Kimagure Orange Road
"Panic at the Beach!"
Volume 3, Story 3
WB Volume 2, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by Craig H. Nishida
Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Andrew Wilson
                                 Station Zebra

Last revision : 8-08-94

NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 71 (49) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 71 (49)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka stands on one leg, lifting the other foot behind her to undo her
 sandal.  Her free hand holds the other sandal.  She wears a sleeveless
 minidress/beachwrap.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                         _______
  Panic at the Beach!             NAGISA no panikku!
                                  beach  's panic

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  When Under Love's Spell,        KOI  no  MAHOU  ni  kakattara
  Cast Off the Blue Dress         love 's  magic  on  when-come-to-depend-on
  From Your Rose-Colored          ______
  Skin and Kick Off Your          buru-- no FUKU o   BARA IRO         ni
  Glass Sandals.                  blue-dress    (O)  rose-complexion (IO)
                                  ______    _______
                                  garasu no sandaru  nugisutete
                                  glass-sandal       throwing-off(clothes)/
                                                     kicking-off(boots)

  Don't You Want to Revel         HADASHI    no  KOKORO              de
  in the Feel of Bare Feet...?    bare-feet  's  sincerity/feelings  in

                                  tokimekitai      no...
                                  want-to-prosper  (ques/empathy)



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p 72 (50)

1
[We see Madoka's lower legs as she leaves the water.]
water FX:                         ___
                         za_

2
[She is standing in a bikini.]

3-4
[She reaches for her towel to dry her hair, and seems to let out an
 unhappy sigh.]

5
Hikaru: [off]
  Aw, hey, Sempai.  Come on...    ya da--  sempai    _tara
                                  (=iya da)         (= ittara)
                                    is-undesireable    when-go

6
[Madoka looks on...]

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p 73 (51)

1
[...at Hikaru and Kyousuke playing in the surf.]
Hikaru:                           ______
  Kyaa!                           kya--_

wave FX:                          _______
                           zaba--n

2
Hikaru:
  I'm scaaared!!                  kowa--i!!

[Hikaru leaps into the security of his arms.]

hug FX:
                           shikka
                                  (shikkari = firmly/tightly)

3
[Closeup of their torsos pressed together.]
hug FX:                           ____
                     gyu_
                                  (gyuugyuu = squeeze)

4
[Kyousuke blushes deeply]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           dokin

5
narration:                                _________
  T-this soft, marshmallow        ko kono mashumaro    mitai na
  feeling must be her...!            this marshmallow  to-be-like

                                  ya--rakai  mono   kore wa  masashiku--
                                  soft       thing  this (T) evidently

6
Kyousuke:
  A-are you okay, Hikaru-chan?    da daijo--bu?  hikaru-chan

narration:
  Hikaru-chan might seem          hikaru-chan  yaseteru yo-- da  kedo
  slim, but actually, she's                    seems-thin        but
  rather developed.
                                  kekko--    aru    n da na
                                  fine/rather/considerably
                                             exist  (explan/confirm)

Hikaru:
  Yeah...                         ee...

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p 74 (52)

1
[She pulls back slightly to fasten her glisteny gaze on him.]
Hikaru:                                      _______
  ...because I'm with you,        datte      da--rin to ISSHO    da mon
  Darling.                        reason-is  together-w/Darling  (reason)

Kyousuke FX:
                            kaa_

2
narration:
  She's been coming on to         nanka UMI ni    kite kara     sugoku
  me awfully strong ever                to-beach  since-coming  awfully
  since we came to the
  beach...                        SEKKYOKUTEKI       da na---
                                  actively-involved  be (confirm)

[Hikaru closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.]

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           goku_

3
[Now, Kyousuke becomes the "marshmallow"...]
Kyousuke: [closing his eyes]
  H-Hikaru-chan...                hi hikaru-chan...

narration:
  T-time to eat!                  i itadakima---su!
                                    <*>

<* what is said before eating, in the sense of "I'm going to begin.">

4
Kyousuke: [pulling back, looking over at Madoka]
  !                               !

5
[Closeup of Madoka staring daggers.]

