Kimagure Orange Road
"The Forbidden Cheek Dance"
Volume 7, Story 3
WB Volume 4, Story 7
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Hitoshi Doi, (20 June 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Matthew Klippenstein
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Jordan Lampe

Last revision : 06-30-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 136 (50) are only in the WBs!
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p 136 (50)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka sits in a chair and looks at us with a half-smile.  Dressed casually,
 she has the strap of her bag looped over the top of her head.  The bag sits
 on the chair, behind her.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                              _______
  The Forbidden Cheek Dance       ikenai         chi--ku
                                  naughty/wrong  cheek-
                                  <"must-not-do">

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                            _____
  Even a Blue Secret Stuffed      oshare         kaban ni   tsumekonda
  into a Stylish Bag Becomes      fancy/stylish  bag  (IO)  stuffed
  Spring-Like.                    ______
                                  buru-- na HIMITSU mo   HARUmeite
                                  blue-secret       too  becoming-springlike
                                                        _________
  For Some Reason, I'm            KYOU  wa   nan-da-ka  bo--isshu!
  Boyish Today!                   today (T)  somehow    boyish

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p 137 (51)

1
[Exterior shot of downtown.]
narration:
  It's spring!                    HARU    desu!
                                  spring  it-is

  In a few days, I'll be a        mou      ato    SUUJITSU de
  high school student...          already  later  in-a-few-days

                                  KOUKOUSEI----
                                  sr-high-student

2
[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down the sidewalk together.]
narration:
  Even the city, for some         MACHI      mo   nan-to-naku
  reason, is in high spirits      city/town  too  for-some-reason
  lately!
                                  Ukarete-iru               KYOU
                                  be-in-high-spirits/merry  today

                                  konoGORO!
                                  lately/recently

3
[A girl smiles and hands out coupons to passers-by.  Hikaru is handed one.]
girl:
  It's a place that just          KONDO     ATARAshiku  KAITEN shita
  opened recently.                recently  newly       opened-(a-new-shop)

                                  o-MISE  desu
                                  shop    is

  By all means, please come.      zehi          irashite-kudasai
                                  by-all-means  come-(please)

4
Hikaru: [reading the coupon]                           ______
  Wowww!  A new disco?            hee--_    ATARAshii  disuko  kaa
                                       !    new        disco   (?)

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p 138 (52)

1
[View across the street at a storefront.]
Hikaru: [off]                                ______   _____
  Hey, hey.  Disco Sid...         nani nani  disuko - shido...
                                             disco    Sid
                                  _______
  Couples only admissions         kappuru nomi  NYUU  TEN   KA?!
  policy?!                        couples only  entry store approval

2
coupon:
  DISCOTHE SID               #DISCOTHE...#  #SID#

  Discount Coupon                 WARIBIKIKEN

  Guys: 2500 yen ---> 2000 yen    DANSEI  #2500 ---> 2000#

  Gals: 1500 yen ---> 1000 yen    JOSEI   #1500 ---> 1000#
                                  _______
  Full of Absolutely Enjoyable    kappuru  ni  wa          tottemo TANOshii
  Attractions for Couples!!       couples (IO) (contrast)  extremely-fun
                                  ___________
                                  atorakushon ga   ippai!!
                                  attraction  (S)  full
                                  ______ _____
  Disco Sid                       disuko shido

3
[Kyousuke has a coupon, too.]
Kyousuke and Hikaru: [reading]
  You can become more and more    KARE   -   KANOJO     to    sara ni
  intimate with your boyfriend/   boyfriend  girlfriend with  further/
  girlfriend--guaranteed...                                    more-&-more

                                  SHINMITSU ni  nareru      koto   ukeai...
                                  intimate (IO) can-become  thing  guaranteed

4
Hikaru:                                ______
  Ohh, wonderful!!                maa  suteki!!

Kyousuke:
  "I-intimate..."                 shi...SHINMITSU  tte...
                                        intimate   (quote)

5
Hikaru:
  Let's go, Sempai.               SEMPAI ikimasho
                                         shall-go

[Kyousuke flinches back.]

6
Hikaru: [smiling]
  ...is what I want to say,       ..........to i--tai         kedo  atashi
  but I have to go shopping                 want-to-say-that  but   I
  tonight with my mom.
                                  KON'YA   oka--san to  o-KAIMONO  na no
                                  tonight  with-mom     shopping

Kyousuke:                         ___
                           ho_

[In relief, Kyousuke rests his hand *over the edge of the panel* as though
 it were the ledge of a window...]

