Kimagure Orange Road
"The Hawaii Everyone's Longing for!"
Volume 14, Story 6
WB Volume 8, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (30 Oct 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Frederick Gallagher
Last revision : 08-27-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 191 (107) are only in the WBs!
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p 191 (107)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka kneels in a black bikini at the beach.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _____
The Hawaii Everyone's akogare no hawai!
Longing for! a-longing-(for)/ 's Hawaii
a-thirst-(for)
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _________
An Actress for Just One hito NATSU dake no akutoresu
Summer--Acting out a just-one-summer 's actress
Dazzling Love...
mabayui KOI o ENjiru no...
dazzling/ love (O) performing/acting
blinding
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p 192 (108)
1
[A shot looking straight up at the sun.]
FX:
jiwari...
2
[Kyousuke walks down the street, staring at the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
fura_
3
[He puts a hand to his forehead.]
narration:
Hello everyone. This is mina-san konnichi wa KYOUSUKE desu...
Kyousuke... everyone hello is
4
narration:
Summer vacation is supposed TANOshii hazu no NATSU YASUmi
to be fun. fun likelihood 's summer-break
Then why am I feeling so naze konna ni GENKI ga nai no ka tte?
down, you ask? why this-(much) depressed (?) (quote)
5
narration:
It's all because of what ototoi no ano AYUKAWA no
Ayukawa said the day before the-day-before- that-Ayukawa 's
yesterday... yesterday
hitokoto ga subete no RIYUU...
a-word (S) whole-reason
6
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
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p 193 (109)
1
[His pov of Madoka, dressed in her ABCB apron.]
Madoka: _______
Starting tomorrow, I'm atashi ...ashita kara amerika e
planning to go to America I from-tomorrow to-America
for about a month!
hito-GATSU hodo iku YOTEI na no!
about-a-month go a-plan
2
[Pov shifts. We look down at the two. Kyousuke sits at the counter, stunned.
Madoka does dishes behind the counter.]
Kyousuke:
EH!?! e_?!
3
[Cracks appear on this panel. It is a facial portrait of Kyousuke.]
glass FX: ______
pishi_!!
4
glass FX: _____ _____
pishi pishi
5
[The panel shatters completely.]
glass FX: ________
pasha~~n
narration:
This world has become kono YO wa YAMI da......
pitch-black... this-world (T) pitch-dark is
6
[He aims a grimace at the ceiling. Behind him, he visualizes a black-bikini-
clad Madoka at the beach.]
narration:
A summer without Ayukawa AYUKAWA no inai NATSU nante
isn't summer at all! (S) isn't-here summer the-likes-of
NATSU nanka ja nai yo----_!!
summer somehow is-not
dramatic FX: _______
do~~~~n
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p 194 (110)
1
narration:
Well, but I bet she's going maa demo kitto oto--san ya oka--san ni
to see her father and but surely by-father-and-mother
mother, so there's nothing
to be done about it, is Ai ni iku n daro-- kara
there! going-to-meet/see (poss-explan) that's-why
sho-- ga nai kedo ne!
can't-help but (rhet)
Madoka: _____
Before that, I think I'll sono MAE ni ISSHUUKAN hodo hawai ni
stop by in Hawaii for about before-that about-a-week in-Hawaii
a week and get a nice tan!
yotte yaite ko--
stop-by-(and) burn-(and) like-this
to OMOtte-ru n da!
am-thinking-that (explan)
2
Kyousuke:
EH? e?
3
[She leans toward him, with a merry look on her face. He smiles back
nervously at her.]
Madoka:
Do you want to go, too, KASUGA-kun mo iku?
Kasuga-kun?
Kyousuke: __ _ __ __ __ __
Ah... No... Ah ha ha ha ha... ie a ha ha ha ha...
ha...
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he is stricken.]
narration: ______
A young girl alone on a WAKAi musume ga hito-GATSU mo
trip to America for a young-girl (S) one-month too
month... _______
amerika hitori TABI nante......
