Kimagure Orange Road
"The Shutter Chance!"
Volume 8, Story 2
WB Volume 4, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (16 Feb 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Jerry Lee
Thomas Wyatt
Ka-Ping Yee
Last revision : 07-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 305 (29) are only in the WBs!
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p 305 (29)--TITLE PAGE
[Facial portrait of a tanned Madoka. She tilts down her sunglasses with
a fingertip, while looking back at us. Her hair is up with a scarf tied
around her head.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ ______
The Shutter Chance! shatta-- - chansu!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
A Mischievous Witchy Girl. MAJOkKO - itazura -
witch-girl mischief/practical-joke
_____
Doing the Samba in Style! KOIKI ni samba!
chic/style do-samba
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p 306 (30)
1
[A shot of a poster.]
poster: ______
Kojima Camera Stores KOJIMA kamera TENSHU SAI
camera shopkeeper gathering/meeting
_______ ____ _________
FRESH COUPLE PHOTO CONTEST sawayaka kappuru foto - kontesuto
delightful/refreshing contest
couple photo
GRAND INVITATION DAI-BOSHUU
First Prize ICHI-I
____
The photographer will SATSUEI-SHA ni wa ICHIGANrefu
receive a top-of-the-line, to-photographer (contrast) single-lens-
single-lens reflex camera; reflex-camera
the model couple will be ______ ______
awarded 30,000 yen. KOUKYUU kamera o, moderu ni
high-grade camera (O) to-models
_______
natte-kureta, kappuru ni wa,
turned-into-(favor-to-self) to-couple (T)
SHOUKIN 3 MAN EN o sashiagemasu.
prize 30,000-yen (O) give-(to-someone)
In addition, the first-place nao, ICHI-I no SHASHIN wa
photo will be displayed in further first-place-photo (T)
public here in town as an ________
advertisement poster for TOUTEN SENDEN posuta-- to shite
our store!! our-shop advertisement poster as
CHOUNAI ni KOUKAI shimasu!!
in-the-town present-to-the-public
Entry Details Listed on kuwashiku wa, OUBO YOUKOU o!!
Application!! in-details (T) application essential-points
2
[View pans back to show Komatsu standing on the sidewalk outside a camera
store, reading the poster. Kyousuke and Hatta mill about.]
Komatsu:
Hey hey. nani nani
The winning picture will ICHI-I wa CHOUNAI -CHUU ni
be displayed around town as first-place (T) within-town
a poster... ________
posuta-- to shite......
as-a-poster
sign: ______
...Camera kamera
3
[Tight shot of a camera in the window display.]
Komatsu: [off]
Kyousuke, why don't you have KYOUSUKE omae hikaru-chan to
your father take a picture you with-Hikaru
of you and Hikaru-chan? _____
no SHASHIN oyaji-san ni totte-moraeba?
's photo by-father if-take-picture-
(for-you)
Hatta: [off] ____
After all, he's a pro... nan se puro da mon na--
because pro is (reason)
So he'll win first prize for zettai ICHI-I da ze
sure! absoluteness first-place is !
4
Kyousuke:
No thank you!! kekkou desu_!!
narration: ________
A poster all over the city... MACHIJUU ni posuta-- to shite
thruout-the-city as-a-poster
nante...
the-likes-of
It's like a criminal's sarashimon ja nai ka
public display. be-pilloried/exposed-to-ridicule
5
[The three continue on their way home from school.]
Komatsu: ______
The camera stores are using kamera -YA me
this cheap trick to try to camera store (derogatory-suffix)
sell more film! _____
sekoi TE o TSUKAi- yagaru
stingy trick (O) use-(contempt)
______
firumu o SUKOshi demo
film (O) a-little or-something
takusan Uro-- to shite-ru n da ze
plenty-of are-trying-to-sell (explan) !
6
[The three part ways.]
Hatta:
See you. ja na
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p 307 (31)
1
[Hatta quickly hides around a corner...]
sign: ________
Cafe Marvel #Cafe# mareviru
Hatta FX: ___
za_
2
[...and peers back to watch Kyousuke walk away.]
Hatta FX: _______
chirari
3
[With the coast clear, he runs back the way they came.]
Hatta: ______
(I can't let this chance slip (kono chansu nogasu TE wa nai!)
by!) this-chance let-slip hand (T) not-have
4
Hatta:
(I'll ask Kurumi-chan or (kurumi-chan ka manami-chan o sasotte
Manami-chan, and take a or (O) asking
picture of the two of us!
futari no SHASHIN o toru!