7
Hikaru: [waving, running off]
  Let's be sure and go next       KONDO      zehi          ikimasho--  ne
  time, 'kay?                     next-time  by-all-means  shall-go

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p 139 (53)

1
Kyousuke: [looking distractedly up at the sky]
  Hmm.  Intimate, huh?            fu----n    SHINMITSU  nee
                                             intimate   (rhet)

2
[On a disco floor, Kyousuke turns at the sound of...]
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...

3
Madoka: [moving in close]                            _____
  We're adults now, right?        moo  atashi-tachi  otona  yo ne
                                  now  we            adult

4
Madoka: [leaning in real close]
  C'mon, let's get intimate.      saa  SHINMITSU ni   narimasho
                                       intimate (IO)  shall-become

Kyousuke: [nervous]
  Uh...                           a...

5
[Back to reality.  Kyousuke is trying to embrace the air.  Pedestrians turn
 their heads to look.]
Kyousuke:
  Oh.  Th-that sort of thing...   a  so sonna koto...
                                        that-kind-of-thing

6
[Behind him, some girls comment.]
girls:                            __ ____
  Oh no...  That boy's a          ya da--    ano KO    HENTAI     yo
  weirdo.                                    that-boy  perverted
                                  _________
  What a pervert.                 yaratsu--

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

7
[Looking up, he realizes he's standing outside an adult movie theater.
 Above the theater is a billboard and on that billboard is a topless girl,
 with the movie title kanji obscuring her breasts.]
billboard:
  Must be 18 years or older.      18 SAI-MATSU  MAN    o-kotowari
                                     year-end   fully    refusal/notice

  THE FORBIDDEN STUFFED ANIMAL    KINDAN no  HAKUSEI
                                  forbidden  stuffed-animal

sign: [vertical]
  France Theater                  FURANSU  ZA
                                  France   theater

sign: [horizontal]
  France...                       FURANSU...

ticket office sign:
  Ticket Price  Adults...         RYOUKIN   OTONA...  SHOUJIN...
                Children...       fee/fare  adults    children

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p 140 (54)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]

2
[At the counter, Kyousuke enjoys a cup of coffee and cheerful conversation
 with Madoka, who works behind it.]

3
Master: [entering]
  I'm back.                       tadaima

4
[Master looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.]
Master:
  ?                                ?

5
Master:
  Oh, you're back already?        nan da  mo--     KAEtte-kita      no kai
                                  what    already  began-returning     (?)

Kyousuke:
  I've been here for a while.     sakki kara     imasu    kedo  koko ni
                                  for-some-time  am-here  but   at-here

6
Master: [looking up at the ceiling]
  Huh?  Then the guy who went     are  ja    sakki
  into the disco with your        huh  then  a-little-while-ago
  sister a little while ago                            ______
  was...                          IMOUTO-san to        disuko ni
                                  with-younger-sister  into-disco

                                  haitte-itta       no    wa
                                  went-and-entered  (one) (T)

Kyousuke:                         ______
  DISCO?!                         disuko?!

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p 141 (55)

1
Kyousuke:
  Ehh?!  My sister went to a      e--_  IMOUTO         ga
  disco with a strange guy?!         !  younger-sister (S)
                                                      ______
                                  mishiranu OTOKO to  disuko ni?!
                                  with-strange-man    to-disco

2
Master:
  I'm pretty sure it was that     TASHIka......  ATARAshiku  dekita
  new disco.                      certain/sure   newly       be-finished
                                  ______
                                  disuko
                                  disco
                                         _______
  You know, the one that only     hora   kappuru  shika irenai  to yu--
  allows couples inside.                 couples  only-let-in   say-that

3
[Kyousuke thinks this over.]

