Kimagure Orange Road
"The Angel's Temptation"
Volume 7, Story 1
WB Volume 4, Story 5
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (19 Jan 1992)
Additional translation by : Scott Henry
Full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Scott Henry
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Andrew Wilson
Thomas Wyatt
Jordan Lampe
Matthew Klippenstein
Last revision : 06-29-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 93 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 93 (7)--TITLE PAGE
[Against the cloud-fleeced sky, Madoka stands in school uniform, facing our
left. From behind her, a stiff breeze blows her hair and skirt, and she
closes her eyes. Her right arm is behind her back, the hand clasping the
elbow of her left arm.]
MAIN TITLE
The Angel's Temptation TENSHI no YUUWAKU
angel 's temptation
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
If You Experience the Gentle YUME ga tanabiku AOZORA o
Feeling of a Dream Trailing dream (S) trailing/hanging-over blue-sky
Across a Blue Sky, Then
Tomorrow, You'll Surely SUNAO na KOKORO de
Become the Wind... obedient/meek/gentle in-feeling/heart
KANjitara
if-feeling/experiencing
ASHITA wa kitto KAZE ni nare.....
tomorrow (T) surely become-the-wind
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p 94 (8)
1
[Madoka stands in full-length portrait, dressed in shorts and tight T-shirt.
This is splashed over the right sides of panels 2-4.]
2
[Kyousuke sits up in bed.]
3
[Overhead view looking down at the bedroom scene. Madoka stands with her
back to the closed door.]
narration:
A-Ayukawa! What do you mean hi...hitori de neru no wa
"I-it's lonely sleeping by by-oneself sleeping (T)
myself"?
sabishii no tte a...AYUKAWA!
loneliness (quote)
4
[Kyousuke portrait--blushing, wide-eyed.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
Kyousuke:
(But this isn't a dream... (da kedo kore wa YUME ja naku...
but this-(one) (T) dream is-not
This is real!) GENJITSU nan da!)
reality what is
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p 95 (9)
1
[Madoka facial portrait.]
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
goku_
3
[Tight shot of her bare feet as she approaches his bed.]
4
[She kneels so that their eyes are on the same level, and she leans in
close. Kyousuke sits and stares.]
narration:
A-Ayukawa...! a AYUKAWA...!
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p 96 (10)
1
[Isolated shot of a bottle of scotch. The label reads "Grand Gold Parr
Aged 12 years DeLuxe Scotch Whisky."]
2
[She smiles and offers the bottle to Kyousuke.]
Madoka: _ya_
Why don't we drink together? ISSHO ni NO(MU) ranai?
together not-drink
3
[She stands and looks back at him over her right shoulder.]
Madoka:
I ended up bringing this IE kara mochidashite-kichatta
from home. from-home (mochidashite-kite-shimatta)
came-to-carry-out-(finality)
Kyousuke: [forced smile, sweating]
S-sure. ha haa
4
Kyousuke: [nervous & embarrassed]
O-ohh... na nan da........
Madoka: [mystified]
Huh? e?
5
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment.]
Kyousuke: [off]
No. Ha ha ha. iya-- ha ha ha
N-never mind. It's nothing. i iya nan demo nai
it's-nothing
Madoka: [off]
Kampa-a-ai! kampa--i!
cheers/bottoms-up!
narration:
For a moment, I was rather ICHIJI wa do-- naru koto
worried about what might once/for-a-time (T) what become matter
happen!
ka to OMOtta yo!
thought/worried-that
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p 97 (11)
1
[Madoka sits on his bed, knees pulled up, with a drink in her hand.]
2
[Kyousuke sips at his glass, watching her.]
3
Madoka:
Say. nee
4
Madoka: [looking around at her surroundings]
This is improper behavior, kore ja DARE ga mite-mo
no matter how you look at with-this (T) who (S) even-though-see
it!
FUJUN ISEI KOUYUU
impure opposite-sex companionship
ne~~~~~~_!
Kyousuke FX: _____
buho_
[It looks like his drink came out through his nose.]
5
[Face flushed, Madoka thrusts out the empty bottle at Kyousuke's face.]
Madoka:
Oh, there's none left. ara mo-- nakunatchatta
now (nakunatte-shimatta)
was-used-up-(finality/regret)
Get another! o-kawari!
seconds
Kyousuke:
Y-yes! ha hai!
