Kimagure Orange Road
"Jealousy Rain"
Volume 2, Story 7
WB Volume 1, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Matthew Klippenstein
George Robbert
Jordan Lampe
Last revision : 02-07-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may
be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other.
Example: The subtitles on pages 326-327 (140-141) are only in the WB's!
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p 325 (139)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Hikaru: [off]
See ya. ja ne
sign:
Pub & Restaurant ABCB #PUB & RESTAURANT# abakabu
title: _________ ____
Jealousy Rain jerashi-- - rein
2
[Hikaru and Kyousuke walk home.]
Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] _______
Okay, time to go home, sa KAErimasho da--rin!
Darling! let's-go-home
narration:
As usual, I left ABCB with itsu-mo no you ni hikaru-chan to
Hikaru-chan when... usual like with-Hikaru
_______
abakabu o deta TOKI------
ABCB (O) left time
3
Kyousuke:
H-hey, Hikaru-chan. chi chotto hikaru-chan
Hikaru FX:
beta~~~_
4
[Kyousuke notices something over his shoulder.]
narration:
Somehow... nan-da-ka
I felt someone staring SENAKA ni sasuyo-- na
daggers at my back... the-back (IO) biting/sharp
SHISEN o kanji----
a-look (O) a-feeling/impression
5
narration:
When I turned my head to furiKAEte-miru to soko ni------
look... when-try-and-turn-around there (IO)
6
[A boy stands staring.]
narration: ___
There was a guy watching ore no koto MIte-iru yatsu ga ita!
me! about-me is-watching that-guy (S) there
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p 326-327 (140-141)--TITLE PAGES
[Pages 326-327 are a double-page title-page spread. Hikaru on the left page
and Madoka on the right. Both stand with umbrellas, looking back cheerfully
at us over their inside shoulders. The skies are overcast.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ ____
Jealousy Rain jerashi-- - rein
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
They're Stopped by a Call: OKUte-iku yo to yobitomerarete
"I'll Walk You Home," and go-and-escort (quote) be-calling-to-stop
When They Turn, You Give an
Embarrassed Laugh... SENAKA de choppiri tere
at/in-the-back a-bit feel-awkward/
embarrassed
WARAi...
smile/laughter/laugh
They Like the You Who Stands AME ni tatazumu kimi ga SUki
in the Rain. rain (IO) stand/stop you (S) be-liked
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p 328 (142)
1
Hikaru:
What's wrong, Sempai...? do-- shita n desu kaa SEMPAI...
2
Kyousuke:
That guy... aitsu..........
[Hikaru also turns to look.]
3
Yuusaku: [zipping around a corner]
Oops! otto!
Yuusaku FX: ___
sa_
4
Kyousuke: ___
Someone was watching me. DARE-ka ore no koto MIte-ta
somebody about-me was-watching
Hikaru:
Huh? e
5
[They return to the corner to look around.]
Hikaru:
But there's no one here! DARE-mo inai ja nai desu ka _
nobody-here is (?)!
Kyousuke:
Huh? That's weird... are okashii na--
6
[There is an open manhole just around the corner.]
Yuusaku: [off]
.......... ..........
7
Yuusaku: [sitting in water with a cute rat on his knee]
He's... aitsu ga...
Kasuga Kyousuke, eh? KASUGA KYOUSUKE ka
(musing-to-self)
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p 329 (143)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building. It starts to rain.]
2
[Kyousuke stands alone under a building, sheltered from the rain.]
3
Madoka: _____
Why are you standing around nani o bo--tto tsuttatte n no
with a blank look on your what (O) vacantly standing
face?
4
Madoka:
Aren't you going home? KAEnnai?
[Kyousuke looks up, nervously.]
5
Kyousuke: [forced smile]
I'm not standing around betsu ni SUki de tsuttatte-ru
because I *want* to... -particularly liking be-standing
wake ja nai n da kedo..........
is-not-reason (explan) but
6
Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder]
I didn't think it possible masaka kono tsuyu TOKI ni
to be so lame as to forget impossible at-this-rainy-season-time
to bring an umbrella during ____
the rainy season... kasa o wasureru hodo
umbrella (O) be-forgetting extent
TANJUN ja nai to OMOtta kedo
simple-minded be-not thought-that but
But it's something like doumo sono yo-- ne
that, hmm? somehow like-that (rhet)
7
Kyousuke: [wincing]
It's like that. sono yo-- desu
8
[Madoka smiles...]
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p 330 (144)
1
[...and opens her umbrella.]
umbrella FX: ___
ba_
2
Madoka:
If you want, why don't we yokattara haitte-kanai?
share mine? if-was-okay not-come-under
3
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Eh?! Sure it's okay?! e_ i-- no?!
