaper banner:
Thankful News Gazette o-tayori arigatou SHIMBUN
(hon)-news thanks newspaper
From Lottery #from# CHUUSEN
from lottery/raffle/drawing
4
Takashi: [back to the paper]
If you mess up we'll be hetasureba mata
making the movers rich if-not-take-care again
again!
HIkKOshi -YA o mo--kesaseru
moving-business (O) can-earn-money
koto ni naru zo
especially to-become !!
narration box over Kyousuke's head:
Use the Power --> _CHIKARA_ TSUKAu -->
use-the-Power
Someone finds out --> bareru -->
be-discovered
We move for the 8th time. 8-KAI -ME no HIkKOshi
8th-time 's moving
[Protruding out of the narration box is an arrow that points down and
plonks Kyousuke on the top of his head. Kyousuke's toast falls from
his mouth.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
zuki_
(zukizuki = throb-with-pain)
toast FX: _____
poro_
[Manami stands and smiles. Kurumi sits at the table.]
5
Kyousuke: [penitent and sweating]
I know... wakatte-ru yo...
be-understanding
narration:
Damn! Who the hell told che _ ittai dotchi da yo
on me for no reason? damn! in-the-world which be
yoke-- na koto shabetta no wa
uncalled-for thing blabbed
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p 41 (39)
1
Kyousuke:
Manami, was it you who told manami omae kinou no koto
Dad about yesterday? you yesterday's-matter
_____
oyaji ni shabetta ka?
"old-man"/father (IO) blabbed (?)
Manami head-shaking FX:
bun bun
Father coffee-drinking FX:
zu
2
[Kurumi happily licks at her toast.]
Kurumi FX: ____ ____
mogu paku
Kyousuke: [turning Kurumi's way]
...in that case... ......to suru-to......
then/in-that-case
3
[Kyousuke leans toward Kurumi, who flinches back...]
Kurumi head-shaking FX:
bun bun
4
Takashi: [from behind his paper]
Kurumi, you shouldn't tell kurumi uso wa ikenai zo!
lies! must-not-lie !!
5
Kyousuke: [in Kurumi's face]
YOU SNITCH! kuo no oshaberi KO dame
shit chatterbox girl no-good
ki ga--_
6
Kurumi: [slapping aside the newspaper]
You lied, Dad...!! oto--san no uso tsuki----!!
father 's telling-lies
You said you'd keep it a NAISHO ni shitoku
secret... secrecy (IO) (= shite-oku)
doing-(for-future-purpose)
tte Itta ja na--i
said-that be-not
newspaper FX: _____
basa_
7
Takashi: [off]
Kyousuke, you're the oldest KYOUSUKE omae ga daitai
so... you (S) generally-speaking
CHOUNAN no kuse-ni
eldest-son though/although
Kyousuke: [off]
KURUMI! kurumi_
Kurumi: [off]
That's not faiiirr, Dad! oto--san zuru--i_
father unfair !
Manami: [exasperated]
Heeyyyy, everybody, we'll be chotto---- oni--chan-tachi
late for school!! a-moment (+ group)
GAKKOU CHIKOKU suru wa yo!!
be-late-for-school
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p 42 (40)
1
[Shot looking up at a school building.]
schoolyard FX:
shi~~n
2
Kyousuke: [racing down the empty hall]
Shoot! I'm REALLY late! yabai! HONTOU ni
be-in-for-it- really
CHIKOKU shichatta!
(= shite-shimatta)
be-late-(finality/regret)
Our house is way too mattaku uchi wa
noisy for so damn early truly/quite household (T)
in the morning...!
ASAppara kara
from-so-early-in-the-morning
so--zo--shi sugiru yo~~~~_!
too-noisy
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____ ____
dota dota dota
3
Kyousuke: [coming upon a strolling Madoka]
! !