America one-person trip the-likes-of
_____
What's more, one week in shikamo ISSHUUKAN wa hawai...?!
Hawaii...?! moreover one-week (T) Hawaii
5
narration:
Someone as beautiful as AYUKAWA hodo no BIJIN nara...
Ayukawa... as-beautiful-as-Ayukawa if-it-is
Won't be left alone by muko-- no OTOKO datte hottokanai yo
the guys over there. even-guys-over-there not-leave-alone
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
6
[Against the backdrop of a quasi-American flag (it's got too many stripes,
and too few stars) a couple of hunks tower over a cringing Madoka.]
narration:
Blue eyes that press close! semaru AOi ME!
draw-near/urge-to-do blue-eyes
________ _____
Buff blond boys. mukimuki KIMPATSU bo--i
bulging-muscles blond boy
______
Raging gaijin power!! raging/turbulent foreigner power
Madoka: ________
Kyaaaa! kya----_
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p 195 (111)
1
[Back to the present. Kyousuke has stopped in the street, holding both fists
to his mouth, and sweating it.]
Kyousuke:
Ah!?! ha_?!
2
[A man in anguish...]
narration: [both narration boxes combined]
Ahhhh, I'm dying of worry aa yappari AYUKAWA no koto ga......
over Ayukawa, after all!! after-all about-Ayukawa (S)
SHIMPAI de SHIMPAI de
worrying worrying
ite-mo tatte-mo irarenai...!!
be-quite-restless/impatient
Kyousuke FX:
kuraa fura_
3
Kyousuke: _______
(I used up all my savings on (CHOKIN wa KYONEN no okinawa
last year's Okinawa trip...) savings (T) last-year 's Okinawa
RYOKOU de tsukai kitchatta shi......)
on-trip used-up-(savings) and-besides
Kyousuke: _____
Ahhhh... haa~~
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
tobo tobo
[Sayuri spots him walking off with his shoulders hunched.]
4
[Sayuri is in shorts and shirt, looking cute as ever.]
Sayuri: [smiling]
Hey-y-y! araa_
5
[She runs up past him and turns to give him a smile. Kyousuke hardly sees
her.]
Sayuri:
It's been a while! o-hisashiburi~~_!
Kyousuke:
H-hi... ya... yaa......
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p 196 (112)
1
[Hmm. I don't think I've ever been here before... Exterior shot of a fast
food place. Anyway, its logo is the "Golden Arch".]
sign: __________ _________
NcDonald's Hamburgers nakudonaru hamba--ga #NcDonald's#
2
[Kyousuke and Sayuri stand at the counter. Sayuri smiles at him.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
This isn't the time to be konna koto shite-ru BA-AI
doing something like this! this-kind-of-thing am-doing occasion
ja nai ttsu-- no ni......
is-not say-that even-tho
3
[Tight shot of a card with rub-off squares held in Sayuri's hand.]
Sayuri: [off]
What's... This? kore... nani?
card: [partial view] ___
...iz ...izu
Kyousuke: [off] _____
Isn't it a quiz? kuizu desho?
4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
I'll give that to you. ageru yo sore
give that-(one)
Sayuri:
Thanks . do--mo
5
[View looking down at the two seated at a table. Hm, NcDonald's looks the
same the world over... ^_^]
Sayuri:
.......... ..........
6
Sayuri: _
You're very depressed, zuibun GENKI nai desu nee
aren't you. very depressed are (rhet)
7
[Her pov of Kyousuke's profile. He looks at her out of the corner of his eye.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
pikun
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p 197 (113)
1
[View across the restaurant.]
Sayuri: [off]
Yesterday... When I atashi... kinou CHIJIN no MIOKUri de
went to Narita Airport I yesterday for-friend's-sendoff
to see my friend off, I
unexpectedly... NARITA KUUKOU ni itta TOKI gu--zen ni...
to-Narita-Airport went time by-chance
2
[His pov of Sayuri.]
