Kimagure Orange Road
"The Dangerous Transfer Student"
Volume 10, Story 5
WB Volume 6, Story 5
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (19 November 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 87 (87) are only in the WBs!
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p 87 (87)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands in half-portrait, in sweater, hat, and scarf. She reaches for
her hat with one hand and looks at us from the corner of her eye.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Dangerous Transfer KIKEN na TENKOU-SEI
Student dangerous transfer-student
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Where Are You Going, sonna ni sumashite
Looking So Prim? so-much being-prim-and-proper/serious/
grave/stuck-up
doko iku no?
where go
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p 88 (88)
1
[Isolated shot of the lower legs of a girl dressed in pants and shoes.]
girl FX: __________
kotsukotsu
2
[View pans back. It is night and she walks through the park alone.]
3
[Closeup of her face. She's brunette, short-haired, cute and wears glasses.]
girl:
Oh no... ya da na--
I came out in this kind of konna TOKORO ni DEchatta yo
place. in-what-place emerged-(finality)
4
[View shifts. She looks upon couples clinging closely all over the park.]
couples FX: ________ ________
ichaicha betabeta
girl:
(Wh-where am I...?) (na nan da koko wa...)
what is this-place (T)
5
[Turning, she realizes she's standing next to a couple. The guy appears to
be nibbling on the woman's ear.]
girl:
(OOPS!!) (otto!!)
dramatic FX:
doo~~n
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p 89 (89)
1
[Tight shot of the couple's lower legs. They're standing extremely close.]
Kyousuke:
I-I'm sorry... go gomen ne...
2
[And of course, the girl in the embrace is Madoka.]
Kyousuke: _______
But now... I feel much demo kore de... sukkiri shita yo
better. but now/with-this felt-refreshed
3
[The girl watches from behind a bush.]
girl: _______
(Wh-what does he mean, "I (na nani ga sukkiri shita yo
feel much better?" what (S) felt-refreshed
But they do it even in this shikkashi maa kono SAMUi NAKA
cold weather, don't they!) but indeed in-this-cold
yoku yaru yo na----_)
well do (rhet)
4
[The girl's pov of the embracing couple--it is clearly Kyousuke and Madoka.]
5
girl:
(H-huh!?!) (a are_?!)
6
girl:
(I-it's him...) (a aitsu wa...)
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p 90 (90)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration:
The next day... YOKUJITSU----
2
[Kyousuke winces, rubbing his forehead in pain.]
Kyousuke:
Ooooo! u~~~~_
______
My head's still ringing. mada ATAMA ga gangan itte-ru
still head (S) ring/clang is-going
3
Kyousuke:
Maybe it's a hangover... FUTSUKAYOi ka na...
hangover I-wonder
I can't really tell anyone chotto HITO ni wa ienai na...
that... easily to-person (contrast) can't-say
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
4
[His view of an empty desk.]
narration:
Ayukawa... She isn't here. AYUKAWA... kite-nai na
5
[Kyousuke stares unhappily up at the ceiling. He visualizes the Komatsu
residence.]
narration:
But maybe it has to do yappari kinou no koto ga......
with yesterday... but-then about-yesterday (S)
narration:
To tell you the truth, jitsu wa kinou...
yesterday... actually yesterday
sign:
Komatsu KOMATSU
6
narration: ______
When I was at Komatsu's KOMATSU no IE de tesuto
place studying for the at-Komatsu's-place test
test...
BENKYOU shite-ru tokoro ni...
are-studying at-moment
[Kyousuke sits and tries to do his homework but Komatsu shoves a nude pinup
in front of him.]
7
narration:
Hikaru-chan also came by... hikaru-chan mo kichatte...
also coming-(finality)
[She appears at the door, with books and a smile. Kyousuke looks surprised,
while Komatsu grins.]
Hikaru:
When I called your house o-uchi ni DENWA shitara koko da tte
they said you were here. to-household when-phoned here are (quote)
______
Could I study with you too? tesuto BENKYOU atashi mo mazete-kudasai
test study I too mingling-
(please)
narration:
And up to there things were to soko made wa yokatta
fine... and that-far (T) was-good
n da kedo...