4
narration:
What's with that girl?! nan da ano KO!
what's-this that-girl
Just taking her time... nonbiri to ARUite...
leisurely walking
Kyousuke:
(Doesn't she mind being late?) chikoku shite mo i-- no ka na
mind-being-late I-wonder
5
[Madoka looks back without expression, and sees him.]
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p 43 (41)
1
[Not really a panel. Madoka full-portrait splashed down the right half of
the page, overlaid on panels 2, 3, 4 and 6. She walks in school uniform,
holding her bag in front of her.]
2
[Kyousuke stares at her in a less-than-friendly manner.]
narration:
A-Ayukawa!! a...AYUKAWA!!
3
[Madoka looks back without expression.]
4
[Kyousuke averts his gaze with disdain...]
narration:
I don't want to get slapped mata hippatakareru no ya
again, so I'll ignore her...! again be-slapped unpleasant
da kara MUSHI shiyou......!
that's-why shall-ignore
5
[...and tries to race past her, but...]
Kyousuke footstep FX: _____
pita_
(pittari = suddenly)
6
Madoka:
It's all right. DAIJOUBU da yo
all-right be
7
Kyousuke: [turning around in surprise]
Eh!?! e_?!
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p 44 (42)
1
Madoka: ____
If it's the teach , he hasn't teacher- if-be
come yet.
mada konai yo
not-come-yet
Madoka FX:
niko_
2
[Kyousuke is stunned speechless.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
3
Madoka: [smiling]
I always walk down this atashi itsu-mo choudo kono JIKAN ni
hallway at just this time. I always precisely-at-this-time
kono rouka TOOru n da
this-hallway pass-through (explan)
Kyousuke: [blushing, smiling nervously]
R-really? he hee~~~_!
4
Madoka: [pointing to the stairs]
Thirty seconds from now suru to sono 30 BYOU ATO ni
he'll come walking up in-that-case that-30-seconds after
those stairs. ____
SENko-- ga ano KAIDAN o
teacher- (S) those-stairs (O)
NOBOtte-kuru no sa
begin-walking-up
5
Madoka: [arms crossed]
See?! hora ne!
footstep FX: ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_
6
[Madoka facial portrait--sweet smile.]
narration:
Ayukawa... She's cute after AYUKAWA... yappari kawaii
all. after-all cute
I-I see... so...soo ka~~
I'm sure she wasn't in a kitto kinou wa kigen ga
good mood yesterday. surely yesterday (T) mood/humor (S)
WARUkatta n da
was-bad (explan)
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p 45 (43)
1
[The sign outside classroom 3-A.]
2
[The teacher writes at the blackboard as the students take notes.]
3
[Kyousuke's attention is directed at Madoka.]
4
[Madoka sits at her desk, hands clasped at her chin, eyes closed.]
5
[Smiling, Kyousuke visualizes Madoka as she looked earlier that morning.]
Kyousuke:
(I'm glad I moved to this (yappari kono MACHI ni HIkKOshita no wa
town!) after-all to-this-town moved
SEIKAI datta na--_)
a-correct-(answer) was !
Kyousuke FX:
ninma~~
(ninmari = smile-a-satisfied-smile)
6
[Madoka looks to the side and notices Kyousuke is looking at her...]
7
[Kyousuke smiles...]
8
[...and waves to her.]
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p 46 (44)
1
[Kyousuke still waves...]
Kyousuke FX: _____
niko_
2
[Madoka looks at him without expression...]
3
[...and primly turns her head away.]
4
[Kyousuke freezes.]
5
Komatsu:
What were you doing, Kasuga?! nani yatta n da KASUGA?!
what did (explan)
[Kyousuke blushes.]
6
Kyousuke: [standing at stiff attention, right palm upward, eyes bugged out]
Right! hai_!
