Kimagure Orange Road
"The Valentine Kid!"
Volume 12, Story 1
WB Volume 7, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Ramon Galindo
Thomas Wyatt
Last revision : 08-20-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 47 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 47 (7)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka facial portrait. She motions to us for quiet, forefinger held to
her lips.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ _____
The Valentine Kid! barentain - kiddo!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ______
If You Keep It a Secret, naisho ni shite-tara
I'll Invite You... if-are-keeping-a-matter-secret
SASOtte-ageru......
invite-(you)
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p 48 (8)
1
[A view down a sidewalk that runs in front of the school. Students arrive
at school.]
narration: _sento_ _________ ____
February 14, St. Valentine's 2-GATSU 14-KA HIJIRI barentain de--!
Day! February-14 Saint-Valentine's-Day
2
[Kyousuke visualizes Madoka and Hikaru as he walks towards school.]
narration:
For a man... OTOKO ni totte...
It's the start of a day of KITAI to FUAN no
hope and anxiety. hope/expectation/ and uneasiness/ 's
anticipation anxiety
ICHINICHI no hajimari de aru
one-day 's the-start is
3
Kazuya: [off]
Oniichan!! oni--chan!!
4
[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder to see a smiling Kazuya.]
Kazuya: __ ___ ___
Eh! heh! heh! e_ he_ he_
Kyousuke:
Huh? Kazuya. are KAZUYA ja nai ka
5
[Kazuya points to the ground at Kyousuke's feet.]
Kazuya: ___________
Oh! You dropped some a_ chokore--to ochite-ru_!!
chocolate!!
[Kyousuke drops to his hands and knees, looking all around.]
Kyousuke:
Eh?! Where where where?! e_ doko doko doko_?!
Kyousuke FX: __________
kyorokyoro
narration:
If I say so myself, it's a ware nagara nasakenai JOUKEN HANSHA da!
conditioned reflex that I'm for-me-to-do- pitiful/ conditioned- is
ashamed of! such-a-thing shameful reflex
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p 49 (9)
1
[Kazuya launches his head at Kyousuke's.]
Kazuya:
Tricked ya-a-a!! hikkakatta------_!!
collision FX: ______
gochin
2
[The two lie on their backs, stunned.]
@Kyousuke/@Kazuya FX: ___
do_
3
[@Kyousuke gets to his feet, rubbing his head. @Kazuya still lies stunned.]
@Kyousuke:
Whew... fuu...
Now it's all right...! kore de DAIJOUBU... to!!
with-this all-right
@Kyousuke FX: _____
muku_
narration:
Actually, this Kazuya-kun jitsu wa kono KAZUYA-kun
is a powerful ESPer... actually this
DAI- CHOU NOURYOKU -SHA na no desu...
great super-ability person is (explan)
4
@Kyousuke:
See ya, oniichan. ja ne oni--chan
Sorry, but I leave the WARUi kedo ato wa tanomu yo
rest to you. sorry-but the-rest (T) leave-to
@Kazuya:
Eh?! e?!
5
@Kazuya:
W-wait! ma mate yo
Kazuya, what are you trying KAZUYA ikinari do-- yu--
to pull all of a sudden?!! all-of-a-sudden what-kind-of
tsumori da_!!
intention are
[He looks at his hands.]
@Kazuya: ___
AH! ha_
narration:
We... We swapped bodies!! i... irekawatte-ru!!
6
[@Kazuya clutches his cheek in agony.]
@Kazuya:
Ow-ouch!! itete_!!
narration:
Wh-whaaat?! na nan daa_
A rotten tooth? You jerk!! MUSHIBA ka koitsu!!
decayed-tooth (?) this-fellow
toothache FX: _____
zukin
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p 50 (10)
1
[Full-portrait of Akane is splashed over panels 1 and 4.]
Akane:
Hey! Kazuya!! kora_ KAZUYA_!!
2
[She angrily confronts @Kazuya.]
Akane:
You might try to run away, NIgeyo-- ttatte
but you won't!! shall-run-away even-tho-say
so-- wa ikanai kara ne!!
like-that (T) not-go that's-why
Mom asked me to watch over atashi KYOU ICHINICHI oka--san ni
you all day today!! I today all-day by-mother
anta no KANSHI
your-superintendence/watching-over-you
tanomarete n da kara!!
being-asked (explan) that's-why
3
[She hauls him off by his wrist.]