(explan) but
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p 91 (91)
1
narration:
But before I knew it, we itsu no mani ka o-SAKE o
started drinking alcohol. before-(one)-knows liquor (O)
nomi hajimete
starting-to-drink
[Komatsu pours from a bottle into a glass held by Kyousuke. Hikaru holds a
glass of her own.]
Komatsu:
Now, now. Just one glass. ma-- ma-- ippai
pouring FX:
toku toku toku
Kyousuke:
Hey-y-y. This isn't a good chottoo mazui yo~~~~
idea... unwise
Hikaru: [chanting]
Chug it, chug it. ikki ikki
2
[A sloshed Kyousuke and a flushed Hikaru say their goodbyes to a potted
Komatsu.]
narration:
When it was time to leave... KAEru TOKI wa moo
go-home time (T) already
Komatsu: [slurring]
Goin' home a'ready? mo-- kaen no
already go-home (?)
Hikaru: [slurring]
T'anks for ever'thing... o-jama himahita~~~~
3
[Near a phonebooth in the park, Kyousuke lies sprawled on the sidewalk. Hikaru
barely stands nearby and cheerfully waves at Madoka, who comes running up.]
narration: ___ ________
Because I was feeling nanse ore wa furafura...
dizzy... because I (T) feel-dizzy
Hikaru-chan was worried, hikaru-chan ga SHIMPAI de
so she called Ayukawa, who (S) worry on-account-of
then came for me. _denwa_
AYUKAWA ni #TEL# o shite
phoning-Ayukawa-(and)
mukae ni kite-moratte
coming-for-(me)
I can remember up to the 3-NIN de KAEtta
point where the three of by-3-people returned-home
us were coming home...
toko made wa oboete-iru kedo...
up-to-the-point (T) am-remembering but
Hikaru: [slurring]
Ah, Maroka-saaan. a maroka-sa~~n
4
[His pov of a very close Madoka, looking back in obvious concern.]
narration:
But it just gets fuzzy tada sono ato oboroge ni...
after that... merely that-after vaguely
Ayukawa's face in front of ME no MAE ni AYUKAWA no KAO to
me and that... before-a-person's-face Ayukawa's-face and
sono...
that
Soft feeling. yawarakai KANSHOKU
soft feeling
narration:
EH?! e?!
F-FEELING?! ka...KANSHOKU?!
5
[He thinks about it, hard.]
narration: ___
Maybe... I did something ore... AYUKAWA ni nani-ka
outrageous to Ayukawa... I to-Ayukawa something
totetsumonai koto shita
absurd/preposterous thing did
no kamo......
it-is-possible
Kyousuke:
(Urrrggg. I can't remember.) (u~~~~n OMOidasenai)
sensei: [off]
...introduce a transfer ...KOUSEI o SHOUKAI shimasu
student. -student (O) introduce
6
class FX: ________
zawazawa
girl 1:
Hmm? How strange to get he-- IMAgoro mezurashi-- ne
a transfer student around around-this-time unusual/strange
this time of year.
TENKOUSEI nante
transfer-student the-likes-of
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p 92 (92)
1
[Kyousuke's pov of the new student, who stands before the class, smiling and
saluting smartly. It is the girl who walked through the park. Unlike the
other girls in the class, she wears a coat and tie over her skirt. Perhaps
she hasn't had time to buy the Kouryou uniform yet.]
Hiromi:
Pleased to meet you! yoroshiku!
I'm Sugi Hiromi!! SUGI hiromi desu!!
2
girl 1 and 2: [smiling]
Kyaa! She's just like a kya-- kawaii OTOKO no KO mita--i
cute boy-y-y. cute boy seems
[Kyousuke stares wide-eyed at Hiromi.]
3
[His pov of her. She looks back at him with a start.]
narration:
Sugi Hiromi... I think SUGI hiromi doko-ka de ki--ta
I've heard that name at-somewhere heard
somewhere...
yo-- na...
resembles
4
[She smiles at Kyousuke, picking him out of the crowd.]
Hiromi:
Oh! a_!
5
Hiromi: [waving happily]
KASUGA-KUUUN!! KASUGA-ku~~n!!
[The entire class turns around in their seats to stare at Kyousuke, who
sweats and points at his own face.]
narration:
..........!! ..........!!
