Kimagure Orange Road
"Say That You Like Me!"
Volume 11, Story 1
WB Volume 6, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 187 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 187 (7)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka, in her school uniform, stands against a white background, raising
her skirts as though to curtsy. A light casts her shadow to the left.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
Say That You Like Me! SUki to iinasai!
liking say-that-(command)
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
The Balance of Your Heart YUMEMIGOKOCHI no GEKKOU ni
Is Disturbed by the Surreal as-if-in-a-dream 's moonlight (IO)
Light of the Moon, and When _______
You Experience a Graceful KOKORO no baransu MIDAsarete
Giddiness, Then Tonight, heart 's balance being-put-in-disorder/
Your Ballerina... disturbed/agitated
YUUGA na memai o KANjitara
graceful/ giddiness/ (O) when-feel
elegant vertigo/dizziness
__________
KOYOI wa anata no bareri--na...
tonight/ (T) your ballerina
this-evening
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p 188 (8)
1
[Exterior shot of a train as it runs down the tracks.]
narration:
Anywhere, in general, ASA no TSUUGAKU DENSHA ni
there's usually at least morning 's attending-school on-elec-train
one girl on a morning train
to school who is... wa taitei doko demo
(contrast) in-general in-any-place
hitori gurai wa...
1-person extent (T)
2
[Overhead shot of the crowded train filled with commuters and students.]
3
[Two guys look back at us.]
narration:
A Madonna, attracting the OTOKO no KO no ATSUi SHISEN o
hot stares of boys. boy 's hot-looks (O)
atsumeru
attract/concentrate-(on)
_______
madonna ga iru mono desu
Madonna (S) there-is person is
4
[A blonde girl in school uniform stands and hangs onto a pole while reading a
book--about 16, shoulder-length hair done up in ponytails on both sides of
her head. And, of course, cute. (In fact, she resembles Kyouko-chan, the
5-year-old girlfriend of Kazuya.) She is Sayuri, a new major character.]
guy 1: [off] ______
Hey, babe! nee kanojo!
hey baby/mama/good-lookin'
5
Sayuri:
Yes? haa?
6
guy 1: _ __ _ __ ____
Eh heh eh heh. You're cute, e he e he kimi kawaii nee
aren't you. you cute (rhet)
Do you always take this itsu-mo kono DENSHA ni notte-ru no?
train? always on-this-train are-riding
guy FX:
suri suri
Sayuri: [cringing away]
Y-yes... ha haa...
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p 189 (9)
1
[Pov shifts to show other students watching the scene.]
guy 2: [angrily, to another guy]
He's a student at Daishouji aitsu DAI- SHOU JI
School...! that-guy great holy temple
GAKUEN no SEITO da ze...
school 's student is !
Damn... chikusho--
___
With our Sayuri-chan... ore-tachi no sayuri-chan ni...
our to-Sayuri
guy 1: [off] ___ _____
Why not come with me next KONDO ore to saa baiku de...
time on my motorcycle... next-time with-me on-motorcycle
2
guy 1:
Hmm? Sound good? nee i-- darou
Sayuri: [cringing]
B-but... de demo
3
[Another guy steps in, laying a hand on guy 1's shoulder.]
guy 3: ____
You! Stop that! kimi yoshita mae!
you stopped/ceased
Can't you see she's KANOJO iyagatte-iru ja nai ka!
unwilling! she is-unwilling/disliking
guy 3 FX: _____
munzu
4
[Guy 3's pov as guy 1 looks at him nervously.]
guy 1: ___
Arg! Y-you're...!! ge_ o omae wa_!!
arg! you (T)
[Behind a nervous Sayuri, a gaggle of girls stares back at us as well.]
girls:
Kyaaa! kya---_
girl 1:
Ohh! That's "Prince" maa! KIBOU ga OKA KOUKOU
Ichijou-san from the boxing high-school
club at Kibou ga Oka High __________ _______
School. bokushingu -BU no purinsu ICHIJOU-san yo
boxing-club 's Prince
5
guy 1: [sprinting out the door]
D-damn. chi chikusho--
You'll pay for this! oboete-ro----_!