Sayuri:
Ran into her... ano HITO... AYUKAWA-san ni atchatta!
Ayukawa-san! that-person met-Ayukawa-(finality)
3
[Her pov of Kyousuke. He blushes slightly and studies her solemnly.]
4
[She sips from her drink and smiles softly at him. He studies the ceiling.]
Sayuri:
Is that the reason? sono sei... ka na?
that-cause I-wonder
Sayuri FX:
jirori
5
Kyousuke: [face flushed and nervous]
Wha... What are you talking na... nanno koto dai......!!
about...!! what-kind-of-thing is
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
6
Sayuri:
Apparently she's going nan demo NATSU YASUmi CHUU wa
to be in America for the all during-summer-break (T)
entire summer break! _______
zutto amerika ni itte-ru
all-the-time is-going-to-America
mitai desu nee!
seems (rhet)
Sayuri FX: _____
niya_
Sayuri:
(Ahh, good riddance, (a-- jitsu ni seisei shita......
really... really felt-relieved
I hope that girl never EIKYUU ni KAEtte-konakya i-- no yo
comes back!) for-good if-not-come-back okay
anna ONNA!)
that-kind-of-woman
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p 198 (114)
1
[Sayuri looks off to one side and ponders.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
Without that girl around ano ONNA ga inaku natte
it seems this guy's become that-girl (S) isn't-here becoming
easier to take down...
kono OTOKO otoshi-yasuku wa natta
this-guy easily-capture (T) became
yo-- da kedo...
it-looks-like but
But it isn't worth the ano ONNA no ME no MAE ja nakya
trouble of taking him in-front-of-that-girl if-is-not
down if it's not done
in front of that girl... otosu hariai tte mono ga......
capture thing-that's-worth-the-trouble
2
[Her pov of the average-looking, puzzled Kyousuke.]
narration:
If I had to say it, with Itte-mireba
that girl gone... if-I-were-to-say-it
ano ONNA ga inakerya...
that-girl (S) if-isn't-here
A guy of this caliber is BETSU ni do--- tte koto nai no yo ne
nothing special! specially what (T) nothing (nom)
kono TEIDO no OTOKO!
this-degree 's man
3
[A view up at the sky past towering palm trees.]
narration:
If I was going to take this otosu n nara isso......
guy... capture (nom) if-it-is preferable
_____
It would be better to chase hawai made oikakete-itte
after her to Hawaii, thumb to-Hawaii go-running-after-(and)
my nose and do it in front
of her... ano ONNA no ME no MAE de
in-front-of-that-girl
atetsuke ga mashiku...
with-cutting-sarcasm
4
[Sayuri is lost in dreams.]
narration: _____
But, Hawaii... sore ni shite mo hawai kaa......
but/still Hawaii (muse-to-self)
narration:
It must be full of great i-- OTOKO ippai iru daro-- naa...
guys... nice-guys full-of poss-there-are (rhet)
5
[Similar background as before. Against a backdrop of a quasi-American flag, a
couple of hunks tower over an ecstatic Sayuri.]
narration:
Blue eyes that press close! semaru AOi ME!
draw-near/urge-to-do blue-eyes
________ _____
Buff blond boys. mukimuki KIMPATSU bo--i
bulging-muscles blond boy
______
Raging gaijin power!! dotou no GAIJIN pawa--!!
raging/turbulent foreigner power
Sayuri: ______
Kyaaaa! kya--_
6
[On either side of the table, the two stare up at the ceiling, dreamily.]
Sayuri/Kyousuke: _____
Hawaii, hmm... hawai kaa......
Sayuri/Kyousuke: _____
boso_
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p 199 (115)
1
Sayuri FX: _____ _____
goshi goshi
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
2
Kyousuke:
What are you doing? nani yatte n no?