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p 93 (93)
1
[Seems to be recess. Hiromi sits on top of the desk to the right of Kyousuke.
Komatsu and Hatta sit in the desks in front of and behind him and watch. A
group of girls gathers around as well, listening in.]
Hiromi:
What a surprise! o_doroita--
To think you're in this KASUGA-kun ga kono GAKKOU ni ita
school...! (S) at-this-school was-here
nante...!
the-likes-of
2
Hiromi:
So these kinds of things do konna koto tte aru n da na--
happen, hmm... this-kind-of-thing (T) happen (explan)
It must be coincidence!! masa ni gu--zen!!
surely unexpected/accidental
Kyousuke:
R-really... ho honto...
3
Hatta:
What's this, Kasuga? An nan da KASUGA SHIriai ka yo--
acquaintance? what is acquaintance (?)
Komatsu:
Introduce us! SHOUKAI shiro yo--
[Kyousuke sweats nervously.]
4
Hiromi: ____
We were classmates at my MAE no GAKKOU de boku-tachi
last school, weren't we! at-previous-school we
___________
kurasumeito datta n da yo ne!
classmates were (explan) (rhet)
girls:
Ohhh! he~~~~_
5
[Hiromi leans in close. Kyousuke forces a nervous smile.]
Hiromi:
I feel some kind of fate nani-ka ko-- UNMEI-TEKI na
between us... something like-this fated
mono o KANjiru naa
thing (O) feel
Kyousuke:
It's a grim fate... ..........kusareEN desu
an-unhappy-and-inseparable-
relation/fatal-bonds
6
Kyousuke:
But... You've sure shikashi... omae kawatta na--
changed... but you changed (rhet)
At first, I didn't know who hajime DARE da ka wakannakatta yo
you were. the-start who are (?) didn't-know
Even your hair, as I recall, KAMI datte TASHIka motto NAGAkatta
was much longer... hair even if-I-recall was-much-longer
yo-- na..........
looks-like
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p 94 (94)
1
[She averts her gaze, face without expression.]
Hiromi:
Yeah... ......soo
2
[She turns completely away.]
Hiromi:
Kyousuke-kun, maybe it's KYOUSUKE-kun ga TENKOU shichatta
because you transferred (S) transferred-
out... (finality/regret)
se-- ka na...
fault I-wonder
[Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]
3
Hiromi:
The significance of a girl ONNA no KO ga KAMI o KIru tte
cutting her hair... girl (S) hair (O) cut (T)
IMI...
meaning/significance
Do you understand that? SHItte-ru?
class: [stunned]
OHHHH! o~~~~_
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
EH?! e?!
4
[An anguished Hatta comes flying in, grabbing Kyousuke by his lapels.]
Hatta:
Kasuga-a-a!! KASUGA--_!!
Why is it only you get the nande oMAE bakari ga moteru n da!!
girls?!! why only-you (S) popular-with-girls
(explan)
5
[Exterior shot of the school building.]
class FX: [off]
yan'ya yan'ya
Hatta: [off]
H-has an unexpected rival ko kore wa hikaru-chan ni
for Hikaru-chan appeared?!! this-(one) (T) to-Hikaru
_______
OMOwanu raiburu SHUTSUGEN kaa_!!
unexpected-rival an-appearance
6
[Kyousuke sits down, blushing and staring hard at Hiromi, who looks askance.]
Kyousuke:
Y-you... o omae...
narration: ___
I-I'm the one that she...?! ko koitsu... ore no koto o?!
this-person about-me (O)
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p 95 (95)
1
Hiromi: [merrily]
If that were so... dattara...
Would you be happy? ureshii?
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
2
[With a wide grin, she puts an arm around his shoulder in a chummy fashion.]
Hiromi: ____
It's unfortunate, but I'd ZANNEN nagara boku-tachi
have to say it's more like I-regret-(to-say)-that we
we're...
dotchi-ka ttsu-- to
either-one = say (quote)
Tied together by the bonds FUKAi YUUJOU no kizuna
of a deep friendship, right? deep/profound friendship 's bonds/ties
de MUSUbarete-ta
by was-tying/linking
n da mon ne--
(is-the-reason) (rhet)
narration:
O-ohhh... na nan da...
