Kimagure Orange Road
"The Two Snapshots"
Volume 2, Story 6
WB Volume 1, Story 14
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Matthew Klippenstein
                                 Leo Hourvitz
                                 Wes Shull

Last revision : 02-07-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may
      be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other.
      Example: The subtitles on page 303 (117) are only in the WB's!
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p 303 (117)--TITLE PAGE

[A strip of 35-mm film runs diagonally across the panel.  Each frame of the
 film is identical and shows the three--Hikaru winking and flashing a victory
 sign, Kyousuke wincing and Madoka looking on at Hikaru, uncomfortably.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                            _______
  The Two Snapshots               NIMAI no     sunappu
                                  two/double   snapshots

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                       ______
  Printing on the Film of         MUNE  no  firumu  ni   YAki tsukete...
  My Heart...                     heart 's  film   (IO)  printing/branding
                                                              __________
  A Heart-Throbbing Summer-       tokimeki  -  NATSU   IRO    fotogerafu!
  Tinged Photograph!              throbbing-   summer  color  photograph
                                  

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p 304 (118)

1
[Shot of a tree-lined, downtown thoroughfare.]
man: [off]
  Uh-hmm, I'm at a loss what      u--n  komarimashita    ne
  to do...                              was-at-a-loss/was-at-wit's-end

2
[Exterior shot of "Cafe ZuBoN".]

Takashi: [off]
  I have a policy against         watashi wa   JINBUTSU wa   toranai
  taking photos of people,        I       (T)  person   (T)  not-take-(picture)
  but...
                                  SHUGI   nan  desu  ga...
                                  policy  what is    but

3
[Interior shot.  Takashi sits at a table, across from a man, possibly an
 editor.]
man: [smiling]
  Could you somehow see your      soko        o   nantoka  onegai shimasu yo
  way around that policy?         that-place (O)  somehow  could-you-do

4
[Takashi looks on, without expression.]
man: [off]
  By all means, this project      kono KIKAKU wa  zehi       KASUGA-SENSEI ni
  needs you, Kasuga-sensei.       this-plan   (T) by-all-means            (IO)

                                  onegai   shitai         n desu
                                  request  want-to-make  (explan)

5
man:
  I mean, Sensei, your pictures   iya--  SENSEI no SHASHIN     wa
  are--how do you say...                        's photography (T)

                                  nan chu--      ka
                                  (= nan to iu)  (talk-to-self)
                                     called-that

  Truly marvelous.                jitsu ni         subarashii
                                  truly/extremely  wonderful/splendid

  Allowing yourself to take       FUUKEI     bakari  torasetoku no     wa
  only landscape photos,          landscape  just    (= torasete-oku)  (T)
  frankly speaking, is a loss                           letting-take-(a-photo)-
  to the photography world.                              (for-future's-sake)

                                  hakkiri itte      SHASHIN      KAI no
                                  speaking-plainly  photography  world/circles

                                  SONSHITSU  desu yo--
                                  a-loss     is

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p 305 (119)

1
man: [waving as he leaves]
  Then, you'll do it?!            ja    onegai shimasu  ne!
                                  then  request-to-do   (rhet)

2
Takashi: [still seated]
  Oh well...  I've taken the      yareyare   to--to--    hikiukete-shimatta!
  assignment after all!           oh-boy     after-all/  see-to-it-(finality/
                                             in-the-end               regret)

3
Takashi: [exiting]
 (However...  Saying I'll do      (shikashi...  hikiuketa wa  i--   kedo...
  it is all very well...           but/however  accepted      fine  but
                                               ______
  But what about the              kanjin no    moderu wa   dou shita
  all-important model?)           essential/   model  (T)  what-happened
                                  main/most-important

                                  mon     darou)
                                  person  poss-be

4
Takashi:
 (I can't very well use Kurumi    (kurumi ya  manami o   SHIGOTO de
  and Manami for work...)                 and       (O)  for-work

                                  TSUKAu  wake ni wa ikanai  shi...)
                                  use     can't-very-well    consider

Takashi walking FX:               ___
                          su_

[As he exits, he looks to one side.  Coming up from the other direction is
 that favorite collision target of all Kasuga males...  (See chapters 1.3 and
 5.1, for example...)  She walks home in school uniform, schoolbag in hand,
 looking off across the street...]

