Kimagure Orange Road "The Happening with 'H'!" Volume 7, Story 7 WB Volume 4, Story 11 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (20 Jun 1992) Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Thomas Wyatt Matthew Klippenstein Jordan Lampe Last revision : 07-03-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 223 (137) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 223 (137)--TITLE PAGE [Yow! As Kyousuke watches from behind her, Madoka stands--facing us--and pulls off her shirt, showing almost-but-not-quite-enough lower breast to be called topless...] MAIN TITLE (at top) _etchi_ _________ The Happening with 'H'! #H# de hapuningu! with-"H"-(i.e.,-hentai) happening = perverted SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ ______ A Naughty Pose That's Almost YUUWAKU suresure ikenai po--zu Seducing--I'll Show It, But temptation/ close-to bad/naughty-pose Only to You. a-seduction misete mo ii no even-tho-show/let-see okay (nom) anata nara you if-it-is --------------------------------------------------- p 224 (138) 1 [A sudden spring breeze lifts the skirt of a cute girl.] girl: Kya! kya_! 2 [View pans back to show Kyousuke watching the girl as she walks down the opposite sidewalk.] narration: Spring is here and... HARU ga kite... spring (S) coming girl: What an awful wind. ya na KAZE ne unpleasant wind 3 [Kyousuke's eyes grow large.] narration: It had become warm and... attakaku naru to... warm become and 4 [Quite spaced out, he barely notices Komatsu waving a hand in front of his face.] Komatsu hand FX: ___ ___sa_ sa_ Kyousuke: Huh? n? 5 Komatsu: [turning around to look] You're losing it... boke--ttoshiku sa tte going-senile/blank-look Did you see something good?! nani-ka omoshiroi mono demo something delightful-thing or-something mieta no ka na~~~~?! saw I-wonder narration: Like butterflies newly sanagi kara kaetta cho--cho emerged from their cocoons, from-chrysalis/pupa changed butterfly the girls, too... no yo-- ni ONNA no KO mo... like-a girls too Have become beautiful... kirei ni natte... beautiful becoming Kyousuke: Not really. BETSU ni 6 [Grinning, Komatsu tries to show an open book to Kyousuke.] Komatsu: By the way, I finally bought tokoro-de tsui ni KAtchatta this. by-the-way finally bought-(finality) __________ _____ Look. It's a picture miro yo kono pichipichi gyaru collection of beautiful look these-young-&-lively-gals gals. SHASHIN -SHUU picture collection Kyousuke: [irritated, walking away] That's nice! i-- yo! --------------------------------------------------- p 225 (139) 1 Komatsu: [looking in the book] Hey. Doesn't this girl look are kono KO AYUKAWA ni nite like Ayukawa? this-girl (IO) resembling ne-- ka (rhet) (?) book: [bilingual title] __ _____ The 'H'!! <= Hentai = za etchi!! #THE H# perverted> [Kyousuke stops short...] 2 [...and grabs the book out of Komatsu's hands.] Kyousuke FX: __ ___ pa pa_ Kyousuke: WHERE?! dore! 3 [The picture in question. A woman sits and poses in her bikini bottoms. Her face bears a slight resemblance to Madoka.] 4 [Kyousuke shoves the book back into Komatsu's hands.] Kyousuke: I-it doesn't look anything ni nite-nai yo----_ like her...! not-be-resembling ______ Such a dirty pose. konna sukebe na kakkou this-kind-of lecherous appearance/form Komatsu: Hmm... You think so-o? so-- ka naa I think it looks like her. nite-ru to OMOu n da is-resembling think-that (explan) But... kedo na--_ but 5 [A passing teacher spots Komatsu holding the book--its title plainly visible.] sensei: ____ Hey, you kids...?! oya kimi-tachi wa...?! you (and-assoc) (T) Komatsu: Sensei!! SENSEI!! Komatsu FX: _____ biku_ 6 [Komatsu, ever the quick-thinker, turns and shoves the book into the arms of a surprised Kyousuke...] 