4
Kyousuke: [reaching into a back pocket]
  Ah, it must be...               a    TASHIka...
                                       certain/sure

Kyousuke pocket FX:               ________
                          gosogoso

5
Kyousuke: [handing Master a coupon]
  This one...                     koko ja......
                                  at-this-place

Master:
  Yeah, that's it.                so-- so--  koko        da
                                             this-place  it-is

6
[Madoka looks at him out of the corner of one eye--a no-nonsense look.]
Madoka:
  Something like that...          sonna mono...
                                  that-kind-of-thing

  Why were you saving it          nani  TAISETSU   so-- ni      motte  n no?!
  like it was so important?!      what  important  looks-as-if  for

Kyousuke: [nervously]
  ..........  Umm.  Well...       .......... iya  maa

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p 142 (56)

1
Madoka: [to Master]                       _______
  But...  Only couples are        demo... kappuru  shika hairenai  n desho
  allowed in, right?              but     couples  only-enter     (poss-explan)

Master: [rubbing his chin]
  I remember seeing some guy      so-- ieba...         soba ni OTOKO no KO ga
  beside her.                     come-to-think-of-it  beside-a-guy        (S)

                                  issho     datta  naa
                                  together  was

2
[Kyousuke's angrily imagines who it might be.  The portraits of Komatsu and
 Hatta adorn this panel.]
bell FX:                          _____
                          pi~~n

3
Kyousuke:
  Was it really my sister?        HONTOU ni  IMOUTO          nan desu ka
                                  really     younger-sister      is   (?)

Master:
  Yeah...  What's-her-name,       aa...  nante itta  kke   ano
  uhh, the one with the                  how   said  (?)   uhh
  ponytail.                       ____________
                                  poni--te--ru  no
                                  ponytail      (nom)

4
[Isolated shot of a table at ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  That's Manami!                  manami da!

  Then what about Kurumi, the     ja   kurumi no HOU wa   hora  KAMI no NAGAi
  one with the long hair?         then        's way (T)  see!  long-hair

Master: [off]
  I didn't see her...             sono KO   wa   minakatta  kedo...
                                  that-girl (T)  not-seen   but

  But maybe she went in           SAKI ni              haitte-itchatta
  earlier?                        earlier-than/before  went-in-(finality)

                                  n ja nai?
                                  (neg/explan)

5
Kyousuke: [clenching a fist]
  Th-those jerks...!              a aitsura~~~~~~_

Komatsu: [entering, with Hatta]
  Ah, there he is.                a ita ita

6
Komatsu: [tears in his eyes]
  O-oniisan.                      o oni--san

[Kyousuke, visibly in a foul mood, whips his head around.]

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                          ki_

7
Kyousuke: [grabbing him by the collar]
  Bastar-r-rd!  You have the      kisama--_         nukenuke to~~~~~~_
  bloody gall to...               you-(derogatory)  have-the-cheek-to...

Kyousuke FX:
                            tsuka tsuka tsuka

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p 143 (57)

1
Kyousuke:                                                     ______
  What...?!  You saw her going    e----_  mishiranu OTOKO to  disuko ni
  into the disco with a strange        !  with-strange-guy    to-disco
  guy?!
                                  haitte-iku no o   mita  tte?!
                                  going-into   (O)  saw   (quote)

2
Kyousuke: [smiling]
  O-oh, so it wasn't you.         na nan da    omae  ja nakatta  n da
                                               you   was-not     (explan)

Komatsu: [wincing]
  Don't feel so relieved!         ANSHIN                suru na  yo
                                  peace-of-mind/relief  don't-feel-(command)

3
Komatsu: [with sadness]                        ___
  So we tried to go inside,       sore de      ore-tachi mo   NAKA ni
  too...                          and-so/then  we        too  to-inside

                                  hairo-- to shita  n da      kedo...
                                  tried-to-enter    (explan)  but
                                  _______
  But we were refused because     kappuru-IGAI   wa   o-kotowari  da tte
  of the couples-only rule.       except-couples (T)  refusal     be (quote)

4
[Isolated shot of the sink of dirty dishes at ABCB.]
Komatsu: [off]
  So...                           sore jaa...

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p 144 (58)

1
[Komatsu and Hatta stand at the door, and bow politely.]
Komatsu:
  Then we leave the rest to       ja    ato      wa   o-NEGAi shima~~su
  you.                            then  the-rest (T)  beg/implore

Hatta:
  I'm hoping.  I'm praying.       inotte-masu  ogande-masu
                                  am-praying   am-worshipping/praying

2
[Madoka, Master and Kyousuke watch then leave.]

3
[Madoka makes an idle comment that pops Kyousuke's eyes wide.]
Madoka:                           _______
  So couples can go in...         kappuru da to   haireru no  ka...
                                  if-are-couples  can-enter   (musing)

4
Madoka:                           ________
  Master.                         masuta--

Master: [grinning]
  Sure.  Go ahead.                hai  itte-rasshai
                                  yes  be-going

5
Madoka: [to Kyousuke]
  The place...  Where is it?      o-MISE...  doko ni   aru  no
                                    shop     at-where  is   (?)