6
narration:
  Danger!  Danger!                abunai abunai!

7
[Kyousuke hops away, puts his arms behind his back and grins into the
 sky...]
narration:
  Ayukawa has been angry ever     UMI ni kite kara    zutto    AYUKAWA
  since we got here.  I           since-coming-to-the-beach
  wonder if I did something?!                         the-whole-time

                                  okotte-ru         kedo nanka
                                  is-being-angry    although
                                              ___
                                  shita ka na ore---?!
                                  wonder-if-I-did

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            sasa_

Kyousuke:                           ______________
  Oh!  How about some ice         a sofutokuri--mu    demo
  cream?                            soft-(ice)-cream  or-something

                                  TAbeyo--   ka
                                  let's-eat  (?)

narration:
  But she's the one who stood     daiichi       suppokasareta  no wa
  me up.                          first-of-all  was-stood-up

                                  kotchi    no  ho-- da  shi
                                  this-way  's  way  be  and-besides

  I just don't understand.        yo--   wakaran         na--
                                  as-if  not-understand  (confirm)

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p 75 (53)

1
Kyousuke: [sweating, sneaking a peek at Hikaru]
 (Now that was close.  I          (sore ni shite mo        IMA no wa
  almost started to kiss           but/still/for-all-that  now    (T)
  her.)
                                  yabakatta        na--
                                  dangerously-close-to-being-caught
                                                  ____
                                  mo-- sukoshi de kisu shisou ni natta...)
                                  a-little-more   kiss           became
                                                       thought/ideas

Hikaru: [sneaking a peek at Kyousuke]
 (Darn!  Just a little            (oshii!  mo-- chotto    datta noni)
  longer...)                       alas!   little-longer  was   in-order-to

2
[Hikaru watches another couple at play.]
girl:
  Ouch!  My leg has a cramp...    ita--i  ashi      ga   tsutta--
                                  sore    leg/foot  (S)  cramped

[The boy goes to help.]

3
Hikaru:
 (That's it!)                     (so-- da!)

Imagined Hikaru:
  Oh!  My leg cramped up.         a ashi ga tsutchatta
                                            (= tsutte-shimatta)

Imagined Kyousuke:
  What!  That's awful!            nani  sore wa taihen    da!
                                  what  that    terrible  be!

4
Imagined Kyousuke:
  Come, hang on to me.            saa  boku ni  tsukamatte
                                       of-me    taking-hold-(of)

Imagined Hikaru:
  Thank you.                      arigatou

5
[The lips of imagined Kyousuke and imagined Hikaru simulate the approach
 to a docking maneuver.]
Hikaru:
 (All right.  That's the          (yoshi      kono  TE de     ikou)
  plan.)                           all-right  this  by-means  shall-go

6
Kyousuke:
 (Ayukawa's behavior is           (shikashi KI ni naru na--      KYOU no
  really bothering me today.       but      get-on-one's-nerves  today

  Why is she so upset?)           AYUKAWA   nan-de anna ni
                                            why    to-that-extent

                                  okotte-ru                 n darou)
                                  be-failing-to-attend-to  (poss. explan.)

 (If she has something to         (i--tai   koto ga areba   MEN to mukatte
  say, she should say it           want-to-say              face   confront
  already...                                if-things-exist

                                  ieba    i--   noni...
                                  if-say  good  although

  I wonder if Ayukawa can't       yappari  hikaru-chan ga iru   kara
  say anything because                     hikaru-is-here       because
  Hikaru-chan is around.)
                                  ienai    no ka na)
                                  not-say     I-wonder

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         zabu_

7
Kyousuke: [eyes bulging, in pained shock]
  !                               !

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p 76 (54)

1
Hikaru: [shouting]
  Kyaa!  Ow-ow-ow-ouch!!          kya--_  ai ta ta ta ta_!!

2
Hikaru:                           ____  _______
  D-Darling, I have a leg         da--  da--rin ASHI ga tsutchat...
  cra...