5
collision FX:                     ______
                          doshin!

6
Hikaru: [wincing]
  Ouch...                         itete

7
[View pans back to show her sitting on the sidewalk.  Takashi still stands.]
Hikaru: [yelling in anger]
  Watch where you're going,       doko   MIte     n da     yo
  you blockhead!!                 where  looking  (explan)
                                        ___________
                                  kono  to--henboku!!
                                  this  blockhead

Takashi:
  Ah!                             a

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p 306 (120)

1
Takashi:                                              __ ____
  S-sorry about that.  A-are      su sumanakatta ne   ke kega   wa  nai  kai?
  you hurt?                          was-sorry           injury (T) not-have

Takashi FX:                       ___ ___
                     oro oro

2
[Hikaru blesses him with an angel-of-death glare.]
Hikaru FX:                        _____
                          jiro_

3
[She gets up and dusts herself off.]
Hikaru:                                            _________
  Hmmph.  Mister, are you a       fu--n    ojisan  kameraman  na no ka--
  photographer?                            mister  cameraman        (?)

Hikaru dusting-off FX:            ____ ____
                     pata pata

Takashi heartbeat FX:             _____
                          doki_

4
Takashi: [sweating, perplexed]
  ..........                      ..........

5
Hikaru: [flashing with emotion]   _____ __
  Coooool!  I know!!              kakko ii na----_    so-- da!!
                                  cool           !

6
Hikaru: [gentle smile]
  Hey, take a picture of me.      nee  atashi no koto  totte  yo
                                  say  of-me           taking-(picture)

7
Takashi:
  EH?                             e

8
Hikaru: [striking a pose, hand behind head]
  Despite my appearance,          ko-- MIete mo              YOUCHIEN ni
  there was a time in             even-tho-appear-like-this  in-kindergarten
  kindergarten when I modeled
  children's clothes at a         ita        TOKI  CHOUNAI                  no
  local clothing goods store.     there-was  time  in-the-town/neighborhood 's

                                  YOUHINTEN
                                  fancy-goods-shop/foreign-goods-shop/
                                  haberdasher's-shop/clothing-goods-shop
                                                            ______
                                  no KODOMO FUKU        no  moderu yatte
                                  's children's-clothes 's  modeling

                                  koto  mo   aru     n da     yo    atashi
                                  thing too  happen  (explan)       I

Takashi:
  Clothing goods store...         YOUHINTEN......

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p 307 (121)

1
Hikaru: [smiling and waving]
  Yah, I wish...  Just joking.    na--n chatte  ne    jo--dan  da  yo
                                  I-wish/not!         joke     be

  See ya, mister!                 ja ne  ojisan!

2
[Takashi's pov of the radiantly smiling, pretty girl...]

3
Takashi: [considering]
  Hmm.                            fumu
                                  value/estimate-(something)

4
Takashi:                                         ____
  Oh, wait a moment, you.         a  chotto      kimi
                                     just-a-sec  you

Hikaru: [stopping]
  Huh?                            e

5
Takashi: [smiling]                    ______
  About modeling...  I wonder     ja  moderu   HONTOU ni  tanomou
  if I really should ask you.         model    really     shall-ask-(you-to-do)
                                            ____
                                  ka na     kimi  ni
                                  I-wonder  you  (IO)

6
Hikaru: [wide-eyed with surprise]
  ?!                              ?!

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p 308 (122)

1
[Exterior evening shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

2
[Kyousuke sits at the dining-room table in NY Mets jersey, resting chin in
 his hands.]
Kyousuke:
  Next Sunday?  Help you          KONDO no NICHIYOUBI?  SHIGOTO no TETSUDAi?
  with work?                      next-Sunday           work    's assistance

Takashi:
  Yeah.  I won't be able to do    aa    chotto  KONKAI    wa   hitori ja
  it by myself this time so I           a-bit   this-time (T)  by-myself (T)
  need an assistant.
                                  dekinai            n de   JOSHU     ga
                                  not-be-able-to-do  since  assistant (S)