2-people 's photo (O) take-picture
_____
I can also use that as mata sore o dashi ni
an excuse to get close also that-(one) (O) under-pretext
to them...)
arekore SEMAreru
this-and-that able-to-approach
wake da shi...)
reason is and-besides
__ __
pu pu!
5
Hatta:
(If I win, we'll be a (ICHI-I ni nareba MACHIJUU ni
well-known and officially- in-first-place if-become thruout-the-city
recognized couple throughout
the city!!) SHIrewataru KOUNIN no
become-widely-known official-recognition 's
_______
kappuru daa----_!!)
couple be
Hatta FX: _______
pyu----
6
[Hatta does a pratfall inside the store when he sees Komatsu talking to the
salesclerk.]
Komatsu: ______
Give me all the film you firumu aru dake ZEMBU kudasai!
have! film have as-much all (please)
Oh, and also an entry form a sore to omote ni DEte-ta
for the contest posted with-that at-outside/ was-appearing
outside, and... at-the-front
_________
kontesuto no OUBO YOUSHI to......
contest 's blank-application and
Hatta pratfall FX:
daa----_
7
Komatsu: [wide-eyed innocence]
Oh, is that you, Hatta-kun? are HATTA-kun ja nai ka?
Hatta:
Hey, you!! ano ne~~~~_!!
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p 308 (32)
1
salesclerk:
I'm sorry. suimase--n
______
Because of the contest, okagesama de firumu wa ZEMBU
we're completely sold out due-to film (T) all
of film...
Uri-KIremashite...
being-sold-out
Komatsu and Hatta pratfall FX:
zuruu
2
Komatsu:
Shit... chikusho--
Who the hell...! ittai doko no doitsu daa--_
in-the-world where's what-person is !
Komatsu FX: ________
purupuru
Hatta: [amused] _____
Probably someone like you. kitto omae mitai na yatsu da yo
surely you it-seems fellow is
3
[Full-length portrait of Akane, as she walks in her school uniform. This is
splashed over panels 4 and 6.]
4
[View pans back to show her walking along the sidewalk, outside the camera
store.]
signs: ______
...Camera ...kamera
______ _____
Color Prints kara-- purin...
5
Akane: _______ ____ _________
Hmm, a photo contest for fu--n kappuru - foto - kontesuto kaa
couples... couple photo contest (muse)
What's this? nani nani
_______
The first-place couple will ICHI-I no kappuru wa MACHIJUU ni
have their photo displayed first-place 's couple (T) thruout-the-city
on a poster throughout the ________
city... posuta-- to shite...
as-a-poster
6
Akane:
That's it! kore da!
Akane fist-on-palm FX: ___
pon
7
Akane:
(I'll take a picture of (atashi ga KYOUSUKE to hikaru-chan o
Kyousuke and Hikaru-chan. I (S) and (O)
totte-ageru n da
take-picture-for-them (explan)
Then everyone will know so-- sureba KYOUSUKE-tachi no NAKA wa
about their relationship.) if-do-like-that their-relationship (T)
minna ni SHIrewataru)
by-everyone become-widely-known
8
Akane: [smiling]
(He'll be so happy he'll cry!) (aitsu me... NAite yorokobu zo!)
that-guy crying be-delighted !!
__ __ __ __ __
fu fu fu fu fu
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p 309 (33)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
2
[A couple clasp hands.]
Umao:
Ready, Ushiko-san. sa_ USHIKO-san
Ushiko:
Yes, Umao-san. hai UMAO-san
3
[View pans back to show the two turning to beam smiles at a camera set up
on a tripod.]
Umao/Ushiko radiant smile FX: ______
basha_
4
[From the counter, Madoka, Kyousuke and Hikaru turn to watch.]
5
Hikaru:
What are those people doing? nani yatte n desu ka ano HITO-tachi
what doing (explan) (?) those-people
_______
I've seen couples taking SAIKIN yatara to kappuru de
pictures lately... lately at-random by-couples
SHASHIN totte-ru no mikakeru kedo...
are-taking-pictures see/find but
6
Madoka:
Oh, that's because a aa are wa nan demo KINJO no
local camera store... that-(one) (T) probably neighborhood's
______
kamera -YA -san ga......
camera-store (S)
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
7
Kyousuke:
AHH! AYUKAWA! a--ttoo AYUKAWA!
Madoka:
Huh? e
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p 310 (34)
1
Kyousuke: [pointing at the door]
There's a customer. o-KYAKU-san da yo
customer is
[Both Madoka and Hikaru look at him wide-eyed.]
Madoka:
Yes, yes. hai hai
door FX: _____
karan
2
[Hikaru goes back to sipping her drink through a straw.]
narration:
What a relief... yokatta...
