Kimagure Orange Road
"A Bad Omen for Kyou-chan!"
Volume 13, Story 1
WB Volume 7, Story 12
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Ramon Galindo
                                 Leo Hourvitz

Last revision : 08-26-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 227 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 227 (7)--TITLE PAGE

[Facial portrait of Madoka, head draped in a fluffy white towel, hair damp.
 One eye is hidden behind the towel.  The other stares back at us.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  A Bad Omen for Kyou-chan!       KYOU                    SOU  -  KYOU-chan!
                                  evil/bad-luck/disaster  aspect/phase

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ______
  I Want to Peek into the         safaia   IRO    shita     HITOMI ni
  Mysterious Lake That Is         sapphire color  made/did  in-(pupil-of)-eye
  Reflected in Your Sapphire
  Eyes.                           UTSUru           SHIMPI no   MIZUUMI
                                  be-reflected-in  mysterious  lake

                                  nozoite-mitai
                                  want-to-peek-and-find-out

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p 228 (8)

1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.  Cherry blossoms are in
 bloom and some float off in the wind.]

2
[Kyousuke in school shirt and tie, stretches and covers his yawning mouth.]
Kyousuke:
                        fua~~~~~~_

  Why does spring make me         HARU   tte  do--shite  ko--
  feel so drowsy?                 spring (T)  why/how    like-this

                                  nemui   n darou
                                  sleepy  (poss-explan)

3
[Kurumi extends a large magnifying glass at Kyousuke's wide-eyed face.]
Kurumi:
  Wait, kind Sir.                 machinasai  soko       no o-HITO
                                  wait        that-place 's (hon)-person

Kyousuke:
  ?                               ?

4
[His pov of her.]
Kurumi:
  I'm into fortunetelling         atashi  IMA  URANAi ni
  now.                            I       now  to-fortunetelling

                                  kotte                                n no
                                  being-absorbed-(in)/being-devoted-(to)

5
Kurumi:
  Will you allow me to            oni--chan mo   mite    shinze   yo--
  examine you, oniichan?                    too  seeing  allow-to

Kyousuke:
  Again?  Okay, okay.             mata  ka yo   hai hai
                                  again (?)

6
[His pov of her, as she raises the magnifying glass to her eye.  Her eye
 appears huge in the lens.]
Kurumi:
  Let's see now...                do--re

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p 229 (9)

1
[The magnifying glass focuses light onto a point on his head.  His hair starts
 to smoke.]
Kyousuke:
  Wah, ow-w-w-ch-ch-ch!           uoa  chichichi_

Kyousuke hair FX:                 ________
                         busubusu

2
Kyousuke: [enraged]
  What are you doing?!            nani sun da koitsu!

Kurumi:
  Shh!  Be silent.                shi--_  damatte

3
Kurumi:
  Oho.                            hohoo

[Kyousuke stares back at Kurumi through the magnifying glass held up between
 the two.]

4
[The two break up in laughter.]
Kurumi:                           ___ __ __
  Kya ha ha!  A weird face!       kya ha ha  hen na         KAO
                                             weird/strange  face

Kyousuke:                         ___ ___ __
  Wah! ha! ha!  You too!          wa_ ha_ ha  omae datte

5
Kurumi: [seriously]
  It's an evil sign, oniichan!    oni--chan KYOUSOU yo!

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

6
[Kurumi consults a book.]
Kurumi:
  The mark of women trouble,      JONAN                     no SOU     ni
  the mark of a disaster          get-in-trouble-thru-women 's aspect  and
  involving water...
                                  SUINAN            no SOU...
                                  disaster-by-water 's aspect

  Financial misfortune!           KIN'UN WARUshi!
                                  financially-unfortunate

  Overall, the worst!!            subete ni     oite             SAIAKU!!
                                  on-the-whole  setting/leaving  the-worst

book:
  Fortunetelling Manual           URANAi         no HON
                                  fortunetelling 's book

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

7
[Exterior view of the Kasuga apartment.  A fuming Kyousuke adorns his speech
 bubble.]
Kyousuke:
  You jerk!                       kono yaro--_

  Don't talk nonsense.            detarame yu--  n ja nai
                                  talk-nonsense  (explan/neg)

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p 230 (10)

1
[View down a sidewalk along the wall that surrounds Kouryou school.  Students
 walk towards the main gate.]

