Kimagure Orange Road
"All Is Ruined!"
Volume 9, Story 9
WB Volume 5, Story 16
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Jun Watatani
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-16-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 321 (173) are only in the WBs!
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p 321 (173)--TITLE PAGE
[Hikaru half-portrait--in "Benchwarmers" sweatshirt and "Person's Team" cap.
A shoulder-strap bag hangs from her right armpit and is elevated above her
head (blown by the wind?). She smiles and winks at us, and holds down her
cap to keep it from flying off.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
All Is Ruined! HAMETSU ga ippai!
destruction/ruin (S) full/whole/all
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________
I Want to Shine with itsu demo kirakira KAGAYAkitai no
Brilliance Forever-- always brilliantly wanting-to-shine
Like a Small Bird Soaring KOTORI ga AOZORA
Through the Blue Sky, small-bird (S) blue-sky
_to_
KA(KERU) bu you ni
= = to-soar/fly so-that/as
Like a Cool Breeze Breathing NOYAMA ni SUZUKAZE
in the Hills and Fields... in-hills-and-fields cool/refreshing-breeze
FUku you ni...
to-breathe so-that
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p 322 (174)
1
[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]
sign:
Hiyama HIYAMA
2
[Smiling, Hikaru presents a cake.]
Hikaru:
My folks aren't around KYOU wa uchi no HITO
today. today (T) household's-people
dare-mo inai n desu
nobody-is-here (explan)
3
[Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the floor, both in school uniforms.]
Kyousuke: [nervous smile]
I-I hope it's okay. o o-jama shimasu
4
[View pans back to show them seated at a low table, Kyousuke facing Madoka,
with Hikaru sitting at the end. They are in Hikaru's bedroom. Kumagorou-
kun sits and looks at us sleepily from his spot on the floor.]
narration:
Today, Hikaru-chan exercised KYOU wa hikaru-chan ga
her well-known skill and today (T) (S)
baked a cake, so...
JIMAN no UDE o
well-known-skill (O)
______
furutte ke--ki o tsukutta
brandish/exercise-(and) baked-a-cake
to yu-- no de
saying-that so
Hikaru: [to Kyousuke] ______
Madoka-san is way better ke--ki ZUKUri madoka-san no ho-- ga
at making cakes... cake making more
zutto umai n da kedo
by-far skillful (explan) but
5
narration:
For some reason... naze-ka...
Ayukawa and I are both AYUKAWA to futari
here at Hikaru-chan's place. with-Ayukawa 2-people
hikaru-chan no IE ni kite-imasu
to-Hikaru's-place are-coming
[With a smile, Hikaru presents the first piece to Madoka.]
Hikaru:
But you hardly ever bake metta ni tsukutte-kurenai n desu yo ne~~
for me, do you. rarely not-make-(for-me) (explan) (rhet)
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p 323 (175)
1
[Hikaru looks dreamily up at the ceiling.]
Hikaru: ______
"I'll only bake homemade TEzukuri no ke--ki wa MIRAI no
cakes for my future handmade/homemade 's cake (T) future 's
husband..."
danna-SAMA ni shika tsukuranai tte...
to-husband only-make (quote)
...is what I suppose jitsu wa madoka-san KOKORO ni
Madoka-san has truly actually in-heart
decided in her heart...
KImete-tari shite
is-deciding-(or)
2
Hikaru: [merrily]
What on earth will your MIRAI no danna-SAMA tte ITTAI
future husband be like, future 's husband (T) in-the-world
hm?
donna HITO desho-- ne?
what-kind-of-person poss-be (rhet)
[Madoka starts to blush.]
3
Hikaru:
Oops. Oh no. ara ya da
________
Would you like tea or o-CHA ni shimasu ka soretomo ko--hi--?
coffee? tea do (?) or coffee
______
Oolong tea? u--ron CHA?
Madoka: ________
Coffee. ko--hi--
[Kyousuke blushes even more deeply.]
Kyousuke: ______
Oolong tea. u--ron CHA
4
Kyousuke:
Let's see. Where's the etto o-sato-- wa... to
sugar? let's-see sugar (T)
5
[He spots the sugar bowl in front of Madoka.]
6
[They nervously and politely address one another. Hikaru watches them
without expression.]
Madoka:
..... Here you go. .......... do--zo
Kyousuke:
Ah... Thanks! a... do--mo!
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p 324 (176)
1
[Kyousuke and Madoka take sips--both pointedly ignoring the other. Hikaru
continues to quietly watch them both.]