"Prince" Ichijou: ___
Heh! He's not worth fu_ KUCHI hodo ni mo nai yatsu...
talking about... ! mouth extent not-have fellow
6
[Sayuri facial portrait--cute and with gratitude.]
Sayuri:
Th-thank you-u-u. a arigatou gozaimasuu
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p 190 (10)
1
"Prince" Ichijou: [embarrassed, blushing]
S-so cute... ka kawaii...
"Prince" Ichijou FX: ___
po_
"Prince" Ichijou:
N-not at all... i iya...
2
[Sayuri leaves the train and walks across the platform. Ichijou follows her.]
Sayuri:
Bye... ya...
"Prince" Ichijou:
Ah. Wait. a matte
3
[His pov as she turns to look.]
4
"Prince" Ichijou: ____
I've never met a lovely kimi no you na KAREN de
and pure girl like you like-you being-pretty/lovely/cute
before...!
JUNJOU na KO wa HAJImete
purehearted-girl (T) for-the-first-time
da...!
is
[Indignant students of both genders glare at the scene.]
students: _____
OHHHHH... o~~~~
5
Sayuri: [stricken]
Ca... so...
6
[Sayuri turns away and runs off, visibly embarrassed.]
Sayuri:
Can't be... sonna
I'm... atashi nante
So embarrassed! hazukashii_
Excuse me!! SHITSUREI shimasu!!
Sayuri FX: ___
da_
"Prince" Ichijou: _____
Ah! You!! a kimi_!!
girl:
Wo-o-ow, Ichijou-san maaaa ICHIJOU-san ga furareru nante
rejected... (S) is-rejected or-such
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p 191 (11)
1
[Two girls walk past the ladies restroom at the train station.]
2
[Tight shot of a student's lower legs as she stands next to a toilet.]
3
[View pans up. It is Sayuri, writing in a black book.]
4
[Tight shot of the book. A pen inks a large 'X' over a picture and entry.]
notebook: [partial view]
Ichijou Akira ICHIJOU AKIRA
Kibou ga Oka High School KIBOU ga OKA KOUKOU
Senior class 3-NEN
__________ ________
Captain, Boxing Club bokushingu -BU kyaputen
____
Degree of Popularity: A mote -DO #A#
____
Habits: ... kuse...
pen FX: ___
bi_
5
Sayuri: [merrily]
Exactly 100 guys! choudo 100-NIN!
Now, I've made every kore de SHINAI no
handsome guy in the city with-this/now within-the-city-limits 's
say that they like me...! _hansamu_ ____
subete no BIDANSHI ni suki
every handsome-guy by liking
to iwasechatta...!
made-say-that-(finality)
6
[Closing the book, she looks up at us, winks and sticks out a cute tongue.]
Sayuri: ___
Tee! I'm such a cruel fu_ atashi tte TSUMI na ONNA ne!
woman! ! I (T) cruel-woman (rhet)
narration:
My name is Hirose Sayuri. atashi no NAMAE wa HIROSE sayuri
my-name (T)
_hansamu_
My hobby is hunting handsome SHUMI wa BIDANSHI
guys... hobby/interests (T) handsome-guy
________
hantingu...
hunting
book FX: _____
patan
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p 192 (12)
1
[View from over Kyousuke's shoulder as he walks across a street. Coming his
way, but looking off to her left, is Sayuri.]
narration:
Let all men who call YO no OTOKO to yu-- OTOKO
themselves men of the the-world 's man say-that man
world acknowledge my
appeal! subete ni atashi no MIRYOKU o
to-all my-charm/fascination (O)
mitomesaseru koto!
let-recognize/acknowledge (nom)
sign:
Ticket KAISATSU
2
[Kyousuke walks into her, sending her flying.]
Sayuri:
Oh! a
Kyousuke/Sayuri FX: ___
don
3
[Sayuri, on the ground, sits up and winces. Kyousuke drops to his knees in
wide-eyed concern.]
Sayuri:
Owww...! itaai..........!
Kyousuke:
Ah, I-I'm sorry! a go gomen ne!
