Kimagure Orange Road "The Incoherent Feeling!" Volume 2, Story 5 WB Volume 1, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Ramon Galindo Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on page 281 (95) are only in the WB's! --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (95)--TITLE PAGE [A view through a camera viewfinder at Madoka who stands outside, resting her elbow on the counter of a concession stand. A burger sits at her elbow, a soft drink in her hand.] MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ The Incoherent Feeling! chiguhagu fi--ringu! incoherent/odd feeling SUB-TITLE (at bottom) A Gentle Breeze Through MIDORI no sayoKAZE the Green Growth Feels green/verdure 's gentle-breeze/light-wind Wonderful... SUTEKI na KIMOchi... wonderful feeling _______ AShot of Her in HIzashi shafu-- de a Shaft of Sunlight! in-a-shaft-of-sunlight ______ ano KO o shotto! that-girl (O) shot --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (96) 1 [Exterior shot of a school building.] 2 [Kyousuke peers into the classroom through a crack in the partly-opened door.] door FX: _____ gara_ 3 [His eye scans the classroom.] 4 Matsuoka-sensei: [off] KASUGA-KUN. KASUGA-kun Kyousuke FX: _____ biku_ Kyousuke: Y-YES! ha hai_ 5 Matsuoka-sensei: [standing in the hall] What are you doing nani yatte n no konna so early in the morning? what doing this-kind-of ASAppara kara? so-early-in-the-morning beginning/from Kyousuke: [blushing] Ah, no, it's nothing... a iya nan demo nai desu... no nothing is 6 [He enters the class, behind Matsuoka-sensei.] Kyousuke FX: kiri--_ 7 [He sweats and peers about the room...] narration: But... shikashi---- --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (97) 1 [...and visualizes the slap he got the night he was drunk.] narration: How unpleasant! KI mazui na--_ unpleasant/awkward-(silence) Considering what happened kinou no koto KANGAeru to AYUKAWA ni yesterday, I don't have the about-yesterday when-consider (IO) guts to face Ayukawa... awaseru KAO ga nai yo------ made-to-meet face/honor (S) not-there 2 Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_ 3 [Madoka is glaring at him.] Madoka contemplation FX: ji---- 4 [Kyousuke cringes.] Kyousuke FX: giku_ 5 [He puts on a nervous smile and waves to her.] Kyousuke: G-good morning. o ohayo 6 Madoka avert-gaze FX: _____ tsun_ (tsunto = assuming-a-prim-attitude) 7 [He looks down, in defeat.] narration: Aaaah! a----a! Kyousuke FX: _______ gakkuri Kyousuke: (If I could, I'd rather be (dekireba... KYOU wa kitaku home today!) if-possible today (T) go-home/be-home nakatta!) was-not-here --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (98) 1 narration: But... I have to do shikashi---- kore wa nan toka something about this! but this-(one) (T) somehow shinakerya! (= shinakereba) if-not-do 2 [His pov of Madoka, who sits at her desk and pointedly ignores him.] 3 [Exterior shot from ground level, looking up at the roof of a school building.] schoolbell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ kin kon kan kon 4 [Madoka walks down the hall with her schoolbag.] Kyousuke: [off] AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA! 5 Kyousuke: [nervously] U-uh... About yesterday... a ano-- kinou no koto da kedo... about-yesterday it-is but 6 [She turns to look at him...] Kyousuke: [embarrassed] ___ A-at the time, I... a ano TOKI wa ore... that-time (T) I 7 [...then turns her back on him.] Madoka FX: ____ pui_ (puito = go-off-abruptly) 8 Kyousuke: (She won't even listen to (KUCHI mo kiite-kurenai ya anything I say... mouth even not-listen-(favor-to-me) It's