Kimagure Orange Road
"Pattern of a Misty Spring Love"
Volume 12, Story 9
WB Volume 7, Story 11
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Ramon Galindo
Leo Hourvitz
Ka-Ping Yee
Last revision : 08-26-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 207 (167) are only in the WBs!
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p 207 (167)--TITLE PAGE
[Hikaru stands in full-portrait, back to us, dressed in baggy black sweater
and overalls with her pants cuffs rolled up. She clasps her hands behind
her and looks back at us over her left shoulder.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
Pattern of a Misty Spring HARU KASUMI KOI MOYOU
Love spring mist/haze/ love pattern/design/
dimness-of-sight figure/look/signs/
indications
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Even Though I'm Told ASObimasho tte iwarete-mo
"Let's Play," I Feel shall-play even-tho-is-said-that
Dissatisfied.
monotarinai no yo
be-dissatisfied/be-unsatisfactory/
feel-as-if-something-were-missing
With Sweet You. yasashii anata
gentle/sweet you
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p 208 (168)
1
[View looking up at the cherry blossoms.]
narration:
The cherry blossoms are SAKURA mo MANKAI!
in full bloom! cherry-blossom too be-in-full-bloom
Today is the start of the KYOU kara SHINGAKKI desu
new school term. from-today new-school-term is
2
[View of the front gate at Kouryou school. Students arrive.]
Kyousuke: [off]
You're already a 3rd-year hikaru-chan mo mo-- CHUU 3 kaa......
junior high student, too already 3rd-year-jr-high
Hikaru-chan...
3
[Kyousuke and Hikaru arrive together.]
Kyousuke:
Time sure flies. HAYAi mon da ne
fast thing is (rhet)
Hikaru:
But I want time to go by demo motto HAYAku TOKI ga
faster... but still-more fast time (S)
sugite hoshi-- na--
want-to-go-past (rhet)
Because I want to hurry and datte atashi HAYAku otona ni
become grown up... because I soon to-adult
naritai mon...
want-to-turn-into reason
4
[She clasps him tight around the upper arm and gazes lovingly into his wide,
nervous eyes.]
Hikaru:
And then, you and I... so-- sureba atashi SEMPAI to...
then I with-Sempai
Hikaru FX: _____
pita_
5
[View pans back. They stand at the front gate. Arriving students stop and
gape.]
students: ________ ________
jirojiro jirojiro
6
[Kyousuke disengages and races off. He waves to a surprised Hikaru over his
shoulder.]
Kyousuke: [blushing]
Well, see ya later-r-r!! sore ja mata ne~~~~_!!
then laters
Kyousuke FX: ________
pyu~~~~_
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p 209 (169)
1
[Hikaru stands there, looking a bit dejected.]
Hikaru:
.......... ..........
2
narration:
That Sempai is feeling SEMPAI ttara aikawarazu
easily embarrassed, as I-tell-you as-usual
usual...
hazukashi-gari-YA
one-who-feels-embarrassment
na n da kara...
is (explan) that's-why
3
[Tight shot of her lower legs as she executes a lazy pirouette.]
narration:
I love Sempai, but there atashi SEMPAI no koto DAISUki da kedo
is just one thing that I about-Sempai love but
leaves me dissatisfied.
tada hitotsu dake FUMAN ga arimasu
only/sole/single just be-dissatisfied
4
narration:
It's... sore wa......
A positive attitude, or a SEKKYOKU SEI to yu-- ka
firmness of action... positive-attitude/ called or
enterprising-spirit
GOUIN sa to yu-- ka......
forcibly/high-handedly called or
5
[She hugs her schoolbag to her chest and closes her eyes in quiet bliss.]
Hikaru FX:
shikka
Hikaru:
(Even if we're in public, (tatoe HITOMAE demo do-- do-- to
if he would just boldly hug (even)-if in-public even with-commanding-
me...!) presence
atashi no koto guitto...!)
about-me press-hard
6
[Hikaru walks towards a school building.]
narration:
Once in a while, a girl ONNA no KO tte AI suru HITO ni
wants to be treated firmly girl (T) by-person-loved
by the one she loves.
tama ni wa GOUIN ni
occasionally (contrast) forcibly
atsukawarete-mitai n desu
want-to-try-to-be-treated (explan)
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p 210 (170)
1
[A view of Hikaru's new class. The natives are restless, and downright wild.]
class noise FX:
gya ha gya ha kya------_
2
[Shin'ichi enters the classroom with his bag slung over one shoulder. On the
way in he elbows a girl in the back. She turns in irritation. The girl she's
talking to looks at Shin'ichi with adoring eyes. Hikaru watches all this from
her seat.]