3
Hikaru: [turning to see him]      ____
  Dar...                          da--

4
Kyousuke: [holding one leg up]
  I have one, too!                kotchi mo   tsutta~~~_!
                                  here   too  cramped

Hikaru: [gritting her teeth]
  ...............                 ...............

5
[Hikaru helps him out of the water.]
Hikaru:
  Are you okay?                   DAIJOUBU desu ka--

Kyousuke:
  Yeah...                         haa...

6
[Behind them, a seaweed-encrusted Yuusaku surfaces.]
Yuusaku FX:                       _______
                         zabu--n

7
Yuusaku:
 (Damn!  That jerk!               (chikusho--_  ano yaro--_
                                                  ________
  I'll beat him up for            anna ni         betabeta  sha--gatte
  being so close to her!)         to-that-extent  all-over  appearing

                                  buttobashite-yaru_!)
                                  beating/knocking-(favor-to-him)

girls:
  Kyaa!  A sea monster!           kya--  umi bo--zu

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p 77 (55)

1
[Hikaru walks back with 2 ice cream cones in hand.]

2
[From their table, some guys watch her pass by.]
Jerk #1:                                                _____
  Check her out!  Pretty          miro yo nakanaka      mabui     ja n!
  flashy, huh?!                   look!   rather/quite  dazzling  (no?)

3
[Jerk #1 steps in front of Hikaru.]
FX:                               ___
                           za_

4
[Hikaru stops, wide-eyed.]

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p 78 (56)

1
Jerk #1:
  Hello.  Another hot day         konnichi wa  KYOU   mo   ATSUi ne--
  today, huh?                                  today  too  hot

Jerk #2:
  Oh, that looks good, missy.     oya--  i-- mono    motte-ru    ne--
                                  oh!    good-thing  be-holding

                                  ojo-chan
                                  lady(-dim.)

[There's also a Jerk #3, but he never speaks a word...]

2
[Hikaru glares.]

3
Jerk #1:                                  ___
  Yeah, yeah.  Give us some,      nee nee ore-tachi ni mo   cho--dai yo
  too!                            yeah    to-us        too  please-give
                                                                    (emph)

Jerk #2:
  Yes, yes.                       so-- so--

4
Jerk #2: [grabbing her by the wrist]
  What say we go off              ISSHO ni  NAKAyoku          TAbemasho
  somewhere quiet to eat          together  on-cordial-terms  let's-eat
  that together, and maybe
  get to know each other          da--re mo  inai            tokoro de ne
  better?                         nobody     not-be-located  place

5
[Hikaru shoves a cone into his face.]
ice cream FX:                     ___
                          bu_

6
[She spreads it evenly about.]
wrist rotation FX:                ________
                     guriguri

7
Hikaru: [with a dark and sinister look]
  Taste good?                     oishii?

8
Hikaru: [shouting]
  Do you want to try for          nan   nara      motto  TAbete-miru?!
  more?!                          what  if-it-is  more   try-eating-again-
                                                                   and-see

Jerk #1:
  Shit!                           kuo no!!

[Jerk #2 wipes his face...]

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p 79 (57)

1
[...and lunges for her.]
Jerk #2:
  Arg!                            haa--

[Hikaru easily sidesteps the charge...]

Hikaru FX:
                            hyoi
                                  lightly/nimbly

[...but lands on a piece of broken glass.]

2
Hikaru foot FX:                   ___
                          da_

3
Hikaru:
  !                               !

4
[Hikaru crumples to the ground.]
Hikaru:
  Ah-ow-ouch!                     ai ta ta!

Jerk #2:
  You see?  That's what you       hora hora  otenba  dakara
  get for being a tomboy!         look/see   tomboy  that's-why
                                  ____
                                  kega shichau           n da yo~~~_
                                       (= shite-shimau)       (emph)
                                  got-injured            (explan)  !

5
Jerk #1:
  Shall I take a look at          do--re  mite-ageyo--             ka
  that for you?                   who     shall-be-seeing-for-you  (?)