____
Are you hurt? kega nakatta DAIJOUBU?
wound was-not all-right
4
Sayuri: [smiling] ____
(This lamebrain. (kono boke
Where is he looking while doko mite aruite n da_!!)
walking?!!) where looking walking (explan)
No... *I'm* sorry-y-y. ie... atashi koso gomennasaai
no I indeed sorry
5
Kyousuke: [blushing]
.......... ..........
6
[Sayuri opens her eyes, and her face goes blank.]
narration:
O-ohhhh. na nan da
Not a very impressive taishita OTOKO ja nai wa......
looking guy... great guy is-not
Sayuri:
(It's because I've become (nanse atashi tte OTOKO no KOE o
a girl who reacts merely by because I (T) guy's-voice (O)
reflex just to the sound
of a guy's voice.) ki--ta dake de tsui HANSHA-TEKI ni
listened only-by only by-reflex-action
_______
burikko shichau kara)
manner-girl done-(finality) that's-why
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p 193 (13)
1
[Sayuri portrait--deep in thought.]
narration:
Oh well, that's okay... ma ii ya...
Naturally, a guy of this kono TEIDO no OTOKO TOUZEN
caliber isn't on my list this-standard 's man naturally
of handsome guys... _hansamu_ ______
BIDANSHI risuto ni mo
on-handsome-guy-list too
notte-nai kedo...
not-appeared/recorded but
But since I'm at it, I may tsuide da kara koitsu mo...
as well do this guy, too... since-I'm-at-it this-guy too
2
[Leaning over, she reaches to grab him by his coat sleeve. Concern is written
on her face. Kyousuke is startled.]
Sayuri:
Ohh... ara...
It's ripped here, just now. koko IMA no de hokorobichatta
this-place at-present ripped-(finality)
no ne
I'm sorry-y-y. gomennasaai
3
[She whips out a needle and thread and goes to work on his coat. Kyousuke
stands nearby in his shirt and tie, studying her and smiling in contentment.]
needle FX: __________
chikuchiku
Kyousuke:
(Such a cute girl. (kawaii KO da na
This uniform... kono SEIFUKU...
There was a girl like this uchi no GAKKOU ni konna KO ga
at my school?) at-my-school this-kind-of-girl (S)
ita no ka)
was-there (?)
Kyousuke FX: ___
po_
4
[Shot of a car on the street.]
Sayuri: [off]
Sorry to have kept you o-machido--sama!
waiting!
Kyousuke: [off]
Thank you. arigato
5
[She continues on her way, looking back at him. Kyousuke watches her while
testing the sleeves on his coat.]
Sayuri:
Then... Excuse me-e-e. ja... SHITSUREI shimaasu
narration: _____
Watch! Now a guy of this mitenasai kono taipu no OTOKO wa
type will... look! this-type 's guy (T)
kore de...
with-this/now
6
[Pov shifts. We see Sayuri with a knowing expression on her face as a voice
off-panel goes...]
Kyousuke: [off]
WAIT!! matte!!
narration:
See?! There it is! hora kita!
see! came
Okay, it's all settled. yoshi KImeta
all-right decided/settled
With a guy of this caliber, kono TEIDO no KO ni wa
following this pattern, I'll to-this-standard-guy (contrast)
gently... _______
yanwari to kono pata--n de...
gently/mildly in-this-pattern
softly
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p 194 (14)
1
[Turning, she puts on her cute-girl act...]
Sayuri:
Sorry! gomen ne!
I'm sorry, but no matter WARUi kedo dotchi-ka to yu-- to
what you say, friendship sorry but either-one if-say-that
with you is...
anata to wa o-TOMODACHI to shite...
with-you (contrast) as-a-friend
Sayuri FX:
kuru_
2
[Pov shifts. Kyousuke runs to catch up to Madoka, who looks back at his cry.]
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa, wait up!! AYUKAWA matte yo!!
[Sayuri does a pratfall.]
3
[Nervous and unsure of herself, Sayuri waves at Kyousuke, who has turned to
wave goodbye to her.]