4
Madoka: [cheerfully]
Please do. But using my doozo sono kawari
umbrella will cost you. (if-you)-please that-substitute/exchange
____
atashi no kasa TAKAku tsuku wa yo
my-umbrella prove-to-be-expensive
________
One cup of coffee isn't ko--hi-- IPpai ja kikanai
going to be enough. coffee one-cup not-accede-to
kara ne
that's-why
5
[They walk off together.]
Kyousuke: _______
Thank you! sankyu_
6
Hikaru: [off]
SEMPAAAI! sempa~~i!
7
[Madoka and Kyousuke suddenly move off in opposite directions. Kyousuke
ends up in the rain.]
Madoka/Kyousuke FX: _____
sasa_
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p 331 (145)
1
Hikaru: [under an umbrella]
Huh? Madoka-san, are you are madoka-san mo IMA o-KAEri
also going home now? too now go-home
desu ka
are (?)
2
Hikaru:
What's the matter, Sempai? do-- shita n desu kaa SEMPAI
Do you like the rain? AME SUki nan desu ka?
rain like what is (?)
Kyousuke FX:
bisshori
3
Kyousuke: [forced laughter] ______
Th-that's it. Ha ha ha. so so-- nan da yo hahaha
like-that what be
___
I have strange tastes. ore tte hen na SHUMI ga aru no
I (T) strange-taste (S) have
Hikaru: [sternly]
That's a taste I can't anmari KANSHIN dekinai
really admire. -much admiration cannot
SHUMI desu ne
taste/liking that-is
4
[Kyousuke notices something up above.]
5
[It's Yuusaku--watching from a 2nd-floor window of the school building.]
6
Kyousuke:
(It's him again!) (mata aitsu da!)
again that-guy it-is
7
Yuusaku contemplation FX:
ji----
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p 332 (146)
1
[Kyousuke's pov of his 2 lovely girlfriends. They smile and chat.]
2
[Kyousuke's pov of Yuusaku, staring at the 2 girls.]
3
narration:
Huh? That guy's looking are? aitsu ga MIte-ru no wa------
at... huh that-guy (S) is-watching
4
narration:
...Ayukawa?! AYUKAWA------?!
5
Hikaru:
I still have a little atashi chotto mada GAKKOU no YOUJI
school business to take I a-little still school-business
care of.
aru kara
have that's-why
Sempai, please give up your SEMPAI hen na SHUMI wa yamete
strange tastes and use this strange-taste (T) quit/give-up
umbrella! ____
kono kasa TSUKAtte-kudasai!
this-umbrella please-use
[She extends it to him...]
6
[...and runs back into the building, waving back at them with a smile.
Madoka waves back nervously.]
Kyousuke:
Th-thanks... a arigato..........
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p 333 (147)
1
[Kyousuke looks back up at Yuusaku.]
2
narration:
That guy... Still looking aitsu---- mada kotchi MIte-ru
this way. that-guy still this-way be-looking
3
Madoka:
What? What are you looking naani doko MIte n no?
at? what where looking
[She looks up...]
4
[...and sees Yuusaku.]
Madoka:
Th-that boy. a ano KO
5
Yuusaku: [wide-eyed and blushing]
(Ah!) (a)
6
[He walks away from the window.]
Yuusaku: ___
Hmmph. fun
7
Kyousuke:
Who is he? DARE? aitsu
who that-guy
Madoka:
It's Yuu-kun. YUU-kun yo
He's Hino Yuusaku, a KINJO no KO de
neighborhood boy, who I'm neighborhood 's boy in
sure should be in first-year
now. HINO YUUSAKU tte iu no IMA TASHIka
called now surely
ICHI NENSEI no hazu yo
first-year likelihood
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p 334 (148)
1
[Shot looking up at an electric pole and the heavy, overcast skies.]
Kyousuke: [off]
So, a childhood friend? ja osananajimi?
then childhood-friend/playmate
2
Madoka: [cheerfully]
Well, I guess it's like ma-- sonna tokoro ka na
that. that-kind-of-case I-wonder
When we were little, the chitchai TOKI hikaru to SANNIN de
three of us, including when-teeny-weeny w/Hikaru 3-persons
Hikaru, often played
together... yoku ASOnda kke
often played (musing)
Kyousuke:
Hmm. fu--n
3
Madoka: [merrily]
I had a good relationship atashi ano KO to wa
with him--just like brother I with-that-boy (T)
and sister.
kyo--dai mitai ni naka
seeming-like-siblings relationship
yokatta n da
was-good (explan)
Now I remember. We often so-- so-- yoku issho ni o-furo
bathed together, too. often together bath
nan-ka mo haittari shita na--
somewhat too joined-(and)
4
Kyousuke:
B-BATHED?! o_ o-furo_?!
