Kimagure Orange Road
"Spring = a Shock!"
Volume 7, Story 4
WB Volume 4, Story 8
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (10 Nov 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Thomas Wyatt
Jordan Lampe
Last revision : 06-30-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 157 (71) are only in the WBs!
---------------------------------------------------
p 157 (71)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka, in her new high school sailor uniform, stands outside the front
gate of the school. She leans back against the wall, just around the
corner. Approaching the gate, Kyousuke, also in his new school uniform,
looks about in search of someone. Around him the cherry blossoms fall.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _wa_ ______
Spring = a Shock! HARU #=# shokku!
spring shock
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________
Since It's Spring, Even Her se--ra-- FUKU mo
Sailor Uniform Is Tinged schoolgirl-sailor-dress-uniform too
with the Pink of Cherry
Blossoms. honnori to
faintly/slightly with
SAKURA ni SOmaru
cherry-blossom/pink-color dye/be-dyed
HARU da kara
spring is that's-why
Quietly, She Tries to Waylay sotto machibuse shite-miru no
You. quietly/gently try-and-lie-in-wait/waylay
---------------------------------------------------
p 158 (72)
1
[View looking straight up at the sky. Branches of cherry blossom trees
frame the panel.]
narration:
Spring 1985... '85 NEN HARU----
year spring
2
[Shot of a pedestrian overpass, and a coffee shop.]
Hikaru: [off]
It finally starts tomorrow, iyoiyo asu kara desu ne--
doesn't it... finally beginning-tomorrow is (rhet)
_gakkou_
High School! KOUTOU-BU!
sr-high-section/ = school
3
[Hikaru, in sweater and cap, pulls at her drink through a straw.]
4
[Kyousuke, smiling, drinks from his mug.]
Kyousuke:
Yeah. un
---------------------------------------------------
p 159 (73)
1
[View pans back to show them seated at a window table.]
Hikaru: [smiling]
I wanna hurry up and see HAYAku mitai na SEMPAI no SEIFUKU SUGATA
your school uniform. soon want-to-see 's uniform shape
Kyousuke:
Ha ha! haha_
2
narration:
That's right! High school so-- desu! iyoiyo asu kara
will start tomorrow at last. at-last from-tomorrow
_gakkou_
KOUTOU-BU ga
sr-high-section/ = school (S)
HAJImaru n desu
start (explan)
3
narration: ___
I've changed schools many ore nanKAI-mo TENKOU shite-ta
times, so I should be used I many-times have-changed-schools
to this...
kara ko-- yu-- koto ni wa
that's-why to-this-kind-of-thing (contrast)
narete-iru hazu nan da kedo
should-be-used-to what is but
4
[Hikaru's smile fades as she grows thoughtful.]
5
[Kyousuke notices.]
narration:
But all day today, I've been KYOU ICHINICHI wa sasuga ni
truly restless, and somehow today all-day-(long) (T) truly/indeed
edgy. ________
sowasowa shite nan-da-ka ochitsukimasen
being-restless somehow not-calm-down
6
[Hikaru turns to look out the window. Her eyes are damp with tears.]
7
Kyousuke:
What's wrong? dou shita no?
---------------------------------------------------
p 160 (74)
1
Hikaru: [forcing a smile]
I'm a bit sad after all. yappari chotto sabishii naa
after-all a-bit sad/lonely
2
[She pulls down on her cap to hide her eyes.]
Hikaru:
I know that the high school KOUTOU-BU ga sugu CHIKAku ni
is nearby, but... sr-high-section (S) close-by
aru no wa wakatte-ru
is-there (nom.) (T) am-knowing
n desu kedo
(explan) but
When I think that you're SEMPAI ga KOUKOUSEI ni natchau
going to be a high school (S) become-sr-high-student-
student... (finality/regret)
to OMOu to...
when-think-that
3
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...
4
Hikaru: [eyes still hidden by the cap]
I feel as though... You're SEMPAI ga atashi kara sugoku TOUku ni
going terribly far away from (S) from-me awfully-far
me.
itchau yo-- na
(itte-shimau) it-looks-like
go-(finality/regret)
sonna KI ga shite...
that-kind-of feeling
5
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks somber as her words have touched him.]