                                  hitsuyo--          nan  da  yo
                                  need/require/want  what is

3
narration:                        _____                     ______
  Dad works as a freelance        oyaji no  SHOKUGYOU  wa   furi--    no
  photographer!                   father's  profession (T)  freelance 's
                                  _________
                                  kameraman!
                                  photographer

Kyousuke:
  Yeah, I guess it's okay...      un  betsu ni          ii    kedo...
                                      not-particularly  okay  but

4
Takashi: [smiling]
  All right, then.  I'm           so-- ka  ja    tanonda      zo!
  counting on you!                         then  depended-on

narration:
  Because of his general          da kedo  HONNIN         no  SHUGI to
  policy against taking pics      but      person-himself 's  with-policy
  of people, he specializes
  in landscapes...                yara de    JINBUTSU wa   torazu
                                  what-with  person   (T)  not-taking-(photos)

                                  FUUKEI     SENMON
                                  landscape  specialty

5
[Two photographs--one of Manami in swimsuit; another of Kurumi in blouse
 with floral garland on her head.]
narration:
  ...although he occasionally     tama ni       kurumi ya manami o
  takes pictures of Kurumi        occasionally         and      (O)
  and Manami, but...
                                  tottari             wa   shite-ru mitai da
                                  take-pictures-(and) (T)  would-like-to

                                  kedo----
                                  but

  ...that's strictly private      sore       wa   akumade
  .           that-(one) (T)  to-the-utmost
                                  ___________
                                  puraibe--to de
                                  in-private

6
[View of a wall, upon which are tacked up photos of palm trees, a billboard
 and a basketball hoop.]
narration:
  He absolutely never takes       SHIGOTO de wa   zettai      JOSEI  o
  photos of women as part of      for-work   (T)  absolutely  women (O)
  his job.
                                  toranai
                                  not-take-(pictures)
                                  _____
  He seems to have a stubborn     ganko na  tokoro ga   aru   yo-- desu
  streak.                         stubborn  case   (S)  have  appear/seem

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p 309 (123)

1
[Exterior day shot of ABCB.]

2
Madoka:                                          ______
  Photographic model?!            SHASHIN     no moderu?!
                                  photography 's model

3
Kyousuke:
  H-Hikaru-chan?!                 hi hikaru-chan ga?!

4
[View pans back to show Kyousuke and Hikaru seated, and Madoka standing in
 her ABCB apron.]
Hikaru: [smiling merrily]
  Yup!  While in town, quite      so_   kono aida MACHI de  gu--zen
  by accident, I was stopped.       !   while-in-town       accident/chance

                                  KOE kakerarete  ne
                                  be-calling-out
                                      _________
  For that photographer to        ano kameraman      atashi ni
  choose me--he must have         that-photographer  me    (IO)
  pretty good taste.
                                  ME o tsukeru           nante
                                  watch/have-his-eye-on  the-likes-of

                                  nakanaka  midokoro             aru  na--
                                  very      promise/good-points  have

5
[Madoka and Kyousuke look at each other, wide-eyed.  A sinister aspect has
 occurred to them...]

6
Hikaru: [dreamily]
  Ahhh!  What'll I do?            a~~~~_    dou   shimashou
                                       !    what  shall-do

  What if these photos            kore de        sono SHASHIN      ga
  attract the attention of        with-this/now  those-photographs (S)
  the mass media and show-biz     ________
  folks...                        masukomi                       ya
                                  mass-communication/mass-media  and

                                  GEINOU                  KANKEI     no
                                  (public)-entertainment  connection 's

                                  HITO-tachi no ME ni furetari shite...
                                  people     's attract-(their)-notice-(and)

  Then, in a flash, I'll become   n de   motte        ichiyaku
  a star.                         since  by/then/for  suddenly/with-a-leap
                                  ______
                                  suta-- ni natchattari shite
                                  turn-into-a-star-(and)

Hikaru FX:                        ______
                         uttori

[In the background, Hikaru visualizes her dazzling future.]

top magazine: [left]                        _______
  Stunning Debut!!                SHOUGEKI  debyu--!!
                                  shock     debut

top magazine: [right (partially cut off by speech bubble)]
  Hiyama Hi...                    HIYAMA hi

bottom magazine:
  The Prospect of a New           KITAI                    no OOGATA
  Superstar.                      expectation/anticipation 's large-size

