Kimagure Orange Road
"The Heart-Breaking Premonition Dream"
Volume 14, Story 3
WB Volume 8, Story 7
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Matthew Akira Klippenstein
                                 Frederick Gallagher
                                 K. Huong

Last revision : 08-27-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 131 (47) are only in the WBs!
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p 131 (47)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka sits on the edge of her bed, dressed in her nightgown, which rides up
 both legs to show a lot of thigh.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                               _dori--mu_
  The Heart-Breaking              SHITSUREN        YOCHI-MU
  Premonition Dream               unrequited-love  premonition-dream

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ______
  I Want to Do the Bold Thing     ku--ru na anata to  DAITAN    shitai!
  with the Cool You!              with-cool-you       boldness  want-to-do

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p 132 (48)

[This page and the first two panels of the next are black-bordered, denoting
 the premonition dream.]

1
[Madoka's pov of Toba-sensei, as he looks at her with a serious expression.]
Toba-sensei:
  I want you to come over...      boku no tokoro ni  kite hoshii...
                                  to-my-place        want-to-come

2
[His pov of her--she looks back with a partly mischievous expression.]
Madoka:
  Sounds like...                  marude...

  You're trying to win my         kudoki            MONKU          ne!
  heart!                          make-advances/    wording/phrase
                                  court-(a-woman)/persuade

3
[Pov pulls back.  The two are outside.  With a decisive look, he takes Madoka
 by her wrist.  She stares back in surprise.]
Toba-sensei:
  By all means, I want to         do--shite mo  kimi o   TE ni
  have you!!                      by-all-means  you (O)  in-hand

                                  Iretai       n da!!
                                  want-to-put  (explan)

Toba-sensei FX:
                            gui_

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p 133 (49)

1
[Pov shifts.  In a window of the school building above them, Kyousuke stares
 down in horror.]

2
[Pov shifts.  Madoka looks back at us.]
Madoka:
  Okay.                           i-- wa yo

  Then, eat...                    ja tabete......

3
[Exterior night shot looking up the front of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  WAHHH!!                         wa--!!

4
[Manami sits up in bed.  Behind her, Kurumi rubs her eyes.]
Kurumi:
  What was that voice             nani--  ima no koe
  just now?                       what    now 's voice

5
[The neighbors pile out of their apartments.]
neighbor wife:
  What is it?  What is it?        nan da  nan da

neighbor family FX:
                       zawa zawa

neighbor husband:
  In the middle of the            kono YONAKA ni
  night...                        this in-the-middle-of-the-night

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p 134 (50)

1
[Good neighbors all, they rush towards the source of the scream.]
neighbor 1:
  I think it came from            KASUGA-san toko  da tte        sa
  Kasuga-san's place.                        place is (am-given-to-understand)

neighbor 2:
  Maybe a thief broke in,         dorobo-- ga   haitta   toka
  or...                           thief    (S)  entered  or...

neighbor 3:
  Maybe that cry was someone      ano KOE    wa   SATSUJIN JIKEN  deshou?
  being murdered?                 that-voice (T)  murder-case     poss-be

2
[An officer pushes his way through the mob.]
police officer:
  Okay, make way, make way!       hai doite doite!

3
[At the door to their apartment, Takashi and Manami speak to the officer with
 embarrassment.  Behind, the neighbors peer into the apartment.]
Takashi:                                                      __ __ __ __ __
  No-o-o...  It's nothing.  Ha    iya~~~~  nan demo nai desu  ha ha ha ha ha
  ha ha ha ha!

Manami:
  We're very sorry to disturb     o-sawagase shite  do--mo sumimasen
  you.                            disturb    doing  very-sorry

4
[The twins stand and look off-panel.  Kurumi winces.]
Manami:
  Really!  That oniichan--        mattaku  MAIDO  MAIDO   HITOsawagase na
  always and forever causing      really   always always  giving-false-alarm
  trouble.
                                  oni--chan

Kurumi:
  I'm so embarrassed!             atashi hazukashi-- yoo!