Hikaru contemplation FX:
ji----
Kyousuke: _____
gohon
2
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
Hikaru:
Yes? hai?
3
Hikaru: [getting up in irritation]
I'm sure it's a newspaper kitto SHIMBUN no KAN'YUUIN ne
solicitor. surely newspaper 's canvasser
Grr! moo_!
4
[The two watch her leave, off-panel.]
door FX: [off] _____
batan
5
[Madoka looks at the sugar bowl as Kyousuke drinks.]
Kyousuke FX: __
zu...
6
Madoka: [merrily] ____
How silly. baka nee
Kyousuke: [perplexed]
Eh? e?
7
Madoka: ______
You don't usually put sugar futsuu u--ron CHA ni wa
in Oolong tea. usually in-Oolong-tea (contrast)
o-sato-- nante Irenai no yo
sugar the-likes-of not-put-in
Kyousuke: [surprised]
Eh? Is that true?! e sore HONTOU?!
that-(one) true
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p 325 (177)
1
Kyousuke: _uchi_
Kurumi is always putting IE ja kurumi ga itsu-mo
in a lot at home... at-home-(T) (S) always
tappuri Irete-ru kedo...
amply/copiously is-putting-in but
Madoka: ___
pu_
2
Madoka: [cheerily]
Just like her, hmm... ano KO rashi-- ne
that-girl like (rhet)
3
[The two share a laugh.]
4
[He knocks the cake off his plate and onto his tie.]
Kyousuke:
Oh! a_!
cake FX: _____
poro_
5
Madoka: ____
You klutz! doji!
bungle/blunder
6
Madoka: [rising]
Hey. Come over here! hora kotchi ni kinasai yo
look! to-this-way come!
I'll wipe it off for you. fuite-ageru kara
wiping-(for-you) that's-why
Kyousuke: [rising]
Th-thanks. do do--mo
7
[He pitches forward, high through the air, over the table, and right at Madoka.
She can only stare helplessly upward.]
Kyousuke:
M-my legs are numb...! a ashi ga shibire...!
legs (S) numbness
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p 326 (178)
1
[He lands on top of her; she falls on her back.]
Kyousuke and Madoka FX: ___
do_
Kyousuke:
AH! a
2
[Trying to push him off her by shoving at his chin.]
Madoka: [angrily] __ ____
I-idiot! Hey! ba baka chotto!
Kyousuke:
S-sorr... go gome
3
[Tight shot of the doorknob as it jiggles.]
door FX: _____
gacha
4
[Kyousuke and Madoka look up wide-eyed from the floor. He's still perched
over her.]
5
[Hikaru enters, smiling, her arms laden with several boxes of detergent.]
Hikaru:
I subscribed to another matamata SHIMBUN totchatta
newspaper. again newspaper subscribed-(finality)
Look how much soap I got! MIte-kudasai ko--nna ni sekken
look-(please) so-much soap
moratchatta
received-(finality)
detergent box 1: ______ ________
dirt--FALL yogore ochi--ru
dirt/filth fall
detergent box 2:
Mighty ! KYOURYOKU <2-kanji>!
power/might
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p 327 (179)
1
[Kyousuke propels himself backwards, up off of Madoka, who sits up, turns
aside, and crosses her arms over her chest.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
suza---
2
[View pans back. Hikaru stands at the door in puzzlement. Kyousuke is on
the far side of the room, reading a paper on the edge of a bed. Madoka sips
from a cup at the table. Hmm... He couldn't have *teleported* any faster
than this!]
Hikaru:
Hm?! n?!
3
[Madoka sips from a cup. If you're really sharp, you *might* notice it's
not the same cup she was drinking from 2 pages before.]
Madoka FX: __
zu...
4
[Kyousuke, sweating nervously, reads out some apparent gibberish from the
paper. He's holding it upside-down, so it comes out backwards.]
Kyousuke: _______ __________ _____
ydorB no dednal kcen eht ni iderobu ga rigiizun'e no kinoi kito noso
ot kcik s'ikonI tnemom
taht...
_____
sono toki inoki no
that-time 's
_________ ______
enzuigiri ga burodi ni
= kick-to-neck (S) on-Brody
advertisement: [upside-down, on right]
Look, look! Become miru miru takumashiku naru!
manly! look look robust/sturdy become
3 times a day! 1-NICHI 3-KAI <2-kanji> o
1-day 3-times (O)
KIN o-dake!
respect only
Immediate testing to become sugu o-TAMEshi KASHI ri_!!
an officer!! at-once a-trial/test noncommissioned-
officer
Three ! 3-KA !