Akane:
*Today* you're going to KYOU koso wa HA-ISHA ni iku no yo_!!
the dentist!! today indeed (T) to-dentist going
@Kazuya: ___
Wait a sec, I'm Kyou... chotto ore wa KYOU...
wait-a-sec I (T)
4
Akane: [pausing]
Oh, Kyousuke! ara KYOUSUKE_!
5
[She reaches into her bookbag.]
Akane:
Perfect timing! cho--do yokatta wa_!
Anyway, since you aren't do--se motenai
popular with girls... anyhow not-popular-(with-girls)
anta no koto da
about-you are
I don't think your battle SENKA wa yokunai to OMOtte ne!
record will be any good, hm! success- (T) not-good thinking-that
in-battle
6
[Smiling, she hands @Kyousuke a heart-shaped box. @Kyousuke beams.]
Akane:
Here, for you. hai ageru
here give
_____
But, it's obligation tadashi GIRI choko yo!
chocolate! however obligation chocolate
@Kyousuke:
Eh! heh! heh! Thank you. e_ he_ he_ arigato
7
[Wincing, @Kazuya points to his own face.]
@Kazuya: ___
I'm Kyousuke-e-e!! ore ga KYOUSUKE da yo~~~~_!!
I (S) am
Akane: [pointing at @Kyousuke]
Then who's this?!! ja kore wa DARE yo_!!
then this-(one) (T) who
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p 51 (11)
1
[Akane smiles and waves to @Kyousuke as she hauls @Kazuya away. @Kyousuke
waves back.]
Akane:
Well, give it your best maa se--ze-- gambatte
shot. well at-best try-hard
At least get some from hikaru-chan kara dake wa morau n da yo~~
Hikaru-chan. at-minimum-from-Hikaru (T) receive (explan)
@Kazuya: [to @Kyousuke]
You scum-m-m!! kono rokudenashi~~~~~~_!!
2
narration:
Ahh, Ayukawa... aa AYUKAWA...
Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...
_____
The chocolates are fading choko ga to--zakatte-yuku~~~~_!!
into the distance!! chocolate (T) go-away/recede
@Kazuya FX: ____ ____
zuru zuru
3
[View of part of the playground at a kindergarten.]
Akane: [off]
Look here! i-- koto!
When school is over, I'm GAKKOU owattara mukae ni kuru
coming for you, okay, school when-end come-for
Kazuya!!
kara ne_!! KAZUYA
that's-why
sign:
Kindergarten YOUCHIEN
4
[She makes her point by clapping her palm against his cheek.]
Akane: _______
Don't even think about tonzura koko-- nante
trying to give me the slip!! make-a-narrow-escape the-likes-of
KANGAe n ja nai yo_!!
think-about (neg/explan)
Akane FX: ______
pisha_
5
[@Kazuya rockets about 2 meters into the air, and clutches that cheek.]
@Kazuya:
Ow-ow-ow-ouch!! itatatata~~~~~~_!!
narration: ___
Wh-why do I have to suffer na...nande ore ga konna ME ni?!
like this?! why I (S) like-this
suffer
6
[From out of the kindergarten rush Kazuya's two cute girlfriends. Both smile
at him.]
chibi clones:
Kazuya-kuuun! KAZUYA-ku~~n!
7
chibi Madoka-clone: ___________
Wait. Please accept my matte yo atashi no chokore--to uketotte!!
chocolate!! waiting my-chocolate accepting
chibi Hikaru-clone (Kyouko):
Please accept mine instead! atashi no HOU o uketotte!
my-direction (O) accepting
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p 52 (12)
1
[The two glare at @Kazuya as he nervously backs away.]
chibi Madoka-clone:
Whaaat? Mine!! nani yo~~~~ atashi yo_!!
Kyouko:
I'm first!! atashi ga SAKI_!!
I (S) the-first
2
[Both girls shove the large heart-shaped chocolates into his mouth.]
chocolate FX: ____
gabo
3
[Again, he rockets about 2 meters into the air. The two girls exchange
smiles.]
@Kazuya:
symbols>!! !!