3
[She looks down at the card on the table in front of her.]
Sayuri: _____
The quiz just now. If I sakki no kuizu kore
rub this and win, maybe I a-little-while-ago 's quiz this-(one)
can get another hamburger... ___________
kosutte atari ga DEru to hamba--ga--
rub-(and) a-hit (S) if-appear hamburger
mo-- 1-KO toka yu-- yatsu...
another 1-(counter) they-say-that
Sayuri FX: _____
bo--_
_____ _____
goshi goshi
Kyousuke: [wincing]
It's not that easy to win nakanaka atannai n da yo ne
something like this. (not)-easily not-hit (explan)
ko-- yu-- no tte
this-kind-of (nom) (I-hear)
4
[Tight shot of the card.]
Sayuri:
OH?! a?!
5
[She holds it up to her face, smiling.]
Sayuri:
I won!! atatchatta!!
_______
Lucky-y-y . rakki--
Kyousuke:
Eh? e?
6
Sayuri: ______
If you match this mark... kono ma--ku ga sorou to......
this-mark (S) if-match
Let's see... e----tto...
Sayuri:
It's probably nothing do--se taishita mon ja nai n desu yo...
special... anyhow special thing is-not (explan)
7
dramatic FX: _____
pita_
card: _____ _________
* One week trip for two to * hawai kappu--ru ISSHUUKAN RYOKOU
Hawaii Hawaii couple one-week trip
_________
* A present--Kusatsu Hot * KUSATSU ONSEN YU no HANA purezento
Sulfur Springs hot- sulfur a-present
springs
___________
* One more hamburger * hamba--ga-- mou IK-KO
hamburger another 1-(counter)
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p 200 (116)
1
[The two stare down at the card, incredulous.]
2
[Both flinch back, sending their drinks flying.]
Sayuri/Kyousuke:
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! uso~~~~_
3
[Two male employees gather around Sayuri. Kyousuke can only watch from a
distance.]
NcDonald's worker 1:
You're kidding! uso--_
Sayuri:
Oh no-o-o! ya da--_
NcDonald's worker 2 FX: ________
buriburi
narration:
Ahh... If I had that, aa... are ga areba
I could have gone to that-(one) (S) if-have
Ayukawa...
AYUKAWA no tokoro ni iketa no ni...
to-Ayukawa's-place could-go even-tho
4
[He starts to get up from his seat.]
narration:
But I gave that ticket to da kedo ano KEN sayuri-chan ni
Sayuri-chan... but that-ticket to-Sayuri
ageta n da shi...
gave (explan) and-besides
narration: ___ _______
It doesn't concern me any mou ore ni wa kanke-- nai
more. any-more to-me (contrast) have-no-relation
Anyhow, I'm sure she'll do--se ONNA no KO ka OYA KYOUDAI to
go with a girlfriend or anyhow with-girl-or-parents-or-sibling
someone from her family...
iku ni kimatte-ru......
be-sure-to-go
Kyousuke:
That was nice. See ya... yokatta ne ja......
5
[With a merry smile, Sayuri hooks her arm around his.]
Sayuri FX: _____ __
niko_ su
6
[Brightly, she announces to all present...]
Sayuri:
I'll go with him! atashi KARE to ikimasu!
I with-him go
crowd:
OHHHH! o----_
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p 201 (117)
1
[A worker hands over a clipboard for Sayuri to sign.]
narration: ____
This was an unexpected tana kara bota mochi to wa
piece of good luck!! an-unexpected-piece-of-good-luck (define)
kono koto...!!
this-thing
___ _______ _____
But to think it's a trip shikashi ore to kappuru de hawai
for two to Hawaii with but with-me by-couple Hawaii
me...
da nante......
is the-likes-of
narration:
What's this girl thinking?! do-- yu-- tsumori na n da
what-kind-of intention is (explan)
kono KO?!
this-girl
2
Kyousuke: ______
(During that time, we'll stay (kari ni mo ONAji hoteru no
in the same room of the same even-for-a-time same-hotel 's
hotel, won't we?!)