____
I'm imitating Miyao Susumu. MIYAO susumu no mane
's imitation
Komatsu:
Is your head all right? ATAMA DAIJOUBU kai?
head/brain/mind all-right (?)
writing below panel at bottom margin:
No resemblance. nite nai
not-resemble/look-like
7
[Kyousuke rests his chin in his hand in unhappy contemplation.]
narration:
What in the world is going ittai do-- natte n da
on? in-the-world what becoming
Was that smile a little sakki no "niko_" wa
while ago just an a-little-while-ago 's smile! (T)
illusion?!
MABOROSHI datta no ka?!
illusion was
narration:
What do you all think? minasan do-- OMOimasu?
everyone what think
What whimsical behavior! ano kimagure na TAIDO!
that-whimsical behavior
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p 47 (45)
1
[Exterior shot of the school gymnasium.]
2
sign:
Boys Locker Room DANSHI KOUISHITSU
boy dressing-room
3
[Shot looking down at the boys dressing at their lockers.]
Komatsu:
What are we going to do KYOU wa nani ya n da--?
today? today (T) what (explan)
teacher: [off] ______ ______
You should split into four 4 ti--mu ni WAKArete basuke
teams and play basketball. 4-teams (IO) splitting-into basketball
no SHIAI no hazu da yo
's game should-be
4
boy: [pointing back towards the door to the gym floor]
Heeeyyy! The girls are in o----i ONNA NO KO mo TAI-IKU KAN
the gym, too! girls too gymnasium
da tte yo----!!
be
boys: [gleefully]
Ohhhhhh! o~~~_
5
[View of the gym floor. The girls stand around in shorts, sweat tops.]
whistle FX: _____
pii--
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p 48 (46)
1
[Kyousuke and Komatsu sit on a mat at the edge of the gym. Komatsu busily
writes in a notebook.]
2
Komatsu writing FX: ___ ___
se_ se_
Kyousuke:
Komatsu, what are you KOMATSU~~ nani kaite n no
scribbling? what writing
3
Komatsu: [licking tip of pen and smiling]
Yuuko's legs are fat... YUUKO wa kekkou ASHI ga
50 points. (T) scale/structure legs (S)
FUTOI... 50 TEN
big/thick 50-points
________
Mayumi's pretty glamorous mayumi wa nakanaka gurama--
(T) very glamour-(girl)
curvaceous-
75 points... and... 75 TEN......to
75-points and
Komatsu: [to Kyousuke] ______
This is a secret notebook. HIMITSU no no--to da zei
secret 's notebook be
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
4
[Pov shifts so that we now see the girls are doing routines on the balance
beam.]
Komatsu: ______
Yep, the girls in our iya---- uchi no kurasu no ONNA NO KO
class aren't bad at all, no our-(group's)-class's-girls
huh?! mo nakanaka suteta mon ja nai
too things-not-easily-thrown-away
ne--_
Oh! o_!
5
[A girl executes the leg-splits on the beam. A closeup of her cute face is
overlaid on the bottom of the panel.]
Komatsu: [off]
That's Sugimoto from the TAISOU -BU no SUGIMOTO da ze
Gymnastics Club. gymnastics-section 's be
She's good! kimatte-ru ne!
be-sure-to-do-(well)
Sugimoto-on-balance-beam FX:
tan
6
Komatsu: [writing and grinning]
She sure is sexy, hmm?! sasuga da ne-- _ IROppoi ne--_!
indeed that-is (right?) ! sexy-
85 points! 85 TEN
85-points
[Hatta and another boy stand behind Kyousuke and Komatsu, and clap in glee.]
boys FX: _____ _____
pachi pachi
boys:
We are not worthy! yan'ya yan'ya
praise-to-the-skies/give-a-big-hand
7
teacher: [off]
Next, Ayukawa-san! tsugi AYUKAWA-san!
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p 49 (47)
1
[Madoka ties back her hair.]