5
[Kyousuke sits up wide-eyed in bed.]
Kyousuke:                         ___ ___ ___
                haa haa haa

6
narration:
  It was a premonition dream!!    YOCHI-MU da!!

  But what the hell was           shikashi  kore       wa   ittai
  this...?!                       but       this-(one) (T)  in-the-world

                                  do-- yu-- koto...?!
                                  what-kind-of-thing

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p 135 (51)

1
[He walks to school.]
Kyousuke FX:
                         yoro~~~~

Kyousuke:
 (B-but...                        (de demo...

  Why was that teacher...         do--shite  ano SENSEI   ga...
                                  why        that-teacher (S)

  Having a conversation like      AYUKAWA to    anna KAIWA              o...)
  that with Ayukawa...?)          with-Ayukawa  conversation-like-that (O)

2
narration:
  Come to think of it...          so-- ieba...

  The last time, Ayukawa          kono MAE      AYUKAWA wa  ano SENSEI no koto
  acted like she knew that        the-last-time         (T) about-that-teacher
  teacher...
                                  SHItte-ru  yo-- na    soburi    o...
                                  is-knowing look-as-if behavior (O)

Madoka: [flashback]
  That guy...                     ano HITO...

  Is so careless as usual,        sosokkashii no    wa   aikawarazu  ne
  hm.                             careless    (nom) (T)  as-usual
                                  ___ ___
                      haa haa

3
[He stops short, eyes wide with shock.]
narration:
  That means...                   to yu-- koto wa...

  Those two are definitely        TASHIka ni  futari   wa   SHIriai
  acquainted with each other!!    certainly   2-people (T)  acquaintances

                                  na   n da!!
                                  are  (explan)

  What's more...  They're on      shikamo...  kanari SHINMITSU na......!
  pretty good terms...!           moreover    pretty-familiar/intimate

4
[Kyousuke's pov of his classmates.  Two girls talk.]

5
[Madoka sits at her desk.]

6
[Another view of Madoka at her desk.  She tosses her hair back.]

7
[Behind her, Kyousuke stands and watches her.]

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p 136 (52)

1
narration:
  But...  Ayukawa would           demo..........  masaka      AYUKAWA ga...
  never...                        but             impossible          (S)

  Do something like that          ano SENSEI to      anna koto...
  with that teacher...            with-that-teacher  thing-like-that
                                        ____
  No way!                         sonna baka na!

2
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration:
  After school...                 HOUKAGO...

school bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ _____
       kin kon kan ko--n

3
[Kyousuke stands at a urinal.]

4
[He's surprised to hear a conversation outside the window.]
Toba-sensei: [off]
  It's been a really              honto ni  hisashiburi           da ne
  long while.                     really    after-a-long-interval is

  How long has it been,           nanNEN buri           darou
  Madoka...?  Since seeing        after-how-many-years  poss-be
  you last...
                                  madoka...  kimi to   au no   wa......
                                             with-you  meeting (T)

5
[Kyousuke scurries on top of the urinal to get a look outside the window.]
Kyousuke FX:
                     atafuta

6
[Same view as in the premonition dream (though out-of-sequence).  Above
 Madoka and Toba-sensei, Kyousuke peers out the window in horror.]
Madoka:
  Well...                         saa ne

  At the very least, since        SUKUnaku tomo   kinou
  there wasn't a class of         at-(the)-least  yesterday
  yours yesterday...
                                  anta no JUGYOU wa   nakatta       kara...
                                  your-class     (T)  wasn't-there  that's-why

  Hasn't it been 2 or 3 days?     2~3 HI      wa   Atte-nakatta   n ja nai no?
                                  2-to-3-days (T)  wasn't-meeting

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p 137 (53)

1
Toba-sensei:                      ___ ___ ___
  Ha! ha! ha!                     ha_ ha_ ha_

  Stop kidding around.            jo--dan wa   sono kurai  ni shite
                                  joke    (T)  so-much     for

2
[As in the dream, Toba-sensei gazes seriously back at us.]
Toba-sensei:
  I want you to come over...      boku no tokoro ni  kite hoshii...
                                  to-my-place        want-to-come

3
[His pov of Madoka.  She has a mischievous expression.]
Madoka:
  Sounds like...                  marude...

