Kimagure Orange Road
"The Jealous Card"
Volume 7, Story 5
WB Volume 4, Story 9
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Thomas Wyatt
Matthew Klippenstein
Jordan Lampe
Ka-Ping Yee
Last revision : 07-03-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 179 (93) are only in the WBs!
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p 179 (93)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka, wearing a skirt and white blouse, stands on a stone walkway, with
her hands in her skirt pockets. Trees along the side cast their shadows
over her.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ ______
The Jealous Card jerasu - ka--do
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Sunlight Filtering Down KOmoreBI
Through Leaves Flickers sunshine-filtering-thru-foliage
onto Stone Steps Shrouded
in a Veil of Magic. yurete-ru ISHIDAN wa
is-flickering stone-steps (T)
MAHOU no tobari ni tsutsumarete
magic 's veil (IO) are-concealed/shrouded
It's As If I Can Almost Hear SUTEKI na sasayaki
Wonderful Whisperings... splendid whisper/murmur/soft-nothings
kikoe -sou...
can-hear looks-as-if
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p 180 (94)
1
[Shot of a boom box.]
song on the radio:
The sight of you from haruka TOOI HI no
behind, on a far-off, far/far-away far/distant day 's
distant day, tenderly
revives me...! ushiro SUGATA na--nte
the-sight-of-one's-back the-likes-of
yasashiku yomigaeru--_
gently/tenderly/kindly revive
2
[Manami's pov of Komatsu and Hatta, who sit and grin. Cherry blossom trees
in bloom stretch their branches behind them. Komatsu extends a bottle of
sake out to her.]
Komatsu:
Go on... T-toss one back! sa sa-- gu gutto itte!
really-hit-one going
Hatta:
Chug it! Chug it! ikki ikki!
in-a-breath
3
[She sits and holds her full glass and smiles.]
Manami: ____
Ha ha... haha...
4
Kyousuke: [incensed]
You jerks! kisamara--_
What are you making my IMOUTO ni nani
sisters drink?!! younger-sister (IO) what
nomasete-ru n da--_!!
are-making-drink (explan)
Hatta: __________
Wah ha ha ha ha. wahahahaha
Komatsu:
Ohh, don't worry, don't a-- KI ni shinai KI ni shinai
worry. not-care/mind/feel/think/worry-about
5
[A shot looking over at the cherry blossom trees.]
Komatsu: [off]
But, despite going to all shikashi sekkaku
the trouble of marching out but with-much-trouble
here, this is all the
cherry blossoms there are? kuriDAshite-kita
began-sallying-forth/trooping-out
no ni kore ppotchi no
even-though this only 's
SAKURA ka yo--
cherry-blossom (?)
Furthermore, they're already shikamo mo-- chiri hajimete-ru ze
starting to scatter! moreover already scatter be-starting !
Hatta: [off]
Do something about it, nan-to-ka shiro yo KASUGA!
Kasuga! somehow-or-other do
Make them bloom more wildly! motto pa--tto sakasero yo!
much-more burst poss-let-bloom
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p 181 (95)
1
Komatsu: _____
Yeah, wildly. so-- so-- pa--tto
Kyousuke: [livid]
Where do you think you omaera koko o doko
are?!! you-(plural) this-place (O) what-place
da to OMOtte n da!!
be thinking-that (explan)
2
[Both guys point their arms at him. The view has panned back to show all
five seated inside the Kasuga apartment, next to a sliding glass door,
through which we can see the cherry blossom trees.]
Komatsu and Hatta: ____
Your place. kimi n CHI
your place/pad/house
Kyousuke:
Hey... ano ne--
___
Would you not make my home KATTE ni ore n CHI o
a meeting place without without-leave/at-one's-pleasure my-place (O)
telling me?
KAIJOU ni shinai de kureru?
meeting-place (IO) without-doing/ give
instead-of-doing
narration:
Having a flower-viewing HITO no IE de HANAMI
at someone else's place... at-person's-home flower-viewing
Sheesh...