7 [...and runs off, waving.] Komatsu: See ya, Kasuga!! ja na-- KASUGA!! I leave the rest to you... ato wa yoroshiku-- remainder (T) leave-to-you [Holding the book behind his back, Kyousuke sweats and stammers.] Kyousuke: Ah. No... Uh... ha ie... sono... narration: ______ That jerk... ano yaro--... sensei: What's that book...? nan da ne sono HON wa... what is that-book (T) --------------------------------------------------- p 226 (140) 1 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 2 [Full-length portrait of Manami. She stands in a blouse and tiny skirt, one foot raised behind her, studying the skirt.] Manami: Maybe this was a bit short. chotto mijikakatta ka na a-bit was-short I-wonder 3 [Kyousuke, passing the open door to his sisters' room, catches sight of them in their tiny skirts.] Kurumi: _______ That's cute, Manami-chan. kawai-- manami-chan Hey, hey! How's mine look? ne_ ne_ atashi wa doo? I (T) how Manami: I think it's okay. i-- n ja nai 4 [Tight shot of Manami's tiny skirt.] 5 [Pov shifts. We see Kyousuke out in the hall as Manami is unbuttoning her blouse. Both twins blush as they spot him walking by out there.] Manami and Kurumi: ___ Ah! ha_ 6 [Embarrassed, he runs down the hall as the twins stick their heads out of their room in anger.] Manami and Kurumi: _______ H! etchi-- narration: Oh yeah. so-- iya There were two butterflies uchi ni mo cho--cho ga 2 -HIKI in our home, too! at-home too butterfly (S) ita n da kke! there-were (explan) (muse) --------------------------------------------------- p 227 (141) 1 [He lies on his bed and studies the open book.] Kyousuke: But... shikashi... ______ How dirty...! nante sukebe na... how! lecherous 2 [He blushes and shuts the book.] Kyousuke: This is bad! ikan ikan! Now of all times. yori ni yotte kore kara of-all-(others) from-now-on When I'm going to Ayukawa's AYUKAWA no IE ni itte ISSHO ni house to study with her. to-Ayukawa's-house going together BENKYOU shiyo-- to yu-- TOKI ni shall-study say-that occasion (IO) book pages FX: _____ pasa_ 3 [An apparent flashback of Madoka, in school uniform.] narration: Instead of panicking at the CHUUTOU-BU no TOKI mitai ni last minute like you did jr-high-section 's time like (IO) back in junior high, why ______ don't we start studying from tesuto MAE girigiri ni natte now? before-test deadline becoming awateru yori IMA no uchi kara than-be-in-a-hurry now 's within from BENKYOU shitokanai? po 5 [Water pours on his head.] water FX: _____ sha-- 6 [View pans back to show him sticking his head under the bathroom faucet.] faucet knob FX: ____ ____ kyu_ kyu_ --------------------------------------------------- p 228 (142) 1 [He stares into the mirror.] narration: If I just look into the KAGAMI ni mukatte ko-- shite mirror and hypnotize myself in-mirror looking doing-like-this using the Power... _chikara_ NOURYOKU de JIKO ANJI o with-Power autosuggestion (O) kaketokeba... (kakete-okeba) if-set-(for-future-sake) Kyousuke: Become serious. Become majime ni na--re majime ni na--re serious. serious become 2 [Kurumi appears at the door, blushing and holding the H book.] Kurumi: Wowww! Oniichan was hiding uwa----_ oni--chan konna HON and looking at this sort of this-kind-of-book book. kakurete mite-ta n da hiding was-looking (explan) How 'H'!! #H# ne--_!! Kyousuke: [still staring in the mirror] Become serious... majime ni na--re.......... 3 Kyousuke: Shut up!! urusai na----_!! 4 Kyousuke: [turning back to the mirror] Become 'H'. Become 'H'. #H# ni na--re #H# ni na--re 5 Kyousuke: Become... WHAT?! #H# ni... are_? 6 narration: Ah! Oh no!! ha_ mazui!! If I keep this up, I'll kono mama de wa become 'H'!! with-the-way-this-is (T) #H# ni natte-shimau!! becoming-'H'-(finality/regret) 7 [He stands at the mirror.] 