6
Kyousuke: [brightly]
It won't be like that. sonna koto nai yo
that-kind-of-thing not-have
7
[She reaches across to rest her hands on his.]
Hikaru:
I wish I could be closer to motto soba ni iretara
you. much-more beside/around if-can-be-there
i-- no ni na
okay even-though
---------------------------------------------------
p 161 (75)
1
[Shot of an intersection.]
2
[Kyousuke runs down the sidewalk, under wet skies.]
sign: [partial]
...Toiletries. ...KESHOUHIN
in katakana
above the = toilet articles.>
Kyousuke FX: _____ _____
basha basha
3
[He finds refuge against the side of a building.]
4
[Overhead view as a girl under an umbrella walks by, close to where Kyousuke
stands.]
sign:
Nitta Osteopathy Clinic NITTA SEIKOTSU -IN
osteopathy clinic/hospital
Kyousuke: [surveying the weather]
(Damn! What rotten luck.) (che_ tsuite-nai na)
damn! not-have-luck
5
[Of course, the girl is...]
Madoka:
Hey! ara!
---------------------------------------------------
p 162 (76)
1
[She stands in full-page, full-length portrait--in jacket, miniskirt and
boots.]
Madoka:
What are you doing here? nani shite n no? konna tokoro de
what doing in-place-like-this
2
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
Just what it looks like... goran no to--ri
as-you-see
Getting out of the rain... AME yadori...
rain roost/lodge
3
narration:
I get to go to high school AYUKAWA to wa ISSHO ni
with Ayukawa. with-Ayukawa (T) together
_gakkou_
KOUTOU-BU ni ikeru n da
to-sr-high-section can-go (explan)
(school)
Kyousuke:
What about you? AYUKAWA wa?
4
theater marquee: [partial]
...Rift in the Green MIDORI no KI...
green/verdure 's
Madoka: [pointing up]
Just what it looks like. goran no to--ri
as-you-see
5
Madoka: ________
I have 2 free passes masuta-- kara moratta EIGA SHOUTAI KEN
that I got from Master... from-Master got complimentary-
movie-ticket
2 -MAI aru kedo...
have but
Kyousuke:
All right! yatta!
---------------------------------------------------
p 163 (77)
1
billboard: [at top]
Also Playing: DOUJI JOUEI
simultaneous screen-projection
First Dream --A Cat Who Swims Like 1st-dream-of-new-year
a Fish...*
KAPPA NEKO...
excellent-swimmer/mermaid cat
billboard: [main section]
______
A Rift in Classes Is a kurasu no KIreME ga
Rift in the Green class 's gap/rift/break (S)
MIDORI no KIreME
green/verdure 's gap/rift/break
Starring: Irie Takako, SHUEN IRIE TAKAKO IKEBE YOSHI
Ikebe Yoshi*
<*Translation note (CN): The 2nd halves of these are cropped out of the
wideban panel.>
sign: ________
Castor Theater kasutoru -ZA
small sign: [far left]
Clinic KYUU/HISA NAI/UCHI HYAKU -IN
clinic
2
actor: [high school student]
Why, why are you saying you naze da naze
want to break up? why is why
WAKAreru nante yu-- n da?
part-company say-that (explan)
3
actress: [high school student] ______
I found out how truly boring BETSUbetsu no kurasu ni natte
you are after we ended up in becoming-different-class
different classes!
atashi anata ga jitsu ni
I you (S) truly/so/very
tsumaranai HITO da tte koto ga
boring-person are matter (S)
wakatta no!
understood
actress:
Because you're indecisive YUUJUUFUDAN de tayori naku tte!
and unreliable! because-of-indecisiveness not-be-reliable
4
[She turns and walks away, leaving behind a shocked boy.]
actress:
Farewell. sayo--nara
5
actor FX: _______
ga~~~~n
6
[In his seat, Kyousuke sweats, blushes and winces.]
narration:
Wha... na..........
7
[Madoka's eyes grow large.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 164 (78)
1
[They exit the movie theater.]