TAIKAI to wa mattaku...
grand-meeting (define) sheesh/jeez
3
Komatsu: [putting an arm around Kyousuke]
A little thing like that... sonna chippoke na koto nado
that-kind-of tiny-thing or-such
Forget it, forget it... WASUrete WAsurete
forgetting forgetting
______
I know. Why don't we play so-- da ge--mu yarimasen ka
a game? game not-do (?)
______
A game! ge--mu!
game
Kyousuke: [nervously] _______
What is it? Trumps? nan da torampu ka?
what is cards/trumps (?)
4
Komatsu: [finger to lips]
NO! #NO#!
5
Komatsu: [whispering to Kyousuke]
For this day, I've prepared kono HI no tame ni
a delightful game so that this-day for-the-sake-of/because-of
we can rub up against the
girls. YOUI shita ONNA no KO to
prepared/arranged with-girl
______
SESSHOKU dekiru TANOshii ge--mu o
contact able-to fun game (O)
hitotsu
one/once
I was up all last night kinou boku ga TETSUYA de
designing this, oniisan. yesterday I (S) thruout-night
tsukutta n desu yo oni--san
made/organized/designed (explan)
___ ___ _______
uhi uhi uhihihi
writing at bottom of page:
Japan Music Copyright NIHON ONGAKU CHOSAKUKEN KYOUKAI
Association (issued from) Japan music copyright association
Permit Number 9151824-101
(DE) KYODAKU BANGOU DAI-9151824-101
origin permit number
-GOU
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p 182 (96)
1
Kyousuke: [rising] ___
I'm not playing. ore wa yannai
I (T) not-do
I'd rather nap in my room. HEYA de HIRUNE shite-ta ho-- ga i-- yo
in-room was-napping better
2
[Kyousuke bumps into Komatsu, sending the pieces of paper flying.]
Kyousuke/Komatsu FX: ___
don
3
cards FX: _____
para_
card: [top]
Give either the person on SAYUU dochira-ka no HITO no
the right or the left a the-right-and-left either-one 's person's
kiss on the cheek. ____
hoppe ni kisu o suru
on-cheek kiss
card: [bottom]
Pinch the person on the left. HIDARI no HITO o tsuneru
left 's person (O) pinch
4
Kyousuke: ______
W-wait a sec. What are chi chotto mate nan da sono ka--do wa
those cards? wait-a-sec what are those-cards (T)
Komatsu: [false smile]
Ohh, nothing, nothing. a-- nan demo nai nan demo nai
5
[Kyousuke turns at the sound of...]
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
Komatsu:
There she is...! sora kita...!
there came
6
[Hikaru, in her "St. Francis College" sweatshirt, stands at the open door.
Incidentally, Hatta is wearing a "USC" shirt.]
Hikaru:
Hello. konnichi wa
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan. hikaru-chan
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p 183 (97)
1
Komatsu: [elbowing Kyousuke] ______
There. Now everything's sa kore de mentsu ga
square. with-this/now face/honor (S)
sorotta na
perfect/even/equal
You may thank me! KANSHA shiro yo
express-gratitude
I invited her because I omae ni sabishi-- OMOi o sasenai
couldn't let you feel lonely! you (IO) sad/lonely feeling (O) not-let
thought
___
tame ni ore ga SASOtte-yatta
for-sake-of I (S) invited-her
n da zo
(explan) !!
Hikaru: [off]
I hope I'm not intruding. o-jama shima--su
2
[Hikaru pushes in a reluctant Madoka. She's wearing a sweatshirt and
overalls.]
Hikaru:
Oh, and here's Madoka-san, a madoka-san mo do--zo
too. too if-you-please
Go in, go in. haitte haitte
entering
3
[Kyousuke facial portrait--surprise.]
4
[His pov of the 2 girls.]
Hikaru:
Komatsu-san said there KOMATSU-san ga HANAMI yaru
was going to be flower- (S) do-flower-viewing
viewing, so I invited her.
tte yu-- kara SASOtchatta
say-that that's-why invited-(finality)
5
[As Hikaru chats with Kurumi in the background, Madoka talks to Kyousuke.]
