Kimagure Orange Road
"The Terrifying Legend of Winter Mountain"
Volume 11, Story 6
WB Volume 6, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (15 Oct 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Dan Root
Thomas Wyatt
Scott Henry
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 287 (107) are only in the WBs!
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p 287 (107)--TITLE PAGE
[Half-portrait of an elegant-looking Madoka. She stands in a black bra, or
low-cut slip, with hair done up. Back-lit, her hair shimmers like a halo.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Terrifying Legend of FUYU YAMA KYOUFU
Winter Mountain winter mountain fear/dread/terror
DENSETSU
legend/tradition/folklore
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
If This Is a Wonderful SUTEKI na YUME nara
Dream, Don't Awaken Me... wonderful dream if-it-is
SAmenai de
not-waking-up
If This Is a Bitter Lie, TSURAi USO nara
Don't Tell Me... hard/painful/bitter lie if-it-is
HAkanai de...
not-speaking-out/uttering
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p 288 (108)
1
[Madoka and Hikaru bathe in the altogether in a very large tub. Hikaru
stands, clutching a towel to her chest, and gazes up at the ceiling. Madoka
sits at the edge, dangling her legs in the water, and looks back at us.]
Madoka and Hikaru FX: ______
chapun
2
[Madoka enters the water. She notices that Hikaru is staring at her chest.]
Hikaru FX:
ji~~
3
[Hikaru's pov. Madoka blushes a bit and wipes her cheek with a towel.]
Madoka:
What's with you, Hikaru? nani yo hikaru
what
________
Staring at someone like HITO no koto jirojiro mite
that. about-person staring
Madoka/towel FX: _____
jabu_
4
Hikaru: [staring in wonderment]
Madoka-san, you're the type madoka-san tte kiyase suru
that looks slimmer when (T) slimmer-in-clothes do
wearing clothes, aren't you. _____
taipu na n desu nee
type are (explan) (rhet)
Madoka:
Huh?! e_?!
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p 289 (109)
1
[Shot of the sliding door to the furo (washroom). It slowly slides open a
bit.]
Hikaru: [off]
I wonder if I can be atashi mo KOUKOUSEI ni nattara
well-built like you when I too when-become-high-school-student
*I'm* a high-school student. ________
madoka-san mitai ni gurama-- ni
like-Madoka "glamour-girl"
nareru ka naa
able-to-become I-wonder
Madoka: [off]
Don't say brazen stuff maseta koto iwanai no!
like that! forward/pert thing not-say
door FX: _____
su--_
2
[An eye appears at the gap in the door.]
Grandpa FX:
ji--
3
[Looking over his shoulder we can see Hikaru emerge from the water.]
Hikaru: ________
Ohh?! I wonder where the are~~_ shampu-- doko kashira
shampoo is. ! shampoo where I-wonder
Hikaru FX: ___
za_
4
[Hikaru looks up with a smile to find a hand enter through the crack in the
door. It holds a bottle of shampoo.]
Hikaru:
Oh. Thanks! a do--moo_
hand FX: ____
hyoi
shampoo: _______ ________
Loofa Shampoo hechima shampu--
loofa-sponge shampoo
5
[Holding the shampoo in her hand, Hikaru's expression turns to a skeptical
glare. Madoka stares at the shampoo in surprise.]
Hikaru:
HM?! n?!
6
[Grandpa beats a hasty retreat. Looking both ways, he pauses at the hallway
door to the changing room. Kyousuke ambles down the hall towards him.]
Grandpa FX: _____
sasa_
7
[Kyousuke stops in puzzlement to watch Grandpa scurry down the hall, turn
right and continue on his way.]
Grandpa FX: ____ ___ ________
byu_ ku_ sutasuta
8
[Looking inside the open door to the changing room, he sees a stricken Hikaru
(wearing a towel) and Madoka (in panties, just putting on her bra).]
Hikaru/Kyousuke:
AHH!?! a~~_?!
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p 290 (110)
1
[Exterior night view of the grandparents' home. Snow blankets the ground,
trees and roof; the skies are clear. It is a tranquil scene...]
