Kimagure Orange Road
"The Dream-Colored Valentine"
Volume 6, Story 5
WB Volume 3, Story 16
including "Bad Girl Madoka" afterword at end of wideban 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (8 Mar 1992)
Full-script typesetting & Additional translation (including "Bad Girl
Madoka") by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Matthew Klippenstein
Jordan Lampe
Thomas Wyatt
Scott Henry
Shin'ichi Yamamoto
Last revision : 04-11-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 333 (95) are only in the WB's!
---------------------------------------------------
p 333 (95)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka, in a dress, sits on her bed, an elbow on a raised knee, cheek
resting against the hand.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _________
The Dream-Colored Valentine YUME IRO barentain
dream color Valentine
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
When Her Heart Is Veiled, KOKORO ni MEkakushi sareta nara
She Seems to Have Herself feelings/ (IO) was-screening- if-it-is
a Mischievous Time... heart (a-place)
ikenai JIKAN o SUgoshisou...
naughty-time (O) seem-to-spend/
go-through/go-too-far
---------------------------------------------------
p 334 (96)
1
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, in her school uniform, as she presents him with
a box of chocolate.]
Madoka:
Here. For you. hai ageru
here give-(to-you)
2
Kyousuke: [pleasantly surprised]
Th-thank you... a...... arigatou
3
[Madoka walks away as Kyousuke stares raptly at the box in his hands.]
narration:
I-I got some! mo moratchatta
(= moratte-shimatta)
received-(finality)
___________
Chocolates from Ayukawa...! AYUKAWA kara chokore--to..........!
from-Ayukawa chocolate
Kyousuke satisfaction FX:
ji~~~~n
4
[He rubs his cheek against the box, in contentment.]
narration:
Th-this is real... ho HONTOU da yo na--
really is
It's not a dream, is it? YUME ja nai darou kaa
dream is-not poss-be (?)
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
nade nade
---------------------------------------------------
p 335 (97)
1
[Manami and Kurumi peer wide-eyed around a door.]
2
[Looking over their shoulders we see inside the room. Kyousuke, in his
pajamas, is kneeling on his bed, happily stroking his cheek against the
alarm clock which he cradles in his hands. He is asleep.]
Kyousuke FX:
suri suri
Kurumi:
I wonder what this means? nan no tsumori na no kashira
what-kind-of-meaning is I-wonder
Manami:
Dunno... saa
3
alarm FX: ____________
jiririririri
Kyousuke:
Ooo-wahhh! uwa_
4
Kyousuke: [wide-awake now]
Wah... wa......
5
narration:
Oh. It was a dream... nan da YUME ka......
what dream (musing)
Any normal person would say to futsuu no yatsu nara
that, and thus, lose heart, (quote) average-fellow if-it-was
but... _______
gakkuri kuru tokoro da ga...
come-to-be-disheartened case be but
6
Kyousuke:
(Indeed, this was no ordinary (dokkoi kore wa tada no YUME
dream!) oh/ah this-(one) (T) just-a-dream
ja nai!)
was-not
narration:
It's just another maido onajimi YOCHI-MU da!
premonition dream! each-time the-same premonition-dream is
---------------------------------------------------
p 336 (98)
1
[Kyousuke's pov as his sisters cheerfully present him with boxes of
chocolate.]
Manami and Kurumi: ___________
Here you go! Chocolate!! hai chokore--to!!
here chocolate
2
[He collects them in an upraised hand, without much expression. The twins
stand and watch him walk away, rather stunned.]
Kyousuke: ________
Thank you. sankyu--
3
Kurumi:
What's with his attitude? do-- OMOu ano TAIDO?
what think that-attitude/behavior
He didn't seem too happy. anmari ureshiso-- ja nai mitai ne
too- not-seem-as-if-happy
4
[Manami smiles at Kyousuke, who is putting on his coat at the door.]
Manami:
Well, THAT'S because this sorya nantatte
time he might get chocolates that when-you-come-down-to-it/after-all
from girls other than us.
KONDO koso
this-time indeed
atashi-tachi IGAI no ONNA no KO kara
from-girls-besides-us
moraeru kamoshirenai n da mon
get it's-possible (is-the-reason)
Right, oniichan? ne-- oni--chan
5
[Kyousuke stares fiercely and dramatically at the palms of his hands,
body vibrating and crackling with energy.]