Kyousuke:
(What a movie!) (nante EIGA da!)
what! movie is
2
Kyousuke: [unhappily]
(But, if you think about (demo... KANGAete-mitara anna mono
it, maybe that's the way but if-try-and-think thing-like-that
it is...)
na no ka-mo-shirenai na)
(explan) it-is-possible
3
[Madoka notices his somber mood.]
sign: ______
Perm pa--ma
4
Madoka:
You're worrying about that sakki no EIGA no koto
movie, aren't you. about-a-little-while-ago's-movie
KI ni shite-ru n desho
be-thinking/feeling (poss-explan)
sign:
Fresh Meat SEINIKU
5
Kyousuke: [nervously]
N-nothing like that! so sonna koto nai yo!
thing-like-that not-have
sign: [top] __________
Plastic Model Railroad puramoderu TETSUDOU
plastic?-model railway/railroad
MOKEI
model
_____ ___________
Radio-controlled radio kontoro--ru
sign: [bottom] _____ _____
Jumbo Figure jambo figua
Goods received one after ZOKUZOKU
another inside! successively/one-after-another
NYUUKA -CHUU!
goods-received inside
6
[Madoka gives him a knowing look.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 165 (79)
1
Madoka: [gently smiling]
All girls aren't like that. anna ONNA no KO bakari ja nai yo
that-kind-of-girl only is-not
2
[Her pov of him. He looks back with surprise.]
3
Madoka: [averting her gaze]
But... demo...
4
[She tosses back her hair and looks up at the sky.]
Madoka: ______
I hope we can be in the same ISSHO no kurasu ni nareru to
class. together 's class (IO) if-can-be
i-- ne
good
5
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Eh? e?
6
Madoka:
Oh, nothing. a iya
sign:
Tatami Store TATAMI MISE
straw-mat store
---------------------------------------------------
p 166 (80)
1
Madoka: _abakabu_
Well then... Now it's time sate to... sorosoro o-MISE no
for me to go to ABCB! now ABCB/shop 's
JIKAN da!
time is
2
[The sun breaks through the clouds.]
Kyousuke:
Oh, it's stopped raining. a AME yande-ru
rain is-stopped
3
[Shot of the clearing skies.]
narration:
I'm sure we'll have nice ashita wa kitto i-- TENKI!
weather tomorrow! tomorrow (T) surely good-weather
4
[They walk down the sidewalk together. Kyousuke stretches his arms in the
air.]
narration: ______
Somehow I feel like we'll nan-to-naku ISSHO no kurasu ni
be in the same class! for-some-reason together 's in-class
nareso-- na KI ga shimasu!
look-like-can-become think/feel
sign:
Hermitage of Splendor KAREI IORI
splendor/magnificence hermitage/retreat
truck: ____
Ham hamu
ham
---------------------------------------------------
p 167 (81)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
And on the next day, the soshite YOKUJITSU----
new school year arrived! and/then the-next-day
yatte-kimashita SHINGAKKI!
turned-up new-school-term
2
[A grey panel.]
Kyousuke FX: [off] ______ ______
kushon kushon
3
[His pov of the rest of the family at the breakfast table. They all stop and
stare.]
4
Kurumi:
Oh no! A cold, oniichan? ya da--_ oni--chan kaze?
! cold
Kyousuke FX:
kushun
Kyousuke: [still in his pajamas]
It doesn't feel that way. so-- ja nai mitai
like-that is-not seem
5
Kyousuke:
But since I woke up, my demo okite kara zutto
sneezing and tears haven't but since-getting-up all-the-time
stopped.
NAMIDA to kushami ga tomannakutte
tears and sneeze (S) not-stopping
Kyousuke FX:
kushon kushon
Manami:
Oh, that's... a sore
6
Manami:
Isn't that the hayfever chikagoro WADAI no
that's been talked about lately topic-of-conversation 's
lately?