Madoka: ______
There's no refusing the hikaru no pe--su ni noserareru to
Hikaru Express. by-Hikaru's-pace if-taken-in
kotowari-kirenakutte
can't-refuse
Kyousuke: ______
Ha ha ha. hahaha
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p 184 (98)
1
Hikaru: ______
Whaaat?! A game?! e~~_ ge--mu?!
2
[She plops Kyousuke down to sit on the floor.]
Hikaru:
Sounds like fun! Sempai, omoshiroku--_ sempai yarimasho!
let's play! delightful shall-do
3
[Everyone gathers around.]
Komatsu: ______
The rules are simple. ru--ru wa kantan
rules (T) easy
First of all, everyone sits mazu ZEN'IN
in a circle. first-(of-all) all-the-members
WA ni natte suwarimasu
becoming-circle sit-down
4
Komatsu: [smiling]
Ah, Manami-chan, Kurumi-chan, a manami-chan ya kurumi-chan wa
sit between us guys. and (T)
___
ore-tachi OTOKO no AIDA ni haitte
we between-guys (IO) entering
5
[Kyousuke looks across at Komatsu, who's failing to hide a sneaky grin.]
Kyousuke:
? ?
6
Komatsu: [holding up some cards]
Then I'll deal out these soshitara watakushi ga YOUI shita
six cards that I prepared I (S) prepared
to everyone. ______
kono 6 MAI no ka--do o minasan ni
these-6-cards (O) everyone (IO)
kubarimasu
deal-out
7
Komatsu:
This is embarrassing. yowatta naa
was-at-a-loss/perplexed/embarrassed
______
We've become one card ka--do ga ICHI-MAI TArinaku
short. cards (S) one- not-sufficient
natchatta
became-(finality/regret)
Madoka: [matter-of-factly]
I'll pass. atashi wa i-- yo
I (T) fine
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p 185 (99)
1
Komatsu: ______
When I've finished dealing, kubari oetara ka--do o mekuri
turn the card over and dealing when-finish turn-over-card
you'll each do what's
written there. kakarete-iru koto o sorezore
was-written thing (O) respectively
okonaimasu
do/perform
Hikaru:
In other words, this is yo-- suru ni UNDOUKAI no
an idea you borrowed from in-short/to-sum-up an-athletic-meet 's
the sprints at an athletic
meet. KARIMONO KYOUSOU mitai na
borrowed-thing foot-race seems
mono ne
thing
2
Komatsu:
Then... After that. de wa... sore kara
then after-that
3
[From behind, Madoka takes the cards from Komatsu.]
Madoka:
Well then, I'll deal for dore kubatte-ageru yo
you. well-then/now deal-(favor-to-you)
Madoka FX: ____
hyoi
4
Komatsu: [wincing]
(She ended up dealing.) (kubararechatta)
kubararete-shimatta
was-dealing-(finality/regret)
5
[A diagram of who sits where. In clockwise order, it's Manami, Komatsu,
Kurumi, Hikaru, Kyousuke and Hatta.]
caption:
Special Diagram--Relative ICHI KANKEI TOKUBETSU ZUKAI
Positions position relation special diagram
6
[Kurumi and Hikaru read their cards. Komatsu winces as he hears...]
Hikaru:
What's this? Give the nani nani-- MIGI futari
second person on your right 2-people
right a pounding?
ME no HITO o buttataku?
eye/pov 's person (O) pound/beat-up-on
Komatsu: _____
giku_
7
Hikaru: [leaning over--with a smile--to belt Komatsu]
SORRY! gomen ne--_
Hikaru FX: ________
pashi--n
[Komatsu is sent reeling.]
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p 186 (100)
1
[Manami and Kyousuke read their cards. Komatsu flinches as he hears...]