  Heh!  Heh!  Heh!                he_ he_ he_

6
Kyousuke: [walking and searching]             ____________
  Hikaru-chan is taking so        hikaru-chan aisukuri--mu o  KAi ni itta
  long to buy ice cream.                      ice-cream   (O) went-to-buy

                                  ni shite  wa   OSOi na--
                                  deciding  (T)  late

  Where is she?                   doko made itta  n daro?
                                  where-to  went  (poss.-explan)?

7
[Unknown to Kyousuke, Yuusaku rapidly approaches from the side.]
Yuusaku:
 (Oh, there he is.  I'm going     o ita ita      ano yaro--  UMI no mokuzu
  to bury that jerk at sea.)        was-located  that-jerk   bury-at-sea

                                  ni shite  yaru)
                                  deciding  to-do

Yuusaku's T-shirt (front):
  East Ministry announcement      SHOU           TOU           HIRO
                                  ministry/dept  east'n-Japan  announcement

Yuusaku FX:
                            tsukatsuka
                                  FX-of-going-straight-up-to-someone

Kyousuke: [seeing something]
  !                               !

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p 80 (58)

1
[Jerk #1 has raised Hikaru up by her wrist.  The other 2 jerks laugh.]

2
Kyousuke:
  H-Hikaru-chan!!                 hi hikaru-chan!!

Yuusaku:
  !                               !

3
Yuusaku:
  What are they doing to          aitsura    hikaru-chan o....!!
  Hikaru-chan...!!                those-people          (O)

4
Yuusaku: [running past Kyousuke]
  Get outta my way!!  Fool!!      jama        da!!   doke_!!
                                  in-the-way  be

Yuusaku FX:                       ___
                            da_

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            don

5
Yuusaku: [charging]
  Arg!!                           uo~~_!!

Hikaru: [happily]
  Yuusaku!!                       YUUSAKU!!

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p 81 (59)

1
Yuusaku foot-pounding FX:         ___
                     da_

2
Yuusaku headbutt FX:              ___
                          do_

3
[The jerks see stars...]

4
[Yuusaku watches them flee.]
Jerks:
  Run!                            nigero~~

Jerks FX:
                      ha ha



5
[Behind Yuusaku, Hikaru sits on the ground.]
Hikaru:
  Thank you...  Yuusaku.          arigato...  YUUSAKU

[Yuusaku blushes.]

Yuusaku heartbeat FX:             _____
                          doki_

6
Hikaru:
  Could you help me up?           TEkashite-kureru
                                  lend-a-hand-(favor-to-me)

Yuusaku:
  Y-yeah...                       u un...

7
Kyousuke: [watching from a distance]
 (That jerk.  Acting so           (ano yaro--  JIBUN dake i-- kakko
  cool...)                         that-jerk   himself-impressive

                                  shi yagatte)
                                      disliking

8
narration:
  But I have to admit, he         demo SHOUJIKI itte    aitsu no
  cares about Hikaru-chan         but  honesty  saying  that-person
  a tiny bit more than I!
                                  hikaru-chan omoi ni      wa
                                              w/affection (T)
                                                                ___
                                  choppiri   osare-gimi  da na  ore!
                                  a-wee-bit  is-having?  be     I
                                                  -shade/a-tinge-of

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p 82 (60)

1
Kyousuke:
 (Anyway, I'll let him take       (tonikaku hikaru-chan wa ichiou
  care of Hikaru-chan for          anyway              (T) for-the-time-
  now, while I...)                                                  being
                                                     ___
                                  aitsu ni makasete  ore wa...)
                                  leaving-up-to-him  I  (T)

2
[Kyousuke looks off in another direction...]

3
[...and runs.]
narration:
  ...go and figure out why        AYUKAWA ga nan-de okotte n no ka
  Ayukawa is so angry at me!             (S) why    happening

                                  sore o     hakkiri saseyou!
                                  that(one)  make-clear

4
[Aerial shot of the beach and a public shower/restroom.]