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p 98 (12)
1
[Kyousuke goes into the liquor cabinet.]
cabinet door FX: _____
kacha
2
Kyousuke: [carrying a bottle]
(Considering the way she is (ano FUN ja so--to--
now, it seems like she's at-this-moment (T) considerably/rather
quite drunk...)
yopparatte-ru mitai da na AYUKAWA...)
is-getting-drunk seems
(But is it all right for a (shikashi CHUUGAKUSEI no
junior high school girl to but jr-high-student 's
drink so much?)
ONNA no KO ga konna ni nonde
girl (S) so-(much) drinking
i-- mono daro-- ka)
okay thing poss-is (?)
3
[Kyousuke re-enters his bedroom...]
door FX: _____
gacha
4
[...and looks around at an apparently empty room.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? are?
5
Kyousuke: [searching]
Ayukawa. Ayukawa? AYUKAWA AYUKAWA?
6
[From under the bedcovers a hand emerges, and reaches for Kyousuke's.]
sheet FX: ___
su_
7
FX:
gui_
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p 99 (13)
1
[View pans back to show a playful Madoka, pulling Kyousuke down onto the
bed.]
Kyousuke:
Wah! wa_
Madoka FX:
gui_
Madoka: _ __ __
Ah-ha-ha! a ha ha
2
Madoka: [coquettishly, face flushed]
Over here, over here. kotchi kotchi
this-way
3
Madoka: [looking into his eyes]
Let's go to sleep! nemasho_!
shall-sleep/shall-go-to-bed
4
[Madoka lies back smiling with her eyes closed. Kyousuke remains perched
over her, staring down at her with face flushed and eyes wide.]
Kyousuke:
What! What!! Now... e--_! e--_! IMA... tashika ni
She certainly... now certainly
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p 100 (14)
1
[The telephone rings.]
2
[Kyousuke looks up.]
narration:
Who in the world could it be ittai DARE daro imagoro...
at this hour...? in-the-world who poss-be at-this-time
3
[He lifts up the receiver.]
Hikaru: [off]
Sempai, it's me! SEMPAI atashi desu!
me is
Kyousuke FX:
giku_
narration:
H-Hikaru-chan?! hi hikaru-chan?!
4
Hikaru:
I'm sorry for calling so YORU osoku suimasen
late at night. late-at-night sorry
Were you in bed? nete-irasshaimashita?
were-sleeping/had-gone-to-bed
narration:
...i-in bed? ne nete...?
sleeping/going-to-bed
5
Kyousuke: [shouting and blushing]
N-no. i iya
No way was I in bed yet! sonna mada nete-masen
that-kind-of yet not-be-sleeping
DANjite!
by no means!
Hikaru: [off]
Huh? haa?
6
[Looking around behind him, Kyousuke notices that Madoka is up and about.]
Hikaru: [off]
Oh, oh yeah, Sempai! Did a so-- so-- SEMPAI KYOU madoka-san
you happen to see Madoka-san oh-yeah! today
today?!
mikakemasen deshita?
not-see was
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 101 (15)
1
Kyousuke: [looking directly at Madoka]
N-no... i iya..............
Madoka FX:
fura
2
Hikaru:
Is that so... ....sou desu ka
I wonder where the heck ittai doko itchatta
she went? in-the-world where (itte-shimatta)
went-(finality/regret)
no kashira
I-wonder
3
[He still eyes Madoka, who now has her attention on him.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
narration:
I wonder if something's the AYUKAWA ga do--ka shita no ka na
matter with Ayukawa? (S) anything-wrong I-wonder
4
[Tight shot of an open bottle of liquor, an empty glass on its side, and a
partly-filled glass.]
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p 102 (16)
1
Kyousuke:
She... Is something wrong? KANOJO ga... do--ka shita no
she (S) anything-wrong
2
Hikaru:
No, it's nothing. ie nan demo arimasen
Then, good ni... ja oyasuminasa.....
then good nigh...
3
[Someone puts a finger on the receiver button.]
phone FX: ____
chin
4
[View pans back to show Madoka standing with finger on the receiver button,
staring bleary-eyed at Kyousuke. He stares back, wide-eyed.]