6
Kyousuke:
  Th-thank you.                   a......arigato--

7
[Madoka portrait--soft smile.]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                            koku_

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p 145 (59)

1
[Full-length portraits of Madoka--in a very nice dress--and Kyousuke.  They
 walk towards us, and are partly overlaid on panel 2.]

2
[Exterior night shot of Disco Sid.]

3
[The same female employee that handed out coupons to Hikaru stands at the
 counter in the entryway.  Madoka and Kyousuke file past, looking about.]
girl:
  Welcome...                      irasshai  ma...

4
[She looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.]
girl:
  Oh.                             ara

5
girl:
  Hmm!                            hee--_

girl FX:
                           jirojiro

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  Ah, hi.                         a  do--mo

[Madoka looks back.]

6
girl: [cheerfully]
  You have a different girl       o-HIRU no  ONNA no KO to wa
  from this afternoon,              noon 's  girl      (define)
  Mr. Playboy.                                   __________
                                  chigau  no ne  pureibo--i -san
                                  different      Mr-Playboy

[Kyousuke, blushing and cringing, swivels his head from girl to Madoka.
 Madoka eyes him like she's heard this all before...]

Kyousuke:
  Ah!  Wah, wah!                  a wa wa

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p 146 (60)

1
[View of the dimly-lit dance floor.]

2
Madoka:
  Oo-ooh, amazing!                waa  sugoi!
                                  _______
  This is much bigger than        mebiusu yori  mo    zutto   HIROi      no ne
  Moebius.                        than-Moebius  more  by-far  broad/spacious

3
Kyousuke:
  If it's this big, it won't      kore dake  HIROkucha      mitsukeru no mo
  be easy to find her.            this-much  (HIROkute-wa)  finding      even
                                              spacious (T)

                                  TAIHEN     da  naa
                                  difficult  is

4
[Overhead view of Madoka and Kyousuke, who stand at the edge of the dance
 floor.]
narration:
  That's it!  This is just        so-- da    so-- yu-- TOKI     koso
  the sort of time when I         that's-it  that-kind-of-time  indeed
  should just see through         _chikara_
  things with the Power...        NOURYOKU de  TOUSHI sureba...
                                  with-Power   if-see-thru

5
[Kyousuke's eyes glow with the Power, and his body crackles with light.]

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p 147 (61)

1
[Kyousuke's eyes bulge at the sight of a nude dancing guy.]
music FX:                         ___ ____ ___ ____
               zun chan zun chan

2
[He quickly averts his face, covering his mouth as though he is about to
 puke.]
Kyousuke:                         ____
  Urrgh!                          oee_

narration:
  I-I don't want to see this!!    ko konna mon           mitakunai    yo--_!!
                                     this-kind-of-thing  not-want-to-see

3
[View pans back to show he's now looking directly at Madoka.  She stands in
 profile to him.]
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e_?

4
[His eyes grow huge and he jumps back.  Madoka, looking around the dance
 floor, has now turned to present her back towards him.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                           dokin

5
[The lights over the dance floor come on.  Kyousuke has his hand clasped over
 his nose.]
lights-on FX:                     ___
                          pa_

6
[Blood oozes over the top of that hand.]
Madoka:
  You're so careless.             otchokochoi  ne--

  You bumped into someone,        HITO ni      demo          butsukatta
  didn't you?                     into-person  or-something  collided

                                  n desho
                                  (poss-explan)

narration:
  Looking through things          koko de  TOUSHI   wa   chotto  MURI
  here would seem to be a         in-here  see-thru (T)  a-bit   impossible
  bit impossible for me!
                                  mitai!
                                  seems

Kyousuke:
  Yes...  No.  Sorta...           ha...  iya  soro....    hanaji     ga...
  A nose-bleed...                 yes    no     nose-bleed (S)

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p 148 (62)

1
[Kyousuke, Madoka and others turn at the sound of...]
announcer: [off]                       ______ _____
  Well, it's the start of         saa  ge--mu taimu no hajimari   desu
  game-time.                           game-time    's beginning  is
                                                           _______
  Couples wishing to              SHUTSUJOU    KIBOU no    kappuru wa
  participate, please come        participate  hope (nom)  couples (T)
  to the stage!                           ________
                                  do--zo  sute--ji ni!
                                  please  to-stage

2
[A view of the stage.  Couples engage in a 2-person race involving an apple
 pressed between their faces.]