KAFUNSHOU ja nai?
hay-fever is-not
Kyousuke:
What's that? nan da sore?
what is that
corresponding to
what we Americans call "hayfever", or "allergy to pollen". This is just
a guess, but perhaps it was not a commonly known term in 1985 Japan, among
the typical (young) readers of KOR. Hence this explanation.>
7
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Manami: [off] _________
It's a sort of allergy and arerugi-- no ISSHU de
they say that the sneezing, allergy a-kind-of being
runny nose, and tears don't
stop. kushami to HANAMIZU ga DEte
with-sneezes runny-nose (S) flowing-out
NAMIDA mo TOmaranai so-- yo
tears too not-stop like-that
narration:
Despite the fact the skies konna ni HArete-ru no ni
are so clear, my health is so-(much) is-clear even-though
playing tricks...
kono TAICHOU no WARUsa...
this-physical-condition 's mischief/
practical-joke
Somehow, it feels ominous... nan-da-ka iya na YOKAN...
somehow unpleasant foreboding
Kyousuke FX: [off] ______
kushon
---------------------------------------------------
p 168 (82)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building. The cherry blossoms are in full bloom.]
2
[Kyousuke's pov of the class listings. At the top is a header. Below are
the various class groups, followed by teacher's name and the names of all
the students in that group. In view here is the list for 1-C.]
listings: [header] ______
...School Year Class ...NENDO kurasu HENSEI
Groupings school-year class organization
3
student 1:
Oh, I'm in class B. a-- #B# -GUMI daa
B-group am
student 2:
What? So we're in the same nan da mata omae to issho ka
class again. again with-you together (muse)
4
[Kyousuke walks through the crowd, dressed in his new, black, school uniform.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
kushon
narration:
At the very start of high SHINGAKU so--so--
school--I'm not feeling entrance-to-higher-school immediately
lucky.
tsuite-nai na--
not-be-lucky
5
[Komatsu and Hatta run up from behind.]
Komatsu: ___ ______
Hey! We're in the same yo_ ore-tachi mata ONAji kurasu
class again. ! we again same-class
da tte yo
are
Kyousuke pratfall FX: _____
zuru_
6
[Shot looking up at a nearby school building.]
narration:
Just as I predicted! YOKAN -TEKI -CHUU!
premonition within
Kyousuke FX: [off] ______
kushon
---------------------------------------------------
p 169 (83)
1
Kyousuke: ___
Ohh? So we're in 1-F. he-- ore-tachi #1-F# kaa
we (musing)
2
Kyousuke:
(More importantly, what about (sore yori AYUKAWA wa...)
Ayukawa...) than-that (T)
3
[He takes a look at the board.]
4
sign:
1-A #1-A# 1 AYUKAWA ma...
1) Ayukawa Ma...
5
[Dreamy view of another school building. The panel is framed by cherry
blossom trees.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 170 (84)
1
[Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]
2
[A second look at the board.]
sign:
1-A #1-A# 1 AYUKAWA 2 ISHIMARU
1) Ayukawa...
2) Ishimaru...
3
[He goes into shock.]
Kyousuke FX:
ga----n
4
Kyousuke: ______
(W-we're in different (chi chigau kurasu da!!)
classes!!) different class are
5
[He collapses to the ground on his hands and knees. Komatsu looks on.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
gakkuri
6
[Komatsu stands near and smiles. Hatta bends down to get a closer look at
Kyousuke.]
Komatsu:
What happened...? do-- shita n da yo--
Are you that happy...? sonna ni ureshii?
that-(much) happy
___
Being together with us. ore-tachi to ISSHO de
with-us together being
---------------------------------------------------
p 171 (85)
1
[Isolated shot of the sign outside classroom 1-F.]
2
[Students mill about, chatting, getting to know one another...]
guy 1: [to a group of 3 girls] ________
Wowww! You're a surfer. suge--_ sa--fa-- nan da--
surfer what are
guy 2: [to another guy] ______
What club do you want to kurabu nani ni suru?
join? club to-what do
3
[Kyousuke sits alone at his desk next to the window.]
