Kimagure Orange Road "The Forbidden Cheek Dance" Volume 7, Story 3 WB Volume 4, Story 7 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi, (20 June 1992) Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Thomas Wyatt Jordan Lampe Last revision : 06-30-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 136 (50) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 136 (50)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka sits in a chair and looks at us with a half-smile. Dressed casually, she has the strap of her bag looped over the top of her head. The bag sits on the chair, behind her.] MAIN TITLE (at top) _______ The Forbidden Cheek Dance ikenai chi--ku naughty/wrong cheek-<"must-not-do"> SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _____ Even a Blue Secret Stuffed oshare kaban ni tsumekonda into a Stylish Bag Becomes fancy/stylish bag (IO) stuffed Spring-Like. ______ buru-- na HIMITSU mo HARUmeite blue-secret too becoming-springlike _________ For Some Reason, I'm KYOU wa nan-da-ka bo--isshu! Boyish Today! today (T) somehow boyish --------------------------------------------------- p 137 (51) 1 [Exterior shot of downtown.] narration: It's spring! HARU desu! spring it-is In a few days, I'll be a mou ato SUUJITSU de high school student... already later in-a-few-days KOUKOUSEI---- sr-high-student 2 [Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down the sidewalk together.] narration: Even the city, for some MACHI mo nan-to-naku reason, is in high spirits city/town too for-some-reason lately! Ukarete-iru KYOU be-in-high-spirits/merry today konoGORO! lately/recently 3 [A girl smiles and hands out coupons to passers-by. Hikaru is handed one.] girl: It's a place that just KONDO ATARAshiku KAITEN shita opened recently. recently newly opened-(a-new-shop) o-MISE desu shop is By all means, please come. zehi irashite-kudasai by-all-means come-(please) 4 Hikaru: [reading the coupon] ______ Wowww! A new disco? hee--_ ATARAshii disuko kaa ! new disco (?) --------------------------------------------------- p 138 (52) 1 [View across the street at a storefront.] Hikaru: [off] ______ _____ Hey, hey. Disco Sid... nani nani disuko - shido... disco Sid _______ Couples only admissions kappuru nomi NYUU TEN KA?! policy?! couples only entry store approval 2 coupon: DISCOTHE SID #DISCOTHE...# #SID# Discount Coupon WARIBIKIKEN Guys: 2500 yen ---> 2000 yen DANSEI #2500 ---> 2000# Gals: 1500 yen ---> 1000 yen JOSEI #1500 ---> 1000# _______ Full of Absolutely Enjoyable kappuru ni wa tottemo TANOshii Attractions for Couples!! couples (IO) (contrast) extremely-fun ___________ atorakushon ga ippai!! attraction (S) full ______ _____ Disco Sid disuko shido 3 [Kyousuke has a coupon, too.] Kyousuke and Hikaru: [reading] You can become more and more KARE - KANOJO to sara ni intimate with your boyfriend/ boyfriend girlfriend with further/ girlfriend--guaranteed... more-&-more SHINMITSU ni nareru koto ukeai... intimate (IO) can-become thing guaranteed 4 Hikaru: ______ Ohh, wonderful!! maa suteki!! Kyousuke: "I-intimate..." shi...SHINMITSU tte... intimate (quote) 5 Hikaru: Let's go, Sempai. SEMPAI ikimasho shall-go [Kyousuke flinches back.] 6 Hikaru: [smiling] ...is what I want to say, ..........to i--tai kedo atashi but I have to go shopping want-to-say-that but I tonight with my mom. KON'YA oka--san to o-KAIMONO na no tonight with-mom shopping Kyousuke: ___ ho_ [In relief, Kyousuke rests his hand *over the edge of the panel* as though it were the ledge of a window...] 7 Hikaru: [waving, running off] Let's be sure and go next KONDO zehi ikimasho-- ne time, 'kay? next-time by-all-means shall-go --------------------------------------------------- p 139 (53) 1 Kyousuke: [looking distractedly up at the sky] Hmm. Intimate, huh? fu----n SHINMITSU nee intimate (rhet) 2 [On a disco floor, Kyousuke turns at the sound of...] Madoka: Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun... 3 Madoka: [moving in close] _____ We're adults now, right? moo atashi-tachi otona yo ne now we adult 4 Madoka: [leaning in real close] C'mon, let's get intimate. saa SHINMITSU ni narimasho intimate (IO) shall-become Kyousuke: [nervous] Uh... a... 5 [Back to reality. Kyousuke is trying to embrace the air. Pedestrians turn their heads to look.] Kyousuke: Oh. Th-that sort of thing... a so sonna koto... that-kind-of-thing 6 [Behind him, some girls comment.] girls: __ ____ Oh no... That boy's a ya da-- ano KO HENTAI yo weirdo. that-boy perverted _________ What a pervert. yaratsu-- Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_ 7 [Looking up, he realizes he's standing outside an adult movie theater. Above the theater is a billboard and on that billboard is a topless girl, with the movie title kanji obscuring her breasts.] billboard: Must be 18 years or older. 18 SAI-MATSU MAN o-kotowari year-end fully refusal/notice THE FORBIDDEN STUFFED ANIMAL KINDAN no HAKUSEI forbidden stuffed-animal sign: [vertical] France Theater FURANSU ZA France theater sign: [horizontal] France... FURANSU... ticket office sign: Ticket Price Adults... RYOUKIN OTONA... SHOUJIN... Children... fee/fare adults children --------------------------------------------------- p 140 (54) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] 2 [At the counter, Kyousuke enjoys a cup of coffee and cheerful conversation with Madoka, who works behind it.] 3 Master: [entering] I'm back. tadaima 4 [Master looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.] Master: ? ? 5 Master: Oh, you're back already? nan da mo-- KAEtte-kita no kai what already began-returning (?) Kyousuke: I've been here for a while. sakki kara imasu kedo koko ni for-some-time am-here but at-here 6 Master: [looking up at the ceiling] Huh? Then the guy who went are ja sakki into the disco with your huh then a-little-while-ago sister a little while ago ______ was... IMOUTO-san to disuko ni with-younger-sister into-disco haitte-itta no wa went-and-entered (one) (T) Kyousuke: ______ DISCO?! disuko?! --------------------------------------------------- p 141 (55) 1 Kyousuke: Ehh?! My sister went to a e--_ IMOUTO ga disco with a strange guy?! ! younger-sister (S) ______ mishiranu OTOKO to disuko ni?! with-strange-man to-disco 2 Master: I'm pretty sure it was that TASHIka...... ATARAshiku dekita new disco. certain/sure newly be-finished ______ disuko disco _______ You know, the one that only hora kappuru shika irenai to yu-- allows couples inside. couples only-let-in say-that 3 [Kyousuke thinks this over.] 4 Kyousuke: [reaching into a back pocket] Ah, it must be... a TASHIka... certain/sure Kyousuke pocket FX: ________ gosogoso 5 Kyousuke: [handing Master a coupon] This one... koko ja...... at-this-place Master: Yeah, that's it. so-- so-- koko da this-place it-is 6 [Madoka looks at him out of the corner of one eye--a no-nonsense look.] Madoka: Something like that... sonna mono... that-kind-of-thing Why were you saving it nani TAISETSU so-- ni motte n no?! like it was so important?! what important looks-as-if for Kyousuke: [nervously] .......... Umm. Well... .......... iya maa --------------------------------------------------- p 142 (56) 1 Madoka: [to Master] _______ But... Only couples are demo... kappuru shika hairenai n desho allowed in, right? but couples only-enter (poss-explan) Master: [rubbing his chin] I remember seeing some guy so-- ieba... soba ni OTOKO no KO ga beside her. come-to-think-of-it beside-a-guy (S) issho datta naa together was 2 [Kyousuke's angrily imagines who it might be. The portraits of Komatsu and Hatta adorn this panel.] bell FX: _____ pi~~n 3 Kyousuke: Was it really my sister? HONTOU ni IMOUTO nan desu ka really younger-sister is (?) Master: Yeah... What's-her-name, aa... nante itta kke ano uhh, the one with the how said (?) uhh ponytail. ____________ poni--te--ru no ponytail (nom) 4 [Isolated shot of a table at ABCB.] Kyousuke: [off] That's Manami! manami da! Then what about Kurumi, the ja kurumi no HOU wa hora KAMI no NAGAi one with the long hair? then 's way (T) see! long-hair Master: [off] I didn't see her... sono KO wa minakatta kedo... that-girl (T) not-seen but But maybe she went in SAKI ni haitte-itchatta earlier? earlier-than/before went-in-(finality) n ja nai? (neg/explan) 5 Kyousuke: [clenching a fist] Th-those jerks...! a aitsura~~~~~~_ Komatsu: [entering, with