5
Hikaru: [staring at the phone]
Oh? We were cut off. are? KIrechatta
(Kirete-shimatta)
disconnected-(finality/regret)
6
Hikaru:
Oh well! Never mind. maa ii ya! sore yori e--to
Umm... well okay rather-than-that let's-see
Madoka-san's number... madokasan CHI wa to
house (T)
rotary phone FX: ________ ________
ji~~koro ji~~koro
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p 103 (17)
1
Hikaru:
Hello, otoosama ? hello father is (?)
Madoka-san... She's nowhere madoka-san..... yappari doko ni mo
after all... after-all at-anywhere
Hikaru:
Yes. I wonder where on haa ittai doko ni iru
earth she is? yes to-where-in-the-world is-there
n deshou ne
(poss-explan)
2
[An angry Madoka tosses her hair back.]
3
[He looks back, speechless with surprise.]
4
[Madoka leans back against the wall, arms crossed, glaring at him. Her
face is flushed. He flinches back at her outburst...]
Madoka: [this is one peeved girl!]
LONG PHONE CALL, KYOUSUKE! DENWA NAGAi zo KYOUSUKE!
phone long !!
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p 104 (18)
1
[She sits on the floor, one knee up, the other foot pulled in. She rests
an elbow on her knee and her cheek in that hand. She glares back at us.]
Madoka:
You don't care about me, atashi no koto nante do-- demo i--
do you! about-me what! not-matter
n desho!
(poss-explan)
2
Kyousuke:
Wh-what are you saying... so sonna....
3
narration:
Even though Ayukawa is drunk KON'YA no AYUKAWA yotte-ru to wa ie
tonight, still, there's tonight's is-drunk but
something a bit strange
about her. chotto HEN da na
a-bit strange is
____
Somehow, she looks like nan-da-ka yake ni natte-ru
she's become desperate... somehow has-become-desperate
yo-- ni mo mieru shi...
look-like see consider
4
[Kyousuke visualizes Hikaru, worried, on the phone.]
Hikaru: [in flashback]
I wonder where the heck ittai doko itchatta
she went? in-the-world where (itte-shimatta)
went-(finality/regret)
no kashira
I-wonder
narration:
It also seems that hikaru-chan mo sagashite-ru
Hikaru-chan is looking also is-looking-for
for her...
yo-- da shi...
looks-like and-besides
5
[He looks at Madoka's two bags which sit on the sofa.]
narration: _____
And those bags... sore ni ano kaban...
moreover those-bags
6
[Kyousuke kneels on the floor in front of her.]
Kyousuke:
Err, what did you say when nee IE ni nante itte DEte-kita no
you left home? say at-home what saying began-to-leave
Kyousuke FX: _____
petan
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p 105 (19)
1
[She waves a hand in dismissal.]
Madoka: ______
Good-bye! gu_bai!
2
[Kyousuke stares back.]
narration: ______
"Good-bye..." gu_bai tte----
3
Kyousuke:
(Can't be. She ran away?!) (masaka IEDE?!)
4
narration:
Ah, speaking of runaways... a IEDE to ieba...
runaway speaking-of
5
[Flashback view of Komatsu and Kyousuke eavesdropping in on Mr. and Mrs.
Ayukawa's conversation.]
narration:
When I was in the coffee KYOU no YUUGATA KOMATSU to
shop with Komatsu this this-evening/dusk with-Komatsu
afternoon... _____
_saten_
CHA MISE ni haitta TOKI
at-store/teahouse went-into when
6
[Flashback view of Mr. Ayukawa.]
Mr. Ayukawa:
I can't believe that she masaka ano KO ga IEDE suru nante
would run away from home. no-way that-girl (S) run-away or-such
narration:
That man was the world-famous ano HITO SHIMBUN de mita YUMEI na
musician that I saw in the that-person in-newspaper saw famous
newspaper...
SEKAITEKI ONGAKUKA----
world-wide musician
7
[Flashback view of the newspaper article from chapter 3.7, "I Like Japan!"]
narration:
Ayukawa's father! AYUKAWA no oto--san!