                                  SHINJIN
                                  new-star

news conference banner:                                 _______
  Debut of a New Superstar!!      OUGATA      SHINJIN   debyu--!!
                                  large-size  new-star  debut

  Hiyama Hikaru                   HIYAMA hikaru

  News Conference                 KISHA KAIKEN

7
Madoka:
  But Hikaru, you better be       demo  hikaru  KI o tsuketa  ho-- ga ii  yo
  careful.                        but           take-care     better

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p 310 (124)

1
Madoka:                                                   _________
  Was that person really a        sono HITO    HONTOU ni  kameraman  na no?
  photographer?                   that-person  really     photographer

  There are cases of       damasarete
  being deceived and taken        being-deceived
  off to some strange place...
                                  hen na toko tsurete-karetari suru
                                                  (= ikaretari)
                                  be-taken-to-a-strange-place-(and)

                                  koto   datte  aru    n da     shi
                                  cases  even   exist  (explan) consider

  That kind of thing can be       so-- yu--     no    tte
  pretty scary.                   that-kind-of  (nom) (T)

                                  kekko--  kowai  no  yo
                                  quite    scary  be

2
Hikaru: [mouth pursed in thought]
  Well...                         so-- ka na...

  Come to think of it, I          so-- ieba            tashika ni
  recall the guy had a sorta      come-to-think-of-it  if-I-remember-correctly
  perverted, mustached face...    ______
                                  sukebe     so-- na  hige     ttsura
                                  perverted  seem     mustache  face
                                      _____
                                  no  ossan               datta  kedo...
                                  's  mister/Joe/buddy    was    but
                                      

3
Hikaru: [hurling herself at Kyousuke]
  Then, Sempai!  Please come      ja    sempai!    KONDO no NICHIYOUBI
  with me next Sunday to the      then             next-Sunday
  photo shoot!!
                                  satsuei no TOKI     issho ni  tsuite-kite
                                  photographing-time  together  coming-with-me

                                  kudasai  ne_!!
                                  please

Kyousuke:
  Eh!                             e_

4
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

5
[Madoka looks on without expression.]

6
Kyousuke:                                                        ___
  Oh!  B-but I'm helping my       a_    de demo  NICHIYOUBI tte  ore
  father with his work on          !       but   Sunday     (T)  I
  Sunday.                         _____
                                  oyaji no  SHIGOTO no TETSUDAi    nan  da
                                  father's  work    's assistance  what is

Hikaru:
  How bo-o-oring.                 naan da      tsumannai     no
                                  what's-that  uninteresting

7
Madoka: [leaning in]
  Then, shall I go with you,      ja    atashi ga   tsuite-itte-ageyo--  ka!
  Hikaru?!                        then  I      (S)  shall-go-with-(you)  (?)

                                  hikaru

Hikaru:
  Huh?!  You, Madoka-san?         e_  madoka-san ga?

8
Madoka: [off]
  You'll feel safe with me,       atashi to issho   dattara  ANSHIN  desho
  right?                          together-with-me  when-be  safe    poss-be

Hikaru: [beaming]
  Yes!                            hai!

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p 311 (125)

1
[Exterior shot of a train station.]
" station, is my best
 guess.>

2
[Madoka and Hikaru wait near the ticket machines.]
Takashi: [off]
  Hi.  Sorry to keep you          yaa  omatase!
  waiting!

3
[Their eyes grow wide with surprise.]

4
[As does Kyousuke's...  Oblivious to it all, Takashi merely smiles.]

5
Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan...  And             hikaru-chan...  AYUKAWA mo...
  Ayukawa...
  Why are you here?               nande  koko ni        iru    no
                                  why    at-this-place  be-here

Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun?!                    KASUGA-kun?!

Hikaru:
  Sempai, why...                  SEMPAI  do--shite......