5
Kyousuke:
 (Hmm...  She was here just       (o_   kashi-- na--    sakki  made
  a minute ago.)                   oh!  can-it-be-true  a-little-while-ago
                                                (conf.)        until

                                  kono HEN ni ita       hazu na  noni...)
                                  was-in-this-vicinity  likelihood
                                                                 although

 (I wonder if she already         (mo-- MINSHUKU ni  KAEtchatta
  went back to the inn.)           already           (= KAEtte-shimatta)
                                        to-the-inn      returned-(regret)

                                  no ka na--)
                                     I-wonder

6
[He sees the restroom...]

7
Kyousuke:                         ______
  I guess I drank too much        ju--su  nomisugi-chatta     ka na
  juice.                          juice   (= nomisugite-shimatta)
                                             drank-too-much   I-wonder

[...and enters it, unaware that Madoka is showering just around the corner.]

shower FX:                        ______
                          sha--_

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p 83 (61)

1
[Madoka lets the water run on her head.]

2
[She blindly reaches for her towel...]

3
[...and someone hands it to her.]
Jerk #1:
  Here you go.                    do--zo

4
Madoka:
  Thank you.                      arigato

5
Jerk #1:
  No problem.                     do--  itashimashite
                                  what  doing

6
[Jerk #1 blocks Madoka's exit with his arm.]
Jerk #1 FX:                       ___
                           ba_

7
Jerk #2:
  Hey.                            otto

Jerk #1: [singing]
  Blooocking your way...          too--senbo   toosenbo
  Blocking your way...            block-person's-way



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p 84 (62)

1
Madoka: [smiling]
  Okay.  I guess I'll have        soo do--yara        ITAi ME  mi-nakerya
  to give you the "pain           so  it-looks-as-if  pain-treatment
  treatment" to let me go.                                  (= mi-nakereba)
                                                               if-not-see

                                  TOU shite kure              so-- mo
                                  give-through-the-medium-of  like-that-too

                                  nai  mitai        ne
                                  not  looks-as-if  (confirm.)

2
Jerk #2:
  "Pain treatment"?  Don't        ITAi ME?  tonde-mo-nai!
  be silly!                                 absurd

Jerk #1:
  We only want to have a          boku-tachi wa i-- ME o  mitai dake  nan...
  good time...                    we        (T) good  (O)       only  what
                                                          looks-as-if
                                                    experience

3
[Madoka catches Jerk #1's nose with a left jab.]
punch FX:
                            beku_

Jerk #1:
  Ouch!                           ata--_

4
Jerk #2:
  She has awfully quick hands.    KONDO wa erai TE no hayai ne--chan da na
                                  this-time     quick-hands
                                       (T) great            girl     be

Jerk #1:
  Let's get her!                  ya_  chimae!
                                  oh!  let's-get-(her)

5
spin kick FX:                     ___
                           ga_

[Jerk #2 goes flying]

6
[The back strap of Madoka's bikini top pops loose.]
strap FX:                         ___
                           pu_

Madoka:
  Oh!                             a

7
Madoka:
  O-oh, no!                       ya ya da_!

bikini top FX:                    _______
                        harari_

[Madoka crosses her arms to keep her top on.]

Jerks: [ogling]
  O-o-oh!                         a~~~_

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p 85 (63)

1
Jerk #1:
  Any more violent movement       abareru to  motto  hazukashi--  koto ni
  would be embarrassing for       if-become-violent/run-amok
  you!                                        more   embarrassed  things

                                  naru    ze
                                  become  !!

2
Kyousuke: [coming around the corner]
  Ayukawa!!                       AYUKAWA_!!

Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

3
[Kyousuke's eyes zero in on Madoka's top...]

4
nosebleed FX:                     ___
                          bu_

5
narration:
  W-what's...  I came 'cause      na nan da--     KOE ga     shita    n de
  I heard a cry, and w-what's        what's-this  voice/cry  noticed  because
  all this?
                                  kite-mitara      ko kore wa?
                                  when-try-&-come     this

Kyousuke:
  What are you doing!!            omaera    nani  shita n da!!
                                  you(pl.)  what  did   (explan)

6
Jerk #1:
  Shut up, boy!                   uruse--   n da     yo      bo--zu!
                                  shut-up!  (explan) (emph)  sonny/boy/kid

punch FX:                         ____
                           hyu_

narration:
  First shot--Miss!               ICHI-HATSU -ME    FUHATSU!
                                  1    SHOT  -st    misfire

7
punch FX:                         _____
                           doga_

narration:
  Second shot--Hit!               NI-HATSU -ME    MEICHUU!!
                                  2  shot  -nd    a-hit

[Kyousuke goes flying.]

Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun!!                    KASUGA-kun!!

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p 86 (64)

1
narration:
  S-shit!  Looks like I'll        ku kuso--_  ko--narya
  have to use my Power!              shit  !  if-like-this

                                  _CHIKARA_ (kanji = NOURYOKU) TSUKAu
                                   Power                       to-use

                                  shikanai!
                                  not-lie-out-flat

  I have to rescue Ayukawa!       AYUKAWA o  TASUkeru     tame  da_!
                                         (O) rescue/help  good  be!

2
[Kyousuke starts to use the Power, but...]

3
[...he visualizes Yuusaku charging these same jerks.]
narration:
  But that guy defended           demo--  aitsu wa JIBUN no JITSURYOKU de
  Hikaru-chan using only his      but     that-person       real-ability
  own real abilities.                          (T) one's-own           with

                                  hikaru-chan o   MAMOtta   n da
                                             (O)  defended  (explan)

narration:
  No matter how you put it,       yappari   do-- kangaete     mo
  it would be shameful for        likewise  how  thinking-of  too
  me to use the Power against
  them!                           OTOKO to      shite  nasakenai  yo na--_!
                                  against-them  doing  shameful   (confirm)

4
narration:
  But how can I protect her       _CHIKARA_ TSUKAwa-nakya  AYUKAWA no koto
  if I don't use my Power...       if-not-using-Power      her

                                  MAMOrenai    nante---
                                  not-protect  how

[Kyousuke attempts to body-tackle Jerk #1]

Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa, run!!                  AYUKAWA nigero_!!

5
[Madoka spies her towel and gets an idea.]

6
[A fist extracts more blood from Kyousuke's nose.]
narration:                                  ____
  Just as I thought.  It's        yappari   muri        ka---
  impossible...                             impossible

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                        fura_

7
Madoka:
  You.                            anta-tachi
                                  you (plural)

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p 87 (65)

1
Madoka: [tying towel around her top]
  Now I'm really mad.             HONKI de  atashi o okoraseta  wa ne
                                  in-seriousness     made-mad
                                            I     (O)           (fem insist.)

towel FX:                         ____
                         gyu_

2
Jerks:
  Eh!                             e

3
[Madoka helps them see more stars...]

4
Jerks: [running off]
  We're very sorry!               domo suimase--n

[Madoka dusts off her hands...]

5
[...and looks back at the unconscious Kyousuke.]

6
Madoka: [kneeling beside him]
  Kasuga-kun.  Kasuga-kun!        KASUGA-kun  KASUGA-kun!

7
Kyousuke: [dazed]
  A-Ayukawa...                    a AYUKAWA...

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p 88 (66)

1
Kyousuke: [sitting up]
  T-those guys.                   a aitsura wa

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                         gaba

Madoka:
  They're gone already.           moo      inai         wa yo
                                  already  not-be-found

2
narration:
  I'm so pathetic.                JIBUN no nasakena sa ni aiso ga tsukiru!
                                  one's-own-pitiful-state     (S) used-up
                                                          an-appeal

Kyousuke:
  Ow-ow...                        ite te...

3
Madoka:
  Silly, aren't you...            baka nee...

  Don't be so reckless, okay?     anmari mucha na  koto  shinai de yo
                                  too-much         things
                                         rash/reckless   not-do

4
Madoka: [turning her back to him]
  Well, shouldn't you be          saa   moo  itta  ho-- ga i-- n ja nai
  going?                          well  already    had-better      (not?)
                                             gone

  Isn't a special someone         DARE-ka-san    ga  MAtteru
  waiting for you?                someone(-hon.) (S) is-waiting

                                  n desho?
                                  (poss explan)

5
[Realization smacks Kyousuke like a sack of shucked oysters.]