3
Hiromi:
But... Kasuga-kun... demo... KASUGA-kun.....
That thing... Can I tell ano koto... itte ii?
them? that-thing telling okay
4
Kyousuke: ___
AH!?! ha_?!
narration:
"That thing?" ano koto tte...
that-thing (quote)
C-could it be she... mo...moshiya koitsu...
by-any-chance this-person
___ _chikara_
...means my Power? ore-tachi no NOURYOKU no koto o...
our about-Power (O)
5
[Hiromi portrait--she looks back, wide-eyed.]
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p 96 (96)
1
Hiromi:
Listen, everyone!! ki--te-kudasai mina-san!! KASUGA-kun wa
Kasuga-kun... listen-(please) everyone (T)
Kyousuke: [rushing at her]
W-wait!! ma mate_!!
2
Hiromi: [merrily]
Was making "purr purr" with kino-- no YORU KOUEN de
a cute girl in the park last last-night in-park
night!!
kawai-- ONNA no KO to
with-cute-girl
____ ____
nyan nyan shite-imashita--_!!
was-making-"purr-purr"
to describe what Kyousuke was doing with a girl in the park. That is,
whatever he was doing was causing him to purr.>
[Kyousuke does a pratfall. All the girls laugh.]
3
Hiromi: ____
I saw it. boku michatta n da
I saw-(finality) (explan)
We moved in yesterday and kino-- HIkKOshi shite-kite
when I took a walk to check yesterday go-moving-in-(and)
out this town I found myself
in the park... kono MACHI o SHIrou to
this-town (O) when-shall-know
SAMPO shite-ru uchi ni KOUEN ni
am-taking-a-walk within to-park
DEchatte...
emerging-(finality/regret)
narration:
O-ohh... na nan da...
4
[Hiromi playfully rubs her elbow against his chest.]
Kyousuke:
(But... She was watching?) (demo... mite-ta no ka)
but was-watching (?)
Kyousuke eyes FX:
guriguri
Hiromi FX:
uriuri
Hiromi: ____
Even though you have someone koitsu boku to yu-- mono ga
like me--who's that girl? this-guy person-such-as-me (S)
ari-nagara DARE yo ano KO wa?
although-exist who that-girl (T)
5
[Hatta turns to stare at him.]
Hatta:
It was Hikaru-chan, wasn't hikaru-chan desho sono KO!
it! poss-be that-girl
She's his girlfriend. koitsu no KANOJO da yo
this-guy 's girlfriend is
She's two years younger, in futatsu TOSHISHITA de CHUUTOU-BU ni
junior high--a cute little by-two-younger in-jr-high-section
wide-eyed girl with Dutch- ____________
cut hair! iru sho--tokatto de
is by-"short-cut"-(hair)
donguri manako no kawaiKO-chan!
goggle-eyed 's little-dear-girl
6
Hatta:
Right, Kasuga! na-- KASUGA!
7
Hatta: [looking off to the side]
Come to think of it, so-- ieba mo-- o-hiru
it's already lunchtime... come-to-think-of-it already lunchtime
dattee no ni...
even even-tho
And Hikaru-chan isn't here konai na hikaru-chan...
yet... not-come
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p 97 (97)
1
Hiromi: _______ _____
Dutch-cut hair?! sho--to katto?!
Wide-eyed...?! donguri manako......?!
2
Hiromi: [looking up at the ceiling]
Really? ara..........
That doesn't sound like sonna n ja nakatta
her... that-kind-of (nom) was-not
yo-- na KI ga suru kedo...
resemble think/feel but
[Kyousuke topples backward in his chair, startling Komatsu and Hatta.]
chair/desk FX: ________
garagara
Kyousuke FX: _____
batan
3
Hiromi: [thinking]
Hmm... sou...
As I recall, she had long TASHIka KAMI ga NAGAku tte......
hair... as-I-recall hair (S) long
4
[View of Kyousuke as he lies on the floor in shock.]