3-days
classified header:
Your Advertisements anata no KOUKOKU
your advertisements
personals 1:
Sale Uritashi
= want-to-sell
_____________
Garage Kits. Every gare--jikitto MAI-
. garage-kit every/each/apiece
YOU ze ne
sheep
____
Pro, many parts. puro BUN- TASUU
pro detached/ large-number/multitude
branched
personals 2:
Mitsuru. Not angry any MITSURU mou okotte-nai
more. Come home at once. more am-not-angry
Father. ____ _____
sugu kaere CHICHI
immediate return father
personals 3: ________ ______
Masahiro. masahiro <2-kanji> herase
Economize. Father & Mother. economize
CHICHIHAHA
personals 4: ____
Osamu. Found a bride. Come OSAMU yome o mitsuketa
home immediately. Mom. bride (O) found
____ _____
sugu kaere HAHA
immediate return mother
5
[Isolated shot of the coffee pot, Madoka's coffee cup and the cake with a
slice cut out of it.]
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p 328 (180)
1
[Hikaru portrait--silent and expressionless.]
2
[From her position, Hikaru tries to get a look at Kyousuke, who has his back
to everyone. Sipping from his cup--notice that it's not his teacup--he tries
to sneak a glance over his shoulder. Madoka drinks from a cup.]
narration: _____ _____
Oh no, oh no. o-- yabai yabai
3
Hikaru: ________
Sempai, that's Madoka-san's SEMPAI sono ko--hi-- madoka-san no desu yo
coffee. that-coffee
Kyousuke FX: __ ___
bu fu_
[At the same time, Madoka notices she's been drinking from Kyousuke's highly
saccharine teacup. Her eyes grow wide.]
4
[He staggers back in horror, spilling the coffee on his shirt. The
background turns pitch-dark.]
Kyousuke:
(C-could it be...) (mo moshikashite...)
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ow!! achachacha!!
5
narration:
She saw us just now? IMA no MIrareta no de wa
now 's was-seen (nom)
No, no. But, maybe... iya iya demo masaka...
But, those eyes... shikashi ano ME...
Hikaru: [smiling]
Ohh, I'll wipe the spill mo-- koboshichatte fuite-agemasu
off. spilling- wipe-(for-you)
(finality)-(and)
6
[Taking his tie, she wipes it with a hankie.]
narration:
For some reason, Hikaru-chan nan-da-ka SAIKIN hikaru-chan
is getting mighty suspicious somehow of-late
these days...
utaguri -BUKAku natte-kita naa
suspicious deeply started-becoming
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p 329 (181)
1
[A view of the rooftop of a school building.]
narration:
And the next day, as soshite YOKUJITSU yappari
expected, my hunch came... and/then next-day just-as-I-thought
True?!
YOKAN wa TEKICHUU...shita?!
a-foreboding (T) came-true
2
Kyousuke: [smiling, walking up the stairs]
(What in the world could (ittai nan daro?
this be about? in-the-world what poss-be
Hikaru-chan formally hikaru-chan ga aratamatte
requesting a talk.) (S) formally
HANASHI tte)
talk (quote)
Kyousuke FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
Kyousuke: __
Maybe we'll be eating a box o-bento-- OKUJOU de taberu no ka na
lunch on the roof. box-lunch on-roof eating I-wonder
3
[He spots her over by the railing, facing away.]
Kyousuke:
Hi. Sorry to keep... yaa o-mata...
4
[View over his shoulder at the silent, unmoving Hikaru.]
5
Kyousuke: [smiling]
You asked to talk... What HANASHI tte... nani?
is it? talk (quote) what
6
[His pov--still, she remains motionless.]
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p 330 (182)
1
[Without turning around, she says...]
Hikaru:
It's about Madoka-san. madoka-san no koto desu
about-Madoka is
[He recoils in horror.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
gikuu
2
[Finally turning around, Hikaru looks at him, face in anguish.]
Hikaru:
I think that's too much!! atashi anmari da to OMOimasu!!
I too-much is think-that
3
Hikaru: _uchi_
Even yesterday, when you kinou datte IE ni kita
came to my place! yesterday even came-to-my-place
TOKI SEMPAI ttara
time (I-tell-you)
4
narration:
J-just as I thought... ya yappari...