Hikaru: [off] __________
Kyaaaa! Sempai, you kyaa~~_ sempai no etchii~~~~!!
perve-e-ert!! ! 'H' =
2
[Grandpa, Hikaru, Madoka, Yuusaku and Kyousuke sit around the open fire pit
in the living room. A pot hangs over the fire, suspended from a long wooden
pole hanging down from the ceiling. Grandma arrives with a tray of food.]
narration: _chi_ ______
Right now, we're here at IMA oji--chan IE ni suki-- ni
ojiichan's place to ski. now at-ojiichan's-place to-ski
kite-imasu
are-coming
3
[Hikaru casually slips the sweater she is wearing down off her left shoulder.
Kyousuke and Yuusaku stare across at that bared shoulder and blush.]
Hikaru:
That was a nice hot bath. i-- o-YU deshita
nice hot-bath was
__________
Look! My skin's so smooth! hora o-hada mo tsurutsuru!
look! the-skin too smooth
Hikaru sweater FX: _____
pero_
Kyousuke/Yuusaku heartbeat FX: ______
dokkin
4
[Puffing on his pipe, Grandpa turns to Hikaru.]
Grandpa: _uchi_
We get the water from a IE wa CHIKAku kara
nearby hot spring... household (T) from-nearby
ONSEN hi--te-ru kara nee
hot-spring are-drawing that's-why (rhet)
Hikaru:
Really?! No wonder I hee--_ do--ri de yoku attamaru
thought the water was ! no-wonder-that nicely warm
delightfully warm!
to OMOtta!
thought-that
5
Grandpa: [smiling]
But... shikashi...
I'm really glad you all HONTOU ni yoku kite-kureta_!!
came!! really well came-(for-me)
Hikaru: [cheerfully]
Again, thank you for your tabitabi o-SEWA ni narima--su_!
hospitality! many-times/ much-obliged-to-you
repeatedly
[Kyousuke and Yuusaku, sitting side-by-side, pause in drinking tea to squint
at one another.]
Kyousuke/Yuusaku:
(But... (shikashi......
Wherever I go, this guy's doko-ka iku to koitsu
always there...) when-go-somewhere this-guy
kanarazu iru naa)
always is-there (rhet)
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p 291 (111)
1
Hikaru: [stretching her arms]
Well, tomorrow I'm gonna saate ashita wa omoikkiri
ski all-out!! well tomorrow (T) as-much-as-I-please/
to-my-heart's-content
suberu soo--_!!
ski look-like
[Hand to chin, Yuusaku ponders...]
Yuusaku: ______ ______
But this ski slope doesn't shikashi koko no suki--JOU rifuto ga
have a lift, so it's going but this-place 's ski-place lift (S)
to be very tiring...
nai kara shindo -so-- da naa
not-have that's-why tiring look-as-if
2
Grandpa: ______
Lift?! rifuto?!
You don't need anything sonna mon iran ja nai ka!
like that! that-kind-of-thing
not-need
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
3
Grandpa: _chikara_
Kyousuke! Use the Power KYOUSUKE omae NOURYOKU de mina-san o
to carry everyone... you by-Power everyone (O)
hakonde...
carrying/transporting
Mmph. uguugu
[Kyousuke claps his hand over Grandpa's mouth.]
Kyousuke hand FX: ___
ba_
4
[Madoka and Yuusaku watch in blank puzzlement. Hikaru pooh-poohs it with the
palm of one hand. Grandpa struggles under Kyousuke's hand, while Kyousuke
smiles nervously at his friends.]
Madoka: _chikara_
The Power? NOURYOKU tte?
Hikaru:
Oh, c'mon...! ya da--_
Even considering that it's ikura SEMPAI demo NINGEN no
Sempai, that's not humanly for-all-that-it's-Sempai even human 's
possible, right!
CHIKARA ja muri desu yo ne~~_
strength impossible is (rhet)
Grandpa FX: ________
mogomogo
5
[With a single upraised finger, Grandpa levitates Kyousuke.]
Grandpa: ___
There! hoi!
Kyousuke FX: _____
fuwa_
Kyousuke:
AH! a
6
[Tight shot of Kyousuke's hand as it grasps the wooden pole that hangs from
the ceiling.]
Kyousuke hand FX: ___
ga_
7
[Kyousuke, with body extending perpendicular to the pole, seemingly slides
himself up and down the pole by his hands. Hikaru stares up in unadulterated
hero-worship. Grandpa smiles. Yuusaku studies this act with some skepticism.