Kyousuke: ____
Give the person across from mukai no HITO ni DENKI anma
you an electric massage. opposite-person (IO) electricity massage
Komatsu:
giku_
Manami:
Pinch the person on the left. HIDARI no HITO o tsuneru
left 's person (O) pinch
2
[Kyousuke grabs Komatsu by the legs and raises them high and apart. He then
shoves his foot in Komatsu's crotch. Meanwhile, Manami pinches Komatsu
on his cheek. Both Kasugas are highly amused.]
Komatsu:
Gyaaaaaaa! gya~~~~~_
Manami:
Sorry. gomen ne
Manami FX: _______
gyu~~~~
3
[Hatta gives Kyousuke a shoulder massage.]
Hatta:
Give the person on the right MIGI no HITO no KATA o momu
a shoulder rub. right 's person 's massage-shoulders
Hatta FX: ________
momimomi
Kyousuke:
Ah, that feels good. a-- i-- KIMOchi
good feeling
4
Komatsu:
Give the 2nd person on the MIGI futari ME o kusuguru!
right a tickle! right 2-people pov (O) tickle
Hatta:
Oo-wah. Ha-ha-ha. uwahahaha
Komatsu FX: _____ _____
kocho kocho
5
Kurumi: [reading her card]
Give either the person on SAYUU dochira-ka no HITO no
the right or the left a the-right-and-left either-one 's person's
kiss on the cheek... ____
hoppe ni kisu o suru...
on-cheek kiss
6
[Kurumi's pov of Hikaru, Kyousuke, Madoka and Manami--who silently stare
back at her.]
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p 187 (101)
1
[Kurumi weighs her options. On one side, Komatsu smiles and points at his
cheek. On the other side, Hikaru looks back.]
2
[Kurumi makes the only possible choice.]
Hikaru: [smiling, one eye closed]
Oh! ara
Kurumi:[eyes closed]
This way's fine! kotchi ga i-- ya!
this-way (S) good/fine
3
Komatsu: [wincing]
(Despite the fact I'd thought (sekkaku kubaru JUMBAN o
of taking the trouble to taking-special-trouble deal order (O)
stack the deck, my plans
were foiled...!!) KANGAete-ta no ni
had-thought-of even-though
BANkuruwase daa~~~~_!!)
an-upset be
4
Kyousuke: [burning with anger]
(Th-that guy! I thought (a aitsu--_ yappari
as much... that-guy! just-as-I-thought
ko-- yu-- koto datta no ka
this-kind-of thing was (muse)
____
Given half a chance, this suki araba IMOUTO ni
lech tries to move in on chance younger-sisters (IO)
my sisters.) if-have/if-exist
______ _____
semaro-- to suru sukebe na yatsu)
try-to-draw-near lecherous fellow
5
Kyousuke: [in horror]
(Ah!! In that case, if (a_!! to yu-- koto wa
Hikaru-chan or I draw that in-that-case
card next time...) ______ ___
moshi KONDO ano ka--do o ore ka
if next-time that-card (O) I or
hikaru-chan ga hi--tara......)
(S) if-draw
6
Hikaru: [deep in thought] ______
(If I draw that card, Sempai's (ano ka--do o hikeba SEMPAI to...)
the one I'll...) that-card (O) if-draw with-Sempai
7
[Madoka watches.]
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p 188 (102)
1
[Kyousuke worries.]
2
Komatsu: [wincing]
Then, shall we try it one ja mo-- ichido itte-miyo-- kaa
more time? then one-more-time shall-try-and-go (?)
Komatsu:
Shit. This time for sure. kuso-- KONDO koso
shit/damn next-time indeed
Komatsu cards FX: ____ ____
cha_ cha_
Hatta:
Wait! MAte!
3
Hatta: ___
L-let me cut that too! o ore ni mo KIrasero
by-me too let-cut
Hikaru:
Me too! atashi mo!
4
Komatsu: [holding out the deck]
Then sure, in that case, just ja maa ZEN'IN KIru to yu-- koto de...
everyone cut... all-members cut for-that-matter
5
[Madoka deals out the cards.]