Kyousuke:
February 14th... 2-GATSU 14-KA...
How small I've felt on this kono HI wa MAITOSHI donna ni
day, year after year. this-day (T) year-after-year how-much
KATAMI no semai OMOi o shita
feel-small/ashamed had-experienced
koto ka
matter (musing)
Such a long, long day where KOTOSHI koso wa to yu--
the high hopes of "this year this-year indeed (T) (quote)
will be it" soon turns into
the despair of "not again OUkina KITAI KAN ga
this year"... grand/huge expectations feeling (S)
yagate KOTOSHI mo ka to yu--
soon this-year as-well (quote)
SHITSUBOU KAN ni
despair/disappointment feeling (IO)
KAwatte-yuku
go-and-turn-into
NAGAi NAGAi ICHINICHI......
long long a-whole-day/a-single-day
[Kurumi and Manami watch in amazement.]
Kurumi:
The light and shadow of SEISHUN no HIKARI to KAGE ne
youth. youthful 's light and shadow
6
[He stands in a heroic, damn-the-torpedoes, pose.]
Kyousuke:
But this year will be da kedo KOTOSHI wa chigau ze!!
different!! but this-year (T) different
dramatic FX: _____
do~~n
---------------------------------------------------
p 337 (99)
1
[Against a backdrop of a large Japanese flag, Kyousuke salutes us. His
sisters whoop and cheer from behind.]
Kyousuke:
Kasuga Kyousuke, here I go!! KASUGA KYOUSUKE itte mairimasu!!
going go
Manami:
Go for it! gambatte ne----_
Kurumi:
Don't get distracted! chiru na yo----_
2
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
3
Matsuoka-sensei:
Ishimaru. Suzuki. Hatta... ISHIMARU - SUZUKI - HATTA...
4
[The teacher looks over the class, which stands at attention.]
Matsuoka-sensei:
What's going on? A lot of nan da KYOU wa KESSEKISHA ga OUi naa
absentees today. what today (T) absentees (S) many
And they're all guys. shikamo DANSHI bakkari
moreover only-guys
5
Komatsu:
Well, for those who aren't maa motenai yatsura ni totcha
popular with girls, there well (totte-wa)
isn't a more miserable day for-people-unpopular-with-girls
than today...!
KYOU hodo mijime na HI wa
today extent miserable-day (T)
nai kara na--_
there's-not that's-why !
Kyousuke: [smiling]
I know that feeling. wakaru naa sono KIMOchi
understand/know that-feeling
6
[The two stop and stare pointedly at each other.]
Kyousuke and Komatsu FX:
ji~~
7
Kyousuke and Komatsu:
(Why has he shown up?) (do--shite koitsu wa dete-kita
why this-guy (T) came-to-appear
n darou)
(poss-explan)
---------------------------------------------------
p 338 (100)
1
[A full-portrait shot of Madoka as she walks toward us--this is splashed over
the length of the page.]
2
[Overhead view as she walks toward Kyousuke and Komatsu, who are walking
toward her down the hall.]
3
[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
4
[Madoka portrait--a guarded smile.]
5
[Kyousuke turns to watch her walk away.]
6
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
narration: _____
When I think about Ayukawa HONTOU ni AYUKAWA ga choko kureru
really giving me chocolates, really (S) give-me-chocolate
I think of little else.
ka to OMOu to sasuga ni
when-think-about truly/indeed
ISHIKI shichau naa
(= shite-shimau)
am-aware-of-(finality)
---------------------------------------------------
p 339 (101)
1
Komatsu: [frowning]
No matter how you look at aitsu do-- mite-mo
it, she just doesn't seem that-person to-all-appearance
the Valentine's Day type. _________ ____
barentain tte gara ja nai yo na
Valentine (T) one's-character is-not
Kyousuke:
What?! e?!
2
Komatsu: ____
She's always so cold, and itsu-mo tsun to shite-te
certainly doesn't look like always in-capacity-of-primness
the type to give any _____
chocolate! ZETTAI ni choko nanka kureso-- ni
absolutely look-like-give-chocolate
_____
nai taipu da ze
isn't-type !
narration:
That's not true! sonna koto nai sa!
that-kind-of-thing not-exist
3
Kyousuke: [entering the empty classroom]
(But I wonder if that dream (shikashi ano YUME HONTOU ni
really was a premonition but that-dream really
dream.)