not going to be easy korya chotto ya sotto ja......) to solve this...) this a-bit/wait/ and quietly/gently/ somewhat stealthily/secretly Madoka FX: ____ ____ suta suta --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (99) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Hikaru: [off] Huh? are? 2 Hikaru: I'm sure... atashi TASHIka.......... I surely/certainly 3 Hikaru: [lifting a steaming mug] ____ ____ I ordered ice tea. aisu ti-- deshita yo ne ice-tea was Madoka: Ah... a... 4 Madoka: Oh, that's right... a so-- da kke that's-right (?) Sorry, I'll make it again, gomen IMA sugu tsukurinaosu yo right away. sorry right-away re-make Hikaru: Oh, don't worry. a kamaimasen yo 5 Hikaru: [musing] But... That's so strange. shikashi... mezurashi-- desu ne but strange/unusual is (rhet) Madoka: Huh? e 6 Hikaru: Oh, I mean, for you to e iya madoka-san ga ukkari make an absent-minded (S) absent-mindedly mistake... machigatta koto suru nan-te...... mistaken thing to-do somesuch 7 [Madoka stops, wide-eyed...] 8 Hikaru: Did something happen? NANI-ka atta n desu ka? something happened (explan) (?) [Madoka's back is towards Hikaru, but we see the look of great surprise on her face.] --------------------------------------------------- p 286 (100) 1 Madoka: E-everything's fine! da daijo--bu yo_! It was only an unsuccessful MISUI datta n da kara_!! pass!! attempted/ was (explan) that's-why unaccomplished 2 Hikaru: WHAT? e 3 Madoka: OH! a 4 Hikaru: "Unsuccessful pass"...? MISUI tte......? What are you talking about? nan no koto desu kaa? what-kind-of-thing is (?) 5 [Madoka grows pensive, and visualizes Kyousuke the night he got drunk and tried to kiss her.] narration: Even though he said he FURYOU ga KIRAi da tte Itta hates delinquents, to then delinquent (S) hate be said-that turn around and try something like that! kuse ni TOTSUZEN anna koto though suddenly that-kind-of-thing shiyou to suru nan-te! should-do the-likes-of Kyousuke: [flashback] You're different from them! AYUKAWA wa aitsura to wa chigau yo! (T) vs-those-people different 6 narration: What the heck was he trying aitsu ittai do-- yu-- to pull? that-guy in-the-world what-kind-of tsumori datta n darou? motive was (poss-explan) At that moment, I might ano TOKI atashi moshi-ka-shitara have... that-occasion I perhaps ano mama------ that-moment 7 Master: Speaking of strange, he mezurashi-- to ieba... KYOU wa hasn't come today, hmm? strange speaking-of today (T) Kasuga-kun... konai ne KASUGA-kun...... not-come (rhet) --------------------------------------------------- p 287 (101) 1 Madoka: [blushing, gaze downcast] ____ ____ Here, Hikaru. Ice tea! hai hikaru aisu ti--! here ice-tea ice-tea FX: ___ ton 2 Hikaru: ? ? 3 [Master's pov of an obviously-flustered Madoka.] 4 [Madoka's pov of a concerned Master.] 5 [Exterior evening shot of ABCB.] --------------------------------------------------- p 288 (102) 1 [Madoka stops at the door as she leaves ABCB.] Madoka: So then... ja kore de... then with-this/now/here 2 Master: Ayukawa-kun. AYUKAWA-kun 3 [A view of a wall. A poster of a girl in sailor suit, saluting, is partly in view.] Master: [off] In the end, he never did to--to-- KYOU wa show his face here. at-last/in-the-end/after-all today (T) KAO o MIsenakatta ne KASUGA-kun didn't-show-face (rhet) 4 [Madoka facial portrait.] 