Kimagure Orange Road "Summer Night Horror" Volume 15, Story 1 WB Volume 8, Story 14 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-29-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 273 (7) are only in the WBs! NOTE: The existing script, by Andrew Chen, is based on an unofficial Chinese translation and so was not used in preparation of this script. --------------------------------------------------- p 273 (7)--TITLE PAGE [A sun-bronzed Madoka stands in bikini, sandals and visor in front of a framed view of clouds. She leans against an upright boogie-board, a flotation pillow draped over it.] MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ _____ ______ Summer Night Horror sama-- naito - hora-- SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _enjeru_ I Want to Catch the NATSU-IRO TENSHI tsukamaetai...! Summer-Colored Angel...! summer-colored angel want-to-catch --------------------------------------------------- p 274 (8) 1 [View looking up at a stormy night sky.] lightning FX: _____pika_ narration: Summer vacation was a lot TANOshikatta NATSU YASUmi mo of fun, and today is the was-fun summer-break too last day. KYOU ga SAISHUU-BI today (S) last-day 2 [In the glare of lightning, rain pelts the front of the Ayukawa residence.] narration: Three of us, including AYUKAWA no IE de akane to 3-NIN Akane, decided to finish at-Ayukawa's-place with-Akane 3-people our homework at Ayukawa's place, but... SHUKUDAI o KATAzukeru koto ni natta homework (O) finish it-was-decided no desu ga... (explan) but 3 [Kyousuke grimaces up at the ceiling. Madoka looks at him matter-of-factly.] narration: In my case... Because I ore no BA-AI... hotondo TE tsukazu can hardly settle down, my-case hardly be-too-restless- I'm fighting an uphill to-settle-down- battle! (to-do) no tame AKUSEN KUTOU because-of fight-a-desperate-fight/ against-great-odds/struggle-hard -CHUU de arimasu! within am Kyousuke: Ahhhh!! aa!! If it was going to be like konna koto nara this, I should have started this-kind-of-thing if-it-is sooner!! motto HAYAku kara more soon that's-why yattoku -beki datta!! do-(for-future-sake) should Madoka: Don't you say that every MAITOSHI itte-nai? sore... year? every-year isn't-said that 4 [View pulls back. They sit across each other at a table. Madoka rests her chin in her hands and drops her gaze. Kyousuke looks embarrassed.] Madoka: Really! Why do you always, mattaku do--shite so-- always put off doing it really why like-that until the last moment?! ________ itsu-mo itsu-mo girigiri ni naru made always always until-become-very-limit yaranai no! not-do Kyousuke: __ __ __ __ __ Dah ha ha ha ha! da ha ha ha ha 5 Madoka: By the way, Akane-san is sore wa so-- to akane-san osoi wa ne late, isn't she. by-the-way late (rhet) Kyousuke: It's this weather. kono TENKI da mon this-weather is reason Maybe she's not coming. konai ka mo ne not-come maybe --------------------------------------------------- p 275 (9) 1 Kyousuke: I wonder if there's a TAIFUU demo CHIKAzuite-ru typhoon coming? typhoon or-something is-drawing-near no ka na? (nom) I-wonder 2 [Exterior view of the storm.] thunder FX: _______ goooo-- 3 [A hand reaches forward to press the doorbell.] doorbell FX: ___ _____ pin po--n 4 Kyousuke: Oh, she's here, she's here! a kita kita! 5 [Pov of whoever's at the door. Madoka opens the door and looks back at us.] Madoka: Yes. ha--i door FX: _____ gacha --------------------------------------------------- p 276 (10) 1 [Her pov. Under lurid light we see Kazuya sitting on Grandpa's shoulders. They look a bit spooky.] 