3
[The female employee from before smiles at them.]
girl:
  Don't just watch.               mite-nai       de
                                  not-be-watching

  Why don't you join in?          DEmasen   ka
                                  not-join  (?)

  You make a nice couple.         anata-tachi   o-niai      yo
                                  you-(plural)  match-well

4
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
 "W-we make a nice couple..."     o o-niai      da   tte...
                                    match-well  are  (quote)

5
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun.                     KASUGA-kun

[He turns toward her.]

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                          doki_

6
Madoka: [smiling]
  We...                           atashi-tachi...

7
[Snapping out of it, she tows him by the hand across the dance floor.]
Madoka:
  This isn't the time for that!   sore        dokoro ja nai      n desho!
                                  that-(one)  is-not-the-(time)  (poss-explan)

Kyousuke:
  Y-yes...                        ha hai...

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p 149 (63)

1
[Isolated shot of the overhead lights...]

2
[...which go off.]

3
[Madoka and Kyousuke look up in surprise.]
narration:
  What?!  What?!                  e?!  e?!

4
Kyousuke:
 (Th-this music.  C-could it      (ko kono ONGAKU  mo moshiya...)
  be...)                              this-music      by-any-chance

5
[His pov of the other couples, dancing together.]
Kyousuke: [off]                    _______ _____
 (Cheek dance time!!)             (chi--ku taimu  da!!)
                                   cheek-time     is

6
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...

[She looks at him with eyes grown large and cheeks flushed.]

Madoka heartbeat FX:              _____
                          doki_

7
[Staring into her eyes, he decisively pulls her towards him.  She is very
 surprised.]
Madoka FX:                        ___
                          su_

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p 150 (64)

1
Madoka: [angrily]
  Hey.  This is no time to        chotto  konna koto          yatte-ru
  be doing this sort of...!               this-kind-of-thing  be-doing

                                  BA-AI          ja.....!
                                  time/occasion  is-not

2
Kyousuke: [finger to lips, with a wink]
  Shh...!                         sh----_

3
[Shot of their shoes as they cheek-dance.]
Kyousuke:                                                  _______
  If we move around we'd          UGOki mawaru to  hoka no kappuru ni
  bother the other couples.       if-move-around   other-couples  (IO)

                                  me--waku         da  yo
                                  trouble/disturb  be

  We'd attract attention...       medatchau         shi...
                                  (medatte-shimau)  and-besides
                                   stand-out-(finality/regret)

  It would be easier to look      ko--       shite-ta
  for her like this.              like-this  were-doing

                                  ho-- ga sagashi yasui  yo
                                  easier-to-look-for

4
Madoka: [eyes wide]
  Y...                            so...

5
[Her features melt into a soft smile, and she rests her head against his
 shoulder.]
Madoka:
  Yeah, I guess so.               sore mo                so--       ne
                                  you're-right-in-a-way  like-that

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p 151 (65)

1
[They cheek dance.]

2
[Flashback pic to chapter 1.4, "Cheek Sorrow"--Kyousuke's and Hikaru's cheek
 dance.]
narration:
  Come to think of it, it         so-- ieba            ICHINEN   MAE    wa
  was a year ago, with            come-to-think-of-it  one-year  before (T)
  Hikaru-chan...
                                  hikaru-chan to...
                                  with-Hikaru-chan

3
[Kyousuke looks down upon Madoka, who has her eyes closed.]
narration:
  And now it's with Ayukawa...    soshite  IMA wa   AYUKAWA to...
                                  and      now (T)  with-Ayukawa

4
[Kyousuke smiles up at the ceiling.]
narration:
  Somehow...  It's like a         nan da ka...  YUME   mitai da
  dream.                          somehow       dream  seems

5
Kyousuke: [closing his eyes]
  I wish we could dance like      zutto         ko-- shite
  this forever.                   all-the-time  doing-like-this

                                  odotte-itai         na
                                  want-to-be-dancing

[Madoka's eyes snap open.]

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p 152 (66)

1
[Both have their eyes open, but there's no eye contact.]

2
Madoka: [closing her eyes, with a smile]
  We can't...                     dame yo.....

3
[Kyousuke hears something and his eyes bulge.]
FX: [off]                         ___
                         fu_

Kyousuke:
  Wha?!                           na?!