4
[Deep in thought, he gazes out the window.]
narration:
It seems like I've gotten hikaru-chan tomo TOOku natchatta
far away from Hikaru-chan including-Hikaru became-distant-
as well, and... (finality/regret)
mitai da shi
seems and-besides
What's more, Ayukawa is in sono ue AYUKAWA tomo
a different class... besides/what's-more including-Ayukawa
______
kurasu wa BETSUbetsu...
class (T) different/separate
5
[He glares at Komatsu and Hatta, busy joking around with each other.]
narration:
But these guys alone are sono kuse koitsura dake wa
sticking to me like glue... though these-guys only (T)
shikkari ISSHO dattari shite...
tightly together are-(and)
6
[He clutches at his head.]
narration:
My worst fears have come to ICHIBAN osorete-ita JITAI ni natta!
pass! most was-afraid-of came-to-pass
---------------------------------------------------
p 172 (86)
1
[He visualizes the movie he saw--only, with Madoka in the lead role.]
Madoka: [sternly] ______
I found out how truly boring BETSUbetsu no kurasu ni natte
you are after we ended up in becoming-different-class
different classes!
atashi anata ga jitsu ni
I you (S) truly/so/very
tsumaranai HITO tte koto ga
boring-person matter (S)
wakatta no!
understood
2
[View pans back to show that Kyousuke is in the lead male role. Madoka
walks away, looking back with a final sneer.>
Madoka:
Farewell. sayo--nara
3
[Back to reality. Kyousuke collapses at his desk.]
Kyousuke:
(It's all over!!) (moo dame da---_!!)
already no-good it-is
4
Komatsu: [smiling]
What happened? do-- shita no?
Are we sad to be separated hikaru-chan to hanarebanare de
from Hikaru-chan? from-Hikaru separated being
____
sabishi-- no kai boku
lonely/sad (?) "me"
5
Kyousuke: [rising in anger]
Leave me alone! hottoite-kure yo!
leave-alone-(favor-to-me)-(command)
6
[Kyousuke looks up to find the entire class staring at him. Komatsu's eyes
have grown large.]
class FX:
shi~~~~n
7
[Kyousuke sits.]
Komatsu:
You're frustrated, is that omae YOKKYUU FUMAN nan ja nai no~~?
it? you frustration what are-not
class FX: ____ ____
zawa zawa
---------------------------------------------------
p 173 (87)
1
[Kyousuke rests his head on his desk, but is surprised to hear...]
Hikaru: [off]
SEMPA-A-AI!! sempa--i!!
2
Hikaru: [off]
Yoo-hoo! Sempai! ya_ho-- sempai!
narration:
That voice... Hikaru-chan? ano KOE... hikaru-chan?
3
[Zoom in at his face. He still rests his head on the desk, and his face has
become flushed.]
narration:
What's this? I'm starting nan da iru hazu no nai
to hear the voice of what is shouldn't-be-here-(nom)
Hikaru-chan, who shouldn't
even be here. Maybe I've hikaru-chan no KOE ga kikoete-kuru
finally... 's voice (S) start-hearing
___
nante ore mo to--to--...
the-likes-of I even at-last/in-the-end
4
[With a wide grin, Komatsu comes by and pats Kyousuke on his shoulder.]
Komatsu:
Your wife's calling you-u-u! okusan ga o-yobi desu yo------_
wife (S) call is
5
[Rather dazedly, Kyousuke raises his head and looks around the room.]
Kyousuke get-up FX: _____
gaba_
---------------------------------------------------
p 174 (88)
1
[His pov of a radiantly joyous Hikaru, waving to him.]
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares in surprise.]
3
[Another view shows that he's looking out the class window, across at another
building. On the same floor of that building, Hikaru stands at the window,
waving and shouting. Kyousuke smiles.]
Hikaru:
I can't believe it... usso-- YUME mitai
It's like a dream. lie dream seems
______
My class is next to yours. SEMPAI no kurasu to o-tonari-san
with-your-class vicinity-of
da nante
is the-likes-of
4
[A view from Hikaru's side.]