Kyouko:
I bet he's crying tears kitto NAMIDA ga DEru hodo
of joy. surely tears (S) come-out extent
ureshi-- no yo
happy
4
[He clutches his twice-injured cheek.]
narration:
I-I think I understand a aitsu ga nigedashita no mo
why that guy ran away... that-fellow (S) ran-away (nom) too
wakaru yo-- na KI ga suru...
understand appear think/feel
____
I must also think twice anmari mote -sugiru no mo
about being too popular too-popular-(with-girls) (nom) too
with girls.
KANGAemon da na
a-puzzle/question is
@Kazuya toothache FX: ____ ____ ____
zuki zuki zuki
5
[Exterior view of Kouryou school.]
6
[Smiling, @Kyousuke munches on the chocolate that Akane just gave him.]
@Kyousuke:
Heh! heh! heh! Thank you he_ he_ he_ gochiso--san
for the treat.
@Kyousuke FX: ______
perori
7
[As he walks onto school grounds, he smiles back at us over his shoulder.]
@Kyousuke: ___
(I have a weakness for (ore tte AMAi mono ni wa
sweets!!) I (T) to-sweet-things (contrast)
ME ga nai n da_!!)
have-weakness-(for) (explan)
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p 53 (13)
1
[Hikaru beams and presents him with a 1-kg heart of solid chocolate.]
Hikaru:
HERE YOU GO!! do--zo_!!
2
[With a wink, Hiromi holds out a box of chocolate.]
Hiromi:
There's no deep significance FUKAi IMI wa
to this... profound/deep meaning/significance (T)
nai kedo
not-have but
I'm giving it for TOMODACHI no yoshimi de ageru!
friendship's sake! for-friendship's-sake give
3
[Sayuri presents him with a box of chocolate.]
Sayuri:
Imagine that it's me and atashi da to OMOtte o.i.shi.ku
dee-li-cious-ly eat it! I is think-that-(and) delicious
tabete!
eating
4
[@Kyousuke ogles the trove in his hands. From the sidelines, an angry Hatta
and Komatsu shout at him. Komatsu uses a bullhorn.]
Komatsu:
Friend! TOMO yo_
Should you be doing this?! kore de i-- no ka!
with-this/now okay (nom) (?)
Didn't we pledge to share YOROKObi mo KANAshimi mo
our joys and our sorrows?! joy and sorrow/grief and
TOMO ni shiyo-- to chikatta NAKA
shall-share-with swore-that relationship
ja nai ka_
are-not (?)!
Hatta:
Traitor-r-r. uragiri mono~~~~
5
[Exterior shot of the kindergarten.]
sign:
Kindergarten YOUCHIEN
6
narration:
Ouch... itete...
Damn. kusoo
_________ ____
Valentine's Day comes but TOSHI ni ICHIDO no barentain de-- da
once a year! in-a-year once 's Valentine's-Day is
to yu-- no ni
say-that even-though
Why must I suffer like nande ko-- yu-- ME ni awanakya ikenai
this?!! why this-kind-of must-suffer
n da_!!
(explan)
@Kazuya toothache FX: _______ _______
zuki~~n zuki~~n
7
@Kazuya:
(Still, I'm worried about (sore ni shite mo KI ni naru no wa
Hikaru-chan and Ayukawa... but/still being-concerned (T)
hikaru-chan ya AYUKAWA...
and
_____
I wonder if they gave me choko kureta ka naa)
chocolate.) chocolate gave-me I-wonder
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p 54 (14)
1
[@Kyousuke casually leans back against the railing on the roof of a school
building, munching his chocolates.]
@Kyousuke:
What a haul! TAIRYOU TAIRYOU!
2
@Kyousuke:
(But... (shikashi...
Come to think of it, I KANGAete-mirya
haven't received anything if-try-to-think-about
from Madoka-oneechan yet!!)
madoka-one--chan kara wa mada
from-Madoka (T) -yet
moratte-nai zoo!)
have-not-received !!
@Kyousuke FX: ________
mogumogu
3
@Kyousuke FX: _____
kusu_
@Kyousuke:
(That means that the (to yu-- koto wa futari no KANKEI
relationship between those that-means 2-people 's connection
two is the same as usual...
aikawarazu tte koto ka...
as-usual it-means (?)