Sayuri:
U-uhh... a ano.....
Kyousuke:
Oh! Thanks for fixing it. a_! naoshite-kurete arigatou
! mending-(for-me) thanks
Bye! ja ne!
4
[Pov shifts to show Kyousuke greeting Madoka with a smile. Between them we
can see a stunned Sayuri, still standing on the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke:
Good morning. ohayo--
Nice weather, huh. ii TENKI da ne
5
[She drops her bag.]
Sayuri bookbag FX: ____
ton_
6
[Sayuri portrait--she nervously sweats, a look of worry on her face.]
narration:
What's this?! nan desu tte?!
what is (quote)
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p 195 (15)
1
[Sayuri's pov of Kyousuke and Madoka.]
narration: ____
C-can't be... so sonna baka na......
2
[Sayuri portrait--a stricken look.]
narration:
Something like this has IMA made atashi no JINSEI de
never happened to me before till-now in-my-life
in my life...
konna koto nante
this-kind-of-thing the-likes-of
nakatta wa...
not-happened
That's right... so-- yo...
I can't believe my charm, donna OTOKO datte otoshite-kita
which has taken every guy, what-kind-of-guy even gone-and-taken/
didn't get through!! captured
atashi no MIRYOKU ga TSUUjinai
my-charm (S) not-be-understood
nante!!
the-likes-of
3
[Sayuri squints her eyes in a glare--aimed right at Madoka.]
4
[Sayuri's pov--Madoka has turned to look back. It is a pleasant look.]
narration:
Ayukawa...?! AYUKAWA...?!
That girl, the one called ano KO AYUKAWA tte yu-- no...
Ayukawa... that-girl one-called-Ayukawa
5
[Upside-down Sayuri portrait. The background is pitch-black.]
Sayuri: ______
(Are you saying she's more (ano KO no ho-- ga suteki
wonderful...?!) that-girl more-wonderful
da tte koto...?!)
is (quote) (nom)
narration:
I've been humiliated for the atashi ni totte HAJImete no
first time... to-me/in-my-case for-the-first-time 's
KUTSUJOKU da wa...
humiliation/disgrace is
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p 196 (16)
1
[Sayuri turns to find a group of boys behind her. One boy drops to his knee
and presents her bookbag to her.]
guy 4:
Uhh, here... ano kore...
2
Sayuri: [cute smile]
Oh! ara_!
I'm... atashi ttara...
Oh no-o-o...! ya da------_
Thank you so-o-o much!! do--mo arigato-- gozaimaasu!!
[The guys gush in ecstasy.]
guys FX: ______ _____
o~~~~_ koro_
3
guy 5: ______
Sure enough, Sayuri-chan yappari sayuri-chan kawaii naa
is cute, isn't she. sure-enough cute (rhet)
guy 6:
She really is tops in the honto GAKKOU ICHI da yo na--
school, huh? true school one is (rhet)
Sayuri: [blushing, hands to her mouth]
Y-you can't mean me... so sonnaa atashi nante...
that-kind-of I the-likes-of
4
guy 5:
That innocence is more than sono uiuishisa ga tamaranai
one can bear, isn't it! that-innocence (S) unbearable
n da yo na----_
(explan) (rhet)
guy 6: __
You're right--she's in honto za - SEIJUN -HA
The Pureness Group. true the purity faction/group
Sayuri:
Really-y-y! Please don't moo_ karakawanai de kudasaai
tease me-e-e. ! don't-tease/make-fun-of-(please)
5
Sayuri:
Bye. Excuse me-e-e! ja SHITSUREI shimaasu!
Sayuri FX: _____
peko_
guys:
See ya later! mata ne---_!
6
[Sayuri hurries off. Her expression is dark.]