6
Takashi: [swiveling his head]
  Huh...?  WHAT?!                 e...  e?

7
Kyousuke: [somewhat irritated]    _____
  Dad...  Work means taking       oyaji...  SHIGOTO tte
  landscape pictures...           dad       work    (known-as)

                                  FUUKEI     toru               n ja...
                                  landscape  taking-(pictures)  ('cause)

Takashi:
  Nobody said anything like       DARE-mo  sonna koto
  that.                           nobody   that-kind-of-thing

                                  Ittoran              ga
                                  (= Itte   toranai)   but
                                     saying -take-pictures

Madoka & Hikaru:                  _____
 "DAD"?!                          oyaji?!

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p 312 (126)

1
Madoka:                                 _________
  Then, the photographer is...    ja    kameraman    tte      no wa...
  Kasuga-kun's otoosan            then  photographer (quote)
  ?!
                                  KASUGA-kun no oto--san?!
                                             's father

2
Takashi:
  What's this, Kyousuke?          nan da       KYOUSUKE
                                  what's-this

  You and these girls know        omae  kono ojo--san-tachi  to wa
  each other by sight?            you   these-girls          (define)

                                  KAOmishiri           na no ka?
                                  know-(them)-by-sight       (?)

Kyousuke:
  Yeah.  We go to the same        un  ONAji GAKKOU  no
  school.                             same-school

3
[Horror-struck, Hikaru plays back a scene...]
Hikaru:
  Oh no!                          a ikenai!

Hikaru: [flashback]                                        ___________
  Watch where you're going,       doko MIte n da yo   kono to--henboku!
  you blockhead!

Takashi: [flashback]
  Ah!                             a

4
Hikaru:
 (How awful...!  It was           (ya da----_    SEMPAI no oto--san  datta
  Sempai's otoosan?)               unpleasant!          's father    was

                                  no kaa)
                                     (?)

Kyousuke:                                ______
 (So, that "model" you were       (ja    moderu  tte      hikaru-chan no koto
  talking about was                then  model   (quote)  about-Hikaru
  Hikaru-chan?!)
                                  datta  no ka?!)
                                  was       (?)

5
Hikaru: [brightly, to Takashi]
  Well, shall we go,              saa   mairimasho-- ka  oto--sama!!
  otoosama?!!                     well  shall-go     (?) revered-father

 father".>

Takashi:
  Eh?!                            e?!

6
Kyousuke: [wincing]
  O-otoosama...                   o oto--sama......

[Madoka looks at Kyousuke, overwhelmed by it all.  Takashi and Hikaru walk on
 ahead.]

Hikaru:                              _____
  Oh, shall I carry your bag      a  kaban o-mochi  shimasho-- ka  oto--sama
  for you, otoosama?                 bag     bag    shall-do   (?)

Takashi:
  Ah, th-thank you.               a  do do--mo

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p 313 (127)

1
[Hikaru poses for the camera.]
camera FX:                        _____
                          pasha

2
[She splashes through the shallow water at the beach.  As I recall, this shot
 was later used in the anime episode as well...]
camera FX:                        _____
                          pasha

3
[View down the deserted beach at a lighthouse at the far end.]

4
[Takashi and Kyousuke share a private conversation...]
Takashi:
  But...  You're so sly.          shikashi...    omae mo    sumi ni okenai na
                                  but            you  even  be-witty-&-knowing

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

5
[Oops, not so private.  View pans back to show Madoka right there as well...]
Takashi:
  To think that girl's your       ano KO    ga     omae no KANOJO
  girlfriend...!                  that-girl (S)    your-girlfriend

                                  datta  to wa       na--_
                                  was    even-though     !

  She's pretty considerate,       nakanaka  KI ga kiite        i-- KO
  and quite nice, isn't she?!     very      being-considerate  nice-girl

                                  ja nai  ka     e_?
                                  is-not  (?)    huh?

Kyousuke:
  WHA!                            na_

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p 314 (128)

1
[Madoka's pov of Kyousuke.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

2
[His pov of an expressionless Madoka.]

3
Kyousuke: [blushing]
  Th-that's not it!               chi chigau   yo!    hikaru-chan to wa
  Hikaru-chan isn't really...         mistaken                    (define)

                                  betsu ni...
                                  -particularly

4
[Shot of Takashi, who's probably starting to figure it all out by now.]

