Kimagure Orange Road
"Snow Sketch"
Volume 6, Story 2
WB Volume 3, Story 13
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Matthew Klippenstein
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 03-15-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 268 (30) are only in the WB's!
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p 267 (29)
1
[Shot of the lower slopes at a ski resort--skiers finish their run near
the bottom of the ski lift.]
2
[Tight shot of a pair of ski boots on skis.]
Yuusaku:
haa haa
3
Yuusaku:
Where on earth have they ittai doko made itta
gone? where-in-the-world as-far-as gone
n darou
(poss-explan)
title: ______ ________
Snow Sketch suno-- - suketchi
4
Kyousuke: [pointing off-panel]
Ah, over there! a asoko!
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p 268-269 (30-31)--TITLE PAGES
[Two-page panel art. Madoka on the right and Hikaru on the left. They
ski toward us, down a gentle, powdery slope. Snow-capped trees glitter in
the background.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ ________
Snow Sketch suno-- - suketchi
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Flowery Forms Glide Through FURI HANA
a Silvery World. form/condition flower/spirit/youth/
beautiful-woman
________
sarasara GIN-SEKAI
flow/smoothly/with-ease silvery-world/
vast-snowy-scene
_________
You Chase After the Ski MADO no shupu--ru Oikakete!
Tracks of a Window! window's the-trace-of-skis chasing
, is in reference to Madoka.>
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p 270 (32)
1
[The two girls zip past, and on either side of, the stationary guys. Hikaru
looks back and smiles.]
Hikaru:
Kya-hoo! kya_ ho--_
Madoka/Hikaru ski FX: ______
zuza--
2
Yuusaku: [bug-eyed]
Wow! They're pretty good... hee--_ taishita mon da naa
! great/grand people are
3
[The two guys trade sinister stares.]
Kyousuke and Yuusaku:
(On the other hand, this guy (sore ni hikikae koitsu sakki kara
hasn't tried to ski at all on-the-contrary this-guy for-some-time
since we got here...
zenzen subero-- to shinai no wa
entirely/wholly shall-ski not-do
Could that mean...?) moshi-ka-shite......)
it-is-possible
Kyousuke and Yuusaku FX: _____
niya_
4
[Suddenly, Kazuya appears--skiing without ski poles--and gives the two guys
a shove from behind that sends them both flying.]
Kazuya: [grinning]
Hey you two! Don't just futari tomo so-- mottai
stand around. Go ski! 2-people both like-that (overemphasis)
burazu ni sube-ttara_!
loiter-around (IO) ski-
Kazuya hands FX: ___
don
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p 271 (33)
1
[Isolated shot of Yuusaku and Kyousuke, butts raised and heads planted
deep in the snow.]
2
[Springing to his feet, Yuusaku grabs Kyousuke around the collar.]
Yuusaku: ______
You jerk! What are you kono yaro-- nani suru n da!
doing?! what do (explan)
Kyousuke: [wincing, pointing at Kazuya]
Over there, over there. atchi atchi
3
[Yuusaku approaches Kazuya with mayhem on his mind. Kazuya flinches back,
and backs up against Hikaru.]
Yuusaku: __
You little br... kono ga...
this = brat
4
[View pans back to show Madoka there as well. Both girls look at Kyousuke
with concern.]
Hikaru:
Sempai. SEMPAI
5
[Shot looking downslope at the ski lodge.]
Hikaru: [off] ____
You aren't injured, are you? kega shite-nai desu kaa
aren't-injured be (?)
Kyousuke: [off]
N-no. u un
6
[Hikaru talks to Kazuya. Kyousuke eyes Madoka, who looks off-panel.]
narration:
Why are we here, you ask?! do--shite koko ni iru no ka tte?!
why are-here (?) (quote)
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p 272 (34)
[Panels 1-6 are black-bordered, denoting a flashback.]