2 [Madoka clutches her chest...] Madoka: EE!?! i_?! 3 [...and collapses back into Kyousuke's arms.] Madoka FX: kuta_ Kyousuke: M-monster!! ba_...bakemono!! 4 [Grandpa and Akane walk inside where it's lit. Kazuya, holding his shoes in his hands, stares down blankly.] Grandpa: Who's a monster? dare ga bakemono da? who (S) monster is Grandpa/Kazuya/Akane FX: noso-- Akane: [smiling] Good evening. komban wa---- narration: O-ohh! na...nan da yo! --------------------------------------------------- p 277 (11) 1 Akane: Ohh, what's the matter with araa madoka-chan do-- shita no? Madoka-chan? Kyousuke: [angrily] What do you mean, "what's do-- shita mo ko-- shita mo the matter?!" what's-the-matter and like-this done too Anyone would be frightened sono IYOU na kakkou mirya if they saw something that that-strange-appearance if-see strange!! dare datte odoroku yo!! anyone be-frightened 2 Kyousuke: Ayukawa, Ayukawa! AYUKAWA AYUKAWA! [She weakly opens her eyes.] Madoka: Hm? Ah... n? a... 3 Kyousuke: By the way, ojiichan... tokoro-de oji--chan... Why are you here? do--shite koko ni iru no? why to-this-place are-here (?) [Grandpa smiles and fans himself. Kazuya, standing on his own now, looks on.] fan FX: ____ ____ pata pata 4 Grandpa: I'm here to play at Akane's IMA akane-tachi no IE ni place now, and we were just now at-Akane-(and-assoc)'s-house bored. ASObi ni kite-oru n ja ga to-play are-coming (explan) but/and cho--do TAIKUTSU shite-ta TOKORO de no were-just-bored at-place fan FX: ____ ____ pata pata 5 [Kyousuke glares at a startled Kazuya.] Kyousuke: What did *you* come for?! omae wa nani shi ni kita n da?! you (T) what to-do came (explan) 6 Kazuya: Is it bad if I come?! boku ga kicha WARUi?! I (S) coming bad Kyousuke: [in a huff] YES!! WARUi!! --------------------------------------------------- p 278 (12) 1 Kyousuke: ___ I have this mountain of ore wa kono YAMA no yo-- na homework to tackle tonight!! I (T) this-mountain that-resembles SHUKUDAI o KON'YA -JUU ni homework (O) during-tonight agenakya ikenai n da kara ne_!! must-lift (explan) that's-why [He slaps a palm on top of a 2-foot-high stack of papers on the table. Grandpa, Kazuya and Akane look on wide-eyed.] Kyousuke FX: ____ bamu! Akane: What are you bragging for? nani o ibatte n no anta wa? what (O) bragging you (T) 2 Madoka: If they don't interfere BENKYOU no JAMA ni naranakya i-- with studying, it should study 's if-not-in-the-way okay be okay, right? ja nai is-not Kyousuke: [angrily] They'll be sure to JAMA o suru ni kimatte-ru!! interfere!! to-interfere be-sure-to 3 [Kyousuke starts shoving Grandpa towards the door.] Kyousuke: Well anyway, go home, go saa tomokaku kaette kaette home. well anyway go-home-(and) Kyousuke FX: gui gui Grandpa: Are you telling me to go washi ni kono ARASHI no NAKA o home in the middle of this to-me middle-of-this-storm (O) storm?! kaere to yu-- no ka?! go-home say-that (nom) (?) 4 [Grandpa buries his face in his arms and his body is racked with sobs.] Grandpa: Jeez, the world is a cruel mattaku NINJOU KAMI FUUSEN! place! kindness I'm ashamed to have had HAKUJOU na MAGO o motta mono such a cold-hearted heartless-grandson (O) had person grandson. Boo hoo hoo... _ _ _ ja nasakenai u u u...... is wretched/shameful <*Commentary: The "kindness is a paper balloon!" is related to the saying, , or "kindness is thinner than paper." In other words, that "kindness is lacking."