's father.
newspaper: [partial view*] ____ ________
WORLD-RENOWNED VIO SEKAITEKI baio
world-wide vio
MR. AND MRS. AYUKAWA'S AYUKAWA FUSAI TOTSU
SUD Mr-&-Mrs-Ayukawa suddenly 's homecoming
_______
amerika EIJUU
EMIGRATE TO AMERICA?! America permanent-residence 's preparation
<*Translation note (CN): The missing parts are denoted by <> and were taken
from the more complete view of the newspaper in chapter 3.7, p 138, panel 5.>
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p 106 (20)
1
narration:
Then she... jaa yappari...
then after-all
2
[His pov of Madoka.]
narration:
Ran away from home after AYUKAWA wa IEDE shita n da!
all! (T) ran-away (explan)
3
Kyousuke: [in realization]
(But wait.) (mate yo)
narration: [flashback to an overheard line]
I won't say anything more-- moo nani-mo iwanai kara
I just want her back home. more anything not-say that's-why
KAEtte-kite hoshii
beginning-to-return want
narration:
That's right! Ayukawa still so--da! AYUKAWA wa mada SHIranai
doesn't know that her father (T) still not-know
gave up on that...
n da oto--san ga akirameta koto o...
(explan) father (S) resigned thing (O)
4
[He closes his eyes, having come to a decision.]
narration:
Okay. Here's a great chance yoshi koko wa hitotsu
for me to be a man and act all-right here (T) one
cool! _____
OTOKO to shite kakko yoku!
as-a-man cool
5
[They are still sitting and facing each other.]
Kyousuke: [sternly]
Ayukawa... Tonight... AYUKAWA... KON'YA wa... kore de
You're going home now! tonight (T) with-this/now
IE ni KAEru n da!
to-home return (explanation)
[Madoka looks back in surprise.]
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p 107 (21)
1
Kyousuke:
It's not good to run away yappari yokunai yo IEDE nante
from home... after-all not-good runaway or-such
2
[She looks back with a hurt look...]
3
[...and averts her face in disdain.]
Madoka:
Is that so! soo!
4
Madoka: [getting up to leave]
If I'm too much trouble, MEIWAKU dattara atashi...
I'll... trouble if-it-is I
...go somewhere else! doko-ka hoka ni...!
somewhere besides/another
5
Kyousuke: [grabbing her wrist]
Wait!! mate yo!!
6
Kyousuke: [holding her as she tries to leave]
Don't lose hope. sutebachi ni natcha dame da yo
desperate shouldn't-be be
I'm sure your folks are kitto IE no HITO wa
worried about you. surely home's-people (T)
SHIMPAI shite-ru yo
are-worried
Madoka:
Thanks for everything! osewa ni narimashita!
"thank you for your kind help"
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p 108 (22)
1
Kyousuke:
Anyway, listen! tonikaku kike yo_!
anyway listen-(command)
2
[She glares back at him.]
Kyousuke: [off] ___
I know what you're... ore wa AYUKAWA no koto..........
I (T) about-you
3
[Angrily, she turns to leave, but he still has her by the wrist.]
Madoka:
Leave me alone! hottoite yo!
(hotte-oite)
leaving-alone-(for-future-sake)
4
[He pulls back on her, sending her flying back at him.]
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
Kyousuke:
I can't leave you alone!! hottokeru ka!!
(hotte-okeru)
can-leave-alone-(for-future-sake)
5
[She slams into his chest.]
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p 109 (23)
1
Kyousuke and Madoka FX:
beta~~_
2
[His pov, peering down at Madoka's cleavage.]
3
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:
doki doki doki doki
crows-in-the-background FX:
kaa---_
4
[The two cling very close. Kyousuke blushes and stares... Down. Madoka
calmly looks back.]
Kyousuke: ___
S-so... Um... I... da da kara sono... ore to shite wa
that's-why that as-I (T)
Madoka:
What are you staring at doko MIte itte n no yo
while talking? where looking-(and) saying
5
Kyousuke:
S-sorry! su suimasen!
sorry
[They leap apart. Madoka puts her arms across her chest.]
Kyousuke FX:
suzaza_
6
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
So... What was I saying? sono-- nan da kke
that what is (?)
Madoka: ___
pu_
7
Madoka:
kusu kusu kusu
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p 110 (24)
1
Kyousuke:
IT'S ALL RIGHT! DAIJOUBU!