2
[Kyousuke is one of them.]
Kyousuke:
 (Sheesh...)                      (mattaku...>

3
Kyousuke:                          ________
 (Such silliness so early         (bakabakashii         ASAppara kara
  in the morning is                stupid/silly/absurd  from-early-morning/
  unpleasant.                                           so-early-in-the-morn

                                  fuyukai     da
                                  unpleasant  is
                                  ___
  I don't believe in              ore  URANAi         nante
  fortunetelling.)                I    fortunetelling the-likes-of

                                  SHINjinai    mon    ne)
                                  not-believe  thing  (rhet)

4
Kyousuke:
 (What's more, Kurumi's           (mashite                ya
  fortunetelling won't             much-(still)-more/less
  come true...)
                                  kurumi no URANAi         nante
                                         's fortunetelling the-likes-of

                                  Ataru       hazu nai......)
                                  hit/strike  not-likely

Kyousuke FX:                      __________
                   butsubutsu

[Madoka approaches him from behind.]

Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

5
[He turns to look at her in surprise as she pulls up alongside him.]
Madoka:                                             __________
  What are you muttering to       nani  hitori de   butsubutsu itte  n no yo
  yourself?                       what  by-oneself  muttering

6
Madoka:
  Say...                          nee...

  If you're free tonight,         KON'YA   moshi  aite-tara
  go out with me for a bit!       tonight  if     if-are-free

                                  chotto  tsukiatte!
                                  a-bit   going-out-with-me

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p 231 (11)

1
Madoka:
  There's something I want        KASUGA-kun ni  misetai
  to show you!                    to-you         want-to-show

                                  mono ga aru  n da!
                                  have-thing   (explan)

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

2
Madoka:
  Then, it's settled!             ja    kimari      ne!
                                  then  settlement  (rhet)

3
Kyousuke: [happily]
  S-sure!                         u...un!

narration:
  Kurumi's fortunetelling         kurumi no URANAi          HAYAku  mo
  has already failed!!                   's fortunetelling  fast    too

                                  hazureta!!
                                  failed/went-wrong

4
[Madoka walks off, but she looks back at him over her shoulder.]
Madoka:                                               ___   _____
  Six o'clock this evening        YUUGATA no 6-JI ni  san - shiti de...
  at Sun City...                  evening 's at-6:00  at-"Sun-City"

  Don't be late, 'kay!!           okurenai de    kite    ne_!!
                                  don't-be-late  coming  (rhet)

Kyousuke:
  Okay.                           un

5
[He stands and watches her off-panel.]
narration:                                   ___
  Today, I'm...                   KYOU  wa   ore...
                                  today (T)  I

  Lucky!!                         tsuite-ru  n da!!
                                  am-lucky   (explan)

6
[Exterior shot of a school building.]

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p 232 (12)

1
[Komatsu come up behind Kyousuke in the hallway and stops him with a hand on
 his shoulder.]
Komatsu:
  Ah, Kasuga!                     a KASUGA!

2
Komatsu: [smiling]
  I'm returning the money         omae ni  karite-ta     KANE   kaesu  ze
  that I borrowed from you!       to-you   was-borrowing money  return !

  Sorry it took so long.          NAGAi  aida      sumanakatta  na
                                  long   interval  was-sorry

3
Kyousuke:
  ..........  Thanks.             ..........korya  do--mo

narration:
  See?  See?  Where are my        hora hora  doko        ga
  financial misfortunes?!!        look look  which-place (S)

                                  KIN'UN WARUshi           da!!
                                  financially-unfortunate  am

4
[Exterior view of a school building.]
school bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ _____
       kin kon kan ko--n

5
[Kyousuke heads off across the school grounds, bookbag in hand.]
Kyousuke:
 (Well...                         (sate to...

  I have a date tonight with      KON'YA  wa   AYUKAWA to    machiawase
  Ayukawa, so I'd better          tonight (T)  with-Ayukawa  date-(with)
  hurry home.)
                                  da  shi            HAYAku kaero   tto)
                                  am  and-besides    fast   go-home

6
[Shot of a girl's lower leg standing on the pavement.]

7
[Pov shifts.  Kyousuke looks over his shoulder at a girl.  Our view is from
 behind her, but it is obviously Sayuri.]
Sayuri:
  Umm...                          ano...