6
Kyousuke:
  Oh, that's it!                  a  so-- ka!

7
narration:
  I told Ayukawa that only        AYUKAWA ni  wa  futari dake de  ikou
  the two of us would go...       to Ayukawa (T)  just-2-of-us    shall-go

                                  tte itta   n da----
                                  said-that  (explan)

Kyousuke:                         ___
  I didn't know Hikaru-chan       ore hikaru-chan ga  kono UMI ni
  would be here.                  I              (S)  to-this-beach

                                  kite-ru    nan-te  shiranakatta  n da
                                  be-coming  how     not-found-out (explan)

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p 89 (67)

1
Madoka: [back still turned]
  Oh.                             soo

2
Kyousuke:                                      ___
  Hikaru-chan merely gave me      hikaru-chan  ore ni  NI -MAI no KEN
  2 coupons and said "I'll                     to-me   2-coupons
  be waiting."
                                  kurete  tada    MAttemasu tte itta
                                  giving  merely  said-to-"wait"

                                  kara
                                  that's-why

  I thought she meant she'd       tekkiri  KE de MAtteru tte    koto ka to...
  be waiting at home...           assumed  that-"wait-at-home"  matter  that

3
[Madoka is wide-eyed through all this.]

4
[Back still turned, she starts to walk off.]
Madoka:
  That's none of my business.     sonna no      atashi ni wa  KANKEI
                                  that-kind-of  to-me    (T)  connection

                                  nai  koto    da wa
                                  not  matter  be

5
Kyousuke:
  Wait!                           MAte yo!

6
[He grabs her by the wrist.]

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p 90 (68)

1
Kyousuke:
  It is your business!            KANKEI      naku  nanka  nai  yo!
                                  connection  becomes      not  (emph)!

  Because there was just the      tatta  #1# -MAI no KEN  da kara
  one coupon...                   only   1-coupon         that's-why

2
Kyousuke:
  ...and I gave it to you,        AYUKAWA madoka ni  watashi ta n da mon!
  Madoka Ayukawa!                 to-Ayukawa-Madoka  I       (other-explan)
                                                                     thing!



3
[Madoka facial portrait--surprise.]

4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--earnestness.]

5
[Madoka facial portrait--tenderness.]

6
Madoka: [beaming]
  I see!                          akatta!
                                  (= wakatta)

[They hold hands.]

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p 91 (69)

1
Kyousuke:
  But...  It's too bad!           demo chotto    ZANNEN!
                                  but  a-moment  too-bad/unfortunate

Madoka:
  What?                           e?

2
Kyousuke: [eyeballing her, um, towel...]
  I would like to have seen       mite mita-katta          yo--na
  more...                         would-have-liked-to-see  such-as

                                  KI mo       suru   kedo...
                                  trace-more  to-do  although...

  Perhaps I should have been      mo--      chotto
  a little slower in helping      although  a-little
  you...
                                  OKUrete-kureba
                                  if-do-favor-of-being-slow

                                  yokatta   ka na...?
                                  was-good  I-wonder...?

Kyousuke FX:
                            ji--_
                                  self-consolation OR self-abuse

3
[Madoka yanks her hand back...]
hand FX:                          ___
                          ba_

4
[...and marches off down the beach.  Kyousuke gives chase.]
Kyousuke:
  Just kidding!  Just kidding!    jo--dan da yo  jo--dan!
                                  joke    be

5
[Meanwhile...]
Hikaru:
  Hey!  What are you touching!!   chotto   doko   sawatte n no yo--- _!!
                                  hold-on  where  touching     (emph)!!!

slap FX:                          ______
                          patsu_

Yuusaku:
  What are you saying--           sonna koto          ittatte
  I'm putting medicine on         that-kind-of-thing  (= itta mo)
  you.                                                   even-though-said

                                  kusuri    tsukerawanai  ja n
                                  medicine  not-attach    be-not

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