Hatta] Ah, there he is. a ita ita 6 Komatsu: [tears in his eyes] O-oniisan. o oni--san [Kyousuke, visibly in a foul mood, whips his head around.] Kyousuke FX: ___ ki_ 7 Kyousuke: [grabbing him by the collar] Bastar-r-rd! You have the kisama--_ nukenuke to~~~~~~_ bloody gall to... you-(derogatory) have-the-cheek-to... Kyousuke FX: tsuka tsuka tsuka --------------------------------------------------- p 143 (57) 1 Kyousuke: ______ What...?! You saw her going e----_ mishiranu OTOKO to disuko ni into the disco with a strange ! with-strange-guy to-disco guy?! haitte-iku no o mita tte?! going-into (O) saw (quote) 2 Kyousuke: [smiling] O-oh, so it wasn't you. na nan da omae ja nakatta n da you was-not (explan) Komatsu: [wincing] Don't feel so relieved! ANSHIN suru na yo peace-of-mind/relief don't-feel-(command) 3 Komatsu: [with sadness] ___ So we tried to go inside, sore de ore-tachi mo NAKA ni too... and-so/then we too to-inside hairo-- to shita n da kedo... tried-to-enter (explan) but _______ But we were refused because kappuru-IGAI wa o-kotowari da tte of the couples-only rule. except-couples (T) refusal be (quote) 4 [Isolated shot of the sink of dirty dishes at ABCB.] Komatsu: [off] So... sore jaa... --------------------------------------------------- p 144 (58) 1 [Komatsu and Hatta stand at the door, and bow politely.] Komatsu: Then we leave the rest to ja ato wa o-NEGAi shima~~su you. then the-rest (T) beg/implore Hatta: I'm hoping. I'm praying. inotte-masu ogande-masu am-praying am-worshipping/praying 2 [Madoka, Master and Kyousuke watch then leave.] 3 [Madoka makes an idle comment that pops Kyousuke's eyes wide.] Madoka: _______ So couples can go in... kappuru da to haireru no ka... if-are-couples can-enter (musing) 4 Madoka: ________ Master. masuta-- Master: [grinning] Sure. Go ahead. hai itte-rasshai yes be-going 5 Madoka: [to Kyousuke] The place... Where is it? o-MISE... doko ni aru no shop at-where is (?) 6 Kyousuke: Th-thank you. a......arigato-- 7 [Madoka portrait--soft smile.] Madoka FX: _____ koku_ --------------------------------------------------- p 145 (59) 1 [Full-length portraits of Madoka--in a very nice dress--and Kyousuke. They walk towards us, and are partly overlaid on panel 2.] 2 [Exterior night shot of Disco Sid.] 3 [The same female employee that handed out coupons to Hikaru stands at the counter in the entryway. Madoka and Kyousuke file past, looking about.] girl: Welcome... irasshai ma... 4 [She looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.] girl: Oh. ara 5 girl: Hmm! hee--_ girl FX: jirojiro Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Ah, hi. a do--mo [Madoka looks back.] 6 girl: [cheerfully] You have a different girl o-HIRU no ONNA no KO to wa from this afternoon, noon 's girl (define) Mr. Playboy. __________ chigau no ne pureibo--i -san different Mr-Playboy [Kyousuke, blushing and cringing, swivels his head from girl to Madoka. Madoka eyes him like she's heard this all before...] Kyousuke: Ah! Wah, wah! a wa wa --------------------------------------------------- p 146 (60) 1 [View of the dimly-lit dance floor.] 2 Madoka: Oo-ooh, amazing! waa sugoi! _______ This is much bigger than mebiusu yori mo zutto HIROi no ne Moebius. than-Moebius more by-far broad/spacious 3 Kyousuke: If it's this big, it won't kore dake HIROkucha mitsukeru no mo be easy to find her. this-much (HIROkute-wa) finding even spacious (T) TAIHEN da naa difficult is 4 [Overhead view of Madoka and Kyousuke, who stand at the edge of the dance floor.] narration: That's it! This is just so-- da so-- yu-- TOKI koso the sort of time when I that's-it that-kind-of-time indeed should just see through _chikara_ things with the Power... NOURYOKU de TOUSHI sureba... with-Power if-see-thru 5 [Kyousuke's eyes glow with the Power, and his body crackles with light.] --------------------------------------------------- p 147 (61) 1 [Kyousuke's eyes bulge at the sight of a nude dancing guy.] music FX: ___ ____ ___ ____ zun chan zun chan 2 [He quickly averts his face, covering his mouth as though he is about to puke.] Kyousuke: ____ Urrgh! oee_ narration: I-I don't want to see this!! ko konna mon mitakunai yo--_!! this-kind-of-thing not-want-to-see 3 [View pans back to show he's now looking directly at Madoka. She stands in profile to him.] Kyousuke: Eh?! e_? 