4
[He turns to look at a couple, dancing and kissing.  Oh, the shock of it
 all!  ^_^]

5
[He blushes.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                           dokin

6
[Overhead view looking down on Madoka and Kyousuke as they dance and look
 into each other's faces.]

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p 153 (67)

1
[His pov of Madoka.  She looks up at him with a gentle smile.]

2
[And hugs him tight.]
Madoka breasts FX:                ____
                       gyu_

3
[His view of her face, inviting a kiss.]
narration:
  A...  Ayukawa...                a...  AYUKAWA..........

4
[Their lips approach...]

5
[...as Kyousuke steps on the foot of someone.]
voice:
  OWWWW!!                         ita~~i!!

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p 154 (68)

1
[It's Kurumi, in suit, bowtie and hat, dressed to look like a guy.]
Kurumi: [pissed]
  Th-that hurt, you jerk!!        i itai  ja nai ka    konnyaro!!
                                    sore               

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  I-I'm sorry.                    su suimasen

2
[His pov of Kurumi and Manami--surprise!]

3
[Their view of him--shock!]

4
[Isolated shot of the bar.]
sisters: [off]
  O-oniichan!!                    o oni--chan!!

Kyousuke: [off]
  K-Kurumi!  And Manami-i-i!      ku kurumi  sore ni   manami----_!!
                                             moreover

5
[Blushing, Kyousuke and Madoka rapidly disengage and try to look nonchalant.]
Manami:
  How did you know we were        do--shite  koko tte  wakatta no?
  here?                           why        here (T)  knew

Kyousuke and Madoka FX:           _____
                            sasa_

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Kyousuke: [angrily]
  Never mind that.                do-- shite mo  ko-- shite mo

  What in the world are you       omaera        ittai         nani
  doing here?!!                   you-(plural)  in-the-world  what

                                  yatte  n da        konna toko de!!
                                  doing  (explan)    in-this-kind-of-place

crows-in-background FX:
                            kaa_

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Manami:                                                 __________
  Kurumi got a flyer in the       kurumi ga   MACHI de  panfuretto
  city...                                (S)  in-city   pamphlet

                                  moratte-kite...
                                  coming-to-get

  She said she wanted to          do--shite mo  koko ni kitai      tte yu--
  come here at any cost, so       by-all-means  want-to-come-here  say-that
  we pretended to be a                        _______
  couple...                       kara        kappuru no   furishite......
                                  that's-why  couple  (S)  pretending

[Kurumi doffs her hat, letting her tresses fall.]

Kurumi: [gleefully]                        ______
  Because you can eat yummy       datte    disuko tte  oishi-- mono
  food at a disco.                because  disco  (T)  tasty-things

                                  TAbereru     n da mon
                                  able-to-eat  (is-the-reason)

Kyousuke: [livid]
  N-now just a minute!            a ano ne~~_

narration:
  Sheesh.  What the heck are      mattaku  nante  kotta...
  they thinking...                really   what!   = thing

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Kurumi: [wide-eyed]
  But what are you doing here,    demo  oni--chan koso    nani  yatte-ta  no
  oniichan?                       but             indeed  what  were-doing

Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX:     _____
                           dokin

2
Kurumi: [thinking it over]
  If it's something that          futari de      ISSHO ni ite
  the two of you would do         with-2-people  being-here-together
  together...
                                  yaru koto    to ittara......
                                  do   matter  if-say-that

3
[Kyousuke looks back nervously at Madoka, who doesn't look all that self-
 assured either.]
Kyousuke:
  Th-that is...                   so sore       wa...
                                     that-(one) (T)

4
Kurumi:
  Oh, that's it!  Just as I       a so-- ka  yappari            oishi-- mono
  thought, you came to eat                   just-as-I-thought  tasty-things
  the yummy food, too.
                                  TAbe ni kita  no ne
                                  came-to-eat

Kyousuke pratfall FX:             ___
                           zu_

narration:
  Th-that was close...            a abunakatta..........

5
[Exterior shot of Disco Sid.  In separate insets, Madoka smiles and Kyousuke
 looks back at her.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Making me worry...              SHIMPAI sase-yagatte
                                  making-worry-(contempt)

  Hey!  Let's go home!            kora_  KAEru        zo
                                      !  return-home  !!

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