5 Madoka: [sternly] That has nothing to do with atashi ni wa KANKEI arimasen me. me (IO) (T) connection/concern not-have 6 Master: [smiling] ...... In that case, ...... sore nara then it's okay, but... if-so/in-that-case betsu ni i-- n da kedo ne -particularly okay (explan) but (rhet) I mean, it's really nice to iya WAKAi tte koto wa honto ni be young, hmm?! young (T) thing (T) really i-- koto da ne! nice-thing be 7 Master: Since youths are frequently CHI no KE mo OUi kara hot-headed and have too hot-blooded/rash/ too frequent/much since much energy, they get quick-tempered sidetracked... GENKI amatte spirits/energy/pep remaining/being-too-much DASSEN suru koto mo be-derailed/wander-(from) thing too aru kedo ne happen but --------------------------------------------------- p 289 (103) 1 Master: But, as for him, there should demo HONNIN to shite wa also be times that call for but person-himself in-capacity-of (T) seriousness! kekkou SHINKEN na BA-AI datte quite serious occasions even/also aru hazu da yo! there-are should be 2 [Madoka blushes slightly as she takes in his words.] 3 Master: [with a wink] Well, he's a regular maa JOUREN no o-KYAKU-sama customer and we should regular-companions 's customers take good care of those! da shi be and-besides TAISETSU ni suru yo-- ni! value/take-good-care-of as-though/so-as-to 4 [Madoka's features relax.] 5 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Madoka: [off] I put you through an o-tsukare-sama deshita exhausting time.* fatigue was <*Cultural note and commentary: A common phrase that doesn't translate well into English--something said in courtesy after a long day of work. It implies an apology for having put the other through such an ordeal.> door FX: _____ batan sign: ABCB abakabu 6 [Madoka stands just outside the door, in thought.] 7 Madoka: [smiling] 'kay! un! 8 [She walks off.] --------------------------------------------------- p 290 (104) 1 [Shot of the sign outside classroom 3-A.] 2 [Kyousuke, at his desk, isn't aware of the approach of a female classmate...] Madoka: Excuse me... chotto.......... 3 Kyousuke: [looking up in surprise] EH?! e 4 Madoka: [smiling] It's about yesterday... kinou no koto da kedo about-yesterday it-is but 5 Kyousuke: [leaping to attention] Y-yes!! ha hai_!! Kyousuke FX: shaki Kyousuke: Wh-what is it? na nan deshou what poss-is-it 6 [Komatsu hooks Kyousuke by the arm.] Komatsu: [grinning] ___ Kasuga, let's go buy some KASUGA pan KAi ni iko-- ze_!! bread!! bread let's-go-buy 7 [View of Madoka, who stands, a bit unhappy.] Kyousuke: [off] Ah. Eh?! But... a e_ demo... 8 Komatsu: [racing off with Kyousuke in tow] If we don't go early, we HAYAku Ikanai to MABOROSHI no won't have the pleasure early/soon if-not-go illusive/illusory of meeting the illusive __________ katsu-sand today. katsusando ni KYOU mo katsu-sandwich (IO) today too o-ME ni kakarenakunatchimau zo (= kakarenakunatte-shimau) not-meet/see/have-pleasure-of meeting- (finality/regret) --------------------------------------------------- p 291 (105) 1 Komatsu: Wait for me, my little matte-ro yo-- katsu-saaand. be-waiting-(command) ___ __________ ore no katsusando-cha--n my little-katsu-sand 2 [Madoka lets out a little puff of air.] 3 Madoka: [spinning about] (I'll eat lunch with Hikaru (hikaru to o-HIRU demo then.) w/Hikaru noon/lunch TAbeyo-- tto) shall-eat 4 [A view of the usual mob outside the lunch concession. Kyousuke has emerged holding two items.] crowd FX: ________ gayagaya sign: ??