Kimagure Orange Road
"The Dangerous Beach!"
Volume 8, Story 5
WB Volume 5, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Thomas Wyatt

Last revision : 07-17-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 49 (95) are only in the WBs!
NOTE: The existent script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an
      unauthorized Chinese translation.  It contains many major and minor
      deviations from the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of
      this script.
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p 49 (95)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka--looking us straight in the eye--stands at the beach in roller
 skates, knee & elbow pads, and matching tanktop and bikini bottom.  Moving
 to a beat she teasingly begins to lift up her tanktop.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               _________   _______
  The Dangerous Beach!            denjarasu - bi--chi!

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                              ______
  The Shining, Summer-Tinged      KAGAYAku     NATSU IRO       #C# ga--ru
  "C" Girl Gives Herself Up to    shine/gleam  summer-colored   C-girl
  a Naughty Rhythm.                                         ______
                                  ikenai                    rizumu  ni
                                  naughty/bad/"mustn't-do"  rhythm (IO)

                                  KARADA o makase
                                  give-oneself-(to)
                                            ________
  She Wants to Remove/Avoid*      KOKORO no bure--ki  hazushitai......!
  the Heartbreak...!              heart  's break     want-to-avoid/miss/undo

<*Translation note:  This is a pun--one that won't translate well into
 English.  The verb used here is  which means either "to remove" (as
 in remove one's shirt) or "to avoid/evade".  So the double-meaning here is
 "to avoid heartbreak" and "to remove that heartbreak (i.e., her shirt).">

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p 50 (96)

1
[Exterior night shot of the 2-room hotel bungalow.]
Kyousuke: [off]
 ("St-stay here...")              (to tomaru    tte...)
                                      stay-over (quote)

2
[Hikaru lies on her side on the bed, facing away from Kyousuke, who now
 sits on the edge of the bed, looking back over his shoulder at her.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____
               doki doki doki

3
[Pov shifts to the ceiling.]
narration:
  Wh-what does Hikaru-chan        do do-- yu-- tsumori       na  n da    yo
  mean by that?                      what-kind-of-intention  is  (explan)

                                  hikaru-chan

4
[Overlaid on panels 4 and 5, Kyousuke nervously ponders his choices.  In
 panel 4, a small, evil-looking version of himself lurks over his head.]
evil conscience:                                  ______
  This is your chance.            kore       wa   chansu  da
                                  this-(one) (T)  chance  is

  Do it!!                         yatchimae!!
                                  (yatte-shimae) = do-(finality)

Kyousuke:
 (Maybe Hikaru-chan...            (hikaru-chan  moshi-ka-shite...
                                                maybe

  No.  Or maybe not...)           iya    moshi-ka-shinakute mo...)
                                  no     or-maybe-not

5
[In the adjacent panel, another version of himself pleads its case.]
good conscience:                  ____
  Don't do anything stupid!!      baka na koto  suru  n ja nai      zo!!
                                  stupid-thing  do    (explan/neg)  !!

6
[Tight shot of Hikaru's hand reaching out for his.]
Hikaru:
  Sempai...                       SEMPAI...

Hikaru hand FX:                   ___
                          su_

narration:                                          _ ___
  At this rate, I-I'll...         kono mama ja      o ore...  honto ni......
  Really...                       if-this-continues   I

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p 51 (97)

1
[Night shot of the swimming pool.]
Sukeda: [off]                     ________
  The Rules of Diving:            daibingu  KOKOROE           sono 1
  Number 1...                     diving    rules/directions  that-1

2
[Sukeda stands behind Madoka and clasps her by the wrist.  Komayama likewise
 has Akane by her wrist.]
Sukeda:
  Don't enter the water when      YOtta         mama
  you're drunk!!                  gotten-drunk  as-it-is

                                  MIZU ni haitte wa ikemasen!!
                                  must-not-enter-water

Komayama:
  Second, you will obey what      sono 2  SENSEI  no yu-- koto   wa
  your teacher tells you          that-2  teacher 's say  things (T)
  without question!!
                                  SUNAO ni           kikimasho--!!
                                  obediently/meekly  shall-obey/listen-to

Akane:
  L-let go of me-e-e!!            ha hanashite yo------_!!