Shin'ichi:
Step aside! doke yo!
You're in the way!! jama da zo
Shin'ichi elbow-in-back FX: ___
don
adoring girl:
Kyaa, it's Harada-kun! kya-- HARADA-kun da~~
3
[Shin'ichi walks past Hikaru, not noticing her.]
Shin'ichi:
Ahhhh, it's another school a~~a mo-- SHINGAKKI ka yo~~~~
term... another new-school-term
What a hassle. kattarui naa
dramatic FX: ____ ____
doka doka
4
[He plops down in the seat to her right and kicks up his legs on his desk.
Placing his hands behind his head, he leans back lazily.]
Shin'ichi sit-down FX: _____
doka_
5
[Hikaru glances at him.]
narration:
Huh? are?
It seems I've seen this koitsu doko-ka de MIta yo-- na...
guy somewhere... this-guy at-somewhere saw looks-like
6
[He finally notices her.]
Shin'ichi:
Huhhh? are~~?
7
[Hikaru flashes back.]
narration:
That's it! so-- da!
He's the sweet guy who gave KYONEN atashi to SEMPAI ni
the exchange diary to Sempai last-year to-Sempai-and-me
and me last year!
KOUKAN NIKKI toka yu-- SHINSETSU na
exchange-diary (the-one) kind
KO da!
boy is
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p 211 (171)
1
Shin'ichi:
.......... Ohh, it's you. ..........nan da anta ka
ohh you (?)
Hikaru:
Nice to meet you. yoroshiku
2
Shin'ichi:
Still going out with him? mada tsukiatte n no kai?
still going-out-with (?)
Hikaru:
Huh? e?
3
[Shin'ichi turns aside and drops his gaze.]
Shin'ichi:
With that high school ano KASUGA toka yu--
guy--that Kasuga or that-Kasuga a-certain
whatever...
KOUTOU-BU no yatsu to...
high-school-section 's fellow with
4
Hikaru: [soft smile]
Yup. un
5
[Turning back to look at her.]
Shin'ichi:
Really... ......soo
6
[From the door, a boy waves to him.]
boy 1:
Hey-y-y, Harada! o--i HARADA!
Shin'ichi:
Yo. ou
7
Shin'ichi:
Hurry and split up with a anna yatsu to wa
guy like that. with-that-kind-of-fellow (contrast)
HAYAku WAKArechimai na yo
soon/fast separate-from/
bid-farewell-to
Shin'ichi stand-up FX: _____
suku_
Hikaru:
WHAT?! e?!
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p 212 (172)
1
Shin'ichi: ___
Any time, I'll be waiting!! ore wa itsu demo matte-ru ze!!
I (T) any-time/whenever am-waiting !
2
[Hikaru blushes.]
3
[And her expression turns dark.]
4
Hikaru hand FX: ______
patsu_
5
Hikaru: [angrily]
Mind your own business!! yoke-- na o-sewa yo!!
uncalled-for/uninvited help/assistance
narration:
What a rude jerk! nante SHITSUREI na yatsu!
what! rude fellow
6
[Clutching a hand to his injured cheek, Shin'ichi stares at her with huge,
surprised eyes.]
7
[Stopping at the door, he offers her a smile.]
Shin'ichi:
You're very attractive OKOtta KAO mo nakanaka ikasu ze!
even when you're mad! got-angry face too quite attractive
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p 213 (173)
1
[Hikaru, still blushing, turns to see a crowd of boys exchanging whispers.]
boys FX: ____ ____ ____ ____
hiso hiso jiro jiro
2
[She goes ballistic, and kicks a few chairs at them. They flee in panic.]
Hikaru:
What are you looking at?! nani MIte n da yo!
what looking (explan)
Hikaru kick FX: _____
boka_
dramatic FX:
kaa_
narration:
First one, then another! doitsu mo koitsu mo!
3
[She stares at the door with a worried look.]
Hikaru:
(But... (demo...