6
[Komatsu, Kurumi and Kyousuke hold their cards face down. Komatsu glares.]
narration:
And then, with everyone's soshite sorezore no OMOWAKU ga
thoughts mingling together and/then respectively 's thought/purpose
inside...
KOUSAKU suru NAKA...
crossing/mingling-with-each-other inside
7
[Hatta and Manami hold their cards.]
narration: ______
...the fateful second round UMMEI no DAI 2 raundo ga HAJImatta!
began! destiny/fate 's 2nd-round (S) began
8
[Hikaru smiles at the back of her card.]
9
[Madoka watches without expression.]
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p 189 (103)
1
[Isolated shot of the cherry blossoms.]
narration:
But... tokoro-ga------
Komatsu: [off]
It's mine...!! itadaki--_!!
Hatta: [off]
Oh no...! ya da~~_
Komatsu: [off]
Don't run away!! nigeru na!!
2
[Komatsu belts Hatta on the cheek.]
narration: ____ ______
The problematic kiss MONDAI no kisu ka--do wa
card... matter/question 's kiss-card (T)
Komatsu FX: _______
supa~~n
3
[Hatta again massages Kyousuke's shoulders.]
Hatta FX: ____ ____
momi momi
Hatta cheek FX: ____ ____
hiri hiri
Kyousuke:
Ahh. a~~
4
[Manami gets a kick out of her card.]
Manami FX: _____ _____
kocho kocho
Kyousuke: _______ _________
Ooo-ha-ha-ha. uhahaha ihihihihi
E-hee-hee-hee-hee.
5
narration:
...somehow, didn't quickly naze da ka nakanaka dete-konai!
emerge! somehow -easily not-start-to-emerge
Kurumi: ____
Give the person across from mukai no HITO ni DENKI anma!
you an electric massage! opposite-person (IO) electricity massage
Hatta: _____
biku_
6
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Hatta: [off]
Gyaaaaaaa! gya~~~~_
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p 190 (104)
1
narration: ___
Then there only remained soshite nokoru wa ore to hikaru-chan
Hikaru-chan and me! and/then remain (T) me and
dake ni natta!
only became
[The two sit side-by-side, holding their cards face down.]
2
Hikaru: [radiant smile]
Now, it's just Sempai and me ato wa SEMPAI to atashi dake ne
left. remainder (T) and I only
Hikaru FX: _____
niko_
narration:
If Hikaru-chan drew the card hikaru-chan ga hi--tara
she'll naturally head for (S) if-draw
me!! ___
TOUZEN ore ni kuru!!
naturally come-to-me
3
Kyousuke:
(For that matter...) (to yu-- koto wa......)
narration:
If I drew it, there's no moshi ore ga hi--tara masaka
way I'm gonna kiss Hatta... if I (S) if-draw impossible
____
HATTA ni kisu suru wake ni wa ikanai
Hatta (IO) kiss can't-very-well
shi
and-besides
[Hatta studies a spot across the room.]
4
[Hikaru smiles and crawls towards Kyousuke.]
Hikaru slip-close FX: ___ ___
tsu tsu...
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
5
Kyousuke: ____
(I'm doomed to kiss her either (dotchi ni koronde mo kisu wa HISSHI!!)
way!!) falling-either-way kiss (T) inevitable
6
Hikaru: [tossing the card aside]
This is already decided. kore wa mou KImari ne
this-(one) (T) already decide
7
Kurumi: [picking up the card]
Huh?! are--_!
falling card FX: _____
hira_
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p 191 (105)
1
Kurumi:
The writing on this says kore ni wa
"Pinch the person on the this-(one) (IO) (contrast)
left."
HIDARI no HITO o tsuneru tte
left 's person (O) pinch (quote)
kaite-aru yo
write-(resulting-state)
2
[Hikaru, her arms wrapped around the neck of Kyousuke, pauses. Both Hikaru's
and Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]
3
Kyousuke: [looking at the back of his card]
Then... ja...
narration:
I-I'm...!! o ore da...!!