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p 52 (98)

1
Akane:                            ______________
  You think it's all right        insutorakuta-- ga   konna koto shite
  for instructors to do stuff     instructors    (S)  doing-things-like-this
  like this?!!
                                  i--   to omotte      n no!!
                                  okay  thinking-that

2
Komayama:                         ___
  All we're saying is that        ore-tachi wa   tada    SHINSETSU ni
  we'll give you diving           we        (T)  simply  in-kindness
  lessons out of simple           ________
  kindness.                       daibingu o   oshiete-ageyo--  to itte-ru
                                  diving  (O)  teaching-you     be-saying-that

                                  dake  jan
                                  only  is-not

Sukeda:
  Yeah, that's right.             so-- so--

  But before entering the         demo  MIZU no NAKA ni hairu ni wa
  water, we should do some        but   to-enter-the-water      (contrast)
  warm-up exercises!!
                                  mazu   yoku      JUMBI         UNDOU
                                  first  properly  preparations  exercise

                                  shitokanai to       ne----_!!
                                  (shite-okanai to)   (rhet)
                                   if-not-do-(for-future-sake)

3
[Angrily, Madoka slaps Sukeda's hand away.  But Sukeda catches her hand
 neatly in his own.]
Madoka hand FX:                   ______
                         bishi_

4
Sukeda: [leering]
  See?  When you struggle you     hora hora   abareru to
  get even more tipsy.                        when-struggle

                                  yoke-- ni    YOi ga mawatchau      yo
                                  excessively  get-tipsy-(finality)

Madoka:
                      haa haa

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p 53 (99)

1
Madoka: [angrily]                                          ______________
  Are you really instructors?     anta-tachi    HONTOU ni  insutorakuta--
                                  you-(plural)  really     instructors

                                  na no?

2
[Both display nervous, wide-eyed expressions.]
Sukeda and Komayama:              ___
  AH!                             ha_

3
Akane:
  Come to think of it, I was      so-- ieba            o-HIRU ni
  told at the front desk at       come-to-think-of-it  at-lunchtime
  lunchtime to keep a careful     _______                  _______
  eye out, because there have     furonto de  SAIKIN  kono bi--chi SHUUHEN de
  been numerous cases around      at-front-desk       around-this-beach
  this beach of molesting                     recently
  swimsuit thieves pretending     ______
  to be instructors...            chikan   magai no MIZUGI DOROBOU   ga
                                  masher/  false 's swimsuit-thieves (S)
                                  molester

                                  SHUTSUBOTSU suru   kara
                                  infest-(a-place)/  that's-why
                                  frequents

                                  KI o tsukeru  yo-- ni to CHUUI sareta
                                  look-out-for  was-taking-care-to

                                  kedo...
                                  but

4
Komayama: [to Sukeda]
  H-hey...                        o oi...

Akane:
  Ahh, just as I thought.         a--  yappari
                                                ____ ______________
  You're bogus instructors,       anta-tachi    nise insutorakuta--  ne
  huh.                            you-(plural)  bogus-instructors

5
Sukeda:
  We've been found out--          bareta      mono   wa   shou ga nai!!
  can't do anything about         discovered  person (T)  nothing-can-be-done/
  that!!                                                  no-use-doing

Komayama:
  Who cares.  Do it!!             i-- kara    yatchimae!!

Akane:
  Stop it!!                       yamete!!

6
Komayama:                                    ___
  Shall we show you why we        do--shite  ore-tachi ga   so-- yasuyasu to
  won't be caught so easily       why        we        (S)  easily-like-that
  as that?!
                                  tsukamaranai   ka   oshiete-yaro--  ka!
                                  not-be-caught  (?)  shall-teach-you (?)

[He hurls Akane into the pool.]