YOCHI-MU na no ka na)
premonition-dream is I-wonder
(I've begun to worry.) (nanka SHIMPAI ni natte-kita)
somewhat started-to-become-worried
4
Kyousuke: _____
(It's Ayukawa's bag.) (AYUKAWA no kaban da)
's bag is
5
[His eyes glow with the Power.]
narration:
I'll look to see if she motte-ru ka do-- ka
has some or not. be-having or what or
TOUSHI shichae
(shite-shimae)
see-through-(finality/regret)
__
I'm sorry, Ayukawa. gomen ne AYUKAWA
6
[His view of her bag. Inside is a box of chocolates.]
7
Kyousuke: [ecstatic]
IT'S THERE!! atta--_!!
narration:
That was a premonition dream are wa machigai naku
for sure!! that-(one) (T) correctly/surely
YOCHI-MU daa_!!
premonition-dream is
---------------------------------------------------
p 340 (102)
1
[Hikaru enters the classroom, hiding something behind her back.]
Hikaru: [smiling]
Sempa-a-ai sempa--i
2
[She joyously presents him with a huge heart-shaped box of chocolates.
Kyousuke is pleasantly surprised.]
Hikaru:
HERE! hai_!
Kyousuke:
WAH! wa_
3
Hikaru: [beaming]
Please accept my feelings!! atashi no KIMOchi uketotte!!
my-feelings (ukete-oite)
accept-(for-future-sake)
Kyousuke:
Thank you... arigatou...
4
[As he smiles in contentment, Hikaru studies him and smiles in turn.]
narration: _____
It's just like Hikaru-chan konna OUkina choko kureru nante
to give me such a big box give-me-such-a-large-chocolate
of chocolates.
hikaru-chan rashii naa
just-like-Hikaru
Kyousuke:
(I feel like this makes up (IMA made moraenakatta BUN
for all of the chocolate that up-to-now not-gotten portion/share
I had never received in the
past.) matomete-moratta KIBUN)
gathered-by-me feeling
5
[With a smile of confidence he visualizes Madoka.]
narration:
Next... sate o-TSUGI wa......
and/well/now next (T)
---------------------------------------------------
p 341 (103)
1
[Kyousuke walks home from school, alone.]
narration:
But contrary to my tokoro-ga KITAI ni HAN shite
expectations, there was but contrary-to-one's-expectation
no sign that I was going
to get anything from itsu ni natte-mo AYUKAWA kara wa
Ayukawa... even-tho-becoming-then from-Ayukawa (T)
kureru KEHAI ga nakatta----
give-me indication (S) was-not-there
Kyousuke: ___
(I haven't done anything (ore SAIKIN KIRAwareru koto tte
recently to make her hate I recently be-disliked thing (T)
me, have I...)
shite-nai yo na--)
not-be-doing (rhet)
2
Madoka: [catching up to him from behind]
Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...
3
[He blushes.]
Madoka: _________
Actually, today being jitsu wa KYOU barentain de...
Valentine's Day... truth (T) today Valentine's being
narration:
Here it comes!! kita--_!!
4
[But she just presses her hands together before her in formal request...]
Madoka: _______ _______
ABCB is presenting a special abakabu de TOKUBETSU menyu-- o DAsu
menu today and so we'll be at-ABCB special-menu (O) produce
short a worker.
n de HITODE ga TArinai no
(cause) a-hand/a-worker (S) lack
Can you help us? TETSUDAtte-kurenai?
not-assist-(us)
Kyousuke pratfall FX: _____
zuru_
5
[Exterior shot looking out towards some buildings downtown.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 342 (104)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off]
(Strange...) (okashii...)
2
[Inside, Kyousuke busses and waits on tables as Madoka works behind the
counter.]
Kyousuke:
(I wonder if she forgot about (WASUrete n no ka na--)
it...) forgetting I-wonder
3/4/5
[Various pictures of male patrons as they sit and drink or read.]