  You're trying to win my         kudoki            MONKU          ne!
  heart!                          make-advances/    wording/phrase
                                  court-(a-woman)/persuade

4
[Kyousuke profile--he looks down in rapt attention.]
Toba-sensei: [off]
  Ahhhh!!  Of course that's       aa!!  mochiron   sono tsumori   da yo
  what I mean.                          of-course  that-intention is

5
[As in the premonition dream, Toba-sensei grasps Madoka by her wrist.]
Toba-sensei:
  By all means, I want to         do--shite mo  kimi o   TE ni
  have you!!                      by-all-means  you (O)  in-hand

                                  Iretai       n da!!
                                  want-to-put  (explan)

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p 138 (54)

1
[Kyousuke profile--utter shock.]

2
narration:
  Wh-what are they saying...?!    na nan  da tte...?!
                                     what is (quote)

3
narration:
  The premonition dream came      yappari    YOCHI-MU          ga
  true, after all!!               after-all  premonition-dream (S)

                                  GENJITSU ni          natchatta!!
                                  really/in-actuality  became-(finality)

urinal FX:                        ______
                          gishi_

4
[The urinal on which he was perched comes off the wall and crashes to the
 floor.]
Kyousuke:
  Oo-wah!                         uwa_

urinal FX:                        ________
                         mekimeki

5
[Both slam into the ground.]
Kyousuke/urinal FX:               ___
                          go_

6
[Kyousuke passes out.]
Kyousuke:
 (A...  Ayu...)                   (a...  ayu...)

7
[His consciousness goes spinning down into a black void.]
Kyousuke:
 (Ayukawa-a-a!)  (Ayukawa-a-a!)   (ayukawa~~~~)  (ayukawa~~~~)

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p 139 (55)

1
[Walking like an old man, Kyousuke hobbles out the school's front gate.]
Kyousuke:
  Ah-ow-ouch...                   a itete...

2
[He stares glumly down at the ground.]
narration:
  This is truly insult added      fundari kettari to wa     kono koto  da yo
  to injury!                      insult-added-   (define)  this-thing is
                                  to-injury

                                  mattaku!
                                  really

narration:
  I passed out after that,        ano ato    KIZETSU shichatta
  so I didn't see...              that-rest  fainted-away-(finality)

                                  kara        mite-nai    kedo...
                                  that's-why  isn't-seen  but

  But Toba-sensei and             AYUKAWA to  TOBA-SENSEI wa...
  Ayukawa...                              and             (T)

3
[Madoka races up to him.]
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

4
[He turns to her with a lost look.]
Kyousuke FX:
                           doyo~~~~

5
[Oh so cute!  Arms behind her, she leans and looks up at his face with a soft
 smile.]
Madoka:
  What kind of face are you       nante  KAO  shite  n no yo
  making?!                        what!  face making

  Say, could you drop by my       nee  KYOU   uchi ni  yotte       ka nai?!
  place today?!                   say  today  at-home  dropping-in I-wonder

6
[Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.]

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p 140 (56)

1
[She comes in with a heavily-laden tray, all smiles.]
Madoka:
  Sorry to keep you waiting!      o-machidoo--_!

2
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                      kyoton

3
Madoka: [merrily]
  I prepared this with all        KOKORO o komete    TSUKUtta  n da
  my heart.                       with-all-my-heart  prepared  (explan)

  Just for you, Kasuga-kun!       KASUGA-kun no tame ni       ne!
                                             for-the-sake-of  (rhet)

4
[He gives her a nervous and measuring look.]
narration:
  What does she mean by that?     do-- yu--    tsumori   na n da     yo?
                                  what-kind-of intention is (explan)

  Jeez!                           mattaku!