Komayama shove FX:                ___
                           don

Akane:
  KYAA!                           kyaa

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p 54 (100)

1
[Sukeda and Madoka briefly stop struggling to watch the action in the pool.]
Sukeda:
  Because you can't breathe       MIZU no NAKA ja   IKI    ga   dekinai
  under water she won't be        in-the-water (T)  breath (S)  not-able-to
  able to shout, so she can't
  cry out for help.               kara        KOE mo DAsenai
                                  that's-why  also-not-be-able-to-utter-cry

                                  shi          TASUke mo YObenai     no sa
                                  and-besides  also-can't-cry-for-help

Akane FX: [off]                   _______
                          dobo--n

2
[Komayama hops into the pool and walks towards the surfacing Akane.]
Komayama:
  And even if she cries out       shikamo   konna JIKAN ja     YOnde-mo
  at this late hour, no one       moreover  at-time-like-this  even-tho-call
  will care!
                                  DARE-mo  ki ya shinai!
                                  nobody    = not-worry

Komayama FX:                      _______
                          dobo--n

Akane surfacing FX:
                          pua_

3
Akane: [flash thought]
 (I'm no match for a man's        (OTOKO no WANRYOKU        ni  wa
  brute strength!!                 man   's brute-strength (IO) (contrast)

                                  kanawanai!!
                                  no-match-for

  At least if I had Kyousuke's    semete       KYOUSUKE  mitai na
  type of Power...)               at-least               it-seems
                                  _chikara_
                                  NOURYOKU ga   areba     naa)
                                  Power    (S)  if-exist

Akane:                                        _chikara_
 (But my Power...)                (atashi no  NOURYOKU  tte ittatte...)
                                   my         Power     even-tho-saying-that

4
[Akane, back to Komayama, lights up her face.  Komayama places his hand on
 her shoulder...]
Akane:
 (That's it!!)                    (so-- da!!)

Komayama:
  Hey!  Face this way!            so--ra  kotchi o muite!
                                  there!  facing-this-way

5
[...and turns her around.  Akane uses her Power of illusion to appear as
 Komayama.]
Komayama:                         ______
  Pretty face...                  kawaii KAO o

Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

Akane FX:
                    kuru_

6
[Komayama staggers back, clapping a hand over his mouth as though ready to
 puke.  Akane takes the opportunity to climb out of the pool.]
Komayama:
  N-not pretty!!                  ka kawaikunee_!!

Akane FX:                         _____
                         zaba_

7
[Sukeda and Madoka continue to struggle.]
Akane:
  Madoka-chan!!                   madoka-chan!!

Sukeda:
  Damn...!                        kuso--_

  Such a high-spirited neechan.   ise-- no ii      ne--chan  da  naa
                                  spirited/lively            is  (rhet)

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p 55 (101)

1
Akane:
 (That's it!                      (so-- da

  Change into a police            omawari-san ni         HENSHIN shite...!)
  officer...!)                    into-(Mister)-Officer  changing-(into)

2
[She transforms into a cute policewoman a la Nene Romanova...]
Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

3
[Shaking her head in dismay, she sheds that image.]
Akane:
  No, no!!                        chigau chigau!!

Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

4
[She stands perplexed in a Playboy bunny costume.]
Akane:
  Not this!                       kore demo nai!

5
Akane: [dumbfounded]
  What does a police officer      omawari-san   tte  donna kakko--
  look like?!                     (Mr.)-Officer (T)  what-kind-of-appearance

                                  da  kke?!
                                  is  (?)

6
Madoka:
  Akane-san, run!!                akane-san  NIgete!!

Akane:
  What are you saying?            nani  itte    n no
                                  what  saying

  I can't leave you behind!!      madoka-chan o   oite wa ikenai   yo~~~~_!!
                                             (O)  must-not-leave-behind

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p 56 (102)

1
Madoka:
  Get someone!!                   HITO o!!

  Go and call for help!           TASUke o YOnde-kuru    no yo!
                                  start-calling/crying-for-help

2
Akane:
  B-but...                        de demo...

3
Madoka: [wailing]
  I'M OKAY!  HURRY!!              atashi wa   DAIJOUBU   HAYAku!!
                                  I      (T)  all-right  hurry

4
Akane: [racing off]
  O-okay!!                        wa wakatta ne!!

Komayama:
  D-damn!                         shi shimatta!