8 [View zooms in to show that his eyes are glassy.] --------------------------------------------------- p 229 (143) 1 [He turns away from the mirror in relief.] Kyousuke: Somehow... It seems like nantoka... DAIJOUBU mitai da na it's okay. somehow all-right seems Kyousuke: fuu 2 [Heading down the hall with textbooks under his arm, he passes his sisters who page thru the H book.] Kyousuke: Well... I'm going out. sate... itte-kimasu Kurumi: Oh no! Look, look! ya da--_ mite mite honto ni Really... looking really So 'H'! #H# ne! 3 Kyousuke: ('H'!!) (#H#!!) Kyousuke FX: _____ pita_ 4 [Kyousuke turns around, a sinister grin on his face.] Kyousuke FX: ________ nita~~~~ 5 [From behind, he flips up Kurumi's skirt.] Kyousuke: There! hore_! Kurumi skirt FX: _____ basa_ Kurumi: AH! a_ 6 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building. In Kurumi's speech bubble is a facial portrait of her, steaming mad. In Kyousuke's speech bubble he winces in pain.] Kurumi: What are you doing?! nani sun no yo koitsu--_!! You jerk!! what doing FX: ____ ____ ____ dosu boka gefu Kyousuke: Gya! Eee! gya hi~~_ 7 [Walking at a crosswalk, Kyousuke rubs his injured cheek and ponders...] Kyousuke: ____ ___ Huh? Did I do something...? hate? ore... nani-ka shita kke... I something did (?) Kyousuke: That hurts. itetetetete --------------------------------------------------- p 230 (144) 1 [Full-length portrait of Madoka in a loose cutoff shirt and small skirt. She smiles while holding a basket of laundry--it's her undies...] 2 [Exterior shot of the upper levels of the Ayukawa residence.] doorbell FX: ___ _____ pin po--n 3 Madoka: [smiling] Welcome. irasshai 4 [He blushes.] Kyousuke FX: ___ po_ narration: This again... kore wa mata...... this-(one) (T) again 5 [His tight pov of her sexy, sashaying rear as she walks ahead of him.] Madoka: Nobody's home now. IMA DARE-mo inai n da now nobody -here (explan) Please come in! doozo! 6 [He stands rooted at the doorstep, blushing fiercely.] narration: That isn't a butterfly you sonjo sokora no cho--cho can find just anywhere! thereabouts 's butterfly that-her ja nai ya! is-not Kyousuke: .......... Thank you. .......... o-jama shimasu --------------------------------------------------- p 231 (145) 1 [Smiling at him, she sets down her basket on the living room table...] Madoka: Hang on a sec. chotto MAtte-te ne a-bit be-waiting I'm in the middle of doing sentaku NAKA na no my laundry. washing/laundry within 2 [...and leaves the room.] Kyousuke: O-okay... u un...... 3 [He stares at her undies...] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_ 4 [...and again visualizes Madoka in the pose of the girl in the H book.] Kyousuke FX: ___ po_ ????> moa moa 5 [He shakes his head vigorously to snap himself out of it.] narration: No no! ikan ikan! Kyousuke: ___ (I came to study.) (ore wa BENKYOU shi ni kita n da) I (T) to-study came (explan) Kyousuke FX: ____ ____ buru buru 6 [A news telecast is about to begin...] TV: _______ It's time for the HNK news. #HNK# no nyu--su no JIKAN desu HNK-News (S) time is 7 TV: [off] At our HNK... waga #HNK# de wa...... our at-HNK (T) 8 [Kyousuke turns to look at the basket of undies, a dark and sinister grin painted on his face.] Kyousuke FX: _____ nitaa --------------------------------------------------- p 232 (146) 1 [He picks up a small pair of panties, and looks at it wide-eyed...] 2 [...and then wears it on his head.] Kyousuke FX: ____ kapo 3 [A silly grin fills his face...] Kyousuke FX: _____ niko_ 4 [...and he cavorts about the room, tossing undies in the air.] Kyousuke: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ he_ he_ he_ he_ he_ he_ 5 [He appears to snap out of it.] Kyousuke: Ah! ha 6 [Madoka enters the room, but she plays with her hair and her gaze is downcast.] Madoka: Thanks for waiting! omachidoo--_ Kyousuke FX: giku_ 7 [His pov of her. She still hasn't looked up at him.] narration: ___ Urghh! Wh-what am I gie----_ na nani yatte n da ore..... doing...? ! what doing (explan) I 8 [She looks up in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 233 (147) 1 Madoka: [looking at the table] Oh... I was sure I left it are... TASHIka kono hen ni somewhere here. certain in-this-neighborhood Kyousuke: [forced smile] Ah! What is it? ha_ nani ka 2 Madoka: No, it's nothing. iya nan demo nai (Strange... (okashi-- naa strange After doing the laundry, I sentaku shite koko ni thought I'd put it here...) doing-laundry at-here oitoita hazu na no ni) (oite-oita) likelihood even-though left-(for-future-sake) Kyousuke: (Oh no.) (ikene) 3 [Shot of the washing machine, a pile of underwear sitting on top of it.] narration: I shouldn't have sent it yoke-- na tokoro ni TObashichatta there... unnecessary place (IO) flew-(finality/ regret) mitai..... seem laundry machine FX: ____ ____ goun goun 4 [Shot of the two studying at a table out under the veranda.] 