What he said just now...) IMA no KOTOBA...)
now 's word/speech/remark
4
[Flashback portrait of Shin'ichi.]
narration:
I wonder if... moshi-ka-shite atashi...
it-is-possible I
He was making a confession KOKUHAKU sareta no ka naa...
to me... was-confessing/owning-up I-wonder
Shin'ichi: [flashback] ___
Any time, I'll be waiting!! ore wa itsu demo matte-ru ze!!
I (T) any-time/whenever am-waiting !
5
[Staring at the ceiling, her eyes grow wide.]
Hikaru: ___
AH! ha_
6
[She clenches her eyes shut and shakes her head violently.]
Hikaru:
(No, no. (ikenai ikenai
What the heck am I thinking atashi nani KANGAete n darou)
of?) I what thinking-of (poss-explan)
Hikaru head FX: ________
buruburu
7
[Clasping her hands before her, she looks solemnly off-panel.]
Hikaru:
(I'm sorry, Sempai! (SEMPAI gomennasai!
I only have eyes for you... atashi SEMPAI hitosuji na n da
I one-line is (explan)
kara
that's-why
Absolutely!!) ..........ZETTAI ni!!)
8
[Outside, Shin'ichi crouches on the ground next to two other delinquent boys.
He clutches his face in pain. One boy laughs.]
Shin'ichi:
I was decked... gusun butarechatta...
sniffle
crashed-to-the-floor-(finality)
boy 1:
Don't cry-y-y. naku na yo~~
You were only decked by ONNA ni butareta gurai de yo~~
a girl! by-woman decked extent being
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p 214 (174)
1
boy 1:
You should give her up i--kagen ni omae mo akiramero yo
already. in-moderation you too poss-give-up
A stubborn and fierce anna KACHIKI de
girl like that... that-kind-of-unyielding/resolute/strong-
minded
KYOUBOU na ONNA...
fierce/brutal woman
Isn't something you can omae no TE ni oeru shiromono
handle! you (S) can-handle a-thing/fellow
ja nai ze
is-not !
Shin'ichi:
But... demo...
That's good, too. soko ga mata i-- n da mon
that-place (S) again good is-the-reason
2
boy 2:
You're pretty popular with omae kekko-- mote _kara yo--
girls. you quite popular-with-girls that's-why
And there are a lot of them i--yotte-kuru ONNA nara
chasing after you... go-and-woo/court/ woman if-it-is
make-advances
wansa to iru daro-- ga...
are-there-in-flocks/throngs but/and
3
[Shin'ichi visualizes Kyousuke and Hikaru together.]
Shin'ichi FX: ________
mukamuka
4
Shin'ichi: ___
On the contrary, I'm the ore wa TE ni HAIri-nikui mono
type who fights even harder, I (T) difficult-to-come-to-hand (nom)
when faced with something
that's tough to get. hodo GYAKU ni TOUSHI ga
extent in-the-opposite-way fight/ (S)
fighting-spirit
_____
waku taipu na n da
gush/boil type am (explan)
5
[Walking away, he raises his fingers in a "V" towards his sweating friends.]
Shin'ichi: ______
Well, from now on we're in maa kore kara wa ONAji kurasu
the same class... well from-now-on (T) same-class
da shi
are and-besides
And the battle begins madamada SHOUBU wa kore kara
now! still-more game/bout (T) from-now-on
da ze!
is !
boy 2:
It doesn't matter to me, do-- demo i-- kedo ichiichi
but don't come crying not-matter-either-way but every-single-
every single time... time
nakitsuite-kun na yo naa
don't-come-crying-to-me (rhet)
6
boy 1:
But... demo yo
If he succeeds in getting aitsu ga umaku HIYAMA o
Hiyama... that-guy (S) successfully (O)
mono ni shita akatsuki ni wa...
obtained/secured in-the-event
___
We'll also... ore-tachi mo yo~~
we too
boy 2:
...get the fallen crumbs. o-kobore ni azukaro--
scatterings shall-keep/take-care-of
ja nai no
___ ___ __
Heh! heh! heh! he_ he_ he
boys FX: ____ ____
nita nita
7
[The two boys look down at Madoka and Kyousuke walking together near the
track.]
boy 2:
Huh? It's Ayukawa-san. are AYUKAWA-san ja nai ka
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p 215 (175)
1
Kyousuke: ______
We're in the same class mata onnaji kurasu da ne
again. again same class are
Madoka: [smiling]
Yup. un
2
[The two boys merely stare, in obvious shock.]
boy 1:
Ohh. That's amazing... he-- sugee naa
That guy... ano OTOKO...