Sayuri FX:
tsukatsuka
narration:
Yeah... so-- yo
There's some sorta mistake! nani-ka no machigai yo!
something 's mistake
7
narration: _sensu_
That guy must have strange kitto BITEKI KANKAKU ga
tastes... surely an-aesthetic-sense (S)
okashi-- no yo ano OTOKO...
strange that-guy
Sayuri FX: ______
zunzun
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p 197 (17)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
guy 7: [off]
Did you see that? mita ka yo--
Sayuri-chan today... KYOU no sayuri-chan
2
[A view of the boys bathroom. Two guys use adjacent urinals. Sunlight
streams in through the windows.]
guy 7: _____
Was so cute, wasn't she. kawaikatta naa
She had a blush of adokenaku tte HAjirai ga atte
innocence... innocently shyness/blush (S) existing
The innocence of being JIBUN no MIRYOKU ni ZENZEN
totally unaware of her self 's charm (IO) totally
own allure!!
KIzuite-nai uiuishisa!!
not-have-become-conscious innocence
3
[Pov shifts. Exterior view of the school building. Sayuri walks by, and
overhears through the windows...]
guy 7: [off]
No matter what anyone says, yappari DARE ga nanto io-- to
Sayuri-chan is number one after-all who (S) what! if-shall-say
at our school.
sayuri-chan wa uchi no GAKKOU no
(T) our-school 's
__________
namba--wan da yo
number-one is
Sayuri:
! !
4
Sayuri: [modest smile] ___ _______ ___
Heh! Of course I'm number fu_ TOUZEN yo namba-- wan ni
one! ! naturally in-number-one
KImatte-ru ja nai!
is-natural/is-bound-to is-not
5
guy 8: ___
The girl I prefer is Ayukawa ore wa 1-NEN no AYUKAWA madoka tte
Madoka from the first-year I (T) first-year 's (T)
class...
KO no ho-- ga ii kedo naa
better-girl but (rhet)
guy 7: _____
Ehhhh?! What sort of taste e~~~~_ omae do-- yu-- sensu
do you have? ! you what-kind-of-aesthetic-sense
shite-ru n da
are-doing (explan)
6
[Sayuri turns her head back with a start, and visualizes her last look at
Madoka.]
narration:
Ayukawa...!! AYUKAWA......!!
From this morning... kesa no...
Her...?! ano KO no koto...?!
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p 198 (18)
1
guy 7:
Ayukawa has seemed scary and AYUKAWA tte CHUUTOU-BU no TOKI kara
punkish since junior high. (T) from-time-of-jr-high-section
FURYOU ppoku tte kowa so-- jan
delinquent-like frightful looks-as-if
She seems like she's trying OTOKO demo tsukutte
to be a guy. man or-something making/building
so-- da shi
looks-as-if consider
2
guy 8:
But I think if you look at demo yoku miru to BIJIN da shi
her closely, she's beautiful but if-look-hard beauty and-besides
and has a figure second to _______ ________
none... sutairu datte batsugun
one's-figure even unsurpassed/outstanding
da to OMOu kedo...
is think-that but
guy 7:
Well... But even though ma-- demo GAIKEN ga yokutte-mo
she looks good, yeah... but appearance (S) even-tho-good
nee
(rhet)
3
[They're still standing at the urinals...]
guy 7:
Those like Ayukawa have AYUKAWA mitai na no o SEIKAKU
what's called an ugly like-Ayukawa (nom) (O) personality
personality! ____
busu tte yu-- n da ze!
ugly called (explan) !
___ ___ __
ha_ ha_ ha
guy 8:
I wonder... so-- ka naa......
4
[Tight shot of Sayuri's torso.]
narration:
Even if it's just a few... tatoe SHOUSUU demo...
even-if few/minority even
Sayuri hand FX: ___
gu_
5
Sayuri: [a sinister look]
(Men's eyes... (OTOKO no KO no ME wa...
guy 's eye/attention (T)
Must all be trained on me subete atashi ni muite-nakya
or I won't be satisfied!!) all at-me if-not-looking/turning
KI ga sumanai wa!!)
not-be-satisfied
6
[View pans back. She stands, fists clenched, determination on her face.]
narration: _____ __ _________
All or nothing!! o--ru - oa - nasshingu!!
I'm a perfectionist! atashi tte KANZENSHUGI-SHA na no yo ne!
I (T) a-perfectionist am
But... shikashi...