5
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
What kinda face are you nan-te KAO shite n no yo
making?! what! face/expression making
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e
6
Madoka:
We were little, of course! mochiron chiisai koro yo
of-course small indeed
Kyousuke: ______
Oh, th-that's right. a so so-- da yo ne hahaha
Ha ha ha.
7
[They walk off in the rain.]
narration:
Like brother and sister, kyo--dai mitai... ka------
huh... siblings seem-like (talk-to-self)
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p 335 (149)
1
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
2
[Kyousuke visualizes Yuusaku.]
Kyousuke:
(But he was certainly looking (demo aitsu wa tashika ni
at Ayukawa!) but that-guy (T) certainly
AYUKAWA no ho-- o MIte-ita!)
Ayukawa's-direction (O) was-looking
(That's not the sort of look (are wa oto--to ga
a kid brother gives to a that-(one) (T) little-brother (S)
big sister!)
ane o MIru you na
big-sister (O) to-look appear
ME ja nakatta zo)
attention/pov was-not !!
3
[Kyousuke sits on the floor, with his back against the side of his bed.]
Kyousuke:
(Besides the fact they were (sore ni osananajimi tte
childhood friends, how long besides childhood-friends (T)
has it been since they were
together...) koto wa NANNEN mo MUKASHI kara
matter (T) how-long even since-former
AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni ita koto ni naru...)
together-with-Ayukawa went become-thing
___
(He knows a side of Ayukawa (ore no SHIranai AYUKAWA no ICHIMEN mo
that I don't know!) I (S) not-know 's one-side
shitte-iru n da!)
be-knowing (explan)
Kyousuke's T-shirt:
Harada HA RA DA
crest-of- HIRO/TADA/YUKI/SATO/OU/HITO
wave prince/lord/duke
4
[He visualizes Madoka and Yuusaku soaking in the bath.]
narration:
No, not just one side, but iya ICHIMEN dokoroka------
*all* sides!! no one-side not-at-all
subete da_!!
wholly/all be
5
Kyousuke:
THAT BASTARD!! ano yarou_!!
6
[He visualizes Yuusaku again.]
narration:
Maybe Ayukawa's the one he... aitsu moshi-ka-shite
that-guy maybe
AYUKAWA no koto o------
about-Ayukawa (O)
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p 336 (150)
1
[View of the sign outside classroom 3-A.]
Yuusaku: [off]
Hey, you. chotto anta
2
[In the hall, Kyousuke is stopped from entering the classroom by Yuusaku.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? e
3
Yuusaku:
You're in the same class anta AYUKAWA-SEMPAI to ONAji
as Ayukawa-sempai, right? you with-Ayukawa same
______
kurasu daro
class poss-be
4
narration:
Ah, this guy... a koitsu----
5
Yuusaku:
Is Ayukawa-sempai here? AYUKAWA-SEMPAI iru ka?
is-here (?)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! Ah, I think she's e_ a iru to OMOu kedo
here... ! is-here think-that but
6
Kyousuke:
(What's this? For an (nan da koitsu KAKYUUSEI
underclassman, this guy what's-this this-guy underclassman
sure talks cocky...)
no kuse shite namaiki na
although doing impudent/presumptuous
KUCHI no kikikata shi-yagatte......)
hearing-from-mouth doing-(contempt)
Kyousuke FX: _____
muka_
7
Yuusaku:
Hey, tell her Hino wants to chotto HINO ga HANASHI ga aru tte
speak to her. (S) speak there-is
tsutaete-kure
tell/convey-(favor-to-me/command)
Kyousuke:
........... All right... .......... wakatta
8
Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: _____ _____
bachi bachi
curse/divine-punishment
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p 337 (151)
1
Madoka:
Huh? Yuu-kun. ara YUU-kun
2
Madoka: [smiling]
You look as good as ever. aikawarazu GENKI so-- ne
as-ever/as-usual look-like-fine
Yuusaku:
Yes! It's been a long hai_ o-hisashiburi desu
while, Madoka-san! ! 1st-time-in-long-while is
madoka-san!
3
Madoka:
It's unusual. You asking mezurashii wa ne atashi ni YOU
to see me. rare/unusual (T) me (IO) business
nan-te
somesuch
4
Yuusaku: [glaring at Kyousuke]
Um, there's something I want chotto madoka-san ni kikitai koto ga
to ask you, Madoka-san. (IO) want-to-ask thing (S)
aru n desu
there-is (explan)
Yuusaku FX: _____
chira
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
5
Kyousuke:
(Something he wants to ask...) (kikitai koto...)