5
Madoka:
  Then...  I guess I'll go        ja......    atashi  sorosoro  KAEro--
  home now.                       then        I       now       shall-go-home

                                  ka na
                                  I-wonder

  It looks like it'll be          ato       wa   atashi ga   inakute mo
  okay if I skip out on the       remainder (T)  I      (S)  even-tho-not-here
  rest...
                                  DAIJOUBU   mitai da     shi...
                                  all-right  seems-to-be  consider

6
Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

7
Madoka:
  See ya.                         ja ne

8
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...

[She walks off.  Both Kasugas turn to watch her leave the beach.]

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p 315 (129)

1
Takashi:
  Kyousuke!                       KYOUSUKE!

2
Takashi:
  I wanted to ask that girl,      ano KO     ni  mo   tanomitai
  too...                          that-girl (IO) too  want-to-ask

                                  n da      kedo
                                  (explan)  but
                                                                ______
  You think she'll do it?         yatte-kuresou    ka na        moderu!
  Modeling?!                      look-as-if-do-   I-wonder     model
                                   (favor-to-me)

3
Kyousuke:                         _____
  Dad...                          oyaji......

4
Takashi:
  Hey!  If you don't get going    hora!    HAYAku  Ikanai to  HONTOU ni
  soon she'll really be going     look!    soon    if-not-go  really
  home!!
                                  KAEtte-shimau                 zo
                                  going-home-(finality/regret)  !!

Kyousuke:
  Y-yeah!                         u un!

5
Kyousuke: [running off]           ________  _____
  Thanks, Dad!!                   sankyu--  oyaji!!

6
[Takashi watches him leave.]

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p 316 (130)

1
[Kyousuke catches up to her at a crosswalk.  Madoka waits for the signal to
 change.]
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa!                        AYUKAWA!

[She turns back to look...]

2
Kyousuke:
  Wait!                           MAtte yo----_!

[...and turns away from him.]

3
[The signal light changes...]

4
[...and Kyousuke flashes with the Power...]
narration:
  Nnnngh!!                        e--i!!

5
[...changing it back to "don't walk".]
signal FX:                        ___
                          pa_

6
Madoka FX:                        _____
                     pita_

7
Kyousuke: [smiling in relief]
 (Just in time!)                  (maniatta!)

                     ha_ ha_

Madoka: [looking up at signal, perplexed]
 (Huh?  But it just changed.)     (are  kawatta  bakari  na  no ni)
                                        changed  just        although

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p 317 (131)

1
Madoka:                                          ______
  What?  Me?  Model?              e  atashi ga   moderu ni?
                                     I      (S)  model (IO)

2
Madoka: [turning her back to him]              ____
  I'm not the type.               atashi sonna gara         ja nai  yo
                                  I      that-kind-of-type  am-not

3
Madoka:
  Hey, Kasuga-kun.  If you        hora  KASUGA-kun  HAYAku  modonnai to
  don't hurry back you won't      look!             soon    if-not-return
  be able to help your father.
                                  oto--san no TETSUDAi   ga   dekinai desho
                                  father   's assistance (S)  probably-cannot

4
[Kyousuke stands speechless.]

5
Kyousuke: [flashing with emotion]       ___
  Then I'm leaving too!!          ja    ore  mo   KAEru!!
                                  then  I    too  go-home

6
[Madoka turns back to look at him in surprise.]

7
Kyousuke: [still vehement]                     ______
  If you model for him I'm        AYUKAWA ga   moderu yatte-kurereba  kitto
  sure he'll turn out good                (S)  if-do-modeling         surely
  pictures!!
                                  i--   SHASHIN     ni   naru
                                  good  photograph (IO)  become/turn-into

                                  to OMOu     n da!!
                                  think-that  (explan)

  If that isn't obvious then      sore       ga   MIrenai to  naru   to mo--
  there's no point in staying     that-(one) (S)  if-not-see  become certainly
  here!!
                                  KAEru kkya           nai yo!!
                                        (= ikkereba?)  not-here
                                  if-go-home

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1
Madoka: [wide-eyed]                      ______
  But Hikaru is the model...      datte  moderu wa   hikaru  ga...
                                  but    model  (T)          but

Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan has nothing to      hikaru-chan wa   kono sai
  do with this!                               (T)  this-juncture/now

                                  kanke-- nai!
                                  have-nothing-to-do-(with)

2
Kyousuke:
  Anyhow, I want you to be        tonikaku  AYUKAWA ga
  the model!!                     anyhow            (S)
                                  ______
                                  moderu ni natte-kurenakya         yada!!
                                                  (= kurenakereba)  unpleasant
                                  if-not-become-model

3
[Madoka portrait--she's touched.]