5
Akane: [flash thought]
 (The only guy to ask now...      (moo  tanomi   wa   YUIITSU no   OTOKO
                                   now  request/ (T)  only/single  man
                                        rely/trust

  Is Kyousuke!!)                  KYOUSUKE  shika inai!!)
                                            there's-only

6
Komayama:
  O-oh no!                        ya yabai ze

  She's gonna call others!        HITO o YOnde-kuru      tsumori    da!
                                  start-calling-someone  intention  is

Sukeda:
  Now that it's come to           mo--     ko-- nattara
  this, we can't afford to        already  if-become-like-this
  play around!
                                  ASOnde-ru   yoyu-- wa nai    ze
                                  be-playing  cannot-afford-to !

  Since we can't be sticking      do--se  mo--  koko ni        wa
  around here any longer...       anyhow  more  at-this-place (contrast)

                                  irarenai
                                  not-be-found/not-be-staying

  At least...                     semete...

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p 57 (103)

1                                 __________
Sukeda:                          _korekushon_
  We'll be taking this one for    SENRIHIN                    dake  demo
  our collection.                 spoils-of-war/(collection)  only  even

                                  itadaite-ikou
                                  shall-go-and-take

[Madoka blesses him with a deadly glare.]

2
Sukeda:
  A beautiful girl like this      konna BIKEI                  wa
  isn't found just anywhere.      this-kind-of-beautiful-woman (T)

                                  zara ni                wa         inai
                                  commonplace/everywhere (contrast) isn't-there

  This is a bitchin' babe         SAIGO    o  kazaru ni      fusawashii
  worthy of being our final       the-end (O) ornament/      become/worthy-of/
  trophy!                                     adorn/exhibit  suitable-for

                                  SAIKOU no KO  da  ze
                                  awesome-girl  is  !
                                  ___ ___ ___
                        ku_ ku_ ku_

3
[Kyousuke blushes and stares wide-eyed at Hikaru off-panel.]
Hikaru: [off]
  Come close...                   soba ni kite...

4
[Evil conscience lands a solid right to the head of good conscience, sending
 it reeling.]
evil conscience FX:
                            #DOCOON#
                                  

evil conscience nametag:
  Desire                          YOKUBOU

good conscience nametag:
  Reason                          RISEI

5
Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan!!                   hikaru-chan!!

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p 58 (104)

1
[Akane reaches the bungalow...]

2
[...and tries the door.]
doorknob FX:                      _____
                          gacha

Akane:                            ____
  Locked...                       kagi ga...

 "Do not disturb" perhaps?        o-torikomi NAKA  tte      koto   ka
                                    very-busy      (quote)  thing  (?)

3
[Hikaru still lies on her side on the bed, though her eyes are now closed.
 Kyousuke stands and leans over her.]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            are?

4
[Bleary-eyed, he looks up to see Akane pounding on the window.]
Akane pound-on-window FX:         ___ ___
                     don don

narration:
  Huh?  It's Akane!               are?    akane da!

5
[Kyousuke smiles and waves.]
Akane: [wincing]                      ____
  That idiot.                     ano baka

  He's still drunk.               mada   yopparatte-yagaru
                                  still  is-drunk-(contempt)

6
[She transforms into Madoka.]
Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

7
Kyousuke:
                          gyo_

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p 59 (105)

1
[He leaps back--away from Hikaru--in horror.]
Kyousuke:
  Wahhh!!                         uwata----_!!

Kyousuke FX:
                           suza_

Kyousuke:
  I-I'm sorry!                    go gomennasai!