> nomie rase Kyousuke: __________ (Got 'em. Katsu-sand.) (yatta ne katsusando) did-it (rhet) 5 Kyousuke: (I wonder what on earth (shikashi sakki no AYUKAWA Ayukawa wanted just then. but a-little-while-ago 's ittai nan no YOU datta in-the-world what-kind-of-business was n darou (poss-explan) Maybe she was going to hyottoshite yurushite-kureyo-- forgive me...) maybe/possibly shall-forgive-(favor-to-me) to shite-ta n ja...) as was-there ('cause) sign: Concession KOU BAI FU buy selling section/department crowd FX: ___ Got some bread. pan cho--dai bread receive/have/eat Wahhh, ouch! wa-- itete! [From off to the side, Hikaru spots him, her face lighting up.] 6 [She executes another neck-tackle of Kyousuke... He goes bug-eyed, as do many of the students around them.] crowd FX: OHHH! o~~~~_ Hikaru: Kasuga-sempaaai!! KASUGA-sempa--i!! 7 narration: As usual, Hikaru-chan's itsu-mo nagara hikaru-chan no kono DAITAN boldness overwhelms me... as-usual 's this-boldness sa ni wa atto-- sareru na------ is-overwhelming/irresistable crowd FX: zawa Kyousuke: J-just a minute, Hikaru-chan. chi chotto hikaru-chan --------------------------------------------------- p 292 (106) 1 Hikaru: [looking him in the eye] HUH? are? 2 Hikaru: ___ Do you usually have bread SEMPAI itsu-mo pan nan desu kaa , Sempai? usually bread is (?) Kyousuke: W-well... ma maa ne 3 Hikaru: [holding and glaring at a katsu-sand] That's no good!! ikemasen yo!! During your growth years, SODAchi zakari ni konna mono you shouldn't only be eating growth peak/prime (IO) this-kind-of-thing this sort of stuff! bakkari TAbetecha! just/only (= Tabete-te wa ) shouldn't-be-eating 4 Hikaru: [brightly] I know! I'll share my so-- da! atashi no o-bento-- box lunch with you and my-box-lunch we'll eat it together on the rooftop! wakete-ageru kara divide/split-(favor-to-you) that's-why OKUJOU de ISSHO ni TAbemasho_ on-rooftop together shall-eat! 5 [She gazes tenderly into his eyes.] Hikaru: __ _______ RIGHT?! Darling. ne! da--rin Kyousuke: [sweating, blushing] Y-yeah! u un! 6 [She practically slings him over her back and drags him off down the hall.] Hikaru: That's good, that's good! i-- kara i-- kara! Kyousuke foot-dragging FX: ____ ____ zuru zuru 7 Komatsu: [merrily eating] Kasugaaa. Go for it... KASUGA~~~~ gambatte-koi yo~~~~ come-try-your-best-(command) --------------------------------------------------- p 293 (107) 1 [Ground view looking up towards the roof of a school building.] Kyousuke: [off] Ayukawa strange? AYUKAWA ga hen? (S) strange 2 [They stand at the rail.] Hikaru: That's right. so-- nan desu yo Madoka-san doesn't seem her itsu-mo no madoka-san rashikunaku usual self and is acting usual not-like/seem absent-minded. _______ bo--tto shite-ru n desu yo nee is-being-absent-minded (explan) 3 Hikaru: [suddenly turning to look at him] Still... I wonder if yappari... nani-ka atta no kashira? something happened? still something happened I-wonder Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_ [The skies darken...] 4 Hikaru: [glaring at him] She's not talking about it, atashi ni sae itte-kurenai nan-te even to me. even-to-me not-saying-(favor-to-me) I'm sure something big must kitto yohodo no koto ga have happened! surely considerable-thing (S) atta ni chigainai wa! must-have-happened Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_ [The day turns pitch-black around him...] 5 [The sunlight returns...] Kyousuke: [nervously] (S-something big, huh...?) (yo yohodo no koto nee...) 6 Kyousuke: [closing his eyes in resolve] (Liquor is so frightening.) (o-SAKE tte kowai na) liquor (T) frightful/horrible --------------------------------------------------- p 294 (108) 1 [Shot of the sign outside classroom 1-B.] 2 [A girl talks to Madoka.] Hikaru's classmate: Hikaru? Oh, if you mean hikaru? aa HIYAMA-san nara... Hiyama-san... if-it-is 3 Hikaru's classmate: It looked as if she was nan-ka OKUJOU no ho-- ni going to the rooftop. somewhat direction-of-rooftop (IO) itta mitai desu yo-- went seems Madoka: Rooftop? OKUJOU? 