5 [Kyousuke thinks hard.] narration: ___ For a while now... ore... sakki kara I for-some-time When I've come to my senses, KI ga tsuitara I've been slapped by my when-notice/when-come-to-one's-senses sister, or been wearing Ayukawa's panties on my IMOUTO ni hippatakarete-tari head... by-younger-sister be-slapped/thrashed-(or) _______ AYUKAWA no panti-- kabutte-tari 's panties wearing-on-head-(or) 6 [Madoka watches him as he stares up at the sky.] narration: I wonder what on earth's ittai kore wa going on? in-the-world this-(one) (T) do-- yu-- koto na n darou what-kind-of-thing is (poss-explan) Kyousuke: (Hmm...) (u--mu...) --------------------------------------------------- p 234 (148) 1 Madoka: _______ Why are you so spaced out? nani poke--tto shite-ru no what be-looking-blank 2 Kyousuke: ______ Oh, nothing... Ha ha ha. a iya...... hahaha Madoka: [leaning over to point at his textbook] And... This 'X'... de..... koko no #x# ga this-place 's x (S) 3 [His pov of her. Her loose top falls to show the straps of the tanktop she wears underneath, and also some cleavage.] 4 Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin 5 Kyousuke: [blushing and fuming] "The vanity of all things." SHIKISOKU-ZEKUU SHIKISOKU-ZEKUU "The vanity of all things." the-vanity-of-all-things-(a-Buddhist- concept) crows-in-background FX: kaa_ 6 Kyousuke: ____ Oh no! I ran out of lead. a ikene! shin ga kirechatta lead (S) terminated- (finality/regret) Kyousuke mechanical pencil FX: _____ _____ kachi kachi 7 Madoka: If 'H' is okay, you can use #H# de yokattara do--zo mine. by-'H' if-good if-you-please --------------------------------------------------- p 235 (149) 1 [Her elbow knocks her eraser off the table.] Madoka elbow FX: ___ kon eraser FX: ____ poro 2 [Standing to look for it, she bends over, flashing a view of her panties. Kyousuke, with a dark grin, bends low for a better view.] Madoka: Oh no. a ikenai Kyousuke FX: ______ niyari 3 [His pov of her rear--he must be crouching to get a better look.] 4 [Tight shot of a hand picking up the eraser.] 5 [Holding the eraser between thumb and forefinger, Kyousuke lies flat on the floor and grins up Madoka's skirt.] Madoka: How strange. hen ne-- I wonder where it could have doko itta no kashira gone? where gone (nom) I-wonder Kyousuke: Yeah... so-- da ne _________ Oo-hee-hee-hee-hee. uhihihihi --------------------------------------------------- p 236 (150) 1 [Blushing, he snaps out of it.] narration: ___ AH!?! ha_?! 2 [Madoka looks back over her shoulder at him.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: doki_ Madoka FX: ji--_ 3 [He pretends to search.] Kyousuke: ____ ____ Le-e-et's see... Eraser, e--ttoo KEshigomu KEshigomu eraser. let's-see eraser Madoka: What are you holding in your sono TE ni motte-ru no wa hand?! in-that-hand be-holding (nom) (T) naani?! what 4 Kyousuke: Oh! Ohhh! H-here it is! a_re--_ na na--n da! ___ _________ aha ahahahaha 5 [She gives him a look of non-amusement.] 6 narration: ___ I... ore... When I hear the letter "H", #H# to yu-- KOTOBA o kiku to without realizing it... (quote) word (O) if-hear shiranai uchi ni... not-know within (IO) Kyousuke FX: goku_.. 