Hiromi: [off]
And she looked older and TOSHIUE -FUU no OTONA ppoi
more mature... older appearance 's adult-like
HITO datta yo-- na...
person was resemble
5
[He visualizes Madoka from the night before, looking back at him with much
concern.]
narration:
It's Ayukawa she's talking AYUKAWA no koto da!!
about!!
narration:
Yesterday, when I was kinou ano TOKI yopparatte
drunk... yesterday that-time getting-drunk
*Maybe*... I did something tondemonai koto o
terrible... terrible/outrageous thing (O)
___
*moshi-ka-shite* ore
it-is-possible I
6
Kyousuke:
(Oo-ooo-wahhh. (u uwa~~~~
This is awful!!) kore wa mazui!!)
this(one) (T) unsavory/unwise
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p 98 (98)
1
Hatta: [gleefully]
Give us the details! GUTAI-TEKI ni itte-kure yo
concretely tell-(us)
What the heck sort of things koitsu ittai donna koto o
was he doing?! this-guy in-the-world what-kind-of-thing (O)
shite-ta n daa~~_
was-doing (explan)!
guy 1:
Yeah, that's right. so-- so--
________
That he was "purring" nyannyan ja wakkanne-- yo naa_
doesn't tell us much! by-"purr-purr"-(T) not-know (rhet)
[The girls who are listening in blush furiously, but smile nonetheless.]
girl 3: _____
Wahhh! How dirty! How wa----_ ya-- ne--_ etchi ne----_
perverted!
2
[Hiromi blushes and feigns embarrassment, hands to cheeks.]
Hiromi:
Oh no-o... Are you going to ya da-- sonna koto
make me--a girl!--say such that-kind-of-thing
things?!
ONNA no atashi kara iwaseru KI?!
girl (nom) from-me make-say intention
[Kyousuke pops to his feet, livid.]
Kyousuke:
You don't have to say!! iwanakute ii!!
not-saying okay
3
Hiromi: [stage whisper to everyone]
Then just keep it between ja koko dake no HANASHI!
us! then only-this-place 's talk
It's embarrassing so don't hazukashi-- kara
tell anyone else, okay? embarrassed that's-why
hoka no HITO ni wa
to-other-people (contrast)
__
iwanai de ne..........
not-tell
[Kyousuke does another pratfall.]
Hiromi:
Don't tell anyone that I atashi ga ittatte itcha dame yo_!
told you! I (S) even-tho-tell mustn't-say
4
[Hiromi's view that night. Kyousuke embraces Madoka. Here, we have a back
view of Madoka.]
narration:
Yeah... That's when his sou... sono TOKI KARE no MIGITE wa
right hand embraced her like-so that-time his-right-hand (T)
shoulder tightly...
TSUYOku KANOJO no KATA o
vigorously/intensely her-shoulder (O)
dakishimete...
hugging/embracing
5
[View from the other side shows his hand reaching for Madoka's breast.]
narration:
Then his other hand was soshite mo-- IPPOU no TE wa
lewdly at her... and/then the-other-hand (T)
midara ni mo KANOJO no...
lewdly/indecently too her
6
[The girls listening in grow nervous.]
girl 4:
Her...?! KANOJO no...?!
girl 3 FX: _____
goku_
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p 99 (99)
1
Kyousuke:
WAHHH!! wa~~~~_!!
Hiromi: ____
Well-developed breasts!! fukuyoka na mune o...!!
plump/buxom breasts (O)
[Kyousuke grabs Hiromi from behind and clamps a hand on her mouth...]
2
[...and his other hand clamps down on Hiromi's left breast. Kyousuke blushes.]
Kyousuke:
AH! a_
Kyousuke hand on breast FX: ______
muniyu
Hiromi:
! !
3
[Hiromi crosses her arms over her chest and twists away from him. Hatta grins.
The girls all blush and smile.]
narration:
Wh-what's she saying?! na nan to yu-- koto da!
what it-is-said-that
___
That I did such a shameless AYUKAWA ni TAIshite ore ga
thing to Ayukawa?! to-Ayukawa I (S)
sonna HARENCHI na koto o?!
that-kind-of-shameless-thing (O)
Hiromi:
Ohh . yan
Hatta:
OHH! o--ttoo
Is it really just HONTOU ni YUUJOU dake
*friendship* between you really friendship/friendliness only
two?!
ka yo~~_?!