2
[Akane--back in her true form--points behind her.]

3
Kyousuke:
  Hm?                             n?

4
[She transforms into Sukeda and points to her face.]
Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

5
narration:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA ga...

  Something's wrong?!             do--ka shita no ka?!

6
[Night shot of a table at poolside, and the starry sky.]
Madoka: [off]
  AH!                             a_

Madoka FX: [off]                  _____
                          dobon

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p 60 (106)

1
[Sukeda, sans shirt, walks through the water to the surfacing Madoka.]
Madoka surfacing FX:
                          pua_

2
[He grabs her wrist and pulls.]
Sukeda:
  Hey now, if you don't           hora hora  kotchi ni konai to
  come over here, you'll                     if-not-come-this-way
  drown.
                                  oborechau               yo
                                  drown-(finality/regret)

Sukeda FX:
                           gui_

3
[Tight shot of someone grabbing her wrist and raising it high.]
Madoka arm FX:                    ___
                           ba_

4
[It's Komayama, who squats at poolside, holding up Madoka by her arms.  She
 appears to have passed out.]
Komoyama:
  Here!                           hoi!

Madoka FX:                        __ __
                          za za

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p 61 (107)

1
[Madoka portrait--unconscious.]

2
Komayama:
  It looks like she fainted.      do--yara        KI o ushinatta  mitai da na
                                  it-looks-as-if  fainted         seems

Sukeda:
  That's convenient...            sore       wa   KOUTSUGOU...
                                  that-(one) (T)  convenient/fortunate

3
[Another Madoka portrait--still unconscious.]

4
Kyousuke:
  Wha-a-at?!                      e----_

  Ayukawa's with those guys       AYUKAWA ga   HIRUMA no
  from this afternoon?!                   (S)  in-the-daytime 's

                                  OTOKO-tachi ni?!
                                  men        (IO)

5
Kyousuke:
  Why didn't you say so           nande  sore        o   HAYAku
  sooner?!                        why    that-(one) (O)  soon/early

                                  iwanai   n da
                                  not-say  (explan)

Akane:
 (He sure talks...  This          (yoku   yu--  yo    kono OTOKO wa...)
  guy...)                          fully  say         this man   (T)

6
Akane:
  Anyway, hurry!!                 tonikaku  isoide!!
                                  anyway    in-a-hurry

Kyousuke: [running off]
  I know!!                        wakatta!!

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p 62 (108)

1
[In mid-dematerialization he looks back at Akane and shouts...]
Kyousuke:
  I'll go on ahead!!              saki ni     iku  yo---_!!
                                  beforehand  go

2
[Madoka's pov--if she were awake--of Sukeda reaching out both hands towards
 her.]
Sukeda:
  Rule number 3!                  KOKOROE sono 3!
                                  rule    that 3

  Enter the water with as         MIZU no NAKA de wa          dekiru
  light clothing as possible.     in-water        (contrast)  able-to-do

                                  dake  KEISOU ni
                                  only  in-light-dress

Sukeda:
  Your birthday suit is the       Umareta   manma no      SUGATA      ga
  best!!                          was-born    form/figure (S)
                                            just-in-front

                                  ICHIBAN!!
                                  best

3
[Sukeda takes hold of the front of her T-shirt.]
Sukeda FX:
                           gu_

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p 63 (109)

1
[Kyousuke rematerializes a meter above Komayama's head.  Sukeda pauses to
 look skyward.  Komayama is oblivious.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                         byu_

2
[Kyousuke crashes down on Komayama's shoulders.]
Kyousuke impact FX:               ___
                          do_

Kyousuke and Komayama:
  WAH!                            wa

3
Kyousuke:
 (Oh, shit!!                      (ha_  shimatta!!
                                  __________
  Did Ayukawa see me              terepo--to shita  toko      AYUKAWA ni
  teleport?!)                     teleported        occasion  by-Ayukawa

                                  mirareta?!)
                                  was-seen

4
[Madoka portrait--still unconscious.]