I am
[Hikaru waits in wide-eyed anticipation.]
4
[His pov of Madoka, who stands with gaze down.]
narration:
It would be a little hikaru-chan ni kisu sareru nara
better if Hikaru-chan were by-Hikaru am-kissed if-it-is
to kiss me, but...
madashimo
(a-little)-better/rather-(but...)
5
narration: ___
For me to kiss Hikaru-chan AYUKAWA no MAE de ore ga
in front of Ayukawa...! in-front-of-Ayukawa I (S)
____
hikaru-chan ni kisu suru nan-te......!
(IO) kiss the-likes-of
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p 192 (106)
1
[He looks at his card.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? are?
2
Kyousuke:
It's blank! masSHIRO da!
pure-white is
everyone:
EHHHH?! e~~~~_
3
Hikaru: [unhappily]
Why-y-y?! nande--_
Komatsu: [wincing]
Who did it? dare da yo--
who is-it
Who switched the cards?! irekaeta no wa?!
replaced-A-with-B
Just when it was getting omoshiroi tokoro datta no ni
interesting. interesting place was even-though
4
Kyousuke:
(Anyway, it's saved me!) (tonikaku kono BA wa TASUkatta!)
anyway this-situation (T) saved
Kyousuke: ___
ho_
5
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
narration:
After that, Komatsu and the sono ato KOMATSU-tachi wa
others cheered up and set that later (and-assoc) (T)
out on a sightseeing trip
to view the cherry blossoms IKIOi ga tsuichatte
at night. (S) (tsuite-shimatte)
encourage/cheer-up/enliven-(finality)
YOZAKURA
enjoy-night-viewing-of-cherry-blossoms
KENBUTSU ni dekaketa no deshita
sightseeing (IO) set-out were
6
[Inside, Kyousuke and Madoka sit at the counter. Madoka is in her ABCB
apron.]
Kyousuke: [staring at a card]
But... It's strange. demo... hen na no
but strange
7
Kyousuke: ____ ______
(Why did a blank card come (do--shite ano kisu ka--do no kawari ni
out in place of that kiss why that-kiss-card 's in-place-of
card? ______
HAKUSHI no ka--do ga haitte-ta
white-paper 's card (S) did-come-out
n darou
(poss-explan)
If they WERE switched, who irekaeta to sureba ittai
on earth...?) replaced-A-with-B if-do in-the-world
DARE ga......
who (S)
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p 193 (107)
1
Madoka: [studying him]
What are you looking at nani o MIREN ga mashiku mite n no yo
with such regret? what (O) regretfully/ seeing/
with-a-bad-grace looking-at
2
Madoka:
Did you want to that much? sonna ni shitakatta no?
that-(much) wanted-to-do
____
KISS? kisu
kiss
Kyousuke pratfall FX: _____
zuru_
3
[He zips over and yells in her face. She flinches, wide-eyed, and blushes.]
Kyousuke:
Th-that's not it! chi chigau yo--_
___
I merely wondered who tada ore wa DARE ga HAKUSHI to
switched it for the blank merely I (T) who (S) white-paper
card...!!
irekaeta no ka sore o...!!
switched (?) that-(one) (O)
4
[Isolated shot of the other 5 cards, which lie scattered face-up on the
counter.]
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p 194 (108)
1
[His pov of her. She gives him a mysterious look.]
Madoka:
If... If that person was moshi... sore ga atashi dattara
me, what would you do, Mr. if that-(one) (S) I if-was
Police Detective?
do-- suru? KEIJI-san
what do police-detective-(hon)
2
[Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]
3
Kyousuke: [seriously]
Arrest you! TAIHO shimasu!
4
[She smiles.]
5
[Kyousuke thinks it over...]
narration:
A-Ayukawa...? N-no way! a AYUKAWA ga...? ma masaka ne!
(S) impossible
6
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
.....I wish! ..........nanchatte!
7
[She gives him another mysterious smile.]