(?)
girls FX:
yan'ya yan'ya
4
Kyousuke: [aghast]
(So... Is that why Ayukawa (ja...... yappari KYOU AYUKAWA ga
didn't come to school so after-all today (S)
today?!)
GAKKOU ni konakatta no wa...?!)
to-school not-came
5
door FX: _____
kara_
6
[Madoka walks in and looks at him without expression.]
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p 100 (100)
1
[Hiromi and Madoka stare at each other.]
Hiromi:
AHH!! a----_!!
2
Hiromi: [pointing]
Here! so-- yo!
It's this girl!! kono KO yo!!
Everyo-o-one, it's this minasa--n kono KO desu~~!!
girl...!! everyone this-girl is
3
[Madoka's pov of Hiromi, who points a finger at her.]
Hiromi:
Who was hugging Kasuga-kun kino-- KASUGA-kun to KOUEN de
in the park last night!! yesterday with-Kasuga in-park
dakiatte-ita no wa!!
were-in-each-other's-arms (nom) (T)
girls 3, 4 and 5: [wide-eyed]
EH?! e?!
4
Hatta:
Wha-a-at?! nan da tte~~?!
what is (quote)
Can't be. uso daro--
lie poss-be
Ayukawa and Kasuga...! AYUKAWA to KASUGA gaa~~_
5
[Madoka portrait--wide-eyed.]
class: [off]
Ehhhh?! You're kidding! e----_ u_so----_
6
[Hikaru appears at the doorway. Kyousuke and Madoka turn in surprise.]
door FX: _____
gara_
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p 101 (101)
1
[Hikaru looks aside, face unhappy.]
2
Hikaru:
Sempai... SEMPAI...
narration:
Hikaru-chan!! hikaru-chan!!
3
Kyousuke:
(That means... (to yu-- koto wa...
Since the three of us went 3-NIN de KAEtta n da
home together, if I did by-3-people returned-home (explan)
something to Ayukawa...) ___
kara ore ga AYUKAWA ni
that's-why I (S) to-Ayukawa
nani-ka shita to sureba...)
something if-did
4
[View of Kyousuke, Hatta, Hiromi and a couple of other girls.]
narration:
...then Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan wa sore o...
(T) that-(one) (O)
5
[Madoka portrait--she looks sad.]
narration:
...because she was nearby... sugu soba de...
close-by on-account-of
6
[Hikaru portrait--she looks sad.]
narration:
...saw it!! mite-ita!!
was-seeing
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p 102 (102)
1
[Hikaru bows to Kyousuke.]
Hikaru:
I'm so sorry I'm late. okurete mo--shiwake arimasen
being-late I-am-very-sorry
I felt really bad this ASA sasuga ni KIBUN
morning and couldn't get morning really/truly feeling
out of bed!!
waruku tte okirenaku tte!!
badly not-able-to-get-up
2
[Beaming, she uncovers the box lunch.]
Hikaru:
Here's your box lunch!! hai o-bento--!!
3
Hikaru: [smiling at Madoka]
After we said goodbye to SEMPAI to wakareta ato...
you, Sempai... with-Sempai parted-company after
Actually, I don't remember to itte-mo oboete-nai
too well, but... even-tho-saying-that not-remember
desu yo ne--
am (rhet)
_chi_
I slept over at Madoka-san's madoka-san IE ni tomete-moratta n desu
place. at-Madoka's-place stayed-over (explan)
Madoka: [smiling] ________
You were so dizzy that even anna ni furafura na n da mon
I was worried. so-much feel-dizzy is-the-reason
kotchi made SHIMPAI ni natchatte ne
even-this-way being-worried-(finality)
4
Madoka: [dropping her gaze]
Nevertheless, you still sore demo o-bento--
insisted on making a box nevertheless/even-so box-lunch
lunch...
tsukuru tte yu-- kara...
make say-that that's-why
Hikaru: [embarrassed]
Actually, I had Madoka-san jitsu wa hotondo madoka-san ni
make almost all of it... actually (very)-nearly by-Madoka
tsukutte-moratta n desu kedo...
had-make (explan) but
5
Hikaru:
But still... sore ni shite mo...
Sempai, are you all right? SEMPAI daijo--bu desu ka
all-right are (?)