5
Kyousuke: [relieved]
 (That's good...  She             (yokatta...    KI o ushinatte-raa)
  fainted.)
                                  ___
                           ho_

6
Kyousuke: [angrily]
 (N-not good!                     (yo yokunai!

  How dare they do this to        koitsura    yokumo  AYUKAWA o!!)
  Ayukawa!!)                      these-guys  dare           (O)

Sukeda:
  What's this?  You.              nan da  koitsu

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p 64 (110)

1
[Komayama topples forward, sending both Kyousuke and himself into the pool.]
Kyousuke and Komayama:
  Ooops!                          ottotto!

2
Kyousuke and Komayama:
  WAHHHH!                         wa----_

Kyousuke and Komayama FX:         _______
                      zabu--n

3
Komayama: [surfacing]
  Wh-what the hell are you        na nani shi-yagaru
  doing?                             what doing-(contempt)

Sukeda:
  Finish him quickly!!            HAYAi  toko       yatchimae!!
                                  quick  time/case  do-(finality)

4
[Tight shot of a corner of the pool.  The water churns.]
Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off]     _____ _____
                  basha basha

Komayama:
  W-wait a sec!!                  chi chotto mate yo!!

5
[Isolated shot of the poolside bar and some tables.]
Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off]     ________
                         jabujabu

Sukeda: [off]
  Give up!                        yamero--_
                                  shall-quit/stop/give-up-(imperative)

6
[Triumphantly, Komayama lifts something in his hand.]
Komayama:
  G-got it!!                      to totta------_!!
                                     seized/took/got

Komayama FX:                      _______
                      zaza--n

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p 65 (111)

1
[Both hold up swimtrunks.]
Komayama and Sukeda:                                              ______
  Th-this is your pants!          ko...  kore       wa   omae no  pantsu!
                                         this-(one) (T)  your     pants

2
[Blushing and grinning nervously, they point at one another.]
Komayama and Sukeda:              _______
  Pervert .         etchi-- 

Komayama and Sukeda FX:           ___  ___
                          po_  po_

3
[Both swimtrunks fly out of their hands.]
swimtrunks FX:                    ___
                          bun

Komayama and Sukeda:
  WAHHH!                          waa

4
[Both turn to look up at Kyousuke, who stands heroicly and defiantly at
 poolside, carrying the still-unconscious Madoka in his arms.]
Kyousuke:
  That's as far as you'll go!     soko made  da!
                                  that-far   is

5
[Face set in a grim mask, he crackles with the Power.]
Kyousuke:                                    _chikara_
 (My Power tonight is a touch     (KON'YA no NOURYOKU wa   hitoaji
  different!!)                     tonight's Power    (T)  by-a-step

                                  chigau    zo!!)
                                  different

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p 66 (112)

1
[Isolated view of the drain outlets for the swimming pool.  Water gushes out.]
water FX:                         ___
                          do_

sign:
  Danger--Drainage Outlet         HAISUI    KUCHI         KIKEN
                                  drainage  opening/gate  danger/hazard

2
[Sukeda and Komayama stand and cover their privates as the water quickly
 drains from the pool.]
water FX:                         ________
                   gobogobo

Komayama and Sukeda:
  Wah wah!                        wawa_

3
Sukeda:
  Th-the water's...!!             mi...MIZU ga!!

Komayama:
  ...going away!!                 nukete-yuku!!

4
[Still carrying Madoka, Kyousuke slowly walks away from the pool.  The two
 swimtrunks float in the air beside him.  The two punks are still in the
 pool, and shout at Kyousuke's retreating back.]
Komayama and Sukeda:
  H-hey-y-y!!                     hi hie--_!!

5
[Akane leads a charging mob to the pool.]
Akane:
  Over there!!                    asoko desu!!

men running FX:                   __ __ __
                  ta ta ta

6
[Akane stops, wide-eyed.]
Akane:
  Huh?!                           n?!