Is speaking to ano AYUKAWA-SEMPAI to TAITOU ni
Ayukawa-sempai as an that with-Ayukawa in-equality/parity
equal...
HANAshite-ru nante...
is-talking the-likes-of
3
boy 2:
Perhaps it's just my nan da ka KI no se-- ka
imagination, but somehow, somehow perhaps-it's-my-imagination
Ayukawa-sempai also seems
lady-like... AYUKAWA-SEMPAI mo ONNA rashikute......
even seem-like-woman
I've never seen anything anna no HAJImete MIta na
like that before. that-kind-of-thing for-1st-time seen
4
boy 1:
Maybe one of these days izure NA no aru BANCHOU-san
he'll be a famous gang someday famous gang-leader
leader.
na no ka mo shirenai
is (nom) it-may-be
boy 2:
Hmm. umu
5
[Hikaru leaps backwards and over the high-jump bar, arching her back
gracefully.]
Hikaru high-jump FX: ___
za_
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p 216 (176)
1
[Her leg hits the bar on the way down.]
Hikaru leg FX: _____
dote_
2
Hikaru: [sitting on the mat]
Ow-ouch... itata...
Shin'ichi:
What are you doing? nani yatte n da yo
what doing (explan)
3
[He helps her up.]
Shin'ichi:
You must approach the jump motto OMOikkiri JOSOU o
with more resolution!! more resolute/decisive approach (O)
____
tsukenakucha dame da ze!!
must-pull-up-to are !
Hikaru: [irate]
Mind your own business!! yoke-- na o-sewa yo!!
[She yanks her arm out of his grasp.]
Hikaru hand FX: ______
pashi_
4
[The girl class president stands at the blackboard.]
blackboard:
Textbook Monitor. TOSHO I-IN
books committee-member
1 boy and 1 girl. DANJO KAKU ICHI-MEI
man-and-woman each 1-person
5
[Shin'ichi stands and raises his hand.]
6
[He then raises Hikaru's, and points to both his smiling face and her angry
one.]
Hikaru:
Me-e-e? With you-u-u? atashi gaa? anta too?
I (S) with-you
7
[Two girls in the row behind Hikaru exchange whispers. Hikaru overhears and
blushes.]
girl:
They're a pretty good match, kekko-- ano futari tte o-niai ne!
hm! quite those-2-people (T) match (rhet)
girls FX: ________
hisohiso
8
[Exterior shot of several school buildings. A seriously steamed Hikaru
bubbles over in her speech bubble.]
Hikaru:
Hey-y-y!! chottoo!!
I've got Kasuga-sempai, atashi ni wa ne~~~~
a high school student!! by-me (contrast) (pause-filler)
chanto KOUTOU-BU ni
correctly/perfectly in-high-school-section
KASUGA-SEMPAI ga iru no yo!!
(S) there-is
____
Don't say stupid things! baka na koto iwanai de
stupid-things don't-say
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p 217 (177)
1
[Shin'ichi and Hikaru walk under an outer covered walkway, both carrying a
huge stack of books. Shin'ichi smiles at Hikaru. She glares at him out of
the corner of her eye.]
narration:
Why am I a good match with nande atashi ga koitsu nanka to
this sort of guy?! why I (S) with-this-sort-of-guy
o-niai na mon desu ka!
match person am (?)
2
[Hikaru looks like she's struggling under the load.]
Shin'ichi:
It's heavy, isn't it. OMOi daro
heavy poss-be
I'll take that!! sore yokose yo!!
that-(one) hand-over
3
[Shin'ichi's pov as she looks up at him, wide-eyed.]
4
[She stares at his back as he walks away. Looks like he's taken a few of
her books.]
Shin'ichi:
Hup! yokkoisho_
5
[She drops her gaze and states dryly...]
Hikaru:
You have some rather nice kekko-- yasashi-- toko aru no ne
points, hm. quite nice points having (rhet)
Shin'ichi:
You didn't know? shiranakatta?