Madoka shoes-on-gym-floor FX: ____
kyu_
2
[Kyousuke blushes slightly and sweats]
Kyousuke FX: ______
go_kun
3
Komatsu: [closing his book] ___ ______
Well, let's see if it's our saate to iyoiyo ore-tachi no ti--mu
team's turn at last. well finally our-team
ka na
I-wonder
4
Kyousuke:
Wh-what about Ayukawa's a...AYUKAWA no TENSUU wa?
score? 's score
Komatsu hand-on-Kyou's-back FX: ___
pon
Komatsu: ___
It's my policy to have ore FURYOU wa
nothing to do with I delinquents (T)
delinquents.
AITE ni shinai SHUGI na no
have-nothing-to-do-with/ a-policy
ignore/not-care-for
Let's go! It's our game. sa_ iku zo SHIAI da
go !! game be
5
[The girls cluster around Sugimoto-san.]
girl #1:
Amazing... sugoi wa--
girl #2: ______
You were wonderful, SUGIMOTO-san suteki datta wa
Sugimoto-san. wonderful were
Can't beat you...! kanawanai na--_
no-match-for
Sugimoto:
That was nothing. taishita koto nai wa yo
great nothing
[In the foreground, Madoka approaches the beam.]
6
[No art, just a splashed sound FX on a grey panel.]
Madoka-on-balance-beam FX: ____
tan_
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p 50 (48)
1
[This panel covers the top half of the page. Madoka executes an elegant
handstand and achieves excellent elevation on her backflip--in short,
an Olympic-quality performance.]
2
[Kyousuke is shocked beyond belief.]
3
[His dream-like view of the lovely gymnast...]
4
[The rest of the girls stop and watch in disbelief.]
stunned girls FX: _____
zawa_
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p 51 (49)
1
[Kyousuke portrait--still somewhat astonished, but the shock has worn off
some.]
narration:
Stunning. Stunning! Stunning!! ODOROita ODOROita! ODOROita!!
astonished/amazed/"you-don't-say"
She's too good to be kept FURYOU nan-ka
a delinquent. delinquent somehow
sasetoku no motta-inai
(= sasete-oku) wasteful/more-than-deserves
allow/have-(her)-do-(for-future-purpose)
2
[Madoka ends her routine and walks off...]
teacher: [writing in her clipboard]
Very well done. Next... taihen yoku dekimashita
much well/splendidly was-done
tsugi......
3
[...stopping in surprise at the sound of clapping.]
Kyousuke FX: [off] _____ _____ _____ _____
pachi pachi pachi pachi
4
[Kyousuke claps heartily.]
Kyousuke FX: _____ _____ _____ _____
pachi pachi pachi pachi
5
[Madoka is taken by surprise...]
6
[...but recovers to primly turn her gaze away.]
Madoka FX: ___
pui
(puito = go-off-abruptly)
[Meanwhile, the guys gather around Kyousuke...]
boys FX:
jiro jiro
(jirojiro = stare)
Kyousuke: [stopping his clapping]
Uh... to...
7
[Interior shot looking up at the overhead windows of the gym.]
whistle FX: ______
pi---_
teacher: [off] ______
Play! purei_
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p 52 (50)
1
[Racing onto the court, Komatsu gives Kyousuke a hearty slap on the back.
Kyousuke pitches forward.]
Komatsu:
Let's see how well do--re KASUGA-kun no o-tenami
Kasuga-kun plays...! well/then 's (hon)-skill
HAIKEN to ikimasho-- ka----_!
look-at let's-go (?)
Komatsu back-slap FX: ___
ton
2
[All the boys on Komatsu's/Kyousuke's team raise their fists.]