6
[Kyousuke studies Madoka as she works behind the counter.]
narration:
Maybe Ayukawa is planning moshi-ka-shite AYUKAWA hoka no OTOKO ni
to give those to some other maybe to-another-guy
guy...
watasu tsumori ja...
give intention
7
[He shakes his head violently and emphatically from side to side.]
narration:
Th-that can't be! so sonna hazu wa nai!
that-kind-of likelihood (T) not-there
Kyousuke head FX: ________
buruburu
8
[A guy walks into ABCB.]
door FX: _____
karan
---------------------------------------------------
p 343 (105)
1
[Madoka approaches his table with water on a tray...]
Madoka:
Welcome... irasshai ma...
2
[...but is bumped aside by a speeding and sweating Kyousuke.]
Kyousuke:
What will you have?! nan ni nasaimasu ka!
what do/make (?)
Kyousuke FX: ___
don
narration:
This is the type that's ko-- yu-- no ga abunai!
dangerous! this-kind-of-one (S) dangerous
3
guy: _____ __
Cocoa. A hot one, okay! kokoa ATSUi no o ne!
cocoa hot (nom) (O)
4
[Tight shot of the drink that is served. It is some sorta fruity cocktail
drink.]
5
guy: [to Madoka] ____ ___ _____
Hey, you! I ordered a are_ kimi ore kokoa tte itta
cocoa... hey! you I cocoa said-that
n da kedo
(explan) but
6
Madoka: [smiling] _____
Unfortunately, we're out of ainiku KYOU wa kokoa
cocoa today. Sorry! unfortunately today (T) cocoa
kirete-ru no gomennasai!
be-out-of sorry
guy:
So cold...! tsumete~~~~_
= cold
7
[Kyousuke turns to look back at a full jar on the low shelf behind the
counter.]
jar label: _____
COCOA kokoa
8
[He looks inquiringly at a stern-faced Madoka, but she doesn't meet his eye.]
narration:
But we're not out of cocoa... betsu ni kirete-nai
Hmm... -particularly not-have-run-out-of
no ni---- hate?
even-though the-end-result/well...
---------------------------------------------------
p 344 (106)
1
[Madoka seasons food on a skillet.]
frying FX: ______
ju---_
2
[Kyousuke watches her off-panel, an unhappy look on his face.]
narration: _____
I'm sure there were TASHIka ni AYUKAWA no kaban no NAKA ni wa
chocolates inside Ayukawa's surely 's bag 's inside(IO/T)
bag... ___________
chokore--to ga haitte-ita------
chocolate (S) was-contained
Kyousuke:
(Then, who the heck is it (ja ittai DARE no tame ni...)
for...?) then who-in-the-world for-the-sake-of
3
[Master cheerfully claps a hand on Kyousuke's shoulder.]
Master:
I'm sorry...! Making you warui naa TETSUDAwasechatte!
help out like this. be-at-fault (TETSUDAwasete-shimatte)
making-help-(finality/regret)
Kyousuke: [smiling]
No problem. ie
4
Master: [winking, giving a thumbs-up]
By the way, you already tokoro-de mo-- moratta n daro?
received it, didn't you? by-the-way already received (poss-explan)
5
Kyousuke: [shouting angrily]
N-no, I haven't received i ie mada moratte-masen
chocolate or anything yet. no -yet have-not-received
___________
chokore--to nante
chocolate the-likes-of
[Behind him, Madoka's eyes grow large.]
6
[Turning to look at her, he claps a hand over his mouth and blushes.]
Kyousuke:
Ah! a
7
Master:
That was a very frank ROKOTSU na saisoku desu naa
request. frank/plain urge/call is
Kyousuke: [embarrassed, waving his hands]
I-I didn't mean it that way. so sonna tsumori de itta
in-that-kind-of-intention said
n ja arimasen
(explan/neg)
---------------------------------------------------
p 345 (107)
1
[Overhead view looking down. All three are behind the counter.]
Master:
Ayukawa-kun, don't hold AYUKAWA-kun dashioshimi
out on him like that... begrudge/be-unwilling-to-give
suru na yo--
don't-do
Kasuga-kun is looking forward KASUGA-kun KUBI o NAGAku shite matte-ru
to it. is-looking-forward-to
ja nai ka
Kyousuke: __ ________
M-Master!! ma masuta--!!