Madoka looks on with wide-eyed concern.]
Kyousuke FX: ____________
surusurusuru
Kyousuke:
Oo-wah! Ah ah ah. uwa_ tatata
Hikaru: _____ ______
Oh, my! Amazing, Sempai!! n maa sugoi!! sempai
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p 292 (112)
1
[Isolated shot of the open fire-pit. A kettle of tea hangs above the fire.]
Hikaru: [off] ______ ______
But even though this is a demo kekko-- suteki na suki--JOU
pretty fantastic ski slope, but quite wonderful ski-course
it looked like no one was
skiing at all... na no ni HITO zenzen
is even-tho people -at-all
subette-nakatta mitai desu ne--
were-not-skiing seems (rhet)
Grandpa: [off]
None of the locals will JIMOTO no MONO wa dare-mo
ever ski there... local people (T) nobody
suberyasen yo asoko de wa...
-ski at-that-place (T)
2
[Grandpa's pov of Hikaru, Madoka and Yuusaku. He has their attention.]
3
Grandpa:
Especially... TOKU ni......
Young folks. WAKAiSHUU wa na
young-persons (T)
4
Grandpa: [with a serious expression]
That's right. so-- da
Just a quick word before ano YAMA de suberu MAE ni
you go skiing on that on-that-mountain before-ski
mountain.
hitokoto dake itte-oku
a-single-word just tell-(for-future-sake)
koto ga aru
there-is-something
5
Grandpa: [sternly]
KYOUSUKE!! KYOUSUKE_!!
Kyousuke:
Y-YES! ha hai!
6
Grandpa: [pointing]
Which one is your dotchi ga KANOJO na n ja?!
girlfriend?! which (S) girlfriend is (explan)
[Kyousuke does a pratfall. Hikaru goes wide-eyed with embarrassment. Madoka
looks surprised.]
7
[With a smile Hikaru slaps Grandpa in the back. Grandpa reels.]
Hikaru:
C'mon-n-n! ya da~~~~_
Really, ojiisama! oji--sama ttaraa
Hikaru backslap FX: ___
don
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p 293 (113)
1
Kyousuke: [nervous smile] ______
That has nothing to do suki-- to wa KANKEI nai desho!
with skiing! with-skiing (contrast) poss-have-no-relation
Grandpa: [solemnly]
Oh, but it does so... tokoro ga OOini
Very much! but very-(much)/greatly
aru n ja!
there-is (explan)
2
Grandpa:
If either one is your moshi dochira-ka ga KOIBITO dattara
sweetheart, you must never if either-one (S) sweetheart if-is
be together with her on ______
the ski slope! suki--JOU de wa ZETTAI
on-ski-course (contrast) absoluteness
kuttsuite-ite wa ikan!
must-not-be-adhering-to
3
[The four youngsters stare back in surprise. Hikaru looks stricken as well.]
4
Grandpa:
Especially since it looks TOKU ni KYOUSUKE omae wa
as if you can't ski, especially you (T)
Kyousuke...
suberen -so-- ja kara...
can't-ski look-as-if since
_____
gohon
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
5
[Grandpa leans over towards a surprised Kyousuke. Grandpa's face is becoming
flushed.]
Grandpa:
That is... sono-- na n jaa
that is (explan)
You'll somehow tell her to TEtoriASHItori oshiete-ageru
coach you, by hand and by by-hand-and-foot coach-(you)
foot...!
to ka ittari shite--_
say-somehow-(and)
Grandpa FX: ____
zui_
6
[Grandpa goes highly-theatrical, raising both fists up near his face and
glaring up at the ceiling.]
Grandpa:
...and then just kinda koronda hyo--shi ni
"happen" to fall down, and fell-down at-the-moment-of
just "happen" to kiss... ___
omowazu SEPpun
involuntarily/in-spite-of-oneself kiss
What am I saying?! nanchatte_!
________
Oh, how shameless... oo nantaru harenchi na...
how-to-put-it shameless
kuu~~~~
Yuusaku: [nervously]
Mister. Mister... ossan ossan...
7
[Grandpa wipes his brow with a towel and holds out his tea cup. Hikaru pours.]