2
Kyousuke:
I don't know what sort of do--yu-- JIJOU ga atta
reasons you had... what-kind-of reasons (S) there-were
no ka wa SHIranai kedo...
not-know but
But if you go home, all IE ni KAEreba... MONDAI wa subete
your problems will have to-home if-return problem (T) all
been solved!
KAIKETSU shite-ru yo!
be-solved
3
[Overhead view looking down as Madoka looks away and thinks it over.]
4
[His pov as she turns back toward him.]
Madoka:
Okay. I understand! un wakatta!
5
Madoka: [smiling]
If you absolutely say so, KASUGA-kun ga do--shite mo
Kasuga-kun... (S) by-all-means
tte yu-- nara.......
if-say-that
6
[Her pov of him. He looks back at her with a soft smile.]
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p 111 (25)
1
Madoka: [a little defensively]
Besides... If I stay sore ni... zutto iru to
overnight, I don't know besides all-the-way if-be-here
what you'd do...
nani sareru ka wakannai shi
what be-doing (?) not-know consider
[Kyousuke blushes...]
2
[Isolated shot of a chair at the kitchen table.]
Madoka: [off]
Oh, let me use the phone a chotto DENWA kashite...
for a sec... a-bit phone lending
3
[Kyousuke winces and watches as she makes a call.]
Madoka:
Oh, hello. It's me. a moshimoshi atashi
hello I
I'm coming home now. korekara KAEru wa
from-now return
Kyousuke: ___
(Am I such an untrustworthy (ore wa sonna ni SHIN'YO no nai
guy...?) I (T) so-(much) trust (S) not-have
OTOKO daro-- ka)
man poss-be (?)
4
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ah, shall I walk you home? a okutte-iko-- ka?
shall-go-and-escort-home (?)
5
[Standing in a playground, Madoka smiles and silently shakes her head.]
6
Madoka:
Good night. oyasumi
7
Kyousuke:
Good night. oyasumi
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p 112 (26)
1
[He watches as she walks away, down the street.]
car FX: _____
buo--
2
[Kyousuke returns to the apartment, and stands at the entryway.]
narration:
But I feel like I missed out demo chotto oshi-- koto
on something good... but a-little regretted-thing
shita yo-- na...
made like
door FX: _____
batan
3
door/lock FX: _____ _____
kacha kacha
narration:
Eh?! e?!
4
[His sisters come in.]
Manami:
We're home! tadaima----_!
door FX: _____
gacha
Kurumi:
Oh, you're still awake? are-- oni--chan okite-ta no?
huh? brother was-awake (?)
5
Takashi:
Our plans changed, and we YOTEI ga KAwatte ne
arrived one day early. schedule (S) changing
ICHINICHI HAYAku tsuichatta
one-day early (tsuite-shimatta)
arrived-(finality)
narration:
Th-that was close! a abunakatta----!
was-dangerous
6
[Exterior night shot of the Ayukawa residence.]
7
[Madoka looks into her room, her eyes widening in surprise.]
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p 113 (27)
1
[On her mirror is another message in rouge.]
message:
Welcome home. I concede! o-kaeri watashi no MAke da! CHICHI
--Father welcome-back my-defeat is father
2
Madoka: ________
(Thank you, Father.) (sankyu-- oto--san)
thank you father
3
[Looking out her window, Madoka thinks of Kyousuke, his portrait overlaid on
the starry sky.]
Madoka:
(And...) (soshite...)
and/then/now
3 [inset]
[Kyousuke winces as his sisters yell at him.]
Manami: _____
Oniichan, you slept in my oni--chan atashi no beddo de
bed! in-my-bed
nete-ta desho!
were-sleeping poss-be
Kurumi: _________
Using my bath towel! atashi no basutaoru tsukatte! henta--i
You perver-r-rt. my-bath-towel using pervert
Takashi: [off]
Hey-y-y! Kyousuke, my kora-- KYOUSUKE washi no SAKE o!
whisky! hey! my-liquor (O)
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p ** (28)
<**This is not present in the wideban, though this drawing is a part of the
chapter, so wideban readers can see it anyway...>
kimagure photograph kimagure fotogurafu
[Same picture as page 104 (18), panel 1. Madoka sits on the floor with a
kind of a peeved look, her left leg folded flat, with her left hand resting
on her left ankle. Her head is resting on her right hand and her right
elbow is supported by her raised right knee.]
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