6
Madoka:
? ?
Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: _____ _____
bachi bachi
7
Yuusaku:
Uhh, please come with me chotto mukou made tsukiatte-kudasai
over there. opp-dir to go-(to-a-place)-
with-me-(please)
Madoka:
.......... Okay. .......... i-- wa yo
[The two walk off.]
8
narration:
S-sure enough, Ayukawa's the a aitsu yappari AYUKAWA no koto----
one he... that-guy sure-enough about-Ayukawa
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p 338 (152)
1
[View looking up at the rooftop of a school building.]
2
[Kyousuke's pov from the stairwell door of Madoka and Yuusaku chatting
together on the rooftop.]
3
[Yuusaku laughs.]
4
[Madoka laughs.]
5
Kyousuke:
(Shit... What the heck are (kuso-- ittai nani
they talking about? shit what-in-the-world
HANASHI shite n da
speaking (explan)
Even Ayukawa seems happy. AYUKAWA mo AYUKAWA da yo
Dammit.) even is
__________
tanoshisou ni chikusho--)
seem-joyful damn
narration:
Certainly, being an old TASHIka ni osananajimi tte
childhood friend helps... certainly childhood-friend (T)
toku da yo na-----
advantageous
Because he's known the aitsu wa NANNEN mo MUKASHI no
Ayukawa from long ago, too. that-guy (T) how-long too former
AYUKAWA o SHItte-ru n da kara
(O) has-known (explan) that's-why
6
[Yuusaku suddenly becomes vehement.]
7
[Madoka goes wide-eyed with surprise.]
8
[Kyousuke blushes and sweats.]
narration:
Wh-what? What did he say na nan da nani itta n darou
just now? what's-that what said (poss-explan)
IMA----
now
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p 339 (153)
1
[Yuusaku heads off towards the stairs, leaving Madoka behind.]
2
Kyousuke: _____
(Oh no! He's coming this (yabai! kotchi ni kuru)
way.) done-for this-way come
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
3
[Yuusaku descends the stairs.]
Yuusaku footstep FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
4
narration:
Allll right. What say I yo--shi itcho odokashite-yaru ka!
give him a scare?! "one-game" frighten-(favor-to-him)
<*> (?)
<*used to introduce a comment suggesting
something.>
[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]
5
[At the top of the stairs, behind Yuusaku, some buckets begin to move.]
bucket FX: _____
koro_
bucket labels:
For Fire Prevention BOUKA YOU
fire-prevention business
6
[Yuusaku looks back to see the buckets falling toward him.]
bucket FX: ____ ____
gara gara
7
Yuusaku: [tumbling down the stairs]
WAHHH! wa--_
[Kyousuke stands nonchalantly at the bottom of the stairs.]
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p 340 (154)
1
Yuusaku:
Ow-ow-ow. tetete
Kyousuke: [off] ________
Ha ha ha ha. hahahaha
2
[The two glare at each other.]
3
Yuusaku:
What's so funny? nani ga okashii
what (S) amusing/funny
Kyousuke:
Nothing. betsu ni
4
Yuusaku: [glaring]
You're an eyesore! mezawari da na!
an-eyesore be
5
Kyousuke: [glaring]
So are you! sotchi koso!
that-way indeed
6
Yuusaku: [smiling] ___
I'm not one who likes ore BOURYOKU wa anmari SUki ja nai
excessive violence. I violence (T) too-much like am-not
n da
(explan)
Why do you think that is? do--shite da to OMOu?
why is think-that
7
[With his right arm he demolishes a classroom door.]
Yuusaku FX: ____
baki
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p 341 (155)
1
Yuusaku: [looking at his fist]
Oops, slipped! otto ike ne!
oops go
Did it again. mata yatchimatta ze
again (= yatte-shimatta)
did-(finality/regret)
2
Yuusaku: [smirking ominously] ____
In this way I can usually kore de itsu-mo AITE ni DAI kega
do great damage to my with-this usual companion great-wounds
opponents.
sasete-shimau n da yo naa
make-do-(finality/regret) (explan)
I'm not one who does karate namajikka KARATE nan-ka yaru
half-heartedly! halfheartedly somewhat do
mon ja nai nee!
person am-not (rhet)
Kyousuke FX:
zo~~~~_
3
Yuusaku: ___
If possible, please don't dekireba ore ni kono MIGITE o
make me use this right if-possible me (IO) this right-hand (O)
hand of mine.