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p 233 (13)

1
[Pov shifts again.  We see both in front-view.  Sayuri looks meekly at
 Kyousuke, one hand held to her lips.]
narration:
  Huh?                            are?

  This girl--wasn't she           kono KO    TASHIka      sayuri  toka iu
  called Sayuri or something...   this-girl  as-I-recall          a-certain

2
[His pov of her.]
Sayuri FX:                        ________
                   mojimoji

3
[He gives her a reassuring smile.]
Kyousuke:
  What is it?                     nani?

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          niko_

4
[Sayuri spots some other girls in the vicinity.]
Sayuri FX:                        _____ _____
                       kyoro kyoro

5
[She ushers him off across the street.]
Sayuri:
  Over here for a bit...          koko ja        chotto......
                                  at-this-place  a-bit

6
[View down a path in the park.]

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p 234 (14)

1
[They walk down the path, Sayuri following a shy 3 paces behind him.  Kyousuke
 looks back over his shoulder at her.]

2
Kyousuke:                                        ___
 (What in the world does she      (ittai         ore ni  nanno YOU   daro?
  want with me?                    in-the-world  by-me   what-kind-  poss-be
                                                         of-business

  She's pretty cute, but I        kono KO    kekko-- kawai--  n da      kedo
  don't know what she's           this-girl  quite-cute       (explan)  but
  thinking, so...)
                                  nani  KANGAete-ru       ka   wakannai
                                  what  is-thinking-about (?)  not-understand

                                  kara        na--)
                                  that's-why  (rhet)

3
[She blushes and doesn't meet his eye.  Again, a hand is held to her mouth.]
Sayuri:
  Please listen and don't         warawanai de       ki--te-kudasai  ne
  laugh, 'kay?                    don't-laugh-(and)  listen-(please)

4
Sayuri:
  Please do me the favor of       douka           KYOU ICHINICHI  atashi to
  going on a date with me         if-you-please/  all-day-today   with-me
  for the rest of the day!!       do-me-the-favor-of
                                  ______
                                  de--to shite-kudasai!!
                                  date-(please)

5
[Kyousuke's eyes grow large and he staggers back.]
Kyousuke:
  EH?!                            e?!

6
[Blushing, he points to his face.]
Kyousuke:                         _ ___
  M-me...?!                       o ore...?!

Sayuri FX:                        _____
                             kokun

narration:                        ___     __   ______
  She wants to go on a d-date     ore to  de...de--to shitai da nante...
  with me...                      with-me      want-to-date  is the-likes-of

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p 235 (15)

1
[He looks at his wristwatch.  Sayuri hangs her head to one side.]
Kyousuke:                                  ___
  B-but, today I...               de demo  ore  KYOU  wa...
                                     but   I    today (T)

Sayuri FX:                        ______
                  shobon

Sayuri:
  I am a nuisance, after          yappari    go-MEIWAKU      desu  yo ne...
  all...                          after-all  (hon)-nuisance  am       (rhet)

2
[Face near tears, she turns and runs off.]
Sayuri:
  That's okay, then.              ii n desu    sayonara!!
  Sayonara!!                      that's-okay  farewell

Sayuri FX:                        ___
                            da_

Kyousuke:
  Ah, w-wait!                     a ma matte!

3
[His pov as she stops and turns a sad yet hopeful face towards him.]

4
[View of the two walking down the sidewalk together.  Sayuri wraps her arm
 around his and smiles at him.  Kyousuke doesn't know what to make of this.]
Sayuri:
  Thank you...                    ..........arigatou

5
[Sayuri beams a smile as he looks over at her.]
narration:
  I still have some time          AYUKAWA to   no    YAKUSOKU made
  'til I have to meet the         with-Ayukawa (nom) promise  until
  promise that I made with
  Ayukawa...                      mada   JIKAN aru   shi...
                                  still  time  have  and-besides

  And I don't want to step        kono KO   no KIMOchi   fuminijiritakunai
  all over this girl's            this-girl 's feelings  not-want-to-trample/
  feelings.                                              tread/dash

6
[Another view of the smiling Sayuri and nervously smiling Kyousuke.]
narration:
  I told you so, Kurumi!          zama-- miro kurumi!