Kyousuke:
Ahh... Ah wah wah. a...... a wa wa
Kyousuke FX:
fura_
5
Hikaru: [running down the stairs]
I won't speak to you, SEMPAI ga KANGAe naosu
Sempai, until you mend (S) opinion/view change/correct
your ways!
made atashi SEMPAI to wa
until I with-Sempai (T)
KUCHI kikimasen
not-speak-to
Kyousuke:
Ah! W-wait!! a ma_ matte!!
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p 331 (183)
1
Kyousuke: [stunned]
H-Hika... hi hika...
2
[Tilted view of Kyousuke, as his world starts turning upside-down.]
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...
3
[His pov of a store-lined alleyway.]
narration:
I-in the end, the time that tsu tsui ni kuru-beki TOKI ga
had to come, came... in-the-end must-come time (S)
kite-shimatta...
came-(finality/regret)
sign 1: [partial]
...Shop ...YA
sign 2:
Haruki Store HARUKI -YA
4
Kyousuke: [unhappily]
(N-now, Hikaru-chan and...) (mo moo hikaru-chan to wa...)
5
[He stops and looks at a store.]
sign:
Cakes/Confections YOUGASHI
6
[He looks at the cakes in the window display.]
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p 332 (184)
1
[Flashback panel--Hikaru looks up at the ceiling.]
narration: ______
"I'll only bake homemade TEzukuri no ke--ki wa MIRAI no
cakes for my future handmade/homemade 's cake (T) future 's
husband..."
danna-SAMA ni shika tsukuranai tte...
to-husband only-make (quote)
...is what I suppose jitsu wa madoka-san KOKORO ni
Madoka-san has truly actually in-heart
decided in her heart...
KImete-tari shite
is-deciding-(or)
2
[Kyousuke reflects.]
3
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...
4
[His face brightens.]
narration: ___
I still have Ayukawa!! ore ni wa AYUKAWA ga iru!!
by-me (contrast) (S) is-there
5
[Tight shot of his lower leg.]
narration:
If this is how it's gonna ko-- nattara
be, I'm going to Ayukawa's like-this if-become
place...
AYUKAWA no TOKORO ni itte...
to-Ayukawa's-place going
6
[Racing off, he brushes against a stocky guy.]
Kyousuke:
(If it doesn't work out with (AYUKAWA mo dame nara
Ayukawa as well, then I'll too no-good if-it-is
have nothing left!!) ___
ore ni wa mou nani-mo nai!!)
by-me (contrast) any-more nothing-is-there
Kyousuke FX: ____
don_
Kyousuke:
Ah, sorry! a suimasen!
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p 333 (185)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
2
[Madoka turns at the sound of...]
door FX: _____
karan
3
[Her pov of Kyousuke at the door.]
4
[A closer view. This is a decisive Kyousuke.]
5
[Overhead view of Madoka wiping dishes behind the counter, and Kyousuke, who
approaches the counter.]
Madoka:
Welco... irassha...
Kyousuke: ______
Cake... ke--ki o
6
Madoka:
Huh? e
Kyousuke: ______
I want you to bake a cake. ke--ki o tsukutte hoshii
cake (O) making (desire/want)
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p 334 (186)
1
[Her pov of him. He has a no-argument, slightly-crazed look.]
Kyousuke: ______
I want to eat a cake that AYUKAWA no tsukutta ke--ki ga
you've made!! 's made cake (S)
TAbetai n da!!
want-to-eat (explan)
2
[Master and Madoka look back in surprise.]
3
Madoka:
I... so...
4
Madoka: [nervously]
I can't do something like sonna
that out of the blue... that-kind-of
KYUU ni iwarete-mo...
suddenly/without-notice even-tho-are-saying
5
Master: [merrily]
Ayukawa-kun, why don't you? AYUKAWA-kun tsukutte-agetara?
if-make-(for-him)
6
Master: ______ ______
A cake in need is a cake takaga ke--ki saredo ke--ki
indeed...* only cake nevertheless
To him, it might be his KARE ni shite-mirya ISSEI-ICHIDAI
greatest, once-in-a-lifetime to-him if-try-to-do once-in-a-lifetime
problem.
no DAI-MONDAI na no ka mo shiren
's great-problem is (nom) it-may-be
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p 335 (187)
1
[Madoka stares at Master...]
2
[...then turns to look back at Kyousuke.]
Madoka:
Well, okay... i-- kedo...