I should be in fear of osoru beshi
Ayukawa Madoka!! in-fear/awe shall/will/must/should
AYUKAWA madoka!!
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p 199 (19)
1
[Sayuri walks down a school hallway.]
2
[Sayuri portrait--she looks back at us.]
3
[Pov shifts. Over her shoulder we spot an unaware Madoka walking toward her.]
Sayuri:
That girl...! ano KO......!
4
[Sayuri's pov of a gorgeous-looking Madoka, who looks off to one side.]
5
[Pov from behind Madoka. Sayuri glares.]
6
[Pov through the window looking in at the hallway. The two girls approach one
another.]
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p 200 (20)
1
[As in all great samurai duels, the two pass each other with eyes pointed
straight ahead.]
2
[A ball rolls to the feet of one of the girls.]
ball FX: ___ ________
ton korokoro
3
guy 9: _____
Hey-y-y. Pretty babe over o--i soko no kawaiKO-chan!
there! that-place 's a-pretty/cutie-pie
4
[Sayuri turns, cuteness factor raised to the max.]
Sayuri: _____
Oh no-o-o! Pretty babe... ya da----_ kawaiKO-chan da nante
! is the-likes-of
Really now... mo----...
Sayuri FX:
kuruu!
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p 201 (21)
1
guy 9: [to Madoka] ____ ____
Hey-y-y. That's you. You. o--i kimi da yo kimi
heyyy you is
[Madoka turns.]
2
[Sayuri's eyes pop wide and she blushes in embarrassment.]
3
guy 9: ______
Sorry... Could you get the WARUi na-- bo--ru totte-kurenai?!
ball for me?! sorry ball not-get-(for-me)
[Madoka looks down at the ball.]
4
[She tosses him a perfect overhand strike.]
throw FX: ___
ba_
guy 9: _____ ___________ ____
Hey, nice control, you. naisu kontoro--ru ii ne kimi
nice-control good (rhet) you
______
Let's go on a date next KONDO de--to shiyou yo
time. next-time shall-date
________
Thank you! sankyu--!
5
[Sayuri blushes furiously and addresses Madoka in embarrassment.]
Sayuri:
Ahh... a...
Madoka:
? ?
6
Sayuri:
Ah. Ah ha ha... a a ha ha...
[Madoka looks back without expression.]
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p 202 (22)
1
Madoka footsteps FX: ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_
[Sayuri watches her walk away.]
2
[She turns her back on Madoka and stands there. Over her shoulder, we see
Madoka continue on her way.]
3
[The ball rolls to a stop near Sayuri.]
ball FX: ___ ________
ton korokoro
4
guy 9: _____
Ah, pretty ba... a soko no kawai...
5
[Skirts flying high, Sayuri uncorks a full-extension kick at the ball.]
ball in guy's face FX: _____
zuban
guy 9:
Wah-eee! wahi--_
6
Sayuri:
Huff... Puff, puff, puff. haa... haa haa haa
(C-can't forgive this!!) (yu... yurusenai!!)
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p 203 (23)
1
[Sayuri stares daggers into the back of Madoka.]
narration:
Ayukawa Madoka!! AYUKAWA madoka!!
I'll never forgive you!! ZETTAI yurusanai kara!!
absoluteness not-forgive/allow that's-why
Such humiliation!! kono KUTSUJOKU!!
I'll pay you back double!! BAI ni shite kaeshite-yaru!!
two-fold pay-back-(to-you)
2
[Sayuri stops to look up at the ceiling, worry on her face.]
narration:
But then, I'm up against a ka to itte
delinquent... but-on-the-other-hand/having-said-that
AITE wa FURYOU...
opponent (T) delinquent
Too much for a delicate kayowai OTOME no atashi ja
maiden like me to handle delicate-maiden (nom) by-me (contrast)
by brute force...