  Where are the signs of any      doko  ga   JONAN no SOU           da!!
  women troubles?!!               where (S)  mark-of-women-trouble  is

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p 236 (16)

1
[Sayuri looks up at a billboard over a movie theater.  On it, a cute little
 girl in pigtails stands facing us.  Behind the girl is a rather demonic-
 looking creature.]
Sayuri:
  Oh, this movie!                 a kono EIGA!

billboard:                           ________     _________
  Dorothy Slayer                  ...doroshii  ...sureiya--
                                     Dorothy      slayer

2
[She looks up at it wistfully.]
Sayuri:
  Looks fun...                    omoshirosou...

3
Kyousuke:
  Then, shall we watch it?        ja    MIyo--     ka?
                                  then  shall-see  (?)

Sayuri: [sadly dropping her gaze]
  But I don't have much           demo  atashi  KYOU  wa   anmari
  money with me today...          but   I       today (T)  little/not-very

                                  o-kozukai           motte-nai   shi...
                                  (hon)-pocket-money  not-having  and-besides

4
[He opens up his wallet and steps up to the ticket booth.  Sayuri goes on
 tiptoes in joy.]
Kyousuke:                                  ___
  That's okay!  I'll pay.         i-- yo!  ore ga   DAsu  yo
                                  okay     I   (S)  pay

Sayuri:
  REALLY?!                        HONTOU?!

5
[The two sit amongst others in the theater.  He's bought Sayuri a box of
 popcorn as well.  They both watch the movie with smiles.]

6
[Isolated view across the lanes at a bowling alley.]

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p 237 (17)

1
[Tight shot of a ball as it sends the pins flying.]
bowling ball and pins FX:         _____
                         go--n

2
[Sayuri smiles and pumps both arms in joy.  Kyousuke sits at the scorer's
 table, applauding and smiling back.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____ _____
                       pachi pachi

3
[The two sit at a table in a coffee shop and chat amiably.]

4
[Exterior shot of a tall office building.]

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p 238 (18)

1
[Madoka arrives at the meeting place--the sidewalk outside a building.  She
 looks off to one side.]
Madoka footsteps FX:              ___ ___ ___
                  ta_ ta_ ta_

2
Madoka FX:                        _____ _____
                       kyoro kyoro

3
[Kyousuke stares at his watch as Sayuri looks off-panel.  They're walking
 outside now.]
narration:
  Already...  It's time!          mou...   JIKAN da!
                                  already  time  is

4
Kyousuke:
  Did you have a good time?       tanoshikatta?

Sayuri: [beaming]
  Yeah.                           ee

5
[The two exchange smiles.]
narration:
  Then, about now...              ja    kono hen de......
                                  then  at-about-here

6
[View across an amusement park at a distant Ferris wheel.]

7
[Kyousuke and Sayuri ride a roller coaster.  Kyousuke clenches his eyes shut.]
narration:                                                         ___
  I can't say that one word!      sono hitokoto    ga   ienai      ore!
                                  that single-word (S)  can't-say  I

riders:
  Kyaaaa!                         kya----

roller coaster FX:                ____
                          go--

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p 239 (19)

1
[Shot of the looped track for the roller coaster.]
narration:
  Well, I'll stay with her        maa  JIKAN  girigiri made
  until the last moment.               time   until-the-very-limit

                                  tsukiatte
                                  going-(around)-with
                                                        __________
  It'll be okay if I teleport     AYUKAWA no toko made  terepo--to sureba
  to Ayukawa!                     to-Ayukawa's-place    if-teleport

                                  i--   n da!
                                  okay  (explan)

riders:
  Kyaaaa!                         kya----

roller coaster FX:                ____
                          go--

2
[In the middle of the ride, he turns to Sayuri, who has her eyes clenched
 shut.]
Kyousuke:                                          ____
  But why did you suddenly        demo  do--shite  kimi  KYUU ni
  want to go on a date with       but   why        you   suddenly
  me?                             ___                   ______
                                  ore nanka to          de--to  da
                                  with-the-likes-of-me  date    are

                                  nante..........
                                  the-likes-of

3
[She opens her eyes, staring forward in thought.]
Sayuri:
  ..........                      ..........

4
[His view of her--a profile.]
Sayuri:
  I'm...                          atashi......

  Moving tomorrow.                ashita    HIkKOsu  n desu
                                  tomorrow  move     (explan)

5
[Kyousuke portrait--he studies her.]