Kyou-niichan's so KYOU-ni--chan no YUUJUUFUDAN!!)
indecisive!!) 's indecisiveness
4
[He looks up at the sky, clapping a hand over his mouth.]
narration: ____
But... upu_ shikashi...
Maybe it's because I ate so takusan tabeta se-- ka KIMOchi
much that I'm starting to much ate fault (?) feeling
feel sick.
WARUku natte-kichatta
badly started-becoming
@Kyousuke FX: ____
upu_
5
[Akane chases @Kazuya down the sidewalk.]
Akane:
Hold it, Kazuya!! machinasai KAZUYA_!!
@Kazuya: ___
(You're kidding! Why do I (JOUDAN! nande ore ga HA-ISHA ni
have to go to the dentist?!!) joking why I (S) to-dentist
ikanakya ikenai n da!!)
must-go (explan)
6
narration:
I know Akane's weak point!! akane no JAKUTEN wa SHItte-ru n da!!
's weak-point (T) am-knowing (explan)
@Kazuya: [pointing to the side]
Oh! Madoka-oneechan is a madoka-one--chan ga MI-SHIranu OTOKO ni
giving chocolate to a (S) to-strange/unknown-
strange guy!! guy
_____
choko o agete-ru_!!
chocolate (O) is-giving
Akane: [turning to look]
Huh?! Where? Where where? e_ doko? doko doko
7
Akane:
Y-you're kidding! Where?!! u uso~~~~_ doko yo~~_!!
[He teleports out.]
narration:
Even though I said it ware nagara
myself, it was a frightening for-me-to-do-such-a-thing
joke!
kowai JOUDAN o itte-shimatta!
scary-joke (O) said-(finality)
@Kazuya teleport FX: ____
shu_
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p 55 (15)
1
narration:
Although I'm the one that JIBUN de ittoki-nagara
said it, it's got me oneself/personally although-say-(for-
worried... future-sake)
SHIMPAI ni natchatta...
into-worry turned-into-(finality)
2
[He rematerializes on the sidewalk outside the Ayukawa residence.]
@Kazuya teleport FX: ____
shu_
narration:
Is Ayukawa really giving AYUKAWA wa hatashite DARE-ka ni
chocolate to someone?! (T) really to-someone
___________
chokore--to o watasu no ka?!
chocolate (O) handing-over (?)
3
[Madoka returns home carrying a sack. She comes across @Kazuya waiting
outside.]
Madoka:
Ohh... Kazuya-kun. ara... KAZUYA-kun
4
[A pan of melted chocolate sits on a stove.]
chocolate FX: ___ ___
gu_ gu_
5
@Kazuya:
Mmm. This smells good... u~~n i-- nioi kore wa...
nice smell this-(one) (T)
@Kazuya FX:
kun_
6
[He watches Madoka work at the stove.]
narration: ___ _____
Sh-she's making chocolate?! chi choko tsukutte-ru?!
@Kazuya heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
7
@Kazuya: [smiling] _________
Is that for a Valentine? sore barentain no?
that-(one) Valentine (nom)
Madoka:
Yup. Have you received so-- yo KAZUYA-kun wa mo--
yours already, Kazuya-kun? like-so (T) already
moratta ka na?
received I-wonder
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p 56 (16)
1
[Madoka smiles and leans down towards @Kazuya. She pokes him playfully on the
cheek.]
Madoka: ____
All right, I'll give you yoshi kimi ni mo agechau_!
some, too! all-right to-you too give-(finality)
Madoka fingertip FX: ____
chon
2
[@Kazuya makes like a pinwheel, clutching his cheek.]
@Kazuya:
OW-OW-OUCH! aitatata~~~~~~_
@Kazuya FX:
guruguru to to to
Madoka:
Oh, a rotten tooth?! ara MUSHIBA?!
How unfortunate, on a day KI no DOKU ne konna HI ni...
like this... unfortunate on-this-kind-of-day
3
[He stares at her back as she pours the chocolate.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
Does that mean Ayukawa to yu-- koto wa KOTOSHI wa AYUKAWA
is giving chocolate to that-means this-year (T)
someone this year?
DARE-ka ni watasu no ka
to-someone giving (?)