___ ______
I'm nice to ladies! ore tte redi-- ni wa
I (T) to-ladies (contrast)
yasashi-- n da ze
nice/sweet (explan) !
6
[Kyousuke walks by in the opposite direction. They see each other.]
Hikaru:
AH! a_
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p 218 (178)
1
[Kyousuke looks blankly at a glaring Shin'ichi.]
Kyousuke FX:
jiro_
2
[Hikaru's pov of Kyousuke, who gives her a gentle smile.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
niko_
3
[Hikaru's head pivots between Shin'ichi and the retreating back of Kyousuke.]
Hikaru:
(Th-this is bad. (ma mazui wa
Sempai finally ended up konna yatto ISSHO no toko
seeing me together like like-this at-last together 's occasion
this...)
SEMPAI ni MIrarechau nante...)
by-Sempai be-seen-(finality) the-likes-of
4
[She looks sadly at Kyousuke's retreating back.]
Hikaru:
(Sempai, what did you think?) (SEMPAI do-- OMOtta daro?)
what poss-thought
5
[Still staring at Kyousuke, Hikaru dumps the rest of her books on Shin'ichi.
He staggers and grimaces under the load.]
Hikaru:
Sorry, but please take WARUi kedo kore mo
these too!! sorry but this-(one) too
tanomu ne_!!
beg/request (rhet)
books FX: ____
doka
Shin'ichi:
Wah! wa
6
[Kyousuke turns at a shout.]
Hikaru:
Wait, Sempai! matte sempai!
7
Kyousuke:
..... What's up? ......nani?
Hikaru: [looking a bit stricken]
U-umm... a ano......
I don't really have aitsu to wa BETSU ni
anything to do with that with-that-guy (contrast) particularly
guy.
nan demo nai n desu
not-have-anything (explan)
8
[She blushes and drops her gaze in embarrassment and sadness.]
Hikaru: ______
Although we just happen to tamatama ISSHO no kurasu ni natta
be in the same class, he's by-chance became-together-in-class
hanging around me all on
his own... dake na no ni
just are even-though
IPPOU-TEKI ni atashi ni tsukimatotte...
one-sided/ by-me hanging-about
unilateral
Guys other than you, Sempai, atashi SEMPAI-IGAI no OTOKO no HITO
are guys that I... I except-Sempai 's man
nante......
the-likes-of
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p 219 (179)
1
[Her pov of Kyousuke. He studies her without expression.]
2
[With a smile and a wink he pats her on the back. Hikaru is left perplexed.]
Kyousuke:
Wha-a-at? naan da
I'm not really thinking sonna koto ka BETSU ni
about stuff like that at that-kind-of-thing (?) particularly
all!
nan tomo OMOtte-nai yo!
not-at-all-thinking
Kyousuke hand FX: ___
pon
3
Kyousuke: [waving]
SEE YA! ja ne!
4
[Hikaru portrait--she nibbles on a finger and stares into the distance.]
narration:
Sempai... SEMPAI...
Wasn't thinking about that nan tomo OMOtte-nai nante...
at all...
5
narration:
Even though I wanted Sempai atashi wa SEMPAI ni
to scold me... I (T) by-Sempai
shikatte hoshikatta no ni...
scolding wanted-to even-though
Even though I wanted him to anna yatsu to KUCHI nanka kiku na...
say, "don't talk to a guy to-fellow-like-that don't-say-something
like that..."
to itte hoshikatta no ni......
saying-that wanted-to even-though
6
narration:
Sempai's so cold... SEMPAI tte tsumetai...
7
[Still walking, Kyousuke looks off to the side.]
Kyousuke:
(What's the matter with (do-- shita n daro hikaru-chan?
Hikaru-chan?
She was looking so SHINKOKU na KAO shichatte...)
serious...) serious/grave having-expression-(finality)
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p 220 (180)
1
Kyousuke: ___________
(Sure, even if she's with (sorya kurasumeito datte issho ni
a classmate, I'm a bit of-course classmate even together
jealous...
ireba choppiri SHITTO mo suru
if-are a-bit also-be-jealous-(of)
kedo......
but
But then, saying that sorta da kara tte itte hikaru-chan ni
stuff to Hikaru-chan is therefore saying-that to-Hikaru
pretty childish...)
a-- da ko-- da yu-- no mo
like-that is like-this is saying too
otonaGEnai yo na......)
childish/unworthy-of-a-man
2
Kyousuke:
(Well, I showed some mature (maa soko wa TOSHIUE no
open-mindedness back well that-place (T) older/senior 's
there...)