WANRYOKU de wa HA ga tatanai
by-force/strength (T) be-too-much-for-(one)/
be-more-than-(one)-
can-cope-with
shi...
consider
guy 7: [flashback]
Ayukawa has seemed scary and AYUKAWA tte CHUUTOU-BU no toki kara
punkish since junior high... (T) from-time-of-jr-high-section
FURYOU ppoku tte kowa so-- da shi...
delinquent-like frightful looks-as-if
3
[View towards some buildings in town.]
narration: ______ ______
Doesn't she have some weak nani-ka ui--ku - pointo wa
point...?! some weak-point (T)
nai mono ka...?!
not-have thing (?)
4
[Madoka leaves school. Sayuri tails her.]
Sayuri:
(If she had a guy... (OTOKO demo irya...
man or-something if-have/if-there-is
Then I'd snatch him away atashi no MIRYOKU de ubatte-yaru
with my charm!) by-my-charm taking-away/snatching
no ni)
even-though
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1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
2
[Kyousuke meets her outside the door.]
Madoka:
Oh! Did you wait long? ara! matta?
3
[He leads the way inside.]
Kyousuke: ___
No... I just got here, too! iya... ore mo IMA kita toko!
no I too now came case
4
[Sayuri watches this from behind a corner.]
narration:
Oh...! That guy from this a...! ano OTOKO wa ASA no...!!
morning...!! that-guy (T) morning 's
What the heck sorta ittai do-- yu--
relationship do they have? in-the-world what-kind-of
KANKEI na n daro?
relation/connection is (poss-explan)
Maybe... moshiya......
5
narration:
Maybe this is just a koitsu wa hyotto shitara
coincidence... this-guy (T) maybe/possibly
hyotto suru ka mo...
by-accident do it-may-be
6
[Sayuri listens at the front door. Her eyes pop wide...]
Madoka: [off]
You mustn't! dame yoo
If someone sees us here... konna toko de HITO ga mitara...
at-this-kind-of-place people (S) if-see
Kyousuke: [off]
It's all right. DAIJOUBU
Nobody's looking!! dare-mo mite ya shinai yo!!
nobody see -do
Sayuri:
! !
7
[Sayuri blushes and she goes goggle-eyed.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Closer! motto soba ni o-yori yo!
much-more near approach/come-near
Madoka: [off]
Grr. Don't touch that, moo sonna koto
please. Pervert! grr that-kind-of-thing
sawannai de #H#!
not-touch = please pervert
Sayuri heartbeat FX: ____
doki
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1
[Sayuri walks away, casting a final glance back over her shoulder at ABCB's
front door.]
narration:
Wh-what's this... na nante koto...
That those two have ano futari soko made no
gone that far in their those-2-people up-to-there 's
relationship...
NAKA datta to wa...
relationship was (define)
Sayuri footstep FX: ___
ton
2
narration:
At last I've got it!! tsui ni tsukanda zo!!
at-last seized/grasped !!
______ ______
Ayukawa Madoka's weak AYUKAWA madoka no ui--ku - pointo
point...
In this case, watch me kill ko-- narya ISSEKI-NICHOU
two birds with one stone!! if-become-like-this killing-2-birds-
with-one-stone
da mitenasai!!
is watch-(command)
With my charm, I'll... ano OTOKO atashi no MIRYOKU de...
that-guy by-my-charm
3
[Tight facial portrait. Sayuri gives us a determined, yet beautiful look.]
narration:
Snatch that guy away!! ubatte-yaru...!!
4
[Meanwhile, inside ABCB, Kyousuke and Hikaru stare up at the TV behind the
counter, both blushing furiously. A porn video is playing--a guy in shorts
all over a topless girl. Madoka wipes dishes, gaze downcast, slight blush
on her cheeks.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-whaaat? na nan daa
_____ _____
This is the anime video that kono anime bideo hikaru-chan ga
Hikaru-chan brought? this-anime-video (S)
motte-kita no?
brought
Hikaru: [smiling]
But I told you, Komatsu-san datte KOMATSU-san ga kashite-kureru
loaned it to me... but (S) loaned-(to-me)
tte yu-- kara...
say-that that's-why
video boy:
It's okay, isn't it?! ii daro na_ ii daro
It's okay.
video girl:
Yes... If it's you. ee... anata nara
Madoka:
.......... ..........
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