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
narration:
It all started when Kazuya somosomo wa KAZUYA ga
said he wanted to go to-begin-with (T) (S)
skiing... ______
suki-- ni ikitai tte i--dashite---
want-to-go-skiing starting-to-say-that
2
[Kyousuke leans an elbow on the counter and replies to Kazuya.]
narration: ___
Naturally, since I can't to--zen suberenai ore wa
ski, I would have put an naturally not-able-to-ski I (T)
end to that, but...
koto wa ro-- to shita ga...
matter (T) with-trouble done but
3
[As Madoka and Kazuya look on, Hikaru smiles and clings to Kyousuke.]
narration: ___
...Kazuya said, in front KAZUYA wa ore ga hikaru-chan to
of Ayukawa, that I (T) I (S) with-Hikaru
wanted to go skiing with ______
Hikaru-chan... suki-- ni ikitagatte-ru to
that-is-showing-signs-of-wanting-to-go-
skiing
AYUKAWA no MAE de shaberi----
in-front-of-Ayukawa chatter/gabble
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
4
[Seated side-by-side, Kazuya and Kyousuke raise identical index fingers
and put on identical smiles.]
Kyousuke:
Y-yeah. Why don't you come so so-- da AYUKAWA mo ikanai?
too, Ayukawa? that's-right too not-go
5
Madoka:
Hmm, well... n so-- nee
6
Madoka:
Oh, okay! ma i-- ka!
Kyousuke/Hikaru/Kazuya:
Hooray!! yatta!!
narration:
Things were fine up to that soko made wa yokatta n da kedo-----
point, but... up-to-there (T) was-fine (explan) but
7
[Back on the ski slope, Kyousuke grimaces at Yuusaku, who glares back.]
narration:
How did he get wind of this? doko de kikitsuketa ka
at-where heard/learned/got-wind-of (?)
This guy came along as well! koitsu made tsuite-kitari shite!
this-guy even come-along-with/shadow-(and)
Yuusaku:
What? nan da?
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p 273 (35)
1
Hikaru:
Okay? i-- desu ka
Do it like this. ko-- yatte-kou
like-this shall-go-and-do
2
[View pans back to show Kyousuke and Hikaru skiing slowly side-by-side.]
Hikaru:
Good, good. umai umai
ski FX:
sui~~
3
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
4
[His pov of a livid Yuusaku and peeved Madoka.]
5
[Looking back upslope at them, his face contorts into a sick expression.]
narration:
Somehow, it felt like those nan da ka futari no SHISEN ga
two were staring daggers at somehow 2-people 's look (S)
me!
HADA ni itai!
skin (IO) painful
6
Kazuya:
Oneechan, let's ski! one--chan subero_
7
[Madoka takes a final look back...]
8
[...and skis off after Kazuya.]
Yuusaku:
Ah, wait a minute...! a chotto MAtte...!
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p 274 (36)
1
Yuusaku FX: ___ ___
oro oro
2
[A man comes barreling into the stationary Yuusaku, sending him flying.]
man:
Don't just stand around! urochoro sun na!
loiter (= suru na) = don't-do
man/Yuusaku FX: ___
don
Yuusaku:
AH! a_
3
[Yuusaku careens down a steep slope.]
Yuusaku: [pinwheeling his arms]
WAHHHHHH! wa------_
Yuusaku ski FX: _______
sha----
4
Yuusaku:
AH! ha_!
5
Yuusaku:
I-I skied! su subereta
6
[Hikaru smiles at Kyousuke and applauds.]
Hikaru:
You've really started to daibu
get the hang of this. very-(much)
_____
kotsu ga nomikomete-kimashita ne
started-to-get-the-hang-of
7
[The two stop to look at a passing streak.]
Yuusaku ski FX: _______
sha----
8
[Yuusaku grins at them as he passes by.]
Yuusaku: ___
(Heh! Look at me now. (fu_... donna mondai
see-what-I-have-done
With this, Hikaru-chan's kore de SUKOshi wa
sure to think better of me.) now/with-this a-little-(while) (T)
___
hikaru-chan mo ore no koto minaosu ni
even thinks-better-of-me (IO)
chigainai)
am-sure
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p 275 (37)
[Panels 1-4 are framed in black, denoting a dream sequence.]