2
Madoka: [looking up with innocence]
What are you talking about? nan no koto desu
about-what is
Madoka facial FX: ______
kyoton
3
Madoka:
I'm not holding out on atashi betsu ni nani-mo
anything... I -particularly anything
dashioshimi nan-te
unwilling-to-give-anything
shite-masen kedo...
am-not-doing but
[Kyousuke stares at her in shock.]
4
Kyousuke: [aghast]
("Wh-what are you talking (na nan no koto tte...
about...?" about-what (quote)
___________
Then, those chocolates...?!) ja ano chokore--to wa...?!)
then that-chocolate (T)
Kyousuke realization FX: ______
ga~~~n
5
[He races off, head down.]
narration: ___
...aren't meant for me! ore ni kureru tsumori ja nakatta
to-me give-to-me intention was-not
n da!
(explan)
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
6
Madoka: [surprised]
Ah! ha_
7
Master: [wincing]
Those words were too harsh IMA no KOTOBA OTOKO ni wa
for a guy. now 's words guy (IO) (contrast)
kitsui yo--
harsh/severe
[Madoka lets out a puff of air.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 346 (108)
1
[In the employee locker room he removes his apron.]
narration: _____ ___
I'm just like a clown... marude piero da naa ore tte...
just-like/ Pierrot/ am I (T)
completely clown
boxes:
[top] Limited Edition GENTEIBAN
_____ ________
1/10 baran zeneraru DOU
????? ???????? temple/store
___
[middle/bottom] abi HONJITSU DAI/TAI/OU
??? today great/grand/the-size-of
, but I can't fit this in with any Lucas/Spielberg
item...>
2
[Madoka enters.]
accordion door FX: _____
bara_
3
[Kyousuke, still in his ABCB sweatshirt, tries to flee out the door, but
Madoka grabs him by the arm.]
Kyousuke: ___
I'm sorry, but I'm ore warui kedo KAEru...!
leaving...! I at-fault but go-home
Madoka:
Wait! machinasai yo
4
[She rummages through her bag...]
5
[...and presents him with a box.]
Madoka:
Here. For you. hai ageru
here give-(to-you)
---------------------------------------------------
p 347 (109)
1
Kyousuke:
Th-thank you... a......arigatou
2
[She exits as he smiles and stares raptly at the box in his hand.]
narration:
I-I got some! mo moratchatta
(= moratte-shimatta)
received-(finality)
___________
Chocolate from Ayukawa. AYUKAWA kara chokore--to
from-Ayukawa chocolate
Kyousuke satisfaction FX:
ji~~~~n
3
[As in his dream, he rubs his cheek against it, in bliss.]
narration:
Th-this is real... ho honto da yo na--
really it-is
It's not a dream, is it... YUME ja nai daro-- naa
dream poss-is-not
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
nade nade
4
[Looking closely, he spies a note under the heart on the box.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? n?
5
narration: _________
And there's a message, too. omake ni nani-ka messe--ji ga
in-addition-to some message (S)
M-maybe... mo moshi-ka-shite...
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
6
message:
A weakling like you has no omae no you na NANJAKU MONO wa
right to live! like-you weak person (T)
Ikiru SHIKAKU nante nai!
to-live not-competent/qualified
___ ____
Stupid. Scum. Die!! aho kasu SHInjimae!!
stupid/dummy/ dregs/ (SHInde-shimae)
dipshit scum die-(finality)
7
[Kyousuke blushes, eyes boggling, I guess a bit perturbed at the contents
of this love letter...]
8
[...which drops from his hands.]
note FX: _____
hara_
---------------------------------------------------
p 348 (110)
1
[View of Madoka and Master as they look at something off-panel.]
2
[It's Kyousuke, still in his ABCB sweatshirt. He walks toward the door,
gaze down, with a truly forlorn expression on his face.]
Kyousuke FX: ________
tobotobo
3
Madoka: [pleasantly]
You're still leaving? yappari KAEtchau no
still (= KAEtte-shimau) (?)
going-home-(finality/regret)
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
4
[Kyousuke stops and turns to look back at her, a heartbroken expression on
his face.]
5
[He turns back toward the door and says...]