And on top of that, right shikamo kore kara...?!
now...?! moreover now
@Kazuya FX:
jito~~~~_
Madoka:
4
@Kazuya:
Who... DARE ni...
Are you giving that to? ageru no?
@Kazuya FX: _____
gokun
narration:
When I'm Kazuya I can KAZUYA ni naru to DAITAN na koto mo
easily ask brazen stuff, when-become-Kazuya fearless/bold-thing too
too, so that's a plus!
HEIKI de kikechau
calmly/coolly can-ask-(finality)
kara TOKU da na!
that's-why profit/advantage is
5
Madoka:
Isn't it obvious! KImatte-ru ja nai!
be-a-matter-of-course is-not
@Kazuya:
Who?! Tell me!! DARE?! oshiete!!
6
[Madoka removes her apron, looking back at @Kazuya as though she's thinking
about it.]
7
Madoka: [smiling]
You want to know?! SHIritai?!
Then, come with me. ja one--chan to oide
then with-oneechan come
@Kazuya:
Eh?! e?!
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p 57 (17)
1
[View down the street.]
narration:
Maybe it's her father. AYUKAWA no oto--san ka na
's father I-wonder
Or perhaps Master, for moshiku wa itsu-mo o-sewa ni natte-ru
always watching over her?! or/or-else always being-under-the-care-of
________
masuta--?!
But with those two, it's demo kono futari ja dochira-ka
more like obligation but with-those-two-(T) either-one
chocolate. _____
to yu-- to GIRI choko da yo na
if-say-that obligation-chocolate is
2
[A view down another street.]
3
[Profile view of Madoka.]
Madoka:
I wonder... KASUGA-kun...
If Kasuga-kun is coming KYOU kuru ka naa
today. today come I-wonder
4
[@Kazuya looks up in surprise.]
narration: _ ___
M-me?! o...ore?!
5
[Exterior view of ABCB.]
door FX: [off] _____
karan
6
[Madoka and @Kazuya enter. Someone turns to look.]
7
@Kyousuke:
Hi! oya!
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p 58 (18)
1
Madoka: [soft smile]
Perfect timing. cho--do yokatta wa
precisely was-good
I was looking for you. sagashite-ta n da
was-looking-for (explan)
2
@Kyousuke: [soft grin]
I wonder if that means to-yu-- koto wa nani-ka i-- mono
I'm getting something that-means some good-thing
nice?
demo moraeru no ka na?
or-something can-receive I-wonder
3
[@Kyousuke's pov of her. She looks back in surprise.]
4
[@Kyousuke smirks down at @Kazuya.]
@Kyousuke:
By the way, have you gone tokoro-de chanto HA-ISHA ni
to the dentist for me? by-the-way duly to-dentist
itte-kite-kureta?
went-(for-me)
narration:
Wh-who?!! da...DARE ga!!
5
narration:
No no. For now, I have to iya iya koko wa GAMAN GAMAN!
be patient. Patient! here (T) patience/endure
@Kazuya: [angrily]
I went. itte-kita yo
So gimme back my body now! da kara mou karada kaeshite-kure_!
therefore now body return-(to-me)
@Kyousuke: ______
niyari
@Kyousuke:
Okay. i-- yo
6
[@Kyousuke leans down and rests his arm on @Kazuya's shoulder.]
@Kyousuke: ___ ___________
I've already eaten too much mou ore chokore--to
chocolate and even seeing it already I chocolate
is getting to be unpleasant!
tabe-sugichatte miru no mo
eat-too-much-(finality)-(and) seeing too
iya ni natte-ta toko na n da!
was-becoming-unpleasant case is (explan)
narration:
Shit-t-t! kuso~~~~_
_____
Someone's chocolate!! HITO no choko o!!
@Kazuya FX: ______
kachin
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p 59 (19)
1
[@Kyousuke claps his hand over his mouth.]
@Kyousuke: _____
Ahh. Now, just hearing a-- mou choko to ki--ta dake de
"chocolate" makes me sick. now chocolate heard-that only being
Urp. ___
hakike ga... upu
nausea (S)
@Kazuya:
O-oh no! ma mazui_!