Grandpa:
Oh, thank you. ya katajikenai
haa fuu haa fuu
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p 294 (114)
1
[Grandpa addresses Kyousuke solemnly, and rests a hand on his shoulder.
Kyousuke gets angry.]
Grandpa:
...shouldn't do such a to yu-- yo-- na WAKAsa ni makaseta
youthfully reckless thing! like-that youthfully left-to
BOUSOU dake wa ikan zo_!
reckless-run just must-not !!
Grandpa hand-on-shoulder FX: ___
pon
Kyousuke:
I WON'T! shimasen yo_!
2
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
But why can't two lovers demo do--shite KOIBITO-DOUSHI
ski together? but why couple-of-lovers
subetcha ikenai n desu kaa?
must-not-ski (explan) (?)
3
Grandpa: [dropping his gaze]
Kyousuke. You know, right. KYOUSUKE omae wa SHItte-orou
you (T) shall-be-knowing
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
4
Grandpa:
The "Stark Naked" legend uchi no MURA ni tsutawaru supponpon
handed down in our in-our-village handed-down stark-naked
village...
DENSETSU o......
legend (O)
5
[Kyousuke portrait--he studies his Grandpa.]
6
Kyousuke:
Isn't that... are wa...
Just a superstition? tada no MEISHIN desho?
merely superstition poss-be
Grandpa: [rising to his feet]
If you value your life... INOCHI ga oshikattara...
life (S) if-was-precious
7
[Grandpa exits the room.]
Grandpa:
Listen a little to what chitto wa TOSHIYORI no yu-- koto mo
old people have to say!! a-little (T) the-old (S) say (nom) too
kiku mon ja zo
listen things is !!
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p 295 (115)
1
[Kyousuke's attention is turned to Yuusaku. Meanwhile, Grandma has entered.]
Grandma:
Well, well. Your beds have saa sa TOKO no YOUI ga
been made. bed 's preparation (S)
dekimashita yo
completed
Yuusaku: [to Kyousuke]
What is it? The nan da yo-- MEISHIN tte?
superstition? what is superstition (quote)
2
Kyousuke: [small smile]
It's nothing, it's nothing. nan demo nai nan demo nai
3
[Kyousuke turns and discovers how the beds have been made... The futons have
been laid out flush up against each other on the floor, and the pillows are
set side-by-side. Kyousuke blushes and staggers back.]
dramatic FX:
do~~n
Kyousuke FX:
gyo_
4
[The two girls' eyes grow large. Hikaru covers her open mouth with the palm
of one hand.]
Madoka/Hikaru heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
5
[Grandma shoves Madoka forward, into Kyousuke. Both are surprised.]
Grandma:
Now, now. Please rest easy. saa sa yukkuri yasunde-kudasare
at-ease go-to-bed/rest-(please)
Grandma shove FX: ___
don
Madoka/Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
6
Kyousuke: [wincing]
H-hold on, obaachan! chi chotto oba--chan
Grandma: [pushing a surprised Hikaru forward]
Oh? Then you want this ara ja kotchi no HITO ka no~~
one...? oh then this-way 's person (?)
7
[Exterior night shot of the home and surrounding trees.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Th-that's not it!! so so-- ja naku tte ne!!
like-so is-not (quote) (rhet)
Grandma: [off]
Then you want to make it a ja 3-NIN ISSHO kae?
threesome? then 3-people together (?)
______
You lech! kono sukebe!
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p 296 (116)
1
[Full-portrait of Hikaru as she gleefully skis through the powder.]
narration:
And then, the next day... soshite YOKUJITSU...
Hikaru skiing FX: ___
za_
2
[From high overhead, we look down upon a building (ski lodge?) and tiny
people as they go about their skiing.]
Hikaru: [off]
What the heck is it? nan na n desu kaa
what is (explan) (?)
The "Stark Naked" legend...? supponpon DENSETSU tte......?
stark-naked legend (quote)
Kyousuke: [off] ___
I don't know it well either, ore mo yoku wa SHIranai kedo...
but... I too well (T) not-know but
It's said that if two lovers kono YAMA de wa
flirt together on this on-this-mountain (contrast)
mountain, they always lose
their way. KOIBITO-DOUSHI ga ichatsuku to
couple-of-lovers (S) if-flirt-with-a-girl
kanarazu SOUNAN suru
always get-stranded/meet-with-an-accident
tte iwarete-ru n da
is-said-that (explan)
3
Hikaru: [stricken]
WHAAAT?!! e~~~~_!!