1
[Hikaru elbows Kyousuke aside to rush over to Yuusaku.]
Hikaru: ______
Oh, Yuusaku! That was maa YUUSAKU suteki!
wonderful!
Hikaru FX: ___
don
2
[Yuusaku's pov of Hikaru.]
Hikaru:
I think better of you, atashi YUUSAKU no koto minaoshichatta!
Yuusaku! I (= minaoshite-shimatta)
thought-better-of-Yuusaku-(finality)
Will you ski with me, ISSHO ni subette-kudasaru?
please? together ski-(please)
3
Yuusaku:
Is that okay? To leave him i-- no kai aitsu hottoite
by himself? okay (?) that-guy leave-(him)-alone
Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] ____
Sure. Such a worthless i-- no yo anna dame OTOKO!
guy! that-kind-of-no-good-guy
Let's go. ikimasho
4
Yuusaku: [smirking back over his shoulder at Kyousuke]
Hey, that's the way it is. so-- yu-- koto da
that-kind-of-thing it-is
Don't feel bad. waruku OMOu na yo
badly don't-feel/think
Kyousuke: [stricken]
H-Hikaru-chan. hi hikaru-chan
5
[Back to reality. Tight shot of Yuusaku as he chortles diabolically.]
Yuusaku:
Serves him right! Kasugaaa! zama-- miro KASUGA--_
____________ ____________
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! ha_ha_ha_ha_ ha_ha_ha_ha_
Ha!
6
[Kyousuke and Hikaru watch Yuusaku as he skis by...]
Yuusaku: [looking ahead] ___
Ah! ha_
Yuusaku FX: ________
sha----_
7
[...down the wrong slope.]
Yuusaku:
S-somebody stop me-e-e-e! da dare-ka tomete-kure~~
somebody stop-(favor-to-me)
Hikaru:
That guy... What is he aitsu... nani KANGAete-ru n darou
thinking? that-guy what be-thinking (poss-explan)
sign:
DANGER KIKEN
Steep slope and cliff ahead. KEISHA ga KYUU de
slope (S) steep/danger being-(and)
____
gake ari
cliff there-is
____
Bears are also found. kuma mo DEmasu
bears too be-found/emerge/come-out
Kyousuke:
Dunno... saa...
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p 276 (38)
1
[Shot of a snow-covered street in town.]
2
[Kyousuke ambles down the sidewalk, looking at the shops.]
3
[He comes upon a familiar brunette.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? n?
4
[She holds out a trinket to the store clerk.]
Madoka:
This one. kore
clerk:
Certainly. maido--
always/often
5
Kyousuke:
Wowww! That's well-crafted. wa--_ yoku dekite-ru ne sore
well made that-(one)
[Madoka turns in surprise.]
6
Kyousuke: [to clerk] ___
Same for me, please. ore mo ONAji yatsu kudasai
me too same thing please
Madoka: [picking up item #2]
Oh, I'll go with this one, a yappari kotchi ni shimasu
after all. after-all this-way (IO) do
7
[His pov of Madoka, whose gaze suggests she wants nothing to do with him.]
narration:
Still seems to be in a bad mada go-KIGEN naname mitai----
mood... still (hon)-bad-mood seems
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p 277 (39)
1
[Kyousuke raises an identical item #2 up high. There is a look of wild
determination on his face.]
Kyousuke: ___
Then I'll take this one, ja ore kore mo......!
too...! then I this-(one) too
Madoka: [holding out item #3, a bird trinket]
Then I'll pass on that and ja sore yamete kore
take this one. then that-(one) giving-up this-(one)
2
Kyousuke: [shouting]
Then I'll take this one ja kore mo kudasai!
too, please! then this-(one) too please
[Madoka blushes and goes wide-eyed.]