KANDAI sa tte yatsu da...)
generosity/tolerance (T) thing is
Kyousuke FX: ________
nikoniko
3
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
Shin'ichi: [off]
EHH?! REALLY?! e--_ HONTOU?!
4
[Hikaru sits on top of a desk and looks angrily at a happy Shin'ichi.]
Shin'ichi: ___
Then, you'll really go on a ja HONTOU ni HOUKAGO ore to
date with me after school?! then really after-school with-me
de--to shite-kureru no?!
dating-(with-me)
Hikaru: ______
No one said anything about DARE-mo de--to da nante itte-nai wa yo!
a date! nobody date -say-anything
5
Hikaru: [calmer]
Because you said that just anta ga ICHIDO de i-- kara
once, no matter what, you you (S) for-one-time good that's-why
wanted to have tea with me,
I... do--shite-mo ISSHO ni
by-all-means together
o-CHA nomitai tte iu kara
want-to-drink-tea say-that that's-why
atashi wa...
I (T)
[He raises both fists up high.]
Shin'ichi:
That stuff doesn't matter. sonna koto do-- demo i-- yo
that-kind-of-thing not-matter-either-way
Great!! yattaa!!
narration:
It's Sempai's fault... SEMPAI ga ikenai no yo...
(S) is-wrong/bad/hopeless
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p 221 (181)
1
[Exterior shot of a teashop.]
2
[The two boys from the previous scene stare back. This is Hikaru's pov.]
boy 1:
Ohhh?! he~~~~_
boy 2:
What the... nanto......
3
[The two boy's pov of Shin'ichi and Hikaru, who sit side-by-side on the other
side of the table.]
Shin'ichi: [looking back at the boys]
Heh heh heh heh. he he he he
Hikaru: [glaring at Shin'ichi]
We're really only having HONTOU ni o-CHA nomu dake yo
tea. really drink-tea only
4
boy 1: ____
By the way, how far have you tokoro de kimi-tachi doko made
guys gone? by-the-way you-(plural) how-far
itta no?
went
"A"? "B"? Or... #A#? #B#? soretomo...
Shin'ichi: [blushing]
Stop it! yose yo!
5
[Hikaru's pov. Boy 2 leans towards her and aims a thumb over at a wide-eyed
Shin'ichi.]
boy 2:
Actually, this guy is koitsu wa JITSU wa WARUi yatsu
bad! this-guy (T) actually bad-fellow
na n da yo--_!
is (explan)
He's rumored to be a ONNAtarashi tte HYOUBAN da kara
playboy, so you better playboy (quote) notoriety is that's-why
watch out!
KI o tsuketa HOU ga i-- ze!
took-care-of better !
Shin'ichi FX: _____
muka_
6
boy 1: ___
Instead of him, come with sore yori kono ore to...
me... than-that-(one) with-this-me
boy 2: ___
Yeah, that's right. With so-- so-- ore-tachi to...
us... with-us
7
[Shin'ichi grabs one boy and yells at him.]
Shin'ichi:
What are you suggesting? nani i--dasu n da yo
what suggest (explan)
What the hell are you guys omaera ittai do-- yu--
trying to pull?!! you-(plural) in-the-world what-kind-of
tsumori da_!!
intention are
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1
[The boy stares calmly back.]
boy 1 FX: _______
niyari_
boy 1: _____
Quit trying to act cool. kakko tsukete-nai de
___
Pass her around to us, ore-tachi ni mo mawase yo na
too. to-us too pass-round
2
[Boy 1 crashes out the front door and lands on his back on the sidewalk.]
boy 1 FX: ____ ____
ban_ zan_
3
[Shin'ichi bursts through the door, fists cocked. Behind him, boy 2 approaches
with a chair in hand.]
Shin'ichi: ______
You bastard! kono yaro--
Just try and say that mo-- ippen itte-miro!!
again!! another one-time try-and-say
4
[Shin'ichi is clobbered from behind...]
chair FX: ___
ga_
5
[...and lies unconscious on the sidewalk.]
boy 2:
Even though he's weak, it's YOWAi kuse ni koitsu
only this guy who's popular weak/unskilled although this-guy
with the girls... ____
bakkari mote-yagatte...
just popular-with-girls-(contempt)
Serves him right! i-- KIMI da ze
6
[Hikaru portrait--she looks a bit worried.]