2
narration: _____
Even though Ayukawa went to sekkaku AYUKAWA ga choko o
the trouble of giving me especially (S) chocolate (O)
chocolate, if I leave it to
this guy, like this... kureru to yu-- no ni
give say-that even-though
kono mama koitsu ni makasete-oitara
as-this-is to-this-guy if-leave-to-(for-
future-sake)
@Kyousuke: [sitting down]
Ohh, I feel awful... a-- KIMOchi wari--
3
[Panels 3-5 are double-bordered, denoting a dream-sequence. Here, a beaming
Madoka presents @Kyousuke with chocolate.]]
Madoka:
Here. From me. hai ageru
4
[He claps his hand over his mouth.]
@Kyousuke: _____
Chocolate, again?! mata choko?!
___
oe_
Madoka:
Again?! mata?!
Madoka FX: _____
muka_
5
[Madoka uncorks a powerful right to his face.]
Madoka:
What do you mean, "again"?!! mata tte nani yo--!!
again (quote) what
@Kazuya:
Th-this is awful!! ta...TAIHEN daa_!!
6
[@Kyousuke stands and grins down at @Kazuya. @Kazuya looks up in surprise.]
@Kyousuke:
I see... naruhodo......
That sounds like fun!! sore wa omoshiroi!!
that-(one) (T) fun/interesting
narration: ___
HUH!?! ha_?!
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p 60 (20)
1
@Kazuya:
(O-oh no! He read my mind!!) (shi shimatta yomareta!!)
2
[@Kyousuke sends @Kazuya a thought, telepathically.]
@Kyousuke:
(As usual, the relationship (aikawarazu no futari no KANKEI...
between you two... as-usual (nom) 2-people 's relation
Wouldn't it be more fun kokora de hito SOUDOU atta
around here if we had around-here one trouble/confusion had
some confusion?)
ho-- ga omoshiroi n ja nai?)
more-fun/interesting (explan/neg)
3
[Madoka stands behind the counter with her back towards the others. She works
at something.]
Madoka:
Say, Kasuga-kun! nee KASUGA-kun!
@Kazuya heartbeat FX:
doki_
4
[Madoka portrait. She smiles down at something off-panel.]
Madoka: ___________
This chocolate... kono chokore--to...
5
@Kyousuke: _____
Chocolate?! choko?!
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p 61 (21)
1
[@Kyousuke claps a hand over his mouth.]
@Kyousuke: ___
Unfortunately, I... ainiku ore...
_____
Just hear "chocolate" and... choko to ki--ta dake de...
chocolate (quote) heard only be-(and)
2
Madoka:
Huh?! e?!
3
[His eyes grow large.]
@Kyousuke: ___
BLEARRGH! oe_
4
[@Kazuya looks on in horror.]
@Kazuya:
!! !!
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p 62 (22)
1
[@Kazuya launches his head at @Kyousuke. Madoka is surprised.]
@Kazuya:
Let me...! saseru ka~~_
collision FX: ______
gochin
2
narration: _________
Know the grudge I carry barentain to MUSHIBA no urami
for Valentine's and the Valentine and decayed-tooth 's grudge
rotten tooth!!
OMOishire--_!!
repent-of/learn-a-lesson
3
[The two lie on their backs on the floor, out cold and with goofy looks on
their faces.]
Kyousuke/Kazuya FX: ___
do_
4
[Kazuya rockets into the air, clutching his cheek.]
Kazuya:
Ow-ow-ow-ow-ow-ow-ouch!! aitatatatata tatatatatata~~~~~~_!!
5
[Kyousuke sneers at him as he runs out the door.]
Kazuya: ___
You lied, oniichan. oni--chan no uso tsuki--
's lie tell
The rotten tooth wasn't MUSHIBA naoshite-nai ja nai ka~~~~_!!
fixed!! rotten-tooth not-cured
narration:
And so, I exacted revenge to yu-- wake de toriaezu
for now, but... for-that-reason/and-so for-the-time-being
FUKUSHUU wa owatta no da keredo...
revenge (T) completed but
Kyousuke:
Serves you right!! JIGOU-JITOKU da!!
Fix your own tooth problems JIBUN no HA gurai JIBUN de
yourself!! self 's tooth extent by-self
naose!!
cure
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p 63 (23)
1
[Unperturbed by all that, Madoka presents him with a tray of chocolates.]