5
[View pans back.  He's seated at the low table in her bedroom.  She kneels
 beside him to set the tray of food down on the table.]
Madoka:
  That's a joke.                  to yu-- no     wa   jo--dan de
                                  something-that (T)  joke    being
                                  _______          _______
  I'm in the middle of testing    abakabu no SHIN- menyu--
  out ABCB's new menu.  Won't     ABCB    's new   menu
  you try it?
                                  KENKYUU      -CHUU na no
                                  investigation within  (nom)

                                  SHISHOKU shite-mite-kurenai?
                                  not-sample-and-see-(for-me)

Kyousuke:
  Ohh...                          nan da...

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p 141 (57)

1
Madoka:
  You washed your hands,          TE wa aratta wa ne
  right?
Kyousuke:
  Uh...  Uh-hmm.                  u...un

2
[As in the premonition dream...]
Madoka:
  Okay.                           i-- wa yo

  Then, eat...                    ja tabete......

3
[But of course, he doesn't remember.  He looks down at the food.]
narration:
  I don't feel like it at all     totemo      IMA wa   sonna KIBUN
  right now...                    by-no-means now (T)  feeling-like-that

                                  ja nai yo...
                                  am-not

4
[She looks across the table at him with concern.]
Madoka:
  Ohh...                          ara...

  It doesn't look good?           mazu     -so-- ni     mieru?
                                  unsavory  look-as-if  appear

5
[His pov of her.  Using a fork, she has a bite.  Her lips lovingly caress the
 tines of the fork.]
Madoka:
  Mmm.  Not bad!                  un ikeru!

Madoka FX:                        _____
                          paku_

6
[Using that same fork, she presents a morsel for him to eat, with a cheery
 smile.]
Madoka:                                  ____
  He-e-ere.  Say, "ahh"           horaa  a--n  
  .

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p 142 (58)

1
Madoka: [smiling]
  Say, "ahh".                     a--n

[He blushes and stares blankly across the table at her.]

2
[He closes his eyes and opens his mouth.]
narration:
  Damn...                         chikusho--

  Ayukawa making this cute a      konna ni     kawaii KAO  shite
  face with that teacher...       this-(much)  cute   face making

                                  AYUKAWA wa   ano SENSEI to...
                                          (T)  with-that-teacher

3
[His pov of her.  She looks back at him with shiny eyes, holding out her fork
 towards him.]

4
[Still, he hesitates in eating from her fork.  ]
Madoka:
  I wanted you to be the          ichiban  hajime ni  tabete hoshikatta  n da
  first to eat this.              number-1 to-first   wanted-to-eat

5
[He visualizes the premonition dream.]
narration:
  Speaking of eating,             tabete to ieba      AYUKAWA wa
  Ayukawa said to that            eating speaking-of          (T)
  teacher...
                                  ano SENSEI ni...
                                  to-that-teacher

  Ahhhh, I feel like I'm going    aa  KI ga KURUi      -sou!
  crazy!                              madness/insanity  look-as-if

Toba-sensei FX: [flashback]
                            gui_

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p 143 (59)

1
[He just stares wide-eyed at the food on the fork before his eyes.]
narration:
  I can't hold back any more!!    mou    kore IJOU    osaeru koto wa dekinai!!
                                  -  beyond-this  can't-repress/suppress
                                  more

2
narration:
  I'll ask Ayukawa...             ano SENSEI no koto...
                                  about-that-teacher

  About that teacher!!            AYUKAWA ni   kiite-yaru!!
                                         (IO)  ask-(her)

[He snatches the fork out of Madoka's hands.  She looks surprised.]

Kyousuke:
  AYUKAWA!!                       AYUKAWA!!

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                           ba_

Madoka:
  Y-yes!                          ha hai_

3
[Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.]

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p 144 (60)

1
[View from behind as a junior high girl (in uniform) approaches the closed
 door to Madoka's room.  Hm, I wonder who it is?]
Kyousuke: [off]
  A-Ayukawa!  That teach...       a...AYUKAWA!  ano SEN...

2
[Smiling, Hikaru walks in.  Both Kyousuke and Madoka do rapid 180's.  Kyousuke
 also manages to move about 3 meters from the table.]
Hikaru:
  Sorry I'm la-a-ate!!            okurete suimase~~n!!

door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

Madoka/Kyousuke FX:
                           suza_!!