At the time, I was really ano TOKI wa HONTOU do-- naru
worried. that-time (T) true what become
ka to OMOimashita
worried/thought
6
[Hikaru visualizes the REAL story. On his knees, Kyousuke clamps a hand over
his mouth to keep from barfing. Madoka rushes to his side.]
Hikaru:
Sempai! You fell down in SEMPAI ttara KOUEN de
the park. (I-tell-you) in-park
taorekonjatta desho--
fell-down-(finality/regret) poss-be
Kyousuke: [flashback] ___
Bleaugh! oe_
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1
[View pulls up. We see Hikaru sprawled across a park bench, blasted. Madoka
struggles to pull Kyousuke to his feet.]
Madoka:
Hey! Pull yourself chotto! shikkari shinasai yo
together!
Hikaru: [slurring]
Sempai, 're y'all right? SEMPAI daijo--bu resu kaa~~_
all-right = are (?)
2
[View looking up at the night sky.]
Kyousuke: [off] _____
Blearggh!! oe~~_!
I-I'm sorry... go gomen ne...
3
[He holds onto Madoka.]
Kyousuke: _______
But now... I feel much demo kore de... sukkiri shita yo
better. but now felt-refreshed
4
[The entire class, including Kyousuke and Hiromi, look back wide-eyed. This
is Hikaru's pov.]
5
[Kyousuke smiles in relief.]
Hiromi:
Huh?! e?!
narration:
Oh... Ohhh... na... na--n da...
6
[Hiromi waves a hand in the direction of Madoka.]
Hiromi:
Th-then... Kasuga-kun, you ji ja... KASUGA-kun kono KO to wa...
and this girl... then with-this-girl (T)
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Kyousuke: [sweating]
Eh?! Uh, that is... e?! a sore wa...
2
[Madoka portrait--she looks back a little sadly...]
3
[...then tosses her hair back and walks away.]
Madoka: __ __ _
*I* *hate* *drunks*! yopparai wa... ki - ra - i!
drunks (T) = dislike
Kyousuke: [wincing]
.......... ..........
4
[Split panel. Exterior shot of a school building.]
Komatsu: [off]
See?! hora miro!
Kasuga and Ayukawa... KASUGA to AYUKAWA nante
and the-likes-of
There's no way. sonna hazu nai ja nai ka
that-kind-of ought-not
Hatta: [off]
*This* is his girlfriend! koitsu no KANOJO wa kotchi!
his-girlfriend (T) this-way
Hikaru: [off]
Kyaa! "Girlfriend." I'm kya--_ KANOJO da nante
so embarrassed. ! girlfriend is the-likes-of
hazukashi--
embarrassing
5
[Hiromi stares at Hikaru, who looks back in puzzlement.]
Hiromi FX: ______
chira_
6
Hiromi:
So you're Kasuga-kun's anata ga KASUGA-kun no KANOJO na no ne
girlfriend. you (S) 's girlfriend
Hikaru: [to Kyousuke]
Who is this person? kono HITO DARE desu kaa?
this-person who is (?)
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[Hiromi extends a hand.]
Hiromi FX: ___
su_
2
[Hikaru's pov of Hiromi.]
Hiromi:
Nice to meet you! hajimemashite!
______
I transferred into this atashi KYOU kono kurasu ni
class today. I today in-this-class
TENKOU shite-kita
went-and-transferred
I'm Sugi Hiromi! SUGI hiromi yo!
3
Hiromi: [merrily]
At our old school, KASUGA-kun to wa
Kasuga-kun and I were with-Kasuga (T)
linked by the bonds of
a deep friendship. MAE no GAKKOU de FUKAi YUUJOU no
at-previous-school deep-friendship 's
kizuna de
bonds/ties by
MUSUbarete-ta no yo
was-tying/linking
Pleased to meet you! yoroshiku ne!
4
[Four portraits, split by a narration. On the right, Kyousuke looks across
to the other portraits. On the left are portraits of Madoka, Hikaru and
Hiromi.]
narration:
I wonder which side of her koitsu... ittai doko made
is real... this-girl in-the-world how-far
HONKI na no yara...
seriously I-wonder
Now I'm nervous about the korya SAKI ga OMOiyarareru
future... point/future (S) feel-anxious
naa...
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