4 [Hikaru smiles merrily as she lifts up a shrimp tempura with her chopsticks.] Hikaru: Here! Say "ahh". hai! a--n 5 Kyousuke: [opening wide] Ahh. a~~n 6 Kyousuke FX: _____ paku_ 7 Hikaru: Taste good? oishii? Kyousuke: Y-yeah... u un... 8 [View pulls back to show them kneeling and facing one another.] Hikaru: I wonder if I'll make a watashi tte i-- okusan ni nareru good wife? I (T) good wife (IO) can-become kashira? I-wonder Kyousuke: [nervously looking up at the sky] W-well. I suppose. so so-- ne ma-- ne (But, is it okay for me to (shikashi kono HIJOUJI ni be doing something like but this-crisis (IO) this right now...) konna koto yatte-te i-- no this-kind-of-thing be-doing okay ___ darou ka ore........) poss-be (?) I --------------------------------------------------- p 295 (109) 1 [Looking over Hikaru's shoulder, Kyousuke sees something off-panel.] Kyousuke: HUH? n? 2 [His pov of Madoka, who stands at the entrance to the rooftop.] 3 [He blushes.] narration: Ayukawa...!! AYUKAWA...!! 4 [She blushes.] 5 [Madoka spins around to leave. Hikaru smiles, not having noticed anything.] narration: O-oh no! Even though things shi shimatta! tada de sae IMA were bad enough, with this good-god even-over-nothing now I'm history!! kojirete-ru no ni kono mama ja is-going-wrong even-though at-this-moment HAMETSU da------!! ruin/destruction be --------------------------------------------------- p 296 (110) 1 Kyousuke: [yelling and pointing up at the sky] Look!! yaya_!! ___ What's that? It's a nan desu ka man da! ! what is (?) ??? is 2 [Hikaru turns to look up, shading her eyes from the sun.] Kyousuke FX: ___ da_ Hikaru: Huh? Where, where? e doko doko? 3 [In the stairwell, Kyousuke calls out to Madoka, who is headed down, one flight below him.] Kyousuke: W-wait, Ayukawa! ma mate yo AYUKAWA! 4 [He looks back out the door to the rooftop...] Kyousuke: (I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan!) (gomen ne hikaru-chan!) 5 [...and flashes with the Power.] narration: Now. I can't very well IMA koko de AYUKAWA to no koto let her know about Ayukawa! now in-this-place about-Ayukawa shirareru wake ni ikanai n da! be-finding-out/ can't-very-well (explan) learning 6 door FX: ______ pishan 7 [Out on the rooftop, Hikaru stands and looks around.] Hikaru: That's strange. He's not okashi-- na-- doko ni mo here. strange nowhere inai desu yoo -there is Hikaru: _______ Huh? Darling? are da--rin? --------------------------------------------------- p 297 (111) 1 [Shot of Kyousuke's feet as he heads down the stairs.] Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ton ton 2 [He de-materializes in mid-stride.] Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_ narration: Arrrgh. I'll teleport on e--i SAKImawari shite-yare! ahead of her! going-on-ahead-(favor-to-her) 3 [Madoka resolutely heads on down the stairs.] Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton 4 Madoka: (What?! That guy! (NANI yo aitsu! what that-guy I was finally going to let sekkaku yurushite-yaro-- him off the hook.) taking-the-trouble shall-forgive-(favor- to-him) to OMOtte-ta no ni) was-thinking-that even-though (If he wants to get friendly (hikaru to NAKA yoku yatterya with Hikaru, then fine!) w/Hikaru (= yattereba) if-getting-friendly i-- no yo!) fine 5 [Madoka pulls up in great surprise...] 