ONAji HEYA ni TOmaru n darou?!)
in-same-room stay (poss-explan)
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
3
[He turns aside and winces.]
Kyousuke:
(What's more, Ayukawa's (sore ni muko-- ni wa
over there, too... moreover over-there (contrast)
AYUKAWA datte iru wake da shi...
even-Ayukawa is-there reason is consider
I don't know how this'll wake ga wakannaku nari -sou!!)
turn out!!) circumstances (S) not-know become look-
as-if
4
[Isolated shot of a tray carrying a styrofoam burger container and a drink.]
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p 202 (118)
1
[He nervously addresses Sayuri.]
Kyousuke:
Well... I... Appreciate sa... KI...mochi wa arigatai kedo...
this... But, I... feelings (T) appreciate but
After all... ___
ore... yappari......
I after-all
Sayuri:
.......... ..........
2
narration:
I want to see Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA ni Aitai!!
But... To use this girl shikashi... sono tame ni
for that... but that for-the-sake-of
kono KO o RIYOU suru nante...
this-girl (O) use/exploit the-likes-of
___
My conscience won't allow ore no RYOUSHIN ga yurusanai yo!
it! my-conscience (S) not-allow
[While he's thinking to himself, Sayuri turns back to the employee.]
3
Sayuri:
Excuse me... We're still ano... atashi-tachi mada
high school students, and we still
since we aren't lovers
or anything, can we get KOUKOUSEI da shi
separate rooms? high-school-students are and-besides
KOIBITO DOUSHI demo nai kara
couple-of-lovers or- aren't that's-why
something
HEYA BETSUbetsu ni narimasen kaa?
into-separate-rooms not-turn-into (?)
4
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
S-separate? be...BETSUbetsu?
5
narration: ___
With this word, the reason kono kotoba de ore ni nokosareta
and conscience I had left by-this-word by-me was-left
were completely swept away!!
RISEI ya RYOUSHIN wa subete
reason and conscience (T) wholly
futtonde-shimatta!!
was-blown-away-(finality)
[Kyousuke waves tiny flags amidst falling confetti and streamers.]
Kyousuke party popper FX: ___
pon!
6
[With a knowing look, Sayuri crosses her arms and looks off-panel.]
Sayuri:
(From this guy's personality, (kono OTOKO no SEIKAKU kara shite
I'm sure that by saying from-this-guy's-personality doing
this, he'll be hooked...
ko-- ittoitara
like-this if-say-(for-future-sake)
hikkakatte-kuru ni chigainai......
come-and-be-hooked/ am-sure
caught
In a way, he's the type that iwaba TAIGI MEIBUN to yu-- yatsu ga
needs a justification!) in-a-sense a-just-cause called thing (S)
_____
HITSUYOU na taipu ne!)
necessary type (rhet)
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p 203 (119)
1
[A jumbo jet takes off.]
747 FX: ____
goon
2
[Kyousuke and Sayuri chat in their plane seats.]
narration: _______
And so, this impromptu kaku shite kono SOKUSEKI kappuru wa
couple set off for dreamy thus doing this-improvised-couple (T)
Hawaii... _____
YUME no hawai e...
to-dreamy-Hawaii
3
[The plane's tires hit the runway at Honolulu International Airport.]
4
[View of two 747's at adjacent gates at the airport.]
narration:
...and arrived!! yatte-kita no deshita...!!
came-over (explan)
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p 204 (120)
1
[A Madoka full-portrait runs down the right half of this page. She stands
in a mini-jumpsuit.]