Kyousuke:
Also, for some reason, shikamo naze-ka HAKKEN sareta
when their bodies were moreover somehow were-discovered
discovered, they were naked,
even in the dead of a cold TOKI ni wa MAFUYU no
winter... at-time (contrast) depth-of-winter 's
SAMUi no ni HADAKA de
cold even-though in-bare-skin
SHInjatte-ru n da......
are-dead-(finality) (explan)
They wore expressions of marude ONRYOU ni demo
terror, just as if they'd just-as-if by-a- or-something
met a vengeful ghost... revengeful-ghost
DEatta you na KYOUFU no HYOUJOU de...
met looks-like terror 's facial- being
expression
4
[His pov of Madoka and Yuusaku. Madoka looks apprehensive.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
Yuusaku:
C-can't be. ma masakaa
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p 297 (117)
1
[Yuusaku smiles at Madoka, who turns to look.]
Yuusaku:
Then, Madoka-san, let's ja madoka-san ISSHO ni suberimasho
ski together. then together shall-ski
__ __ __
Ha ha ha! It'll be safe ha ha ha kore nara DAIJOUBU!
this way! this-(one) if-it-is all-right
Hikaru: [angrily]
What are you thinking? anta nani kanchigai shite n no
you what mistaking
2
Hikaru:
It's a shame, but if ZANNEN da kedo
Sempai and I are together, it's-a-shame but
something bad will happen...
atashi to SEMPAI ga ISSHO ni iru to
I and (S) together if-be
yokunai koto ga okoru kara...
not-good thing (S) happen that's-why
So in this case... kono BA-AI
3
Hikaru:
...the solution is this! ko-- suru no ga SEIKAI desu!
do-like-this (nom) (S) solution is
I'm with Yuusaku. atashi wa YUUSAKU to
I (T) with-Yuusaku
Sempai, please ski with SEMPAI wa madoka-san to ISSHO ni
Madoka-san. (T) with-Madoka together
subette-kudasai
ski-(please)
Yuusaku: [nervously]
Wh-why is it like this?! na nande ko-- naru no?!
why like-this become
[Kyousuke and Madoka look at each other blankly.]
4
[Hikaru and Yuusaku ski off.]
Hikaru:
Let's go, Yuusaku. ikimasho YUUSAKU
Hikaru/Yuusaku skiing FX: _____
zaza_
5
[Kyousuke smiles in nervousness and embarrassment. Madoka stares at him
blankly.]
Kyousuke: __ __ __ __ __
Ha... Ha ha ha ha! ha... ha ha ha ha
Madoka:
.......... ..........
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p 298 (118)
1
[Kyousuke, a little wobbly, leans toward Madoka. She crosses her arms over
her chest and flinches away.]
Kyousuke:
Well, sh-shall we ski? saa su subero-- kaa
Madoka:
H-hey! Don't come near chi chotto kotchi ni konai de yo!
me! this-way not-come
2
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
Huh? Why not? e do--shite?
3
Madoka: [slight blush]
Huh? e
4
[Madoka portrait--her eyes go a bit glassy.]
5
[A bit miffed, she starts to ski off. Coming near Kyousuke, she causes him
to stumble.]
Madoka:
Then look! Here I go! ja hora iku wa yo!
then look! go
Kyousuke:
Oh, I forgot to tell you. a sou da
_ ___
I-I can't sk... o ore suberena...
Madoka skiing FX: ___
za_
Kyousuke FX: ______
tsuru_
6
[He lands on her back and they hit the snow.]
Madoka:
KYA! kya_
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p 299 (119)
1
[View looking up at the clear skies.]
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: _____
dosa_
2
[Madoka lies on her back with Kyousuke sprawled on top of her. Both are
wide-eyed with surprise.]
3
[As they stare into each other's eyes, an image of Grandpa appears.]
narration:
Two lovers should never be KOIBITO-DOUSHI dattara
together on the ski slope! couple-of-lover if-is
______
suki--JOU de wa ZETTAI
on-ski-course (contrast) absoluteness
kuttsuite-ite wa ikan!
must-not-be-adhering-to/
must-not-become-intimate-with
4
[Split panel. Kyousuke, in the top half, stares nervously off to one side.