3
Madoka:
What are you doing, buying sonna ni KAtte do-- sun no yo
so much? so-(much) buying what doing
4
Kyousuke:
I want to have the same AYUKAWA to ONAji mono motte-itai
thing as you, Ayukawa. w/Ayukawa same-thing want-to-be-having
n da mon
(is-the-reason)
5
[They hold up their final choices--identical bird trinkets.]
Kyousuke: ___
Look... They're a pair. hora... pea da yo
look pair is
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p 278 (40)
1
[Kyousuke's pov of a pensive Madoka. She looks back at him.]
2
[She spins about and starts to walk off, feigning irritation. Kyousuke
smiles.]
Madoka:
What? You copycat! nani yo mane shimbo ne_!
what imitation ??????
narration:
I wonder if we've made up do--yara NAKAnaori dekita ka na?
somehow? somehow a-reconciliation was-able-to-do
I-wonder
3
[He runs after her with a wide smile. She turns to look back, not unhappily.]
4
[View from just behind the tattered pants leg of Yuusaku. He stands on the
street watching Madoka and Kyousuke depart.]
5
[Yuusaku looks like he's been dragged through a swamp.]
narration:
That bastard. He's the annyaro-- hitori dake anna ni
only one having such a 1-person-only so-(much)
good time...
i-- OMOi shi-yagatte...
having-a-good-experience-
Just you wait. mite-ro yo
Today--TODAY--I'll teach KYOU to yu-- KYOU wa
him a lesson! today say-that today (T)
ME ni mono misete-yaru!
teach-a-lesson-(favor-to-him)
6
[View pans back to show Kazuya standing far behind Yuusaku and watching.]
7
Kazuya: [with a snicker]
(This looks like it's getting (korya omoshiroi koto ni nariso--)
interesting.) this interesting-thing (IO) looks-as-
if-become
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p 279 (41)
1
[Exterior night shot of the ski lodge.]
2
[Inside the lodge, Kazuya runs after Madoka.]
Kazuya:
Huh? Where are you going, are one--chan doko iku no?
oneechan? where go
3
[Yuusaku looks on as Madoka stops, smiles and bends down to speak to Kazuya.]
Madoka: _______
I'm all sweaty so I'll go asekaichatta kara ne shawa-- yo
take a shower. (= asekaite-shimatta) shower
since-perspired-(finality/regret)
Wanna take one with me? issho ni hairu?
together go-in
Kazuya: [taken aback] _ ___ ___
Ehh?! M-me? I can take one e--_ o ore? ore hitori de haireru
by myself. me I by-myself be-going-in
mon
person
4
Yuusaku: [rubbing his chin] ____
Hmmm. fumu
5
Kazuya:
What's wrong? You're making do-- shita no hidoi KAO shite
an awful face. awful-expression making
Yuusaku:
Bug off! hottoke_!
6
Yuusaku:
(That's it! Just had a good (so-- da! i-- koto OMOi tsuita zo!!
idea!! good-thing happened-to-think-of
It'll be bad for AYUKAWA-SEMPAI ni wa warui kedo
Ayukawa-sempai, but this is (IO) (contrast) bad but
for the future of Hikaru-chan ___
and me...) kore mo ore to
this-(one) too I and
hikaru-chan no SHOURAI no tame...)
's future 's benefit
Yuusaku:
Never mind that. I have a sore yori omae ni tanomi ga aru
favor to ask of you. rather-than-that I-have-a-favor-to-ask-
of-you
7
Kazuya:
(Here it comes!) (sora kita)
there! came
Kazuya FX: _____
niya_
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p 280 (42)
1
[Isolated shot of the door to Room 10.]
2
[Madoka enjoys a shower. Male readers will also enjoy the shower.]
3
[Kazuya and Yuusaku continue their conversation.]
Kazuya:
"Take Kyou-niichan to the KYOU-ni--chan o one--chan-tachi no
oneechans' Room 10?" (O) (plural) 's
10 GOUSHITSU ni tsurete-ke tte?
Room-10 (IO) take-(one)-to-(someplace)
(quote)
4
[Kazuya thinks this over.]