Kyousuke: ___
I'm just a weakling who has ore nan-ka do--se Ikite-ru
no right to live. I somewhat in-the-end be-living
SHIKAKU no nai NANJAKU na OTOKO
qualification not-there weak guy
nan desu
am
6
Madoka: [stunned]
What? e?
7
[Hikaru enters just as Kyousuke reaches the door.]
Hikaru: [smiling]
Oh, Sempai! ara SEMPAI!
door FX: _____
karan
---------------------------------------------------
p 349 (111)
1
[He tries to walk past her, but Hikaru nonchalantly grasps him by the
scruff of his neck.]
Hikaru: [enraged]
Hey, listen to this, chotto kiite-kudasai yo madoka-san
Madoka-san. listen-(please)
Sempai, you listen, too! SEMPAI mo kiite!
too listening
narration:
I don't want to listen to nan-ni-mo kikitakunai yo
anything. to-anything not-want-to-listen
Hikaru FX:
gui_
2
[She raises a box of chocolate up in one hand.]
Hikaru: _______
There was a box of chocolates atashi no rokka-- no NAKA ni
in my locker. inside-my-locker
___________
chokore--to ga haitte na n desu
chocolate (S) containing is (explan)
___________
What are they thinking-- ONNA no KO ni chokore--to nante
giving chocolates to a girl? to-girl chocolate the-likes-of
nani KANGAete n darou
what thinking (poss-explan)
So I opened it... to OMOtte akete-mitara......
thinking-that when-try-and-open
narration:
?! ?!
3
[Kyousuke's close-up view of the box.]
4
[He compares it to the one he has in his hands.]
narration:
Huh...? It's the same. are... onaji da
huh same is
5
[Hikaru stands at the counter. Madoka reads from the note Hikaru just gave
her.]
Hikaru:
There was a letter like this NAKA ni konna TEGAMI ga
inside... inside this-kind-of-letter/note (S)
Madoka:
A weakling like you has no omae no you na NANJAKU MONO wa
right to live! like-you weak person (T)
Ikiru SHIKAKU nan-te nai!
to-live not-competent/qualified
___ ____
Stupid, Scum, Di... aho kasu... SHInji...
6
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
AH! ha_
7
[Kyousuke portrait--shock.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 350 (112)
1
[Madoka looks up at him, knowingly.]
2
Kyousuke: [blushing, eyes down] _____
gohon
3
Madoka: [merrily] ___
pu_
4
Madoka:
Ah ha ha ha! ahahaha
Kyousuke:
Ha... Ha ha ha ha! ha...... hahahaha
[Hikaru is perplexed.]
5
narration: ___________
Then, those chocolates... ja ano chokore--to...
then that-chocolate
6
Hikaru: [thoroughly pissed]
It's probably those punk kitto MAE ni TAIRITSU shite-ta
girls in the next city that surely previously were-confronting
we fought before. _______ ________
tonari MACHI no sukeban guru--pu
nearby city 's delinquent-girl-gang
no shiwaza desu yo
's deed/action is
I'm so-o-o mad! kuyashi~~~~_!
7
[She turns to race out the door, but Madoka stops her with a hand on her
shoulder.]
Hikaru:
Let's go beat them up! yattsukete-yarimashou!
let's-beat/attack-(favor-to-them)
Madoka:
Now, now... maa maa
---------------------------------------------------
p 351 (113)
1
[Madoka's pov of Kyousuke--he's still a bit embarrassed.]
narration: ___
I'm always so careless. ore tte tsukuzuku sosokkashi-- naa
I (T) thoroughly careless/thoughtless
2
[His pov of Madoka--she gives him a gentle smile.]
3
Kyousuke: [putting his apron on]
Well, I have to work. sate SHIGOTO shinakya
well work must-do
4
Hikaru: [still wanting to go]
Oo-ooh, I'm ticked off! u~~~~ hara ga tatsu!
get-angry/lose-temper
Madoka: [smiling and holding her back]
There, there... maa maa
5
[His pov of Madoka, smiling at him.]
Madoka:
And you, Kasuga-kun? KASUGA-kun wa
(T)
6
Kyousuke: [happy now] ___
Umm, I'm okay. a ore wa i-- yo
I (T) okay
Now, my stomach is full, and moo onaka ippai mune ippai
my heart is full. now stomach full heart full
7
[Madoka sets him down in a seat. Hikaru looks on, smiling.]