Hikaru:
It seems like it's closer MAE yori CHIKAku natta mitai
than before. than-before became-close-by seems
Now we'll always be together! kore de itsu-mo ISSHO desu ne!
now always together be
5
[Kyousuke's new classmates stop and stare out the window.]
girl:
What in the world? nani-- ittai?
class FX: _____
zawa_
6
Komatsu: [grinning widely]
Oh, that's his wife!! a koitsu no okusan nan desu!!
this-guy's wife what is
Kyousuke: [livid]
That's a lie!! uso desu_!!
lie is
---------------------------------------------------
p 175 (89)
1
[Kyousuke sits at his desk and smiles out the window at Hikaru, who hasn't
stopped waving and smiling.]
narration:
But with Hikaru-chan so demo hikaru-chan ga CHIKAku ni iru to
close, everything looks but (S) when-be-close-by
a lot brighter.
KIBUN ga AKAruku natchau naa
feeling (S) brightly become-(finality)
2
Kyousuke: [checking his eye]
Oh, come to think of it, are so-- ieba mo-- NAMIDA de
my sight isn't blurred come-to-think-of-it now by-tears
by tears any more.
boyakete-inai
not-be-blurred
The hayfever seems to have KAFUNSHOU osamatta mitai da na
settled down. hayfever subsided/got-under-control
seems
3
[Rising to his feet, Kyousuke goes to the window to look down...]
Kyousuke:
! !
4
[He looks down at the class assignment notice board, which sits below Hikaru's
class' window. Yes, she's still there at the window, smiling and waving.]
5
Kyousuke: ___
I wonder if there was a ore no NAMAE nani-ka no machigai demo
mistake or something with my name some-mistake-or-something
my name, so that I wasn't
listed in Ayukawa's 1-A i-- kara AYUKAWA no #A# -GUMI ni
class? okay that's-why in-Ayukawa's-A-group
notte-nai ka na--
not-be-getting-on I-wonder
6
[He flashes with the Power.]
narration: _chikara_
All right. I'll play my yoshi totteoki no NOURYOKU
Power card, and use my reserved Power
super-vision!! = play-trump-card
SENRIGAN da!!
second-sight/clairvoyance is
7
[A zoom view of a portion of the student list to class 1-A.]
sign:
1-A #1-A#
1) Ayukawa Mamoru 1) AYUKAWA mamoru
2) Ishimaru Kintarou 2) ISHIMARU KINTAROU
3) Ueda Bakunosuke 3) UEDA BAKUNOSUKE
---------------------------------------------------
p 176 (90)
1
[He grasps the window in relief.]
Kyousuke:
Huh?! "Ayukawa Mamoru..." are_?! AYUKAWA mamoru tte..........
huh (quote)
2
Kyousuke: [smiling]
(O-ohhh! So it was my (na nan daa--_ mimachigai kaa--_!!)
mistake!!) mistake-(A-for-B) (muse)
3
narration:
Th-then, where in the world ji ja AYUKAWA wa ittai
is Ayukawa...?! then (T) in-the-world
doko ni...?!
at-where
4
[He turns at the sound of...]
door FX: _____
gara_
5
[Isolated view of the lower legs and skirt of a girl who's entering the
classroom.]
6
[Kyousuke's face flashes with surprise.]
---------------------------------------------------
p 177 (91)
1
[It's Madoka, who stands at the door, looking about the room.]
2
[Her pov of some chattering classmates.]
class FX: ______ ________
waiwai gayagaya
3
[His pov of her--she brushes her hair back from her eyes and still searches
about the room.]
narration:
I jumped to the wrong KAFUNSHOU no sei de tonda
conclusion because of the hayfever 's fault because-of jumped/flew
hayfever...
kanchigai o shichatta kedo...
mistaken-(finality/regret) but
4
[She spots him, and both smile.]
5
[In fact, he looks positively ecstatic.]
6
[His pov of her as she salutes him smartly.]
caption:
1st-year, Class F. 1-NEN #F# -GUMI
year group
Ayukawa Madoka... AYUKAWA madoka----
narration:
I guess Day One of high KOUKOU DAIICHI HI ME wa
school passes safely...?! high-school the-first day eye/look (T)
BUJI SHUURYOU tte toko ka na...?!
safety/ at-an-end occasion I-wonder
peace/uneventful
---------------------------------------------------