5
Kazuya:
(Madoka-oneechan should be (IMA sono HEYA wa madoka-one--chan ga
taking a bath in that room now that-room (T) (S)
right now...
o-FURO ni haitte-iru hazu...
should-be-taking-a-bath
_______
I see this guy has thought haha--n koitsu yokaranu koto o
up something evil.) I-see this-guy evil/bad/ill thing (O)
OMOi tsuita na)
happened-to-think-of
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p 281 (43)
[This page is black-bordered, indicating the hypothetical situation
narrated by Kazuya to Yuusaku. Of course, Kazuya's picked this all out
of Yuusaku's brain to begin with...]
1
[Kyousuke and Kazuya stand outside the door to Room 10. Kazuya smiles
and points at it.]
narration:
So it's like this... ko-- yu-- koto deshou
this-kind-of-thing poss-be
Giving some sorta reason RIYUU o tsukete oni--chan o
I lure oniichan into that on-a-pretext (O)
room.
sono HEYA ni sasoi-dasu
that-room (IO) lure-one-out
2
[Elsewhere in the lodge, Yuusaku speaks with Hikaru.]
narration:
And right then, Yuu-niichan sono ato sugu ni YUU-ni--chan ga
says to Hikaru-oneechan... that after right-away (S)
hikaru-one--chan ni
(IO)
Hikaru:
What?! Sempai is waiting e?! SEMPAI ga atashi-tachi no HEYA de
for me in my room? (S) in-our-room
atashi o MAtte-ru tte?
me (O) be-waiting (quote)
3
[Inside Room 10, Madoka, in a towel, comes upon Kyousuke.]
narration:
And right about then, in choudo sono koro
Room 10, Madoka-oneechan just/precisely at-that-time/then
will be coming out of the
bath. 10 GOUSHITSU de wa madoka-one--chan ga
in-Room-10 (T) (S)
o-FURO kara dete-kite
from-bath beginning-to-emerge
Madoka:
KYAAAA! kya~~
4
[Hikaru enters Room 10. She is shocked by what she sees.]
narration: ________
And right on cue, taimingu yoku hikaru-one--chan mo
Hikaru-oneechan will come timing well/right also
in, too, and see it with
her own eyes... haitte-kite sore o
coming-to-enter that-(one) (O)
MOKUGEKI suru----
witness/see-with-her-own-eyes
Hikaru: ________
Kyaa! Sempai, you pervert!! kya--_ SEMPAI no etchi--_!!
_____
Scum! I hate you! SAITEI yo kirai!
the-lowest/the-pits dislike/hate
5
narration:
Finally, to top it off, SAIGO no SHI-Age wa
you rush in. the-end 's be-finishing (T)
YUU-ni--chan ga kaketsukete
(S) rushing-(to-the-spot)
[Yuusaku uncorks a right jab that sends Kyousuke reeling.]
Yuusaku: ____
YOU BASTARD!! kono gesu YAROU!!
this vulgar/base fellow
6
[Hikaru clings to Yuusaku's arm as Yuusaku beams a smile.]
narration: _________ _________
And then the two lived soshite futari wa medetashi medetashi!
happily ever after! and/then 2-people (T) joyful
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p 282 (44)
1
[Yuusaku claps a hand over Kazuya's chattering mouth and looks about
anxiously.]
Yuusaku: __ ____
D-dummy! D-don't shout it ba baka de dekkai KOE dasu na_!
out! humongous voice don't-utter!
2
Yuusaku: ____
(But... How does this brat (shikashi... do--shite kono gaki ni
knows what I'm thinking?) but why this-brat (IO)
___
ore no KANGAete-ru koto ga wakaru
my be-thinking matter (S) know
n darou)
(poss-explan)
Kazuya:
(If you're a man, it's (OTOKO nara motto do--do-- to
better to meet it boldly guy if-it-is if-more-imposing
head-on...