4
Madoka: [gaze downcast]
  You're just like a spoiled      marude     dadakKO       ne   KASUGA-kun wa
  kid, Kasuga-kun.                just-like  spoiled-child                 (T)

5
[Isolated shot of her hand as it grasps him by his wrist.]
Madoka FX:
                           gui_

6
[View pans back to show her marching back, with Kyousuke in tow.]
Madoka:
  Grr...  Really!                 moo  honto ni!

7
[Kyousuke portrait--joy!]
narration:
  Ayukawa...!!                    AYUKAWA----!!

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p 319 (133)

1
[4 photos of Madoka, looking very demure.]
camera FX:                        _____
                          pasha

2
[Late afternoon shot down the beach.  In the distance, two tiny figures
 prance at water's edge.  Possibly Madoka and Hikaru...]

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p 320 (134)

1
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

2
Kyousuke: [looking over the developed shots]
  Wow!                            hee---_

Takashi:
  So what do you think of my      do-- da       washi no  HAJImete no
  first-ever model photos?        how  is-that  my        first

                                  JINBUTSU  SHASHIN wa?
                                  person    photos  (T)

3
[A single frame of film showing Madoka.]

4
[Kyousuke holds it up to the light.]
Takashi:
  She has a mysterious charm      sono KO   wa   FUSHIGI na   miryoku ga
  about her.                      that-girl (T)  mysterious/  charm/  (S)
                                                 wonderful    fascination

                                  aru  ne
                                  have

  Her facial expression           HYOUJOU           ga
  changes frequently--like        facial-expression (S)
  a cat's eye.
                                  neko no ME  no yo-- ni  yoku        kawaru
                                  cat's-eyes  like-a      frequently  change

5
Takashi:
  By the way, I have a favor      tokoro-de   KYOUSUKE ni tanomi ga aru
  to ask of you...                by-the-way  I-have-a-favor-to-ask-of-you

                                  n da      ga...
                                  (explan)  but

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

6
Takashi: [smiling]                                            ______
  Next time, I'd like to take     KONDO     wa   sono KO   no nu--do ga
  nude photos of her!             next-time (T)  that-girl 's nude   (S)

                                  toritakunatta!
                                  want-to-take-(photo)

Kyousuke: [freaked out]
  WHAAT?!!                        e_!!

7
[He visualizes a shimmery, nude Madoka.]
Kyousuke: [blushing, aghast]      __ ______
  N-nude...!                      nu nu--do~~~~~~_

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p 321 (135)

1
Takashi:
  Yeah!  Could I have you ask     sou!    hitotsu  omae  kara
  her for me?                             one      you   from

                                  tanonde-moraenai        ka?
                                  not-ask-(favor-for-me)  (?)

2
Kyousuke: [forcefully]
  Y-you're joking!!               jo jo--dan!!

  A-absolutely not!!              ze ZETTAI      dame!!
                                     absolutely  no-good

3
Takashi:
  There's no way?                 do--shite mo?

Kyousuke:
  FORGET IT!!                     dowa                -me!!
                                  (dowasure) = forget  derogatory-suffix

4
Takashi:
  I see.                          so-- ka

Takashi FX:                       _____
                          niko_

5
Takashi:
  I'm a little sorry to hear      chotto  ZANNEN       da  kedo
  that...                         a-bit   regrettable  is  but

  Well, okay.  I'm joking.        ma--  i-- ka    jo--dan  da yo
                                  well  okay      joke     is

  I thought for sure you'd        kitto   so-- yu--     darou    to OMOtta  yo
  say that.                       surely  that-kind-of  poss-be  thought-that

[Kyousuke finds a photo.]