Kyousuke:
Allll right, let's do it...! yo----shi yattaru de~~~~_!!
did
Komatsu:
That's promising. promising/hopeful fellow be
boys:
OHHH. o~~
3
[Kyousuke has the ball stolen from him...]
narration:
Even though... ---- to wa
ball-steal FX: _____
suka_
(sukasazu = promptly/without-hesitation)
4
[...and a pass thrown directly over his head...]
narration:
...I said... Itta
ball-pass FX:
hyoi
(hyoito = nimbly/suddenly)
5
[...and tripped up by an outflung foot of an opponent.]
narration:
...that... mono no
Kyousuke: [flapping his arms while going down]
Oh, waaah... o wa~~~~
6
[Kyousuke stands and catches his breath. The action proceeds downcourt.]
narration: ___
...I'm always relying on the ore tte itsu-mo
Power, so I don't get enough I (T) always
exercise! _chikara_
NOURYOKU ni tayotte bakari iru kara
only-relying-upon-the-Power since-is-there
UNDOU FUSOKU
(physical)-exercise lack/deficiency
nan desu!
it-is
Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ______
haa haa zeizei
Kyousuke down-the-court FX: _____
ba--n
(ban = keep-one's-eye-on/lookout)
narration:
Not only can't I score, I TEN o Ireru dokoroka
can't even get my hands point (O) put-(a-thing)-in far-from/
on the ball... not-at-all
______
bo--ru ni FUreru koto
touch-the-ball matter
sura
(surasura = smoothly/without-a-hitch)
dekinai nan-te
not-be-able-to or-such
This is humiliating! ......haji da na--_
shame/humiliation be !
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p 53 (51)
1
narration:
How lame!! kakko wari--_!!
uncool
2
teacher:
One minute left. ato 1-FUN
remainder 1-minute
whistle FX: _____
pi--_
3
Komatsu: [hurling a ball]
Kasuga! KASUGA!
Kyousuke:
! !
4
[Kyousuke has it land neatly in his arms.]
ball FX: ___
pon
5
Komatsu: [winking, giving the thumbs-up]
Go-o-o! If you make it, ike----_ sore de GYAKUTEN daa_!!
we'll come from behind!! go ! so-that come-from-behind/ be
reversal
Komatsu FX:
ni_
6
Kyousuke: [swiveling his head in confusion] ______ ______
Eh?! Eh?! The basket. The e_! e_! go--ru go--ru!
basket! goal
Kyousuke head-swiveling FX:
kyorokyoro
7
Kyousuke: [finding the basket and dribbling towards it]
(L-looks far...!!) (to...TOOi......!!)
distant/long-way-off
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p 54 (52)
1
[He turns to look to the side...]
Kyousuke FX:
chira_
2
[...and sees Madoka, who's leaning back against a wall and watching.]
3
[Closeup of Madoka.]
4
narration:
A-Ayukawa is watching...! a...AYUKAWA ga kotchi MIte-ru...!
(S) this-way be-looking
[Kyousuke almost loses control of the ball.]
Kyousuke movement FX: ___
da_
Kyousuke:
Oops. Oh. otto dokkoi
5
[He races towards the basket, one eye on Madoka.]
6
narration:
Coming from behind would GYAKUTEN -GAchi kaa----_
look cool. come-from-behind liable-to-(do)
_____ __
kakko ii na
look-cool
Should I use... TSUKAtchaou ka na......
(= TSUKAtte-shimaou) I-wonder
shall-use-(finality)
7
narration: _chikara_
...the Power? ......NOURYOKU o
Power (O)
Kyousuke running FX: _____
da--n
8
narration: ____
I might be discovered... moshi baretara......
perhaps if-discover
______
No, it's okay! Even an iya DAIJOUBU da! bo--ru o
ordinary person can put no all-right be ball (O)
a ball in the basket. ______
go--ru ni Ireru gurai nara
goal (IO) to-put-in like/so if-it-is
FUTSUU no NINGEN datte dekiru
ordinary/common person even can
koto da shi
matter be consider/and-besides
____
Nobody will know!! bareru koto wa nai!!
to-discover thing not-there
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p 55 (53)
1
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares at the basket as he continues his
dribble.]