3
[Hikaru smiles at Kyousuke, who looks embarrassed, still clutching Madoka's
 fork.]
Hikaru:
  Ohh, Sempai!!                   ara SEMPAI!!

4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
  Hi...                           do--mo......

narration:
  Ohh.  She also called           nan da  hikaru-chan mo
  Hikaru-chan...?                                     too

                                  yonde-atta no ka......?
                                  had-called    (?)

5
[Hikaru angrily confronts Madoka.]
Hikaru:
  Hey, hey, Madoka-san.  That     ne-- ne--  madoka-san  ano TATSUROU!
  Tatsurou!

  You know he's back in           aitsu    ga   kono MACHI ni
  town, right?!                   that-guy (S)  to-this-city

                                  KAEtte-kita        no    SHItte-masu yo ne!
                                  went-and-returned  (nom) are-knowing

6
Madoka:
  Of course.                      mochiron
                                          ______
  He's my PE teacher.             uchi no kurasu no TAIIKU KYOUSHI ni
                                  my/our  class  's PE-teacher    (IO)

                                  natte-ru     mon
                                  is-becoming  person

7
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
 (That guy they're talking        (aitsu no koto  da
  about...                         about-that-guy is

  Hikaru-chan knows him,          hikaru-chan mo   SHItte-ru  no ka?)
  too?)                                       too  is-knowing    (?)

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p 145 (61)

1
Hikaru: [enraged]
  Why is a jerk like that         nande anna yatsu     ga  uchi no GAKKOU no
  teaching at our school!!        why   jerk-like-that (S) our-school     's

                                  SENSEI   nanka ni!!
                                  teacher

  I hate that guy!                atashi aitsu     DAI_kirai na  no ni
                                  I      that-guy  hate          even-tho

2
Madoka:
  Me too!                         atashi mo!

  He's your cousin, so I'm        itoko  no     hikaru ni wa
  sorry, but...                   cousin (nom)  to-Hikaru (contrast)

                                  WARUi kedo...
                                  sorry but

Madoka hair FX:                   ____
                           sara

3
narration:
  Eh!?!  Hikaru-chan's            e_?!  hikaru-chan no itoko?!
  cousin?!

4
[View pans back.  All three sit down on the floor.  Both girls close their
 eyes and look irritated.  Kyousuke looks stunned.]
Madoka:
  If anything, he's not the       dochira-ka to yu-- to
  type I like...                  if-anything/rather
                                  ____    _____
                                  suki na taipu  ja nai na--
                                  liking  type   is-not (rhet)

Hikaru: [arms crossed]
  Yup, yup.                       un un

narration:
  ?!                              ?!

5
[Hikaru's pov of Madoka.]
Madoka:
  A little while ago, at          sakki              mo   GAKKOU de
  school, he called out to        a-little-while-ago too  at-school
  me...
                                  yobidasarete...
                                  being-called/summoned

  What's this, I thought.         nani ka   to OMOeba
                                  what (?)  if-think-that

  "By all means, I want you       zehi          boku no tokoro e
  to come over," he said!         by-all-means  to-my-place

                                  kite hoshii  tte!
                                  want-to-come (quote)

6
[Kyousuke visualizes the scene from his dream.]
narration:
  Ahh...  That conversation       a...  ano TOKI  no KAIWA!
  back then!                            that-time 's conversation

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p 146 (62)

1
Madoka:
  He insisted that I join         RIKUJOU-BU ni haire tte     shitsukoi  no yo!
  the track team!                 on-track-club join  (quote) persistent

  It's because he's the track     JIBUN ga   RIKUJOU-BU no KOMON ni
  team coach!!                    self  (S)  into-track-club's-adviser

                                  natta       mon     da  kara!!
                                  turned-into person  is  that's-why

2
[Hikaru punches the air in a frenzy.]
Hikaru:
  He said that to me, too.        atashi ni mo   itte-kimashita  yo
                                  to-me     too  went-and-said