Madoka:
Take it easy. i-- kara i-- kara
that's-okay
8
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
Madoka: [off] _______ _________
This is the special abakabu ga HOKOru barentain
Valentine's Day menu that ABCB (S) be-proud-of Valentine
ABCB is so proud of. _______
TOKUBETSU menyu-- de gozaima--su
special-menu is-
---------------------------------------------------
p 352 (114)
1
[Kyousuke and Hikaru sit in cheerful conversation at a table.]
2
[Madoka profile.]
narration: ___________
In the end, I couldn't KEKKYOKU matomo na chokore--to wa
get real chocolates from in-the-end honest/upright chocolate (T)
Ayukawa...
AYUKAWA kara wa moraenakatta keredo
from-Ayukawa (T) did-not-get but
3
narration:
But I guess I got what I JIGOU JITOKU tte koto da yo na----
deserve. that-serves-me-right
Kyousuke:
(But actually, I'm a bit (demo HONTOU wa choppiri ZANNEN!)
disappointed!) but really (T) a-little disappointing
4
Madoka: [serving hot drinks]
Here you go. do--zo
mug FX: ______
kacha_
5
Kyousuke: [staring into his raised mug]
Huh? are
6
[In the foreground, Madoka walks away from the table, and we can see the smile
on her face.]
Kyousuke: _____
I thought we were supposed KYOU wa TASHIka kokoa
to be out of cocoa today... today (T) certain cocoa
kirete-ru hazu ja.........
should-be-out-of
---------------------------------------------------
p 353 (115)
1
[The view from the table. Madoka has her back to us. Kyousuke looks at
a menu.]
Madoka: _______ _____
There's no cocoa on the menu abakabu ni wa kokoa nante
at ABCB. at-ABCB (contrast) cocoa or-such
_______
menyu-- wa nai yo
menu (T) not-have
2
menu: [partially cut off] _______
ABCB menu #Abcb# menyu--
_____
HOT hotto
________ _______
Coffee (Blend or... ko--hi-- (burendo #or#...
_____
Black Tea (Lemon or... KOUCHA (remon #or#...
_____ ___________ _____
Hot Chocolate (Cocoa) hotto chokore--to (kokoa)
________
COLD ko--rudo
______ ____
...offee (Ble...) ...--hi-- (bure...)
3
Kyousuke:
Ah! a_!
4
[He looks up from his raised mug, smiling.]
narration:
The hot chocolate that DARE ni mo dasanai AYUKAWA no
Ayukawa wouldn't give to to-anybody not-give-out (nom.)
anybody... _____ _____
hotto choko wa------
hot-chocolate (T)
Kyousuke:
Maybe... This is... kore...... moshi-ka-shite
this-(one) maybe
5
[His pov as Madoka turns to look back, giving him a smile, a wink, and a
thumbs-up!]
narration:
...a warm Valentine's ore dake ni kureta attakai
chocolate, just for me? just-to-me gave warm
_________ _____
barentain choko na no ka na?
Valentine's-chocolate is I-wonder
----------------------------------
At bottom: [wideban only] ______ ______
Kimagure Orange Road 3 (End) kimagure orenji - ro--do 3 (KAN)
---------------------------------------------------
p 354 (*)
<*This "afterword" appears in the wideban. The numerals at left denote
not panel numbers, but paragraphs.>
Title:
Bad Girl Madoka FURYOU SHOUJO madoka
delinquent girl
1 _______
When Nakamori Akina debuted NAKAMORI AKINA ga debyu-- shi,
and had the hit song "Shoujo (S) debut and
A ", this "Madoka" _____
was born. "SHOUJO #A#" o hitto saseta
(O) made-a-hit
KORO, kono "madoka" wa
around-(time) this-"Madoka" (T)
Umareta.
was-born
2 ______
And--speaking of idol madamada, aidoru KASHU to ieba,
singers--this was the period still-more idol-singer speaking-of
when they were generally
accepted as being smart o-rikou-san de
and on the honor roll. (hon)-clever/intelligent-(hon) being
YUUTOUSEI to SOUBA ga KImatte-ita
honor-student was-generally-taken-as
JIDAI datta.