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1
[The two boys turn on her.]
boy 2: ___
Even we like to get friendly ore-tachi datte tama ni wa
with a girl once in a we even occasionally (contrast)
while...
ONNA no KO to NAKAyoku shitai yo naa
with-girl want-to-get-chummy (rhet)
2
[She glares back, but she also looks a bit nervous.]
Hikaru: _____
(It's not that I don't like (atashi kenka wa KIRAi ja nai
to fight... I fight (T) dislike is-not
kedo......
but
__
But I can't handle ugly buOTOKO tte NIGATE
guys...!!) bad-looking-man (T) person-hard-to-deal-
with
na no yo ne~~_!!)
are (nom) (rhet)
3
[Approaching from behind, Kyousuke sees Hikaru...]
Kyousuke:
Oh? Hikaru-chan. are? hikaruchan ja nai ka
4
[...who turns to look at him.]
Hikaru:
Se... se...
5
[In great relief, she launches herself into his arms.]
Hikaru:
Sempai!! sempai!!
6
[Kyousuke's shoulder is grabbed...]
boy 1:
Step aside! Who the hell doke_ nan da teme-- wa!!
are you?!! move-aside what are you-(vulgar) (T)
boy 1 FX: _____
munzu
7
[...and he's twisted around to come face-to-face with the boy. The boy
recognizes him and his face turns to abject fear. Kyousuke merely looks
back in puzzlement.]
boy 1:
AH! a
Kyousuke:
EH? e
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1
[The two boys visualize Madoka and Kyousuke "talking together as equals."]
2
[A third ugly boy appears.]
boy 2: [to boy 1]
H-he's... That guy who ko koitsu... ano AYUKAWA-SEMPAI to
was with Ayukawa-sempai! this-guy with-that-Ayukawa
ISSHO ni ita OTOKO da ze
together was-there man is !
boys FX: ________
hisohiso
boy 3:
? ?
3
[The boys pov of an unflustered Kyousuke.]
Kyousuke:
What? nani ka?
4
[The three boys grow extremely nervous.]
boy 1: [to Kyousuke]
N-no. It's nothi... i ie nan demo...
boy 2: [to boy 3]
This guy's a tough customer! korya chotto AITE ga warui ze
this-(one) a-bit opponent (S) bad !
His unfazed behavior kono YOYUU aru TAIDO mo
is somehow ominous... this-composure have behavior/bearing too
nan da ka BUKIMI da shi...
somehow is-uncanny/ominous consider
boy 2 FX: ________
hisohiso
5
[Boy 2 makes an embarrassed and humble goodbye to Hikaru and Kyousuke. One
of them hauls off the unconscious Shin'ichi.]
boy 2: ____
So now we'll be... ja boku-tachi wa kore de...
then we (T) with-this/now
boys FX: _____
pekon
boy 3:
Excuse us! SHITSUREI shimashita!
6
Shin'ichi FX: ________
zurururu
7
[Kyousuke just watches them leave. Behind him, Hikaru goes into hero-worship,
with bright eyes, and hands clasped before her.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
kyoton
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1
[She beams and launches herself at him.]
Hikaru:
AMA-A-AZING, SEMPAI!! sempai sugo--i!!
Hikaru FX: _____
petan
2
[She stops and blushes. A stricken look comes to her face.]
narration:
Guys who only use force... GOUIN na dake no OTOKO nante......
forcibly only (one) man the-likes-of
____
Are no good after all! yappari dame!
after-all no-good
Hikaru:
I'm sorry, Sempai!! SEMPAI gomennasai!!
I was a naughty girl! atashi WARUi KO deshita!
I bad-girl was
3
[But she smiles once more, kicks up a heel and clings to his arm in glee.]
Hikaru:
You're the most wonderful yappari sempai ga ichiban
guy after all, Sempai!! after-all (S) most
_______
suteki_!!
wonderful
narration:
I've come to think better aratamete SEMPAI no koto
of Sempai! anew/revise about-Sempai
--Hikaru
MInaoshichaimashita! hikaru
looked-at-again/thought-better-of
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