  Because he's in charge of       nan demo  CHUUTOU-BU      to
  both the junior high and        all       jr-high-section and
  senior high track teams.
                                  KOUTOU-BU       no RIKUJOU-BU
                                  sr-high-section 's track-club

                                  RYOUHOU    motsu           koto ni natta
                                  both-sides take-charge-of  it-was-decided

                                  kara        tte
                                  that's-why  (quote)

Hikaru fisticuffs FX:
                     bun bun

Hikaru:
  He said, "by all means, I       do--shite mo  kimi o   TE ni
  want you!!"                     by-all-means  you (O)  in-hand

                                  Iretai       tte!!
                                  want-to-put  (quote)

  Who would join anything         anna yatsu        no   iru       tokoro ni
  that involved a jerk like       that-kind-of-jerk (S)  is-there  in-place
  that?!!
                                  DARE ga   hairu ka!!
                                  who  (S)  join  (?)

3
Kyousuke FX:                      _________
                      poka~~~~n

4
Hikaru: [livid]
  I thought I should kick         buttobashite-yaro--  ka   to OMOimashita yo
  his butt!  Really!              shall-knock-(him)-   (?)  thought-that
                                  senseless

                                  mattaku!
                                  really

[Madoka looks embarrassed and stares up at a corner of the ceiling.]

Madoka:
  Oh.  I...                       ara  atashi......

5
[She turns her back towards the others and tosses her hair back.]
Madoka:
  He was too persistent, so,      anmari     shitsukkoi  n de     tsui...
  in the end...                   too-(much) persistent  ('cause) 
                                                                   in-the-end

Madoka FX:                        ______
                           chira_

6
[Kyousuke still sits, looking blank and holding that fork.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........?!                    ..........?!

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p 147 (63)

1
narration:
  Ah!  That means that            ha_  to yu-- koto wa  AYUKAWA ga
  Ayukawa knew that guy was         !  that-means               (S)
  Hikaru-chan's cousin, so...
                                  aitsu     o   SHItte-ita   no    wa
                                  that-guy (O)  was-knowing  (nom) (T)

                                  hikaru-chan no itoko   datta  kara
                                              's cousin  was    that's-why

                                  de...
                                  so

2
[His pov of the two girls.  Hikaru is loudly discussing something.]
narration:
  I don't know why, but for       nan-da-ka  SHIranai  kedo.....
  some reason...                  somehow    not-know  but

  He's hated a lot by these       kono futari ni      wa
  two...                          by-these-two-people (contrast)

                                  sugoku kirawarete-te...
                                  is-being-awfully-disliked

3
narration:
  That conversation with          GAKKOU de  no AYUKAWA to   no KAIWA wa...
  Ayukawa at school...            at-school  's with-Ayukawa 's conversation

narration:
  Was just the first half of      ano YOCHI-MU           no ZEMHAN
  that premonition dream...       that-premonition-dream 's first-half

                                  dake  no koto  de......
                                  just  about    being

4
[He finally connects that part of his dream with what Madoka said a minute
 ago.]
narration:
  Was that "eat" part from        tabete  tte yu-- no    wa  sakki     no...?
  just a little while ago...?     eating  say-that (nom) (T) a-little- 's
                                                             while-ago

5
[He breaths a sigh of relief and smiles.]
Kyousuke:
 (O-ohh.  I see!                  (na naan da  so-- ka!

  Now it all hangs together.)     kore de        subete  tsujitsuma ga au)
                                  now/with-this  all     hang-together

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Whew!                           ho_

narration:                                               ________
  But I haven't felt this         shikashi  konna ni     harahara shita no mo
  nervous in a long while!        but       this-(much)  trembled/felt-    too
                                                         nervous

                                  hisashiburi!
                                  after-a-long-interval

6
Kyousuke: [to Hikaru]
  But, why do you dislike         da kedo  do--shite  sonna ni
  Toba-sensei so much?               but   why        that-(much)

                                  TOBA-SENSEI no koto  kiratte    n no?
                                  about-Toba-sensei    disliking

Hikaru:
  That's just it!                 sore       na n desu!
                                  that-(one) is (explan)