6
[View looking up at the concrete banks and a bridge over a waterway.]

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p 240 (20)

1
Sayuri:
  We made nice memories...        i--  OMOiDE ga   dekimashita...
                                  nice memory (S)  was-made

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

2
[She runs off across the street.]
Sayuri:
  Bye!                            ja_!

motorcycle FX: [off]              ____
                           baun

3
[A motorcycle swerves to avoid her.  Kyousuke rushes forward.]
motorcycle FX:                    _____
                        gyaa_

Kyousuke:
  Look out!                       abunai

4
[The motorcyclist rides off as Kyousuke seizes Sayuri by her arm and waist
 and pulls her to safety.]
motorcyclist:                     _________
  Idiot!                          bakyaro--

motorcycle FX:                    ____
                           ooon

Sayuri:
  Kya!!                           kya_!!

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                          do_

5
[The wide-eyed two find themselves in each other's arms.]

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p 241 (21)

1
[She looks up at him with dewy eyes.]

2
[He looks down at her.]

3
[She tilts her chin back and closes her eyes.]

4
[Tight shot of their lower legs.  Sayuri goes up on tiptoe.]

5
[Kyousuke blushes and stares wide-eyed at the pretty face hovering before him.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                           dokin

6
[View pans back.  The two stand in full-portrait on the sidewalk on the
 bridge.  Kyousuke still stares at Sayuri, who still has her eyes closed.]

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p 242 (22)

1
voice: [off]
  SEMPA-A-AI!!                    sempa~~i_!!

[Kyousuke staggers back in shock.  Sayuri opens her eyes in surprise...]

2
[Kyousuke swivels his head.  Hikaru's smiling portrait appears on his speech
 bubble.]
Kyousuke:
 (Th-that voice is...?!)          (a ano  KOE   wa?!)
                                     that voice (T)

caption over Hikaru's face:
  Sempai            sempai 

Kyousuke FX:                      _____ _____
                       kyoro kyoro

3
[Pov from just over the head of a blonde girl, who races toward a stunned
 Kyousuke, arm raised high in greeting.]
blonde girl:
  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--i!

Kyousuke FX:                      _______
                            gyogyo_

4
[He searches madly about.  Sayuri watches him wide-eyed.]
Kyousuke:
 (Th-there's no place to          (ka kakureru tokoro ga  nai_!!)
  hide!!)                             hide     place  (S) isn't-there

5
[He looks over the railing at the waters below.]
Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

6
[He jumps, pinching his nose shut.]
narration:
  Gah.  If it's come to this,     mo--  ko-- narya           yakekuso     da!!
  I'm desperate!!                       if-become-like-this  desperation  is

Kyousuke:                         ___
  AH!                             ha_

7
[Sayuri turns from the railing to stare at the girl racing towards her with
 a smile.  It is Midori, the blonde follower of Sayuri.  See chapter 11.9,
 "Love Focus!"]
blonde girl (Midori):
  Sempa-a-ai, Sayuri-sempai!      sempa--i sayuri-sempai  ja nai desu ka!

Midori FX:
               to to to...

Kyousuke FX: [off]                _____
                          dobon

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p 243 (23)

1
[Kyousuke surfaces, looking up at the bridge.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         zabu_

Kyousuke:
  EH?!                            e?!

2
[Sayuri clobbers Midori over the head with her fist.]
Sayuri:                           ____
  Dummy!  Why did you appear      aho_   nande  konna TOKI ni
  at a time like this?!           dummy  why    at-time-like-this

                                  DEte-kure                   da  yo_!
                                  appear/interfere-(with-me)  are

Sayuri FX:                        _____
                          poko_

Sayuri:
  A little bit more and I         mo-- chotto de  aitsu     o
  could have caught him!!         in-a-bit-more   that-guy (O)

                                  otoseta              no ni!!
                                  was-able-to-capture  even-though

3
[Midori, with tears in her eyes, clasps her hands before her.]
Midori:
  Sayuri-sempai, you're           sayuri-SEMPAI  TOTSUZEN  HIkKOsu
  moving away so suddenly...                     suddenly  move

                                  nante...
                                  the-likes-of

  I feel so sad...                atashi  sabishii...
                                  I       sad