> [Madoka smiles and tries to console him.] Madoka: Excuse me... ano... Please stay as long as you yukkuri shite-itte-kudasai like. 5 [Grandpa smiles and heartily takes Madoka by her hands.] Grandpa: Oh!! Thank you! oo!! arigatou! What a well-raised girl nanto dekita MUSUME-san ja... you are... what! raised/formed girl-(hon) are Please be this guy's hitotsu koitsu no YOME ni bride. one into-this-fellow's-bride/wife natte-yatte-kudasara n ka turn-into-(please) Grandpa FX: shikka Kyousuke: Ojiichan!! oji--chan!! 6 [As Madoka and Kyousuke return to their books, the other three sit on a couch and beam smiles.] narration: Jeez... mattaku mo-- _______ This situation--it's the SAIAKU no TOKI ni SAIAKU no memba-- worst people at the worst at-worst-time worst-members time!! ja nai ka kore ja!! as-things-stand Kyousuke: All right? Please, please ii? kureguremo SHUKUDAI no don't only interfere with okay again-and-again homework 's my homework!! JAMA dake wa shinai de yo!! only-interfere (T) don't-do --------------------------------------------------- p 279 (13) 1 Madoka: But, I was really surprised shikashi sakki wa just now! but a-little-while-ago (T) HONTOU ni bikkuri shichatta! really was-surprised 2 narration: Come to think of it, so-- ieba KI no TSUYOi fearless Ayukawa is only come-to-think-of-it brave scared of ghosts, huh... AYUKAWA mo obake dake ni wa too just-by-ghosts (contrast) YOWAi n da yo na... weak/frail (explan) (rhet) 3 [Outside, the wind picks up.] windows FX: ____ ____ gata gata wind FX: _______ hyu~~~~ 4 [Grandpa and Kazuya look up at the high ceiling of the living room.] Grandpa: _uchi_ But, this is a large sore ni shite mo OOki na YOUKAN ja nou! Western-style home! but/still huge Western- is style-home Kazuya: Yeah. It's like ghosts'll un obake demo deso-- da ne pop out. ghosts or-something looks-as-if-emerge 5 Madoka: _____ biku_ Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_ 6 [Kyousuke rants at the two.] Kyousuke: Don't talk about unnecessary yoke-- na koto o iwanai no!! things!! uncalled-for-thing (O) not-say --------------------------------------------------- p 280 (14) 1 Kazuya: [smiling] ______ Can I turn on the TV? terebi tsukete ii? TV turning-on okay Kyousuke: [angrily] Just keep the sound down!! OTO wa hikaeme ni na!! sound (T) moderately 2 [Tight view of the TV. The face of a grotesque monster fills the screen.] TV: ______ pachi_ monster: ________ gyao--su 3 [Madoka stares at the TV in obvious nervousness. Kyousuke slaps a palm to his forehead.] 4 [Kyousuke reaches for the TV. Kazuya is steamed.] Kyousuke: ________ Change the channel! hoka no channeru ni shinasai! to-another-channel do-(command) Kazuya: ______ Damn! I like this sort of che--_ boku ko-- yu-- no stuff! I this-kind-of (nom) SUki na no ni-- like even-though 5 [The cat from chapter 14.4 ("I'm a Cat!") makes an appearance.] cat: ___ Mew. mii 6 Kazuya: [winking] Hey, come here, come here!! hora kotchi koi kotchi!! this-way come! this-way cat: ____ Meow. nyaa --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (15) 1 [The cat scampers off down a dark hallway. Kazuya takes off in pursuit.] Kazuya: Wait. mate yo-- Kazuya footstep FX: ___ ta_ cat footsteps FX: to to to to to 2 Kyousuke: ____ Huh? That cat... are ano neko...... narration: ___ It's the cat that switched kono MAE ore to Irekawatta bodies with me before! before with-me changed-places-with ____ neko da! cat is 3 [Kyousuke smiles over at Madoka.] Kyousuke: You're keeping it? katte-ru no? Madoka FX: _____ niko_ Madoka: ...... Uh-huh. ...... un 4 [View of the front of the Ayukawa residence. Lightning continues to flash through the rain-filled skies.] --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (16) 1 Akane: Umm, where's the bathroom? ano-- o-TEARAi doko kashira lavatory where I-wonder Kyousuke: ___ Ah, me, too... a ore mo... 2 [She gets up and points down a darkened hallway.] Madoka: It's this way. do--zo kotchi yo if-you-please this-way I'll show you. ANNAI suru wa guide/show 3 [Isolated shot of windows.] 