3
Madoka:
Then, wait just a sec! ja chotto matte-te!
then a-bit be-waiting
4
[Isolated shot of the ingredients and mixing bowl.]
narration:
Ayukawa's cake, that she metta ni tsukutte-kurenai
hardly ever bakes... rarely not-make-(for-me)
______
AYUKAWA no ke--ki...
's cake
___
But, she's... demo ore ni wa...
but by-me (contrast)
5
[Kyousuke sits, wide-eyed and blushing, cheek in hand, at the counter.]
narration:
...making one for me...! tsukutte-kureru n da...!
is-making (explan)
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki doki
6
[Outside, a view from behind as Hikaru approaches ABCB, both hands clenched
into fists.]
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p 336 (188)
1
[Tight shot of the cake, a cup of coffee, forks, napkin and plate.]
Madoka: [off]
Here you go! doozo!
2
[She lifts up a piece on a fork.]
narration: ______
Ayukawa's cake... AYUKAWA no ke--ki...
Eating this means... kore o TAberu to yu-- koto wa...
this-(one) (O) eat that-means
Madoka: ____
Say, "ahh." a--n
3
Kyousuke: ____
Ahh. a--n
4
[Hikaru enters and takes in the scene with surprise. Madoka is hand-feeding
Kyousuke, and has the fork held to his mouth. She has her back to the door,
and is blocking Kyousuke's view of Hikaru.]
door FX: _____
karan
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p 337 (189)
1
[Kyousuke chews.]
2
Kyousuke: [happily]
Delicious! oishii!
Madoka:
Really? soo?
3
[Hikaru facial portrait--surprise.]
4
[Kyousuke lowers his gaze.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
5
[Hikaru's expression darkens.]
Hikaru FX: ___
da_
6
Hikaru:
SEMPAI!! sempai!!
[Madoka and Kyousuke turn to look in surprise.]
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p 338 (190)
1
Hikaru: [wide grin]
That's good! sore i-- n desu
that-(one) okay (explan)
You finally understood my atashi no KIMOchi yatto wakatte-kureta
feelings, didn't you!! my-feelings at-last understood
n desu ne!!
(explan) (rhet)
[She takes him by the wrists. He has a contorted look on his face.]
Hikaru FX:
shikka
2
Kyousuke:
EH? e
3
Hikaru:
I was convinced that you atashi tekkiri SEMPAI ga
didn't like Madoka-san. I <*> (S)
madoka-san no koto o kiratte-ru no
about-Madoka (O) disliking
ka to OMOikonjatte
(ka to OMOikonde-shimatte)
being-under-the-impression-that/
being-convinced-that-(finality/regret)
<*tekkiri...to OMOu> = feel-quite-certain>
4
Hikaru: [happily]
Madoka-san means more to atashi ni totte madoka-san wa
me than a big sister!! to-me (T)
one--san IJOU no HITO!!
big-sister person-more-than
And so I wanted you to get da kara ko-- yu-- FUU ni
along well with her like and-so in-this-way
this!!
madoka-san to SEMPAI ni mo
with-Madoka by-Sempai too
nakayoku shite-moraitakatta n desu!!
wanted-to-have-good-relationship (explan)
5
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed nervousness.]
narration:
Which means... ......to yu-- koto wa
6
[He looks over at Madoka, who looks back in puzzlement.]
Madoka:
?! ?!
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p 339 (191)
1
[He looks down at a slice of cake which he holds.]
2
Kyousuke:
O-ohh!! na naan daa!!
narration:
It wasn't that she saw us ano TOKI MIrareta wake ja nakatta
then!! that-time was-seen reason was-not
n da!!
(explan)
3
Madoka FX: ______
kyoton
4
narration:
That Hikaru-chan is getting hikaru-chan no koto SAIKIN
mighty suspicious these about-Hikaru of-late
days...
utaguri -BUKAku tte
suspicious deeply (quote)
How terrible to think ya da naa to OMOttari shite...
that... is-unpleasant (rhet) thinking-that-(or)
_____ __
I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan! gomen ne hikaru-chan!
5
[The three sit at the counter, Kyousuke in the middle. He and Madoka watch
Hikaru eating a cake in ecstasy.]
Hikaru: ______
Sure enough, Madoka-san's yappari madoka-san no ke--ki oishi--!
cake is delicious! sure-enough 's cake tasty
narration:
The one who's the pits... SAITEI na no wa..........
lowest is (nom) (T)
___
Is me! kono ore desu!
this me am
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At bottom: [wideban only] ______ ______
Kimagure Orange Road 5 (End) kimagure orenji - ro--do 5 (KAN)
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