Madoka: ___________ _________
I'm bringing out these kono chokore--to o-MISE no barentain
chocolates as a Valentine's this-chocolate shop's-Valentine
service for customers. ________
sa--bisu ni DAsu no
in-service bring-out
Won't you help me distribute wakeru no TETSUDA tte kurenai?
them? distributing assistance (T) not-give
2
[He stares at the tray.]
narration:
Wh-what? Then... na...nan da sore ja...
3
[Four male customers are overjoyed.]
guy: ___________
Ohhhh! It's chocolate!! o~~~~~~_ chokore--to da zo~~~~~_
4
[Seated at the counter, Kyousuke looks unhappily up at the ceiling. Madoka
works behind the counter.]
narration: ___
Once again, I've jumped matamata ore no HAYAtochiri... ka
to conclusions...hmm. again my hasty-conclusion
5
Kyousuke:
Ahhhh. In the end, I a~~~~a to--to-- KOTOSHI 1-KO mo
couldn't get a single in-the-end this-year even-1-(counter)
chocolate this year... _____
choko moraenakatta naa
chocolate couldn't-receive (rhet)
Kyousuke FX: _____
boso_
6
[Madoka stops and looks at him with some concern.]
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p 64 (24)
1
Madoka: [gentle smile]
Is that true? sore HONTOU?
Kyousuke: [blushing]
Eh? e
2
narration: ___
I suppose the Kazuya that TASHIka ni KAZUYA no ore wa
was me seemed to have I-suppose 's me (T)
gotten some, but the real
me didn't get a single one. moratta rashi-- kedo
received appear-to but
___
HONTOU no ore wa 1-KO mo moratte-nai
real 's me (T) even-1 not-received
That's the truth! kore wa SHINJITSU!
this-(one) (T) truth/reality
3
[Madoka smiles gently back.]
4
[She pulls out a nicely wrapped present, placing it on the counter.]
Madoka:
That's right. so-- da
There's one left over! cho--do IK-KO amatte-ta n da!
properly 1-(counter) was-remaining (explan)
__
Yup! un!
Madoka:
I made a little too much... chotto tsukuri-sugita n da kedo
a-bit made-too-much (explan) but
But it seems a waste to suteru no mo mottainai shi...
just throw it away... throwing-away too wasteful consider
5
[She presents it to him. He smiles in happiness.]
Madoka: [beaming]
Here you are! ageru!
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p 65 (25)
1
[He looks at his present with a smile and a slight blush.]
narration:
It's sorta offhanded, but... chotto tsuide -ppoi kedo...
a-bit by-the-way -ish but
I definitely did get some TASHIka ni AYUKAWA kara moraeta
from Ayukawa, so I have no certain from-Ayukawa was-able-to-
right to be asking for more receive
than this.
n da mon
is-the-reason
ze--taku ieru sujiai ja nai
can-ask-(want)-too-much right is-not
2
[An anguished customer talks to Master.]
guy 2: _____
Ehhhh?! There's no more e~~~~~~_ mo-- choko nai no~~?!
chocolate?! any-more chocolate not-have
Master: [embarrassed]
I'm sorry... suimasen nee
We didn't make that much... anmari RYOU
-so-much quantity
tsukuranakatta mono de...
did-not-make (reason)
3
[Kyousuke stares hard at the gift in his hands.]
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
4
[Master holds up his tiny piece of chocolate and motions at the wrapped
gift in Kyousuke's hands.]
Master:
But Ayukawa-kun. Is the shikashi AYUKAWA-kun sono "amatta"
*leftover* chocolate that but that leftover
fine one over there? _____
choko to yu-- no wa
chocolate called (nom) (T)
sotchi no rippa na yatsu?
that-way 's fine-thing
Or one like this that soretomo o-KYAKU ni DAshita
you brought out for the or-else to-customer brought-out
customers?
ko-- yu-- no?
this-kind-of (nom)
5
[Madoka blushes slightly and looks a bit vexed.]
Madoka: ________
Master!! masuta--!!
[Kyousuke smiles at her back.]
narration:
Maybe Ayukawa... hyottoshite AYUKAWA...
Is feeling embarrassed? terete-ru no ka na?
is-embarrassed I-wonder
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