_________
Hikaru-chan doesn't know hikaru-chan kontesuto no koto
about the contest. about-the-contest
SHIranai n da
not-know (explan)
3
narration:
If Hikaru-chan found out... moshi hikaru-chan ga SHIttara
if (S) if-know
[Hikaru pops up with a camera in hand.]
Hikaru FX:
piya_
Hikaru: _____
Ta-dah! ja~~n
4
[In front of the camera set on a tripod, Hikaru happily hugs Kyousuke
about his neck.]
narration:
It'll turn out like this. ko-- natte
like-this becoming
camera FX: _____
kasha
5
[Large posters of the winning Kyousuke-Hikaru photo are plastered on the
walls surrounding a wide-eyed Madoka.]
narration:
And if it won by any soshite MAN ga ICHI ICHI-I ni
chance... and/then if-by-any-chance in-first-place
demo nattari shitara
or-something if-become-(and)
6
[Kyousuke winces as he visualizes an indignant Madoka.]
Madoka primness FX: ________
tsu----n
narration:
It'll be like this for sure! ko-- naru ni KImatte-ru!
like-this become (IO) be-sure-to
Kyousuke FX:
zo zo~~_
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p 311 (35)
1
[Kyousuke looks calculatingly at an unsuspecting Hikaru.]
narration:
I have to do all I can dekiru dake hikaru-chan ni wa
to keep Hikaru-chan from be-able-to just by-Hikaru (contrast)
finding out about the _________
contest...! kontesuto no koto KIzukarenai
about-contest not-be-found-out
yo-- ni shinakereba...!
so-that must-do
2
Akane: [entering]
Oh, there you are. a ita ita
3
narration:
A-Akane! a... akane!
Akane:
I was looking for you. sagashita yo--
4
Akane: [spotting Madoka, smiling]
Ohh?! are~~~_?!
5
Madoka: [nervous smile]
Welcome. irasshai
Akane: [winking and elbowing Kyousuke in the neck]
Oh, Ayukawa-san was working nan da-- AYUKAWA-san tte koko de
here. (T) at-this-place
_____
baito shite-ta no
was-working
6
[A crying child spills a glass at one of the tables. Madoka rushes over with
a towel.]
mother:
I'm sorry... suimase~~~~n
kid crying FX:
bie---
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p 312 (36)
1
[Akane stands behind Kyousuke and Hikaru, who sit at the counter. Both
look back at her in puzzlement.]
Akane:
Hmm. fumu
2
[Smiling, Akane pushes the two together. Kyousuke's and Hikaru's eyes
grow large.]
Akane:
Oh, sit closer together. a motto yorisotte
more drawing-closer/sitting-closer
Akane FX:
pitan
3
[Akane adds another straw to Hikaru's drink.]
Akane:
This is fine. kore de yoshi
with-this/now all-right
straw FX: _____
chapu
4
[Akane shouts like a drill sergeant. Her charges leap to comply.]
Akane:
Okay. Smile and drink the hai nikkori WARAtte
juice! okay smiling-(a-beautiful-smile)-(and)
______
ju--su nonde
drinking-juice
Kyousuke and Hikaru reflex FX:
da_
5
[Akane takes a picture of the sweethearts sharing the same drink.]
camera FX: _____
pasha
6
Hikaru: [looking up]
? ?
Kyousuke FX:
gyo_
7
Kyousuke:
Wh-what are you doing all of na nani sun da------_ ikinari!!
a sudden?!! what doing are ! all-of-a-sudden/
without-warning
Kyousuke stand-up FX:
gatan
8
[His anger disappears as he realizes...]
narration:
This is awful. Where's mazui AYUKAWA IMA no...?!
Ayukawa now...?! unsavory now
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p 313 (37)
1
[He wipes his brow when he sees that Madoka is busy talking to the mother
of the crying child.]
Kyousuke: ___
ho_
narration:
Oh good! yokatta!
She wasn't looking. mite-nai
2
Akane: [winking and exiting]
Leave the rest to me! ato wa makasenasai!
remainder (T) leave-to-me-(command)
It'll win first prize for ZETTAI ICHI-I da kara ne!!
sure!! absoluteness first-place be that's-why
Kyousuke:
W-wait a minute! chi chotto mate yo_
3
[Akane smiles and gives Madoka a thumbs-up.]
Akane:
Good-bye, Madoka-chan! ja mata ne-- madoka-chan!
Next time, let's take a KONDO wa atashi-tachi no SHASHIN
picture together, okay? next-time/soon (T) picture-of-us
torimasho-- ne
shall-take-