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1
[Hikaru addresses us, waving an index finger.  Behind her is a flashback.  A
 4-year-old Hikaru, a 6-year-old Madoka and a young Tatsurou sit outside on a
 blanket on the grass and have a pretend picnic.]
narration:
  Long ago, the three of us       MUKASHI   3-NIN de     yoku
  would often play house, but     long-ago  by-3-people  often
  that guy lacked--should I
  call it knowledge, or           mamagoto ASObi o shite-ta  n desu
  perhaps common sense--          were-playing-house         (explan)
  towards girls...
                                  kedo  ano HITO     ONNA no KO ni TAIsuru
                                  but   that-person  towards-girls

                                  CHISHIKI  to yu-- ka  JOUSHIKI ga nakute...
                                  knowledge         or  not-having-common-
                                                        sense

  He made Madoka-san and me       atashi to madoka-san o   OKOrasechatta
  so angry.                       I      and          (O)  made-angry-
                                                           (finality)

                                  n desu
                                  (explan)

little Tatsurou: [arms outstretched]
  Both of you are my wives!       RYOUHOU  boku no oku-san ne!
                                  both     my      wives  (rhet)

little Hikaru: [angry]
  Hey-y-y!  That's no good!!      kora----_!  sonna     no    dame--_!!
                                  heyyy       like-that (nom) no-good

2
[Kyousuke stares down at the ground.]
narration:
  Certainly sounds like that      TASHIka ni  ano SENSEI   rashi-- ya!
  teacher!                        definitely  that-teacher like

  But, on second thought, is      shikashi  KANGAete-mirya
  saying "both of you are         but       if-come-to-think-about-it
  mine" any different from
  me right now...?!               "RYOUHOU"  to yu-- no  wa   IMA no
                                   both      saying-that (T)  now 's
                                  ___
                                  ore to   TAISA nai
                                  from-me  is-no-great-difference

                                  no de wa...?!

3
[Oh so cute!  Arms behind her back, Hikaru leans and peers at what he holds
 in his hand.]
Hikaru:
  Sempai, you've got              SEMPAI  oishi-so-- na mono   motte-masu
  something pretty tasty                  tasty-looking-thing  are-holding
  there, don't you!
                                  ne!

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

4
[With a smile, she takes it in her mouth.]
Hikaru FX:                        _____
                          paku_

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1
[She blushes and spins about in ecstasy.]
Hikaru:
  Hooray-y-y!                     yatta--_
                                            ______
  It's Sempai's fork, so...       sempai no fo--ku  da  kara......
                                         's fork    is  that's-why
                                            _____
  We kissed indirectly!!          KANSETSU  kissu shichatta--_!!
                                  indirect  kissed-(finality)

                           kya~~_

Hikaru FX:
                    guruguru

[Kyousuke stares hard at the fork.]

Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             a_

2
[Blushing, he looks over at Madoka, who merely turns to one side, and looks
 at him without expression.]

3
[In disgust with himself, he turns around and snaps his fingers at the lost
 chance.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

Kyousuke fingers FX:              ______
                           pachin!

4
[Toba-sensei conducts class.  His face is a horrible collection of lumps and
 bruises.]
Toba-sensei:
  Le-e-et's see.                  e~~~~~~tto

  Let's take attendance...        SHUSSEKI    o   torimasu...
                                  attendance (O)  take

narration:
  The next day...                 YOKUJITSU...

class FX: [off]
                       zawa zawa

5
[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at a blushing Madoka with a knowing
 wink, but Madoka avoids the look by gazing out the window.]
narration:
  Tomorrow...                     ASU      wa   wagaMI......
  It might be me.                 tomorrow (T)  oneself

                                  kamoshirenai
                                  it-may-be

  That face of Toba-sensei        TOBA-SENSEI no ano KAO    KYOU  wa
  is a bit pleasing today!                    's that-face  today (T)
             --Kyousuke
                                  choppiri  YUKAI                desu!
                                  a-bit     pleasant/delightful  is

                                  KYOUSUKE

Kyousuke:                         ___
                            pu_

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