4 Madoka: Here. koko yo Akane: [smiling] Ah, thanks. a do--mo 5 [Madoka walks down the hallway carrying a tray filled with drinks.] 6 [Back in the bathroom, Akane stares at herself in the mirror. Kyousuke looks over his back at her.] Akane: Say. Madoka-chan's really ne-- ne-- madoka-chan tte HONTOU ni beautiful, no matter when (T) really you see her, huh. itsu mite-mo kirei ne-- no-matter-when-see beautiful --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (17) 1 [Akane looks dreamily off into the distance.] Akane: If only I could be as atashi mo madoka-chan mitai ni beautiful as Madoka-chan... I too like-Madoka BIJIN ni naretara naa... if-become-beautiful (rhet) [Kyousuke pumps his fists and grimaces at her.] Kyousuke: It's impossible. MURI MURI! Impossible! 2 [With a shimmer, Akane takes on the guise of Madoka.] @Madoka: Oh, if I use the Power this ara atashi datte ko-- yatte way... oh even-I doing-like-this _chikara_ NOURYOKU TSUKAeba... Power if-use @Madoka transformation FX: ___ fu_ 3 @Madoka: _____ Eh-heh. How do I look? uffun nite-ru? Kyousuke: Stop it!! yamenasai!! 4 [The real Madoka walks by the open bathroom door. Glancing inside, she sees herself looking back.] @Madoka: Oh, Madoka-chan! a madoka-chan! 5 [The fake Madoka winks and points to her own face. The real Madoka stares back in shock. Kyousuke looks on in horror.] @Madoka: How's this? Do I look doo nite-ru? like you? Kyousuke: Ah, idiot!! a baka!! --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (18) 1 [Madoka throws herself at Kyousuke.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin Madoka: KYAAAA!! kya---_!! 2 Kyousuke: I-idiot! ba baka! Don't transform in front AYUKAWA no MAE de HENSHIN suru of Ayukawa!! in-front-of-Ayukawa changing n ja nai_!! Akane: Ah. Oh no. a ikenai 3 [Clinging tight to Kyousuke, she looks nervously about.] Madoka: A-another one of me...!! a atashi ga mo-- hitori......!! I (S) another 1-person Kyousuke: [forced smile] N-no way!! ma masaka!! 4 Kyousuke: Your imagination. KI no sei KI no sei It's just your imagination. [Akane looks on the two in envy.] Akane: Ahh! How nice. a--_ i-- naa 5 Kyousuke: [off] Never mind that, Akane. sore yori akane KAZUYA ga inai zo! Kazuya's gone!! than-that (S) not-here !! He might be getting into doko-ka de itazura shite-ru mischief somewhere. Go to-somewhere is-doing-mischief look for him!! kamoshirenai chotto sagashite-mite yo!! it-may-be a-bit try-and-look-for narration: When Akane's around, nothing akane ga iru to roku na good ever happens! (S) when-is-here -good koto ga nai! there's-nothing Akane: [off] Right! wakatta wa yo--_ 6 [Kazuya steps out from the third-floor windows onto the roof. The cat looks back over his shoulder.] Kazuya: (All right. Then, no matter (yo--shi ko-- nattara what, I'm gonna catch you!!) all-right like-this if-become IJI demo tsukamaete-yaru_!!) even-if-perverse catch --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (19) 1 [Smiling, Madoka sets a glass down near Grandpa.] Madoka: .......... .......... Here's some tea. o-CHA doozo Grandpa: Oh, thank you. ya katajikenai glass FX: ___ ton 2 [It floats up into Grandpa's waiting hand.] glass FX: _____ su--_ 3 [Madoka stares wide-eyed...] Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ dokin 4 [...and once again throws herself into Kyousuke's arms.] Madoka: KYAAAA!! kya--_!! Kyousuke: Ojiichan!! oji--chan!! 5 [With Madoka wrapped around his neck, Kyousuke blushes and looks up at the ceiling with concern.] narration: Wh-what a pain... ko komatta naa As things stand, homework kore ja SHUKUDAI dokoro ja nai isn't the problem, is it. as-it-stands homework is-not-the-thing yo naa (rhet) dramatic FX: kaa_ Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ doki doki Madoka FX: __________ gachigachi --------------------------------------------------- p 286 (20) 1 [The cat scampers away across the rooftop as Kazuya watches angrily.] Kazuya: Don't even think you can kono KAZUYA-sama kara nigerareru get away from Kazuya-sama!! this from-Kazuya-(high-hon) can-run-away mono ka_!! (rhet/neg) 2 [Kazuya flies across towards the running cat.] Kazuya levitation FX: ____ shu_ 3 [An angry Kyousuke hustles Grandpa off.] Kyousuke: Hey, ojiichan. Go search chotto oji--chan akane to KAZUYA o for Kazuya and Akane! and (O) sagashite-kite yo! go-and-search-for narration: There's nothing good about kono ji--sama mo yoku nai! this jiisama, either! this grandfather-(high-hon) too nothing-good 4 [Kyousuke slams the hall door shut, leaving him alone in the room with a shivering Madoka.] door FX: _____ batan 5 Madoka: _____ H-hey. I'm positive that ne nee TASHIka IMA koppu ga cup was flying in midair certainly now cup (S) just now... ____ suutto CHUU ni...... flying in-midair Kyousuke: [forced smile] An illusion, an illusion! SAKKAKU SAKKAKU! Now, instead of that, let's saa sore yori SHUKUDAI yarou SHUKUDAI! do our homework. Homework! than-that homework shall-do 6 lights-off FX: ___ fu_ [Kyousuke and Madoka look about in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 287 (21) 1 Kyousuke: Huh? The power's out. are? TEIDEN da 2 [A chilling noise makes the two of them turn in shock.] FX: [off] _________ fugya---- window FX: [off] ______ batan_ 3 [Through a now-open window they see a ghostly apparition carrying a cat come flying in.] window FX: ____ gii_ 4 [Madoka stares in shock.] 5 [A livid Kyousuke supports an unconscious Madoka while screaming at Kazuya and the cat.] Kyousuke: KAZUYA!! KAZUYA!! Madoka FX: _____ fura_ --------------------------------------------------- p 288 (22) 1 Kyousuke: Enough already!! i--kagen ni shiro yo_!! The whole lot of you are omaera yotte-takatte terrifying Ayukawa! you-(plural) in-a-crowd AYUKAWA o odorokashite! (O) frightening/terrifying 2 [The cat, still held in Kazuya's outstretched arms, works his claws on Kyousuke's face.] Kyousuke: GYAAAA! gya--_ cat-slash FX: ____ ____ ____ bari bari bari 3 [Madoka rises weakly.] Madoka: ___ Ah! ha_ 4 [She sees Kyousuke securing the window shut. His back is towards her.] Madoka: K-Kasuga-kun... ka KASUGA-kun...... 5 [Her pov of him as he turns. Blood streams down his face.] Kyousuke: Eh? e? dramatic FX: ___ ga_ --------------------------------------------------- p 289 (23) 1 [Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.] Madoka: [off] KYAA-AA-AA-AA! kya~~~~~~_ 2 [As Kyousuke tends to Madoka, who has fainted onto the floor, the other three gather around.] Kazuya: Oh boy, you made her faint. a--rara KIZETSU sasechatta made-faint-(finality) Grandpa: Hey, Kyousuke! kora KYOUSUKE! ____ Don't go scaring ladies!! redi o odorokasu mon ja nai zo!! lady (O) frighten person is-not !! Akane: It's your fault! anta no se-- yo! 3 Kyousuke: [screaming] What are you talking nani itte n da yo--_!! about?!! 4 Kyousuke: Ayukawa! Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA!! Madoka: Ah... a... 5 Kyousuke: Are you awake? KI ga tsuita? I didn't mean to frighten odorokasu tsumori wa nakatta n da! you! frighten intent (T) didn't-have (explan) Are you all right? DAIJOUBU? Madoka: .......... .......... What the heck have I been IMA made atashi ga mite-ta no wa seeing up to now...?! till-now I (S) was-seeing (T) ITTAI......?! in-the-world --------------------------------------------------- p 290 (24) 1 Kyousuke: Eh? Ah. Th-that is... e? a so...sore wa... narration: What'll I do? do-- shiyou? ___ _chikara_ I can't very well talk about ore-tachi no NOURYOKU o barasu our Power... our Power (O) disclose wake ni wa ikanai shi... can't-very-well and-besides 2 [Kyousuke's pov. Kazuya taps his forehead and gives us a meaningful look.] Kazuya: ! ! 3 Kazuya: Ohh. It's oniichan who aree boku-tachi ni madoka-one--chan o asked us to frighten you, by-us (O) Madoka-oneechan! odorokasu yo-- ni tanonda no wa so-that-frighten asked (nom) (T) oni--chan ja nai ka! 4 Kyousuke: EH?! e?! Madoka: ? ? 5 Kazuya: And so, he made sono tame ni akane-one--chan ni Akane-oneechan disguise because-of-that by-Akane herself, and made ojiichan use his magic... HENSOU sasetari oji--chan ni make-disguise-(and) by-ojiichan TEJINA o TSUKAwasetari shite... make-use-magic-(and) 6 [Kazuya points the accusing finger at a startled Kyousuke.] Kazuya: You pretended, with an JIBUN wa soSHIranu KAO de innocent face, that you were self (T) with-innocent-face doing your homework, and made us play all those SHUKUDAI suru -furi shite cheap tricks on Madoka- do-homework pretend-(and) oneechan so that she'd cling to you... boku-tachi ni IROiro KOZAIKU sasete by-us various make-play-cheap-tricks madoka--one--chan ni DAkitsukareyou by-Madoka shall-be-clung-to nante... the-likes-of _______ You lech!! kono sukebe_!! Kyousuke: Wh-what are you talking na nan da to~~_?! about?! --------------------------------------------------- p 291 (25) 1 Akane: [angrily] Kyousuke! KYOUSUKE! Give it up already!! i--kagen ni KANNEN shinasai!! in-moderation give-(yourself)-up-(command) Grandpa: [solemnly] Yeah, that's right. so-- so-- Just as Akane says!! akane no yu-- toori! 2 Kyousuke: Don't talk nonsense!! detarame yu-- n ja nai yo_!! talk-nonsense (explan/net) ___ Me--asking that sort of ore wa sonna koto tanonde... thing... I (T) that-kind-of-thing asking 3 [Kazuya whispers into Kyousuke's ear.] Kazuya: _chikara_ Is it okay to let slip NOURYOKU ga barete-mo i-- no? the secret of the Power? Power (S) even-tho-disclose okay Kyousuke FX: _____ giku_ 4 [Pivoting to face Madoka, Kyousuke drops his gaze in embarrassment. Madoka frowns.] Kyousuke: Y-yes!! ha hai_!! It's like that. so-- na n desu like-that is (explan) I asked them to. watashi ga tanonda n desu I (S) asked (explan) I'm sorry! suimasen! narration: Under the circumstances, kono sai shikata ga nai kedo... it can't be helped, but... under-the-present- can't-be-helped but circumstances 5 [His pov of a peeved Madoka. She rubs a fist into the palm of her hand.] 6 [Exterior shot of the clear night skies above the Ayukawa residence. Facial portraits appear on their respective speech bubbles.] Madoka: [angrily] KASUGA-KU-U-UN!! KASUGA-ku--n!! Grandpa: [happily] Well, shall we excuse ja washira wa kono hen de ourselves now? we (T) at-about-here SHITSUREI suru to suru ka if-excuse do (?) narration: This irresponsible family!! kono MUSEKININ IKKA!! this irresponsible family Kyousuke: [in anguish] Wah-hee-ee!! wahi--_!! ---------------------------------------------------