4 [His eyes grow huge and he jumps back. Madoka, looking around the dance floor, has now turned to present her back towards him.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin 5 [The lights over the dance floor come on. Kyousuke has his hand clasped over his nose.] lights-on FX: ___ pa_ 6 [Blood oozes over the top of that hand.] Madoka: You're so careless. otchokochoi ne-- You bumped into someone, HITO ni demo butsukatta didn't you? into-person or-something collided n desho (poss-explan) narration: Looking through things koko de TOUSHI wa chotto MURI here would seem to be a in-here see-thru (T) a-bit impossible bit impossible for me! mitai! seems Kyousuke: Yes... No. Sorta... ha... iya soro.... hanaji ga... A nose-bleed... yes no nose-bleed (S) --------------------------------------------------- p 148 (62) 1 [Kyousuke, Madoka and others turn at the sound of...] announcer: [off] ______ _____ Well, it's the start of saa ge--mu taimu no hajimari desu game-time. game-time 's beginning is _______ Couples wishing to SHUTSUJOU KIBOU no kappuru wa participate, please come participate hope (nom) couples (T) to the stage! ________ do--zo sute--ji ni! please to-stage 2 [A view of the stage. Couples engage in a 2-person race involving an apple pressed between their faces.] 3 [The female employee from before smiles at them.] girl: Don't just watch. mite-nai de not-be-watching Why don't you join in? DEmasen ka not-join (?) You make a nice couple. anata-tachi o-niai yo you-(plural) match-well 4 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] "W-we make a nice couple..." o o-niai da tte... match-well are (quote) 5 Madoka: Kasuga-kun. KASUGA-kun [He turns toward her.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_ 6 Madoka: [smiling] We... atashi-tachi... 7 [Snapping out of it, she tows him by the hand across the dance floor.] Madoka: This isn't the time for that! sore dokoro ja nai n desho! that-(one) is-not-the-(time) (poss-explan) Kyousuke: Y-yes... ha hai... --------------------------------------------------- p 149 (63) 1 [Isolated shot of the overhead lights...] 2 [...which go off.] 3 [Madoka and Kyousuke look up in surprise.] narration: What?! What?! e?! e?! 4 Kyousuke: (Th-this music. C-could it (ko kono ONGAKU mo moshiya...) be...) this-music by-any-chance 5 [His pov of the other couples, dancing together.] Kyousuke: [off] _______ _____ (Cheek dance time!!) (chi--ku taimu da!!) cheek-time is 6 Kyousuke: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA... [She looks at him with eyes grown large and cheeks flushed.] Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ doki_ 7 [Staring into her eyes, he decisively pulls her towards him. She is very surprised.] Madoka FX: ___ su_ --------------------------------------------------- p 150 (64) 1 Madoka: [angrily] Hey. This is no time to chotto konna koto yatte-ru be doing this sort of...! this-kind-of-thing be-doing BA-AI ja.....! time/occasion is-not 2 Kyousuke: [finger to lips, with a wink] Shh...! sh----_ 3 [Shot of their shoes as they cheek-dance.] Kyousuke: _______ If we move around we'd UGOki mawaru to hoka no kappuru ni bother the other couples. if-move-around other-couples (IO) me--waku da yo trouble/disturb be We'd attract attention... medatchau shi... (medatte-shimau) and-besides stand-out-(finality/regret) It would be easier to look ko-- shite-ta for her like this. like-this were-doing ho-- ga sagashi yasui yo easier-to-look-for 4 Madoka: [eyes wide] Y... so... 5 [Her features melt into a soft smile, and she rests her head against his shoulder.] Madoka: Yeah, I guess so. sore mo so-- ne you're-right-in-a-way like-that --------------------------------------------------- p 151 (65) 1 [They cheek dance.] 