7 Kyousuke: [aghast] (I'm doing 'H' things!) (#H# na koto yatte-ru!) H-like-things am-doing --------------------------------------------------- p 237 (151) 1 Kyousuke: (In that case, 'H' is the to yu-- koto wa #H# to yu-- KOTOBA only letter that's taboo in-that-case (T) (quote) word now. ______ dake wa kono BA de wa tabu-- only (T) in-this-place (T) taboo If... If I happen to hear moshi..... MAN ga ICHI it by some chance... if if-by-any-chance kiita BA-AI wa heard circumstance (T) Kyousuke FX: _____ goku_ 2 [She looks at him with a bit of concern.] Madoka: (..........) (..........) narration: I'll do something 'H' to AYUKAWA ni...... #H# na koto o Ayukawa!! to-Ayukawa H-thing (O) shite-shimau!! do-(finality/regret) 3 Madoka: [smiling] Maybe it's because it's HARU no..... sei kashira spring... spring's fault I-wonder 4 Madoka: But... demo... 5 Madoka: [tersely] I won't forgive you if you HEN n koto shitara sho--chi shinai do something weird! weird-thing if-do won't-forgive kara ne! that's-why [Kyousuke winces.] --------------------------------------------------- p 238 (152) 1 narration: _____ This is bad! yabai! She thinks I'm a wierdo, yappari HEN ni after all...! after-all strangely/peculiarly omowarete-ru......! am-thought-of-as 2 narration: No matter what, I have to tonikaku avoid that letter. at-all-events/at-any-rate ano KOTOBA dake wa sakenakute wa just-that-word (T) must-avoid Madoka: Jeez... mattaku... 3 [Kyousuke portrait--he thinks to himself.] narration: That... ano... 4 Madoka: [exploding] So 'H'! #H# ne! Kyousuke: [grinning and pointing at her] That's the one!! soo sore_!! like-that that-(one) 5 [His eyes grow wide with realization.] narration: Sh... de..... 6 narration: She said it!! DEchatta!! came-out-(finality/regret) Madoka: ? ? Kyousuke: [frozen in position and trembling] (Oh... Oh no! (a...... akan I'm in for it now!!) ZETTAI ZETSUMEI da_!!) at-the-wall/wit's-end be --------------------------------------------------- p 239 (153) 1 [His pov of her.] narration: Pl-please run away, Ayukawa! se semete... nigete-kure--_ AYUKAWA! at-least run-from-me 2 [He grips his head.] narration: Oh, I'm losing a-- ISHIKI ga TOUkunatte... consciousness... consciousness (S) growing-distant ___ My other self is... mo-- hitori no ore ga..... another one-person 's I (S) 3 [Out of the corner of his eye he spies a large concrete urn from which flowers grow.] Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_ 4 [He hurls himself headfirst at it.] Kyousuke FX: _______ go----n narration: I have to knock myself out!! koko wa KIZETSU naru shika nai!! here (T) become-unconscious there's-only 5 [Madoka rises to her feet, startled.] 6 Madoka: [running towards him as he staggers back towards her.] KASUGA-KUN!! KASUGA-KUN!! narration: G-good... yo yokatta..... At least now my character kore de JINKAKU dake wa won't be doubted... with-this/now character only (T) UTAGAwarezu ni sumu... not-be-doubtful-of come-to-an-end Kyousuke FX: _____ fura_ --------------------------------------------------- p 240 (154) 1 Madoka: [trying to catch him] Kasu... KASU... 2 [Falling, he grabs hold of her skirt...] Kyousuke FX: gu_ 3 [...and neatly shucks her out of it.] Kyousuke FX: zuru... 4 [She lands on her back and he falls on her, unconscious. She blushes furiously, trying in vain to keep her skirt up.] Madoka: NO! ya 5 [View pans back--the skirt is down below her knees. Kyousuke's face ends up between her thighs.] Madoka/Kyousuke FX: ___ do_ --------------------------------------------------- p 241 (155) 1 [The-fury-that-is-Madoka facial portrait.] 2 Kyousuke: [he looks up at her] Ah! a 3 [Grey panel.] FX: _____ __ patsu so Kyousuke: [off] Yelp! gyan 4 [Standing in shirt and panties, she's just delivered a slap that sends him flying 2.5 meters up and about 15 meters downrange into some bushes.] 5 [He lands on the bush and his eyes grow large.] Kyousuke FX: ____ doza 6 [Blushing, and holding hands to her cheeks, Madoka turns and walks away. Behind her, Kyousuke becomes airborne once more.] Madoka: ____ Idiot... baka... narration: There are thorns in a kire-- na cho--cho nya beautiful butterfly... beautiful in-butterfly (contrast) ____ toge ga aru there-are-thorns So they say! .....te ka_! (quote) (muse-to-self) Kyousuke: Ouch! atetetete ---------------------------------------------------