Sayuri: [looking solemn]
  It's just to the next           tonari             no CHOUNAI
  neighborhood...!                next-door/neighbor 's in-town/neighborhood

                                  da  kedo...ne!
                                  am  but    (rhet)
                                  _____
                            gohon

4
[Sayuri grabs the hapless girl by the sweater and yells.]
Sayuri:
  I'd thought this strategy       kono SAKUSEN           ZETTAI
  would be perfectly              this-strategy/tactics  absoluteness
  successful!!
                                  SEIKOU da   to OMOtte-ta
                                  is-success  was-thinking-that

                                  no ni~~~~~~_!!
                                  even-though

Sayuri:
  How vexing!                     a-- kuyashi--

  This is your fault!!            omae no  se--   da zo
                                  your     fault  is !!

  You, you!!                      kono kono_!!

5
[Kyousuke stares up at the bridge.]
narration:
  Wh-what's that?                 na...nan  da  tte     n da
                                       what is  (quote) (explan)

6
[He erupts from the water, staring wide-eyed at his wristwatch.]
narration:                        ___
  Ah!  Oh no!  Ayukawa!!          ha_  ikenai  AYUKAWA_!!

  I'm already one hour late!!     mo--     ICHI-JIKAN mo   sugite-ru!!
                                  already  one-hour   too  am-exceeding

7
[He levitates out of the water.]
narration:
  Hurry up!!                      isoge_!!

  But, I bet she's mad...         demo  okotte-ru       daro--   naa...
                                  but   be-getting-mad  poss-be  (rhet)

Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                          bashu_

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p 244 (24)

1
[Kyousuke portrait--soggy, he looks off-panel in despair.]

2
[Madoka portrait--she studies him.]
Madoka FX:                        ______
                 jirori

3
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  I-I'm sorry...                  go gomen...

  I'm late...                     okurechatte......

narration:
  For some reason, Ayukawa        nantoka  AYUKAWA wa
  was waiting for me...           somehow          (T)

                                  matte-te-kureta       kedo......
                                  was-waiting-(for-me)  but

4
Madoka:
  What were you doing?            nani yatte-ta  no?
                                  what was-doing (?)

  You're soaking wet!             sono kakkou      bishonure   ja nai!
                                  that-appearance  soaking-wet

Kyousuke:
  No.  Umm...  Uhh...  That       ie    ano    chotto    sono~~~~~~
  is...

narration:
  Women trouble, water            JONAN     -     SUINAN
  trouble, and because of         women-trouble   water-trouble
  that date, I'm broke!                            ______
                                  omake ni     ano de--to de
                                  in-addition  on-account-of-that-date

                                  o-KANE wa   sukkarakan!
                                  money  (T)  penniless/broke

5
[His pov of her.  She looks at him with little expression.]
narration:
  In the end...                   KEKKYOKU...

  Kurumi's fortunetelling         kurumi no URANAi          ZEMBU
  was completely on target.              's fortunetelling  entirely

                                  Atatchatta
                                  hit-the-mark-(finality/regret)

Madoka:
  Then, shall we go?              ja    ikimasho-- ka
                                  then  shall-go   (?)

  Everyone's already gone on      minna     mou      SAKI ni  itte-ru   yo
  ahead.                          everyone  already  ahead    be-going

6
Kyousuke: [surprised]
  Eh?  "Everyone..."              e?  minna tte...

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1
[Exterior shot of an office building.]

2
Kyousuke:
  Come to think of it, I          so-- ieba            nanno YOU
  still haven't asked her         come-to-think-of-it  what-kind-of-business
  what this is all about...
                                  ka  mo   mada   ki--te-nakatta
                                  (?) too  still  wasn't-asked

                                  kedo......
                                  but

3
Madoka:
  Didn't I tell you?              iwanakatta kke?
                                  ______
  It's the sighting of            hare-- suiSEI   MIMONO  yo
  Halley's comet.                 Halley's-comet  sight
                                       ____
  I heard you can see it          kono biru no OKUJOU ni             aru
  through a telescope that's      on-this-office-building's-rooftop  there-is
  set up on the rooftop of
  this building!                  TENTAI BOUENKYOU de          mireru
                                  with-astronomical-telescope  can-see

                                  n da     tte!
                                  (explan) (quote)

4
[Isolated views of a couple of amateur telescopes.]
Kyousuke: [off]                   ______
  Halley's comet?!                hare-- suiSEI?!