6
Kyousuke: [picking it up]
  Huh?  I-I didn't know about     are?    ko kore        itsu-no-mani......
  this one...                                this-(one)  unawares

Takashi: [off]                                                    _______
  Oh.  That snapshot is a free    aa  sore       wa   tada     no sunappu  sa
  one.  It's not for the job.         that-(one) (T)  for-free 's snapshot

                                  SHIGOTO no  ja nai  yo
                                  work        is-not

7
Takashi: [off]
  Somehow, looking at the two     nan-ka    omae-tachi  o   mite-ru to
  of you brings to mind your      somehow   you-plural (O)  when-am-looking-at
  mother and me when we were
  young.                          washi to  ka--san no  WAKAi koro  o
                                  me    and mother  's  when-young (O)

                                  OMOi dashite             na
                                  recalling/bringing-to-mind

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p 322 (136)

1
[The picture in question.  In it, Madoka has Kyousuke by his wrist as they
 walk down the beachfront road.  The two look into each other's eyes.]

2
Kyousuke: [studying the picture]
  Hmm.  Mom, huh?                 fu--n    ka--san  kaa
                                  hmm      mom      (?)

Takashi:
  But you probably don't          mottomo  omae wa   yoku
  remember her too well.          but      you  (T)  fully/for-certain

                                  OBOete-nai daro--                   kedo  na
                                  poss-not-have-a-clear-recollection  but



3
narration:                        _____
  Like Dad and Mom when they      oyaji-tachi   no WAKAi koro  mitai da tte----
  were young...                   dad-(and-mom) 's when-young  seem-to-be

4
[A cropped view of the picture in panel 1, showing Madoka only.]
narration:                                              ___
  Maybe...  I wonder if I'm       moshi-ka-shite----    ore  AYUKAWA to
  tied to Ayukawa by a red        maybe                 I    w/Ayukawa
  string?
                                  AKAi ITO de    musubarete-ru  no  ka na?
                                  by-red-string  are-tied           I-wonder

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p 323 (137)

1
Takashi: [picking up another picture, with a grin]
  Oh, that's right.  Kyousuke.    o  so--so--  KYOUSUKE

  Here's another one...           mo--    ICHI-MAI       aru     n da     ga
                                  another one (counter)  here-is (explan) but

2
Takashi: [handing it to him]
  This photo also seems to        kono SHASHIN mo   washi to  ka--san no
  bring back memories of your     this-photo   too  me    and mother  's
  mother and me when we were
  young.                          WAKAi koro  mitai de  yokatta  yo
                                  when-young  seeming   was-good

Kyousuke:
  What?!                          he?!

3
[A view of the picture in question.  Hikaru leaps into Kyousuke's arms.]
Kyousuke:
  Ehhhhh?!!                       e~~~~~_!!

narration:
  Somehow, with Hikaru-chan       hikaru-chan to mo      da  nan-te------
  too...                                      including  be  somehow

  I'm confused...!                KONRAN suru  na--_
                                  be-confused

4
[The family surrounds Kyousuke, who sits staring at both pictures in his
 hands.]
Takashi: [highly amused]
  Life is good, huh, Kyousuke?!   i--  naa   KYOUSUKE!

  You're doubly blessed           RYOUTE ni HANA    to wa    kono koto  da na
  .

Manami: [smiling]
  Wow.  Oniichan is               he--    oni--chan tte  igai to
  surprisingly popular with                         (T)  unexpectedly
  girls, hmm?                     ____
                                  moteru                 no ne----
                                  is-popular-with-girls     (rhet)

Kurumi: [wide-eyed]               __ ____
  Oh no...  How indecent...       ya da--      ya--rashi--
                                              (= iyarashii)
                                                 unpleasant/indecent

5
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  What the heck sort of mother    ittai donna                ka--san
  was she?!!                      what-in-the-world-kind-of  mother

                                  nan da  yo!!
                                  is-this

narration:
  But...  Which one did mom       shikashi----  ka--san  tte  HONTOU wa
  really resemble?                but           mother   (T)  really

                                  ittai         dotchi ni  nite-ta
                                  in-the-world  in-which   did-resemble

                                  n desho--      ne?
                                  (poss-explan)

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