SHOUMEN kara butsukareba
from-the-front/face if-strike/if-meet-with
i-- no ni...
good even-though
This guy's a creampuff, koitsu mo taishita koto nai wa----)
too...) this-guy too nothing-serious
3
Kazuya: _____
(But... He did go through (demo... sekkaku no aidea da)
the trouble of coming up but with-much-trouble 's idea is
with the idea.)
(It wouldn't be bad to try (notte miro no mo WARUkunai)
and play along with it.) shall-try-and-be-a-part-of too not-bad
4
[Kazuya and Yuusaku stop to watch Kyousuke and Hikaru walk by. Hikaru
clings to his arm.]
5
Kazuya:
(And it might also be good (sore ni darashinai no wa
medicine for Kyou-niichan's moreover slipshod/loose (T)
hopeless ways.)
o-tagai-sama KYOU-ni--chan ni wa
mutual/one-another (IO)
i-- KUSURI kamo ne)
good-medicine maybe/possibly
Kazuya:
Got it. I'll help! wakatta TETSUDAu yo!
understood assist/help
6
[Kazuya pulls Kyousuke down the hall.]
Kyousuke:
What is it? nan da yo--
Kazuya:
Just a sec! chotto!
7
[Shot of the registration desk.]
Kyousuke: [off]
"Help me take a bath"? Can't o-FURO ni irete-kure tte
you just do that by yourself? to-bath let-in-(favor-to-me) (quote)
omae JIBUN de hairenai no ka
you by-self not-able-to-go-in (?)
Kazuya: [off] ______
Bu-u-ut... I'm not used to datte-- hoteru no o-FURO tte yoku
the hotel's bathroom. but hotel 's bath (T) well/fully
wakannai yo
not-understand
It's Western-style... YOUSHIKI da shi
Western-style is consider
8
[Kyousuke trots after the running Kazuya.]
Kyousuke:
Ahh, it's no use... mo-- sho-- ga nai naa
nothing-can-be-done
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p 283 (45)
1
Kyousuke: [pausing, looking off to the side]
Huh? Still, I haven't seen are sore ni shite mo AYUKAWA no sugata ga
Ayukawa... still/but 's form (S)
MIenai kedo...
not-be-seen/be-missing but
Kazuya FX: _____
giku_
2
[Kazuya grabs Kyousuke by the wrist and drags him down the hall.]
Kazuya: ___
H-hurryyy! I have to go to ha HAYAku--_ ore mo-- neru n da
bed soon! soon I soon sleep (explan)
kara_!
that's-why
3
[Rooms 10 and 11 have their signs exchanged.]
narration: _chikara_
If I use the Power to NOURYOKU o TSUKAtte HEYA no BANGOU o
change the room numbers, using-the-Power room 's number (O)
then oniichan will
automatically think it's Irekaereba oni--chan wa JIDOU-TEKI ni
his room, and should go if-change (T) automatically
into Madoka-oneechan's
room... JIBUN no HEYA da to OMOtte
self 's room is thinking-that
madoka-one--chan-tachi no HEYA e
to-Madoka-(and-assoc)'s-room
hairu hazu...
supposed-to-go-in
Power FX: ___
pa_
4
Kazuya:
Over there, oniichan. oni--chan sotchi wa
that-way (T)
This is the oneechans' room. one--chan-tachi no HEYA da yo
(plural) 's room is
Kyousuke:
Huh? You're right. are? so-- da kke
5
[Kyousuke stands at the open door.]
door FX: _____
gacha
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p 284 (46)
1
Kazuya:
Oh no! o ikkenai!