Madoka: [off]
  Yes, that's right.  You         so-- so--  SHItte-ru?
  know about it?

  It's been said for ages,        ano HOSHI tte  MUKASHI kara
  that that comet has been        that-star (T)  from-long-ago
  a star signaling disaster.
                                  KYOU            SEI   da  tte iwarete-ru
                                  evil/bad-luck/  star  is  is-said-that
                                  disaster

                                  no yo

5
[She turns to him, amiably.]
Madoka:                           ______
  On years that Halley's Comet    hare-- suiSEI  ga   CHIKYUU ni
  approaches the Earth, a lot     Halley's-comet (S)  to-the-Earth
  of bad things are supposed
  to occur, but...                CHIKAzuku  TOSHI tte  yokunai  koto  ga
                                  draw-near  year  (T)  not-good thing (S)

                                  ippai  Okoru rashii    kedo...
                                  full   probably-occur  but

  Kasuga-kun, are you okay?       KASUGA-kun wa DAIJOUBU?

6
[Surprised, he puts on a smile.]
Kyousuke:                         _ ___
  M-me?!                          o ore?!

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                          doki_

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1
Kyousuke:
  N-no, really, this is...        i iya  betsu ni       kore       to itte
                                    no   in-particular  this-(one) saying-that
                                  __ __ __ __ __
  Ha ha ha ha ha!  I'm fine!      ha ha ha ha ha  DAIJOUBU da yo!

[She beams back at him.]

2
[His pov of her.  She continues to smile merrily.]
narration:
  Certainly...                    TASHIka ni...

  That was a near thing.          abunai     toko       datta
                                  dangerous  spot/time  was

Madoka:
  That's good.                    sore       wa   yokatta  ne
                                  that-(one) (T)  was-good (rhet)

3
[Kyousuke turns to see Hikaru, Master and his sisters.]
Hikaru: [beaming and waving]
  Sempa-a-ai.                     sempa--i

4
[His view out across the city.  The skies are clear and full of stars.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Wowww.  So beautiful!           uwa-- kirei!

narration:
  But...                          demo......

  It's not so much that...        sore hodo no koto   ja nai  shi
                                  that-much 's thing  is-not  and-besides
                                       ______
  Indeed, I'm not afraid of       maa  hare-- suiSEI   nante
  Halley's comet!                      Halley's-comet  the-likes-of

                                  kowakunai!
                                  not-frightening

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1
[Kurumi eyes her brother in a sinister manner.  She pokes him in his cheek.]
Kurumi:
  Oniichan, that expression...    oni--chan  sono KAO  wa...
                                             that-face (T)

  It looks as though my           do--yara        atashi no URANAi
  fortunetelling was right        it-looks-as-if  my-fortunetelling
  on target, wasn't it.
                                  Atatta        n desho
                                  hit-the-mark  (poss-explan)
                                                      ____
  Well.  See?!  You jerk.         hore do-- da!  kono yaro

Kurumi FX:                        ____ ____
                       tsun tsun

2
[Blushing, he pumps both fists.]
Kyousuke:
  It wasn't like that!            so-- ja nai yo

  I was just completely           aitsu ni        ippai  kuwasareta
  taken in by that person!!       by-that-person  full   was-taken-in

                                  dake  da yo!!
                                  just  is

3
[Madoka leans towards him, face stern.]
Madoka:
   ..........  What person?       ..........aitsu tte?

Madoka FX:
                          ji~~~~_

4
[He winks at her and gives a nervous smile.]
Kyousuke:
  N-no, it's nothi...             i iya  nan demo...

  Never mind that.  Hey,          sore yori  hora  AYUKAWA mo
  let's go look and see!!         than-that  look          too

                                  nozoite-mitara!!
                                  if-peek-and-find-out

[Madoka looks at him wide-eyed.]

5
[View through the telescope at the blurred and unimpressive image of the
 disappointing visit of Halley's comet in 1986.]
narration:
  Danger, danger...               abunai abunai......
                                             ______
  Do I really want to see         yappari    hare-- suiSEI  tte
  Halley's comet--the star        after-all  Halley's-comet (T)
  of disaster--after all?!
                                  KYOU            SEI   mitai?!
                                  evil/bad-luck/  star  want-to-see
                                  disaster

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