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p 195 (109)
1
Madoka: [tossing her hair back]
Arrest... And then what tsukamaete...... do-- suru no?
would you do? arresting/apprehending what do
2
[Overhead view looking down on the two. Kyousuke has regained his look of
surprise.]
3
[His pov of her. Mysterious smile still intact.]
4
[He blushes and looks embarrassed.]
Kyousuke:
Th-then I'd... I'd punish so sorya... yappari o-SHIOKI o
you, as expected... that/it after-all punish/sentence (O)
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
Kyousuke:
What am I saying? nani itte n da?
what saying (explan)
5
[She looks at him...]
6
Madoka:
What would that punishment o-SHIOKI tte nani?
be? punish/sentence (quote) what
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1
Kyousuke:
Th-that would... so sore wa...
2
Madoka: [gazing into his eyes]
Something like what was sakki no KAMI ni
written on that paper back a-little-while-ago 's paper (IO)
then?
kaite-atta yo-- na koto?
was-written looks-like thing
3
[Kyousuke blushes deeply and his eyes grow wide.]
4
[She leans in closer.]
Madoka FX:
su_
5
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
Kyousuke FX: _____
doki_
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p 197 (111)
1
Madoka:
If that's the punishment, o-SHIOKI nara motto KOUKA-TEKI
aren't there more effective punish if-it-is more effective
spots?
tokoro ga aru n ja nai?
place (S) exist (neg/explan)
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares back.]
3
Madoka: [leaning in REAL close]
For example... tatoeba...
4
[They stare at each other in surprise when they hear...]
Hikaru: [off]
Good evening! komban wa--_
door FX: _____
karan
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p 198 (112)
1
[Overhead view. Somehow, Madoka is now behind the counter, washing dishes.
Kyousuke is seated over at a table and he waves at the gang coming in.]
Hikaru:
Just as I thought, here you yappari koko ni ita----_!!
were...!! just-as-I-thought at-here was
gang FX:
zorozoro
2
Komatsu: [holding a sprig of cherry blossoms]
A gift! o-miyage!
3
Komatsu: [grinning]
In a park in a neighboring tonari MACHI no KOUEN wa
city were late-blooming in-vicinity city 's park (T)
cherry blossoms in full
flower, so... OSOZAki no SAKURA ga
late-blooming cherry-blossom (S)
MANKAI datta n de
in-full-bloom were ('cause)
Here's one! IPPON!
Kyousuke:
Hey hey hey! kora kora kora!
4
Komatsu: [raising a bottle of sake]
Well... sa--tte to
______
To end it all, how about we shimekukuri ni hitotsu paa--tto
get wild? to-a-finish one get-wild
ikimasho-- kaa
shall-go (?)
Komatsu: ______
wahaha
5
[Everyone parties in ABCB. Hikaru leans towards Kyousuke, who flinches back
and sweats. Madoka watches over her shoulder from her position behind the
counter.]
group FX:
wai wai
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p 199 (113)
1
[Madoka prepares to launch a paper airplane.]
2
[It lands point first on the top of Kyousuke's head.]
paper airplane FX: ______
kotsun
bump/rap-on-head
3
[Rubbing his head, he looks around the room.]
Kyousuke FX:
kyoro kyoro
4
[Having unfolded the airplane, he reads it.]
Kyousuke:
? ?
5
paper: [partial view]
Give either the person on SAYUU dochira- no
the right or the left a the-right-and-left either-one 's
kiss on the cheek... ____
HITO no hoppe kisu o suru...
person's on-cheek kiss
6
[Exterior shot of ABCB. In double-insets, Kyousuke ponders and Madoka smiles
merrily.]
Kyousuke:
Hmmmm? u~~~~mu?
narration:
Madam Criminal, what on earth HANNIN-san ittai do-- yu--
did you intend to commit? criminal-(hon) in-the-world what-kind-of
--Police Detective
tsumori datta no desu ka?
intention was (explan) (?)
KEIJI
police-detective
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