TSUKAwasenai de hoshii mon da naa
not-make-use want person be
[Kyousuke is wide-eyed and aghast.]
Kyousuke FX:
taji_
4
Yuusaku: [spinning about]
See ya. ja na
5
Yuusaku: [looking back]
Oh yeah, I forgot to say... so-- da Ii WASUreta kedo......
to-say forgot but
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:
doki_
6
Yuusaku: [angrily]
I *will* take her back from omae kara kitto ano KO o
you!! from-you surely that-girl (O)
torikaeshite miseru kara na!!
take-back show that's-why
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p 342 (156)
1
[Kyousuke is surprised, but angered...]
2
[...and he watches Yuusaku walk away.]
3
narration:
Th-that guy... a aitsu----
4
[A hand comes to rest on his shoulder.]
Madoka: [off]
Hi! yo_
Madoka touch FX: ___
pon
Kyousuke:
Wah!! wa_!!
5
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...
Madoka:
What kinda face are you nante KAO shite n no yo
making?! what! face/expression making
6
Madoka:
What are you gonna do, do-- suru no? KASUGA-kun
Kasuga-kun? what do
7
Kyousuke:
"Wh-what am I gonna do," she do do-- suru tte
asks.
8
Madoka: [smiling]
He told me he's in love, ano KO yappari SUki da tte itta wa
after all. that-boy after-all liking said-that
Kyousuke:
EH!! e!!
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p 343 (157)
1
Kyousuke: [flash thought]
H-he likes... Ayukawa... su SUki tte AYUKAWA......
2
Madoka:
From the way it looks, it's ano bun ja do--yara HONKI
pretty serious. the-way-it-looks somehow serious
mitai da yo
seem-to-be
Kyousuke:
EH!! e_!!
3
Madoka: [eyes closed, smiling]
He really seems to like hikaru no koto
Hikaru. about-Hikaru
HONKI de SUki mitai
in-seriousness seems-to-like
4
[Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.]
5
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan?! hikaru-chan?!
6
Madoka:
He says he's liked Hikaru ano KO MUKASHI kara hikaru no koto
for a long time. that-boy from-long-ago about-Hikaru
SUki datta n da tte
has-liked (explan) (hearsay)
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p 344 (158)
1
Madoka: [arms crossed]
Just now, he came to ask me sakki wa atashi ni
about your relationship to a-little-while-ago (T) me (IO)
Hikaru...
KASUGA-kun to hikaru no KANKEI
and 's relation
kiki ni kita n da kedo......
came-to-ask (explan) but
I'm not quite sure what's atashi mo nante KOTAete ii ka
going on, either. I too somewhat responding
yoku wakannakatta wa
fully did-not-know
2
Kyousuke:
Th-then. ji jaa
It isn't you... AYUKAWA no koto ja...
about-Ayukawa
3
Kyousuke: [beaming]
Ohhhhh! I'm glad! naan da yokatta!
4
Madoka:
HUH?! e
5
Madoka: [demure]
What's to be glad about? nani ga yokatta no?
what (S) was-good
Kyousuke: ___
Because I was convinced that datte ore tekkiri aitsu ga
you were the one he... because I felt-certain that-guy (S)
AYUKAWA no koto...
about-Ayukawa
6
[He slaps a hand over his mouth.]
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
7
[Madoka smiles a smile of contentment.]
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p 345 (159)
1
narration:
Somehow, I was greatly aitsu no nerai ga AYUKAWA ja nakatta
relieved that Ayukawa that-guy's-object (S) was-not
wasn't the object of his ___
affections! koto ni naze-ka hotto shita
thing (IO) somehow was-with-great-relief
___
ore! deshita
I was
2
Kyousuke: [wincing]
(Well... In any case, I'm (maa nan ni se yo yokatta yokatta)
glad...) no-matter-what was-good
3
Madoka:
C'mon, it's time for class. saa JUGYOU yo mou
lesson already/soon/now
narration:
But... Somehow, things shikashi------ nan-da-ka yayakoshii
were turning into a tangled but somehow tangled
web...!
koto ni natte-kita zo----_
began-turning-into-thing
[They walk down the hall.]
4
Kyousuke: [looking off-panel]
AH! a
5
Madoka:
What? naani?
6
Kyousuke:
Rain again... mata AME ga
again rain (S)
[Side-by-side, they both stop to look out the window.]
narration:
Does Hikaru-chan know about hikaru-chan wa aitsu no KIMOchi o
that guy's feelings? (T) that-guy's feelings (O)
SHItte-iru no desho-- ka?
be-knowing (poss-explan) (?)
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