2
[He eludes one defender...]
narration:
Ah, but wait! ha_ demo MAte yo!
ah! but wait
3
[...and dribbles on.]
narration:
If you think about it... KANGAete-mirya......
(= mireba)
if-try-and-think-about-it
4
[Narration is splashed on the entire panel.]
narration:
It's only natural to shoot atari MAE no koto nan da yo na----_
a basket! normal/common thing that-is
______ ______
bo--ru o go--ru ni Ireru tte no wa!
ball-into-goal to-put
[A tiny pic of Kyousuke shows him to be sweaty, nervous and near a breakdown.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
ku_!
5
[He has second thoughts while driving the lane.]
narration:
It's pitiful to think I kore gurai no koto mo
have to use the Power to this-(one)-extent 's matter too
make this shot.
_CHIKARA_ ni TAYOranakya
Power (IO) (= TAYOranakereba)
if-not-depend-on
dekinai tte no wa
not-be-able-to
NASAkenai yo na
pitiful/shameful
Kyousuke:
Huff! Huff! Huff! ha_ ha_ ha_
6
Kyousuke: ______
Wah, it's the basket!! wa mou go--ru da!!
already goal be
7
[Madoka watches, arms crossed.]
narration:
All right. I've made up yoshi KImeta!
my mind! decided/resolved
8
[He pulls up for a 5-foot jumper over the last defender...]
Kyousuke:
Yeearghh!! eei_!!
!
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p 56 (54)
1
[Interior shot of the upper windows of the gym.]
2
[Isolated shot of a basketball that rests on the court.]
3
boy:
But, gee, that was close... shikashi oshikatta na----_!
Too bad! but almost-&-tough-luck
4
Komatsu:
Shh! shi---_
5
Kyousuke: [sitting in misery] ___
Sorry... We lost because of gomen...... ore no sei de
me. sorry my-fault on-account-of
MAkechatte
(= MAkete-shimatte)
being-defeated-(finality/regret)
[Komatsu gives a nervous forced smile.]
6
Kyousuke: ___
It's my fault. ore no se-- da mon
my-fault (is-the-reason)
By way of apology, next time o-wabi ni KONDO nan-ka
there's anything, tell me (hon)-apology (IO) next-time something
and I'll do whatever it is.
attara itte-kure nan-demo
if-there-is tell-(favor-to-me) anything
yu-- koto kiku yo
to-tell things to-listen
7
boy:
Don't be so stuffy. sonna katai koto yu-- na yo
that-kind-of upright-manner to-say
boy: ___
We don't really care. ore-tachi BETSU ni KI ni shitenai
we not-particularly-care
kara
that's-why
Kyousuke:
Thanks, everyone. arigatou minna
8
[The 3 boys walk off the court towards the locker room.]
boy: [turning to look back]
We'll tell you if there's n ja ma-- nan-ka attara
anything. well something if-there-is
tanomo-- ka--
shall-ask/request
Ha ha ha ha hah! fu_ fu_ fu_ fu_ fu~~~~_
laughter
Kyousuke: [fearful, hand clapped over mouth]
Maybe I shouldn't have yappa iwanakya yokatta
said that. sure-enough (= iwanakereba) was-good
if-not-say
ka na
I-wonder
Kyousuke FX:
zoku_
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1
[He sits on a mat in misery and contemplation.]
narration: _chikara_
I knew I should have used yappa...... NOURYOKU TSUKAeba
the Power... sure-enough if-used-Power
yokatta naa......
was-okay
2
[Outside the gym, in a hallway, the 3 boys pass Hikaru, who's headed to the
gym.]
boy:
I thought he was going to demo ano TOKI HAItta
make it. but that-time was-going-in
to OMOtta n da kedo naa--
thought-that (explan) but
3
boy:
Kasuga is, well... KASUGA tte sa--
4
boy:
...not that good in sports. UN -CHI nan da ne
luck/fortune foolish that-is
5
Hikaru: [smiling and tossing up a pack of cigarettes]
Heh heh...! he_ he_ ----_
6
[Hikaru walks past the open door to the gym floor. She glances in.]