2 [Flashback pic to chapter 1.4, "Cheek Sorrow"--Kyousuke's and Hikaru's cheek dance.] narration: Come to think of it, it so-- ieba ICHINEN MAE wa was a year ago, with come-to-think-of-it one-year before (T) Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan to... with-Hikaru-chan 3 [Kyousuke looks down upon Madoka, who has her eyes closed.] narration: And now it's with Ayukawa... soshite IMA wa AYUKAWA to... and now (T) with-Ayukawa 4 [Kyousuke smiles up at the ceiling.] narration: Somehow... It's like a nan da ka... YUME mitai da dream. somehow dream seems 5 Kyousuke: [closing his eyes] I wish we could dance like zutto ko-- shite this forever. all-the-time doing-like-this odotte-itai na want-to-be-dancing [Madoka's eyes snap open.] --------------------------------------------------- p 152 (66) 1 [Both have their eyes open, but there's no eye contact.] 2 Madoka: [closing her eyes, with a smile] We can't... dame yo..... 3 [Kyousuke hears something and his eyes bulge.] FX: [off] ___ fu_ Kyousuke: Wha?! na?! 4 [He turns to look at a couple, dancing and kissing. Oh, the shock of it all! ^_^] 5 [He blushes.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin 6 [Overhead view looking down on Madoka and Kyousuke as they dance and look into each other's faces.] --------------------------------------------------- p 153 (67) 1 [His pov of Madoka. She looks up at him with a gentle smile.] 2 [And hugs him tight.] Madoka breasts FX: ____ gyu_ 3 [His view of her face, inviting a kiss.] narration: A... Ayukawa... a... AYUKAWA.......... 4 [Their lips approach...] 5 [...as Kyousuke steps on the foot of someone.] voice: OWWWW!! ita~~i!! --------------------------------------------------- p 154 (68) 1 [It's Kurumi, in suit, bowtie and hat, dressed to look like a guy.] Kurumi: [pissed] Th-that hurt, you jerk!! i itai ja nai ka konnyaro!! sore Kyousuke: [embarrassed] I-I'm sorry. su suimasen 2 [His pov of Kurumi and Manami--surprise!] 3 [Their view of him--shock!] 4 [Isolated shot of the bar.] sisters: [off] O-oniichan!! o oni--chan!! Kyousuke: [off] K-Kurumi! And Manami-i-i! ku kurumi sore ni manami----_!! moreover 5 [Blushing, Kyousuke and Madoka rapidly disengage and try to look nonchalant.] Manami: How did you know we were do--shite koko tte wakatta no? here? why here (T) knew Kyousuke and Madoka FX: _____ sasa_ 6 Kyousuke: [angrily] Never mind that. do-- shite mo ko-- shite mo What in the world are you omaera ittai nani doing here?!! you-(plural) in-the-world what yatte n da konna toko de!! doing (explan) in-this-kind-of-place crows-in-background FX: kaa_ 7 Manami: __________ Kurumi got a flyer in the kurumi ga MACHI de panfuretto city... (S) in-city pamphlet moratte-kite... coming-to-get She said she wanted to do--shite mo koko ni kitai tte yu-- come here at any cost, so by-all-means want-to-come-here say-that we pretended to be a _______ couple... kara kappuru no furishite...... that's-why couple (S) pretending [Kurumi doffs her hat, letting her tresses fall.] Kurumi: [gleefully] ______ Because you can eat yummy datte disuko tte oishi-- mono food at a disco. because disco (T) tasty-things TAbereru n da mon able-to-eat (is-the-reason) Kyousuke: [livid] N-now just a minute! a ano ne~~_ narration: Sheesh. What the heck are mattaku nante kotta... they thinking... really what! = thing --------------------------------------------------- p 155 (69) 1 Kurumi: [wide-eyed] But what are you doing here, demo oni--chan koso nani yatte-ta no oniichan? but indeed what were-doing Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ dokin 2 Kurumi: [thinking it over] If it's something that futari de ISSHO ni ite the two of you would do with-2-people being-here-together together... yaru koto to ittara...... do matter if-say-that 3 [Kyousuke looks back nervously at Madoka, who doesn't look all that self- assured either.] Kyousuke: Th-that is... so sore wa... that-(one) (T) 4 Kurumi: Oh, that's it! Just as I a so-- ka yappari oishi-- mono thought, you came to eat just-as-I-thought tasty-things the yummy food, too. TAbe ni kita no ne came-to-eat Kyousuke pratfall FX: ___ zu_ narration: Th-that was close... a abunakatta.......... 5 [Exterior shot of Disco Sid. In separate insets, Madoka smiles and Kyousuke looks back at her.] Kyousuke: [off] Making me worry... SHIMPAI sase-yagatte making-worry-(contempt) Hey! Let's go home! kora_ KAEru zo ! return-home !! ---------------------------------------------------