period-(of-time) was
In the midst of that came sonna NAKA, TOUJOU shita
the debut of Nakamori inside-like-that entered-the-stage
Akina, who, on the other
hand, had more of a feel NAKAMORI AKINA wa, dochira ka to ieba,
of a school dropout, thus (T) than-otherwise
differing from the other ______
idol singers--and that was kurasu no ochikobore to iu KANji de,
quite refreshing. class 's a-dropout (that) feeling
______
hoka no aidoru KASHU ni wa nai
from-other-idol-singer (contrast) not-there
SONZAI KAN ga atte,
existence sentiment (S) having
sore ga, totemo SHINSEN datta.
that-(one) (S) quite new/fresh was
3
An exceptionally pretty tobikkiri no BISHOUJO de,
girl--and a dropout! exceptional 's pretty-girl being
ochikobore!
a-dropout
4 _________
This imbalance, of course, kono ambaransu sa ga,
became the image of Madoka. this-imbalance (I'd-say) (S)
_______
madoka no ime--ji ni natta.
's image (IO) became
5 _____ _____
Madoka, who indeed does madoka wa, manga no NAKA de wa kenka
fight in the manga, doesn't (T) in-the-manga (T) fight/brawl
shoplift nor have sex.
koso sure do, MAMBIki ya
indeed do ?? shoplift and
_______
sekkusu wa shinai.
sex (T) not-do
I had written her as--one SHOUSHOU, JIDAI SAKUGO
might say--a bit of an somewhat/a-little an-anachronism
old-fashioned, good and
stalwart leader of a girl tomo ieru, FURUki YOki
gang. one-may-also-say former/old good
KOUHA na ONNA BAN-CHOU
tough/strong women (gang)-leader-
to shite KAite-kita.
as came-to-write
But, in fact, in a ga, JITSU wa RENSAI MAE no
prototype prior to the but in-fact before-publish-serially 's
serial publication, she ___________
was intended to be purototaipu de wa, motto NAMANAMAshii,
written as a more raw prototype in (T) more raw/unripe
and loose girl.
darashinai ONNA no KO to shite
a-slut/loose-girl as
KAku tsumori datta.
write was-intended
She made it with another hoka no OTOKO tomo dekite-ta shi,
guy and, of course, she another-guy including was-made and
wasn't a virgin.
mochiron SHOJO demo nakatta.
of-course a-virgin-girl as-well was-not
___________
(I like those kinds of (boku wa so-- yu-- kyarakuta-- mo,
characters, too.) I (T) that-kind-of-character too
JITSU wa KEKKOU
in-face structure
-ZUki da)
fan-of/lover-of/enthusiast am
The serious-minded hero sonna KO- AKUMA -TEKI na
of the story (Kyousuke) that-kind-of small devil/Satan (adj-ending)
finds himself attracted
to that sort of slightly SHOUJO ni, majime na SHUJINKOU
devilish girl. girl (IO) serious/earnest hero-of-story
_hi_
(KYOUSUKE) ga JAKU karete-iku.
(S) go-and-be-attracted-by
The aim was to make a setsunai JIGOKU no you na
manga about a love that painful/heart-rending hell resembles
resembled a heart-wrenching _____
hell. REN'AI manga ni suru tsumori de ita.
make-a-manga-about-love there-was-intent
But, I'm glad I didn't do demo, sou shinakute yokatta!
it like that! but not-doing-like-that was-glad
6
Therefore, the story was da kara, ima kou shite, TENSHI ni
raised to be an angel because of the
Editor who made me cut out SODAtete-kureta no wa,
all the muddy parts, and I raised-(favor-to-me) (nom) (T)
owe it to all the readers. ________
boku ni dorodoro to shita BUBUN o
by-me made-muddy/thick part/section (O)
KIriSUtesasete-kureta
make-(me)-cut-down/omit/discard
HENSHUU-san de ari,
Mr-Editor have/there-is
DOKUSHA no mina-san no okage na
reader 's everyone owing-to/thanks-to
no desu.
(explan)
(Matsumoto Izumi) (matsumoto IZUMI)
---------------------------------------------------