6 [Kyousuke stands at the foot of the stairs, arms crossed.] Madoka FX: ___ ton --------------------------------------------------- p 298 (112) 1 Kyousuke: Anyway, listen to what I tonikaku HANASHI o ki--te-kure yo! have to say! anyhow speak (O) listen-(favor-to-me) 2 Madoka: What is it? donna HANASHI? what-kind-of-conversation If it can make me laugh, WARAeru HANASHI da to then fine... can-laugh/smile conversation be if ii kedo ne okay but 3 [She continues on down the stairs toward him.] Madoka FX: ___ ton 4 Kyousuke: [emphatically] Truly, it wasn't my HONTOU wa anna koto suru intention to do that sort true/real (T) that-kind-of-thing to-do of thing. tsumori nan-ka nakatta n da intention somehow did-not-have (explan) Everything I did and said ano TOKI yatta koto ya itta koto wa then was because of the that-time did thing and said thing (T) alcohol! zembu o-SAKE no sei nan da! all/entire liquor's-fault it-is 5 Madoka: Such an irresponsible i--kagen na HITO ne! person! irresponsible person 6 [Kyousuke pauses in shock.] 7 Madoka: [frowning] Kasuga-kun, just by getting KASUGA-kun tte tannaru YOtta drunk you're liable to do (T) mere/simple got-drunk that sort of thing? hazumi de a-- yu-- koto dekiru no? by-chance/ that-kind-of-thing can-do on-impulse 8 [Wide-eyed, he slaps a hand to his mouth.] Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_ --------------------------------------------------- p 299 (113) 1 Madoka: [walking past him down the stairs] I misjudged you, misokonatte-ta wa KASUGA-kun o... Kasuga-kun... did-misjudge (O) 2 [Her pov of Kyousuke--he stands, looking down.] 3 [His pov of Madoka--she keeps her gaze forward as she passes him.] 4 [View of her foot on the stairs.] Madoka FX: ___ ton 5 Madoka: Sayonara. sayonara Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton 6 [View shows Madoka's face, as she stops in surprise at hearing...] Kyousuke: I was drunk then, and don't ano TOKI YOtte-te yoku oboete-nai really remember... that-time am-drunk fully don't-remember kedo... but But this much I'm sure of! demo kore dake wa machigai nai! but this-much (T) certainly/surely --------------------------------------------------- p 300 (114) 1 Kyousuke: ___ If it wasn't you, I wouldn't ore AYUKAWA ja nakya have done such a thing! I w/Ayukawa (= nakereba) if-wasn't-there anna koto shinai yo! that-kind-of-thing not-do 2 [She continues on down the stairs.] 3 Madoka: [facing away] Really? HONTOU? 4 Kyousuke: ___ I'm not lying! uso ja nai! 5 Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton 6 Madoka: [turning to face him] That's right! I still so-- da! atashi o-HIRU mada haven't eaten lunch. I lunchtime still TAbete-nai n da have-not-eaten (explan) 7 Madoka: [soft smile] I'm pretty hungry. zuibun o-naka hetta na-- quite hungry --------------------------------------------------- p 301 (115) 1 [Kyousuke is quite surprised by the sudden shift in mood.] 2 Madoka FX: _____ niko_ 3 Kyousuke: [reaching into his pocket] Oh, yeah. Wait a minute! a so-- da chotto matte! Kyousuke realization FX: ___ gon 4 Kyousuke: [beaming] Then would you like to yokattara TAberu? have this? if-good eat narration: It looks as though Ayukawa's do--yara AYUKAWA no KIGEN mo mood is cured... it-looks-as-if 's mood too naotta mitai de---- cured/set-to-rights seeming 5 Madoka: Isn't that the illusive...? sore ga REI no that-(one) (S) the-one-in-question MABOROSHI no...? illusive/illusory 6 Kyousuke: [tossing it] __________ Katsu-sand! katsusando! Madoka: ________ Thank you. sankyu-- [She catches it in her left hand.] narration: _________ _________ For the time being... toriaezu wa------ medetashi medetashi! Joy joy! for-the-time-being joy/luck/happiness 6 (inset) Hikaru: [sitting, smiling and eating] Huh? This is really ara honto ni oishi delicious. really delicious ---------------------------------------------------