7
Hikaru:
Okay. I'm going to smoke in yossha KYOU wa TAI-IKU KAN no
the back of the gym today! today (T) gymnasium 's
URANIWA de suo--tto!
in-the-back smoke
8
[Stepping near the door, she looks in...]
Hikaru:
Huh?! n?!
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1
[From the left and behind Kyousuke, Hikaru watches him from the doorway.]
Hikaru:
(That's the guy who got (aitsu kinou madoka-san ni
slapped by Madoka-san that-guy yesterday (IO)
yesterday...!)
hippatakareta yatsu da...!)
slapped fellow be
(What is he doing here...? (nani yatte n daro
what doing (poss-explan)
konna TOKORO de.....
at-this-kind-of-place
Somehow he doesn't look nan-ka KAO IRO WARUsou......)
too good...) somehow expression looks-bad/poor
2
[Kyousuke spies the basketball that rests on the floor.]
narration:
What kind of look did ......AYUKAWA wa ano TOKI
Ayukawa have when I missed (T) that-time
the shot...?
donna KAO shite-ta
what-kind-of-expression was-making
darou...
poss-be
Kyousuke:
(I was too ashamed to look.) hazukashikutte mirenakatta naa
shameful/disgraceful not-looked
3
[He takes the ball in hand and cocks his arm back.]
narration: _chikara_
Shit! If I had used the kuso--_ NOURYOKU TSUKAeba
Power, making a shot like shit ! if-used-Power
this... _______
konna shu--to gurai...
shoot-like-this extent
4
[Flashing with the Power, he launches the ball.]
Kyousuke:
...would have been easy!! wakenai noni!!
easy/simple though
ball FX: ______
bishu_
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[Hikaru's pov as the ball sails fast and true towards its target.]
2
[Isolated shot of the basket. It's all net.]
ball FX: _____
zubo_
(zuboshi = hit-the-mark)
3
Hikaru: [incredulous]
Wha... na...
4
[Kyousuke still sits there in misery, unaware of his audience.]
narration:
Wh-what's this...?! na...nan da---_?!
what-is-this
______
He made a shot from this ko--to no hashi kara HANTAIGAWA no
side of the court... from-court's-edge the-opposite-side's
______ _______
go--ru ni shu--to dekiru nan-te....
goal (IO) shoot be-able-to or-such
5
[In her shock, she drops her pack of cigarettes.]
narration:
He's... aitsu.....
6
[Isolated shot of Hikaru's feet and the pack of cigarettes which lies there.
And the tobacco industry loses another young customer...]
narration: _____________
...COO-OO-OOL!! i - ka - su - jan!!
groovy/attractive
cigarettes FX: ___
to_
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[Madoka stands in jeans and jacket, back to us. She looks back over her
shoulder.]
Title: ___________
Character Profile kyarakuta-- SHOUKAI
character presentation/introduction
Madoka:
Ayukawa Madoka AYUKAWA madoka
Kouryou Junior High School, KOURYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU -BU 3-NEN
3rd year. secondary-school section year
Things I like? SUki na mono?
liking things
Alcohol. And cigarettes, o-SAKE IMA wa yamete-ru kedo
but I quit. liquor now (T) be-stopping but
______
tabako
cigarettes
And...? Oh yeah. soshite......? a so-- so--
From the viewpoint of hoka no HITO kara MIreba
others, it may seem like other-people from if-looking-at
I don't quite know what
I'm thinking... atashi tte kekkou nani
I (T) quite what
KANGAete-ru ka wakaranai
be-thinking not-understand
mitai da kedo
seem-like be however
But, to tell you the truth... demo HONTOU wa ne......
but truly (T)
______
I'M NOT TELLING! yappari naisho!
after-all secrecy/privacy
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