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p 67 (113)

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[The two are found in an empty pool, covering up.  Hotel guests, workers and
 a police officer stand and gawk.  Akane, blushing, beats a hasty retreat.]
Komayama:
  Ohhhhhh!  D-don't look!!        are~~~~~~_  mi minai de~~_!!

Sukeda:
  Go away!  Shoo!  Shoo!          atchi     ike  shi_  shi_
                                  that-way  go   shoo!

crowd FX:
                   zawazawa

Akane:
  Hey, yuck!                      chotto  ya da~~~~

2
[Kyousuke leans over Madoka, as she regains consciousness.]
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa!  Ayukawa!!             AYUKAWA!  AYUKAWA!!

3
[She reflexively scurries away.]
Madoka:                           ___
  AH!                             ha_

Kyousuke:                         ___
  It's me.                        ore da yo

4
[View pans back to show the two seated in a covered rest area.]
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...

Kyousuke:
  Everything's fine now!!         mo-- DAIJOUBU!!

5
Madoka: [glaring]
  Those guys...                   aitsura wa......

6
[Smiling, Kyousuke turns to watch the two led away by the officer, and
 followed by the crowd.]
Kyousuke:
  As you can see...!              goran no to--ri!

crowd:                                                     ____       ___
  Wha-a-at?  Those two are        e--  ano HITO-tachi ga   ya--       nee!
  hoods, huh?!                         those-people   (S)  gangsters  (rhet)
                                  ________
                 hisohiso
                                            ________
  I hear they're panty thieves.   SHITAGI   dorobo--  da  tte
                                  underwear thieves   are (I-hear)

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[Madoka turns back to Kyousuke with a soft smile.]

2
[He touches her hair, which is still done up in a ponytail.]
Kyousuke:
  Your hair is wet.               KAMI ga   nurete-ru
                                  hair (S)  is-getting-wet

  The nights get cold even in     ikura    NANGOKU        demo  YORU  wa
  the southern lands...           how-far  southern-lands even  night (T)

                                  hieru          yo...
                                  get-cold/chilly

3
Kyousuke: [getting up]
  Well, shall we go...?           sa-- iko...

4
[He pauses...]

5
[...because a lovely girl seems to have become attached to his arm.]
Madoka:
  I'd like to stay here like      mo-- SUKOshi   kono mama de
  this for a little while         a-little-more  at-moment-like-this
  more.
                                  itai           no
                                  want-to-stay/be

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[She closes her eyes and rests her cheek against his arm.]
Kyousuke:
 (Tonight is...)                  (KON'YA wa......)

2
Kyousuke:                          ______
 (...special!)                    (suteki yo!)

3
Akane: [bursting in]
  Oh, there you are!!             a ita ita!!

  Sorry, Kyousuke!                gomen ne  KYOUSUKE!

  For interrupting your "Do       o-torikomi NAKA  o-jama shichatte
  not disturb..."                   very-busy        intruding-(finality/
                                                     regret)

[The two quickly disengage with eyes grown large.]

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            gu_

Madoka FX:                        __
                             gi

4
Akane:
  Just a little bit longer        hikaru-chan to wa   mo-- chotto   datta
  with Hikaru-chan and...         with-Hikaru    (T)  a-bit-longer  was

                                  no ni...
                                  even-tho
                                  ____
                            ugu_

[Kyousuke clamps a hand over Akane's mouth.]

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  You didn't see a thing!         KIMI wa   nan ni mo  minakatta!
                                  you  (T)  anything   not-saw

5
[A view beyond the pool--to the ocean, the horizon and the starry sky.  In
 triple insets, Madoka looks puzzled, Akane and Kyousuke smile at one
 another, and Hikaru lies asleep, hugging a pillow tightly.]
Madoka:
  ?                               ?

narration:
  Like so...                      sou...
                                                             __
  For this night only...          KON'YA dake         wa...  ne!
  Right?!                         for-this-night-only (T)

Hikaru:                           _______
  Darling...                      da--rin......

Hikaru FX:                        __________
             munyamunya

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