In the bottom half, Madoka stares up at him.]
Kyousuke: _____
gokun
5
[He stares at her.]
FX: [off] __ __ __
do do do...
6
[View pulls back somewhat. The two still stare raptly into each other's
eyes.]
FX: ______________
dododododododo
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p 300-301 (120-121)
1
[This panel is spread across the tops of two pages. The two look up to see
an avalanche approaching. Between the wall of snow and themselves lies the
opening to a cave.]
avalanche FX: ____________
dodododododo
2
[He looks up in horror.]
Kyousuke:
LOOK OUT!! abunai!!
3
[He sees the cave mouth.]
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
4
[The wall of snow hits.]
avalanche FX: ___
do_
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p 302 (122)
1
[Arms around Madoka, he propels her into the cave. Behind them, snow
completely blocks the entrance.]
avalanche FX: ___
do_
2
[Panels 2-4 depict the dark interior of the cave.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Phew... fuu...
3
Kyousuke: [off]
W-we're saved. ta...tasukatta
4
Madoka: [off]
But... da kedo...
We're snowed in. tojikomerarechatta wa
snowed-in-(finality/regret)
5
[Overhead, in the darkness, a bat flies.]
bat FX: _____
basa_
6
Madoka:
S-something's here! na nani-ka iru wa!
something there-is
7
bats FX: ____ ____
basa basa
Madoka:
KYA! kya_
[She dives into his arms.]
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p 303 (123)
1
[Both look up to see the bats.]
Kyousuke:
Th-they're only bats. ta...tada no koumori da yo
merely 's bat are
bats FX: ____ ____
basa basa
2
[Madoka portrait--she looks a bit unsettled.]
3
[Kneeling at the wall of snow, Kyousuke examines it.]
Kyousuke:
I-it's no good! da dame da!
This wall of snow is pretty kono YUKI no KABE so--to-- ATSUi yo
thick. this-snow 's wall rather-thick
It doesn't look as if we totemo dokase -so-- ni nai...
could possibly move it... cannot- can-move-aside doesn't-look-
possibly as-if
___ ___
haa haa
4
narration:
Shit...! kuso--_
_chikara_
If I use the Power, it's NOURYOKU o TSUKAeba wake nai n da kedo...
no problem... if-use-Power simple (explan) but
But not right in front of AYUKAWA no ME no MAE ja na...
Ayukawa... 's eyes in-front-of
5
Madoka:
Say... nee...
This cave... kono DOUkutsu..........
6
Madoka:
Somehow, it's strange. nan-da-ka HEN yo
[Kyousuke stares at her back.]
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p 304 (124)
1
[Pov shifts. Madoka still has her back turned towards him.]
2
[He reaches out a hand in apprehension.]
Kyousuke:
Ayu... AYU...
3
[Isolated shot of the top of the blocked entrance.]
Madoka: [off]
It's hot. atsui
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares back at us.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
ji----_
5
[Pov shifts. Madoka begins to take off her jumpsuit. Behind her, Kyousuke
stares and blushes.]
Madoka remove-jumpsuit FX: ___
ba_
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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1
[A sudden thought hits him.]
narration:
When their bodies were HAKKEN sareta toki ni wa
discovered, they were naked, were-discovered at-time (contrast)
even in the dead of a cold
winter... MAFUYU no SAMUi no ni
depth-of-winter 's cold even-though
HADAKA de SHInjatte-ru n da......
in-bare-skin are-dead-(finality) (explan)
They wore expressions of marude ONRYOU ni demo
terror, just as if they'd just-as-if by-a- or-something
met a vengeful ghost... revengeful-ghost
DEatta you na KYOUFU no HYOUJOU de...
met looks-like terror 's facial- being
expression
2
Kyousuke: [aghast]
A...Ayukawa... a...AYUKAWA...
3
[Tight shot of her jumpsuit as it hits the ground.]
jumpsuit FX: _____
pasa_
4
[His pov of Madoka, a half-portrait, standing in her bra, and wearing a sultry
look.]
Madoka:
You too, Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun mo..........
Take off your clothes. nugi na yo
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