2
[A view inside the airport.]
narration: _______
Going to America without RIYUU mo iwazu ni amerika nante
giving any reason... a-reason too unsaid America the-likes-of
Everyone's probably yappari minna bikkuri shite-ru daro--
surprised. after-all everyone poss-am-surprising
na
3
[Master smiles and waves.]
narration: ________
Especially Master, who's TOKU ni masuta-- ni wa
put out because I'm absent especially to-Master (contrast)
from ABCB... _______
abakabu YASUnde
ABCB take-a-break-(and)
me--waku kakechau shi...
troubled-(finality) and-besides
4
[Hikaru smiles.]
narration:
And Hikaru... And.. hikaru... soshite...
5
[Profile of Madoka.]
jet FX: [off] ______
gooooo
6
[She drops her gaze.]
narration:
...Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...
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p 205 (121)
1
[The two wait with a suitcase at curbside. Just *one* suitcase?]
narration:
F-finally, we're here!! tsu tsui ni kichatta!!
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
Sayuri: [looking around]
Oo-wahhh! Only newlyweds, uwa--_ SHINKON-san bakari ne_!
hm?! ! newlyweds-(hon) only (rhet)
2
[Kyousuke looks around. A couple walks by.]
Kyousuke: __ __ __
Ha ha ha... ha ha ha...
Kyousuke FX: _____
chira..
3
[Smiling, she wraps a hand around his arm.]
Sayuri:
But if we try like this, demo atashi-tachi mo ko--
even we... but we too like-this
yatte-miru to..........
if-have-a-try
4
[She looks up into his eyes. Oh, she's VERY good, Sayuri-chan is...]
Sayuri FX: ___
su_
5
[And blesses him with a newlywed smile. He blushes.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Sayuri FX:
ji----_
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p 206 (122)
1
[A couple of beautiful and tanned, bikini-clad and flower-lei-bedecked girls
greet Kyousuke.]
pretty wahine*: _______
Alo-o-ha! aro--ha
<*Hawaiian for "girl". ^_^>
2
[One drapes a lei around his neck...]
3
[...and kisses him on the cheek.]
pretty wahine FX: ____
chu_
Kyousuke:
Oo-wah! uwa_
4
[He turns to Sayuri in embarrassment.]
Kyousuke: _____
This is just a greeting in kore.. hawai ja aisatsu ga wari
Hawaii!! this in-Hawaii-(T) a-greeting
substitute
na n da yo ne!!
is (explan)
__ __ __ __ __
Ha ha ha ha ha! ha ha ha ha ha
5
Sayuri:
Is that so? so-- na no?
Then maybe I should greet jaa atashi mo aisatsu shichao--
you, too?! then I too shall-greet
ka na----_?
I-wonder
6
Kyousuke: [flinching]
Eh?! e_?
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p 207 (123)
1
[Madoka walks along with a letter in her hand.]
2
[Tight shot of the letter. It's addressed to Kyousuke.]
3
[She approaches a mailbox...]
4
[...and starts to insert the letter into the slot.]
letter FX: ___
su_
5
[Madoka is surprised by something seen off-panel.]
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p 208 (124)
1
[Closeup of Sayuri, eyes closed, kissing a blushing Kyousuke on his cheek.]
Sayuri kiss-on-cheek FX: ____
chu_
2
[View pans back to show Madoka staring at the two, and frozen in the act of
mailing off the letter.]
3
[View pans back further. Madoka stands there with the letter in her hand.
Kyousuke stares wide-eyed back at her. Sayuri hasn't noticed Madoka yet.]
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p 209 (125)
1
[Madoka's pov of the two. Sayuri looks back, surprised. Kyousuke starts
looking horrified.]
Kyousuke:
..........?! ..........?!
2
[Their pov of Madoka. She is stunned.]
3
[View looking up at the vapor trail of a departing jet.]
narration:
Th-this is terrible...!! ko...kore wa erai koto ni
this-(one) (T) into-terrible-thing
natta...!!
turned-into
jet FX: _______
kiiiiin
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