________
I forgot to bring shampoo. boku shampu-- motte-kuru no
I shampoo to-bring (nominalizer)
wasurechatta
(= wasurete-shimatta)
forgotten-(finality/regret)
2
Kazuya: [running off]
Hang on. I'll go and buy chotto KAtte-kuru kara saki ni
some. You go on in ahead! go-and-buy since following
haitte-te!
be-going-in
3
[Kyousuke, shirt off, starts unzipping his pants when he hears...]
shower FX: ____
zaa_
4
[He opens the bathroom door.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? Somebody's inside. are DARE-ka haitte-ru
somebody have-gone-in
door FX: _____
kacha
5
[Madoka, in profile in the shower, turns at the sound...]
door FX: _____
kacha
6
Madoka:
Wait just a sec, 'kay? chotto MAtte-te ne
I'll be right out. sugu ni deru kara
right-away emerging that's-why
7
[Kyousuke blushes and his eyes goggle.]
narration:
AYUKAWA-A-A?! AYUKAWA----?!
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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1
[He staggers back and sits on the floor, staring at the now closed bathroom
door.]
narration: ___
Wh-why OUR room? na nande ore-tachi HEYA ni
why in-our-room
A-and taking a bath! shi shikamo o-FURO nanka haitte
moreover bath the-likes-of going-in
What's she thinking?! nani o KANGAete-ru n da!
what (O) be-thinking (explan)
2
[He visualizes what Madoka might look like when she emerges from the bath.]
Kyousuke:
(C-can't be...!) (ma masaka......!)
dream Madoka:
I've been waiting for you. anata o MAtte-ita no yo
you (O) was-waiting
3
[He goes catatonic.]
narration:
"Wait just a sec. I'll be chotto MAtte-te ne sugu ni deru kara
right out..."
nante----
the-likes-of
narration:
I wonder if girls get bold yappari ko-- yu-- TOKORO ni kuru to
when they come to this sort after-all to-this-kind-of-place when-come
of place, after all.
ONNA no KO tte daitan ni naru no ka naa
girls (T) become-bold I-wonder
4
narration:
Oka-a-ay. If it's like this yo--shi ko-- nattara
then even I'm decisive! if-become-like-this
___
ore datte KOKORO o KImete!
I even settling-(my)-mind
[He resolutely tosses his pants in the air over his shoulder...]
Kyousuke toss-pants FX: ___
ba_
5
[...but staggers at the sound of...]
Hikaru: [off]
Sempaaai! sempa~~i!
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1
Hikaru: [softly, cuddling up against the door]
*It's* *me* *ee*! Can I a - ta - shi! haitte ii?
come in? I enter okay
2
[Kyousuke portrait--a deer caught in the headlights...]
3
[He scampers about aimlessly.]
narration:
Auggh!! gie~~~_!!
Kyousuke confusion FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
uro uro uro uro
4
Kyousuke: [flashing with the Power] __________
(Th-that's it! Teleport.) (so so-- da! terepo--to)
5
[But nothing happens...]
6
narration: _chikara_
Wh-why can't I use the na nande NOURYOKU ga TSUKAenai n da?!
Power?! why Power (S) can't-be-used (explan)
[Still only in undershorts, he pulls hard at the closed window.]
Kyousuke FX:
u~~n
Kyousuke:
(To make matters worse, the (omake ni MADO mo akanai)
window won't open, either.) to-make-matters-worse window too not-open
7
Kazuya: [crackling with the Power] _chikara_
(Sorry. My Power is just (gomen ne oni--chan no NOURYOKU yori
a bit superior to yours, sorry 's Power than
oniichan!) _chikara_
boku no NOURYOKU
my Power
no ho-- ga chotto bakari UE na n da!)
just-a-bit-superior is (explan)
8
[Yuusaku stands with arms crossed and a grim look of satisfaction on his
face.]
Yuusaku:
Now, Hikaru-chan is mine...! kore de hikaru-chan wa
now/with-this (T)
___
ore no mono......!
my person
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[Madoka emerges from the bathroom in panel 1. In panel 2, Hikaru opens the
door to the room and looks in. Both share the same speech bubble.]
Madoka and Hikaru:
Sorry to keep you waiting...! omachido--_
doors FX: _____
gacha
3
[Exterior night shot of the ski lodge. In each of the triple insets we see
the surprised, blushing faces of Kyousuke, Hikaru or Madoka.]
Hikaru/Madoka: ______
Kyaaaa! kya--_
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