Kimagure Orange Road
"The Jealousy by Peeking"
Volume 15, Story 8
WB Volume 9, Story 5
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Tonghyun "Vajra" Kim (17 April 1992)
Special thanks to : Peter Payne, Kevin Quinn
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 09-01-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 105 (165) are only in the WBs!
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p 105 (165)--TITLE PAGE
[Kyousuke and Madoka lean or sit on a car parked at the beach. A surfboard
stands on its end, wedged between the back of the car and a low wall. (I
think its tail fin is crushed. ^_^)]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _________
The Jealousy by Peeking nozoite jerashi--
peeking jealousy
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
It Looks As Though the SUIHEISEN no MUkou GAWA
Future of These Two Can the-horizon 's other-side
Be Seen on the Other
Side of the Horizon... futari no MIRAI ga MIesou de...
2-people 's future (S) looking-as-if-
can-see
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p 106 (166)
1
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka's kiss with another guy.]
2
[Kyousuke goes into shock.]
3
Madoka: [flashback]
To tell you the truth, he HONTOU yu-- to ne KYOU koko de
promised to meet me here true if-say today at-this-place
today, after several
years... SUUNEN -buri ni sono HITO to
in-several-years-time with-that-person
Au YAKUSOKU datta n da
to-meet promise was (explan)
Under this tree... kono KI no SHITA de...
this-tree 's under
Madoka: [flashback]
He saved my life. atashi no INOCHI no ONJIN na no
my-life the-one-who-saved is
But before I could even da kedo o-REI o iu mamonaku
thank him, he was gone. but thanks (O) say soon/before-long
inaku natte
isn't-there becoming
Instead, here... sono kawari koko ni..........
instead at-this-place
4
Kyousuke:
A-Ayukawa-a-a!! a ayukawa--_!!
Kyousuke FX: _____
gasa_
5 (inset)
[He claps a hand over his mouth.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
5
[The couple turn to look, but Kyousuke is hightailing it outta there.]
man:
Who's there!?! DARE_?!
Kyousuke:
O-oops!! i ikene_!!
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p 107 (167)
1
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
2
[As he runs he remembers...]
Madoka: [flashback]
I was sure... yappari..........
Madoka: [flashback]
...you'd come. kite-kureta no ne
3
[Another remembrance of the couple kissing in the park.]
narration: ___
What the hell did I see ittai ore wa IMA nani o
just now...? in-the-world I (T) now what (O)
mita n da......
saw (explan)
narration:
I must have had a really kitto WARUi YUME demo mita
bad dream!! surely bad-dream or-something saw
n da!!
(explan)
4
[A silhouette view of the kiss.]
5
[His streaky pov of trees as he races through the park.]
Kyousuke: [off]
IT'S ALL A LI-I-IE!! uso da------_!!
6
[A view of a far-off building.]
Grandpa: [off]
Kyousuke-e-e. KYOUSUKE---- KYOUSUKE----!!
Kyousuke-e-e!!
7
Grandpa:
Where the hell did he ittai aitsu doko ni
disappear to...? in-the-world that-guy to-where
KIeyotta...?!
disappeared
I can't just go home alone. washi dake KAEru wake ni mo ikan
just-me return-home can't-very-well
shi na
8
Grandpa:
Although this place is near nani se koko wa BASHO wa
his house... because/after-all here (T) place (T)
KINJO demo..........
neighborhood or-something
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p 108 (168)
1
[View down the street at some buildings.]
sign: ___
Konjou Bakery KONJOU pan...
2
Grandpa: _aitsu_
Anyway, I'd better find him tomokaku HAYAku KYOUSUKE o
soon and take him back. anyway quickly that-guy (O)
mitsukete KAEran koto ni wa
find-(and) not- (nom) to (contrast)
return-home
If he does something moshi aitsu ga *koko* de
*here*, then... if that-guy (S) at-this-place
nani-ka yarou mono nara........
something shall-do (nom) if-it-is
Grandpa FX: _____
goku_
3
[Grandpa wipes his sweaty brow as he walks away.]
Grandpa:
It'll be terrible!! erai koto ni naru zo!!
into-terrible-thing turn-into !!
4
[Kyousuke stands and buries his face against the tree.]
Kyousuke: ___ ___
haa haa
5
[He sits, back against the tree and closes his eyes.]
narration:
Ayukawa...!! AYUKAWA......!!
What the hell is she ittai do-- yu-- tsumori
trying to pull?! in-the-world what-kind-of-intention
na n da?!
is (explan)
6
[He slumps to the ground, eyes closed.]
narration:
Is she serious about that ano OTOKO no koto o HONKI de...?!
guy?! about-that-man (O) seriously
____
No, it can't be. iya sonna baka na
No matter what happened tatoe futari no AIDA ni
between the two of them between-2-people
in the past...
KAKO ni nani ga atta nise yo...
in-the-past what (S) happened a-sham
7
[Panels 7-8 comprise a single view. Kyousuke lies on his back under the tree.]
narration:
She wouldn't be a girl who anna koto KARUgarushiku suru
does something like that that-kind-of-thing heedlessly/ do
unthinkingly!! hastily
yo-- na ONNA no KO ja nakatta
it-looks-like girl wasn't
hazu da!!
likely is
8
narration:
Ayukawa's... Feelings... AYUKAWA no... KIMOchi ga...
I don't understand...!! wakaranai......!!
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p 109 (169)
1
leaves FX: ____ ____
sawa sawa
Kyousuke:
ZZZ #ZZZ#
2 (inset)
[Someone approaches.]
foot FX:
su_
2
[With a few blades of grass, this someone tickles his nose.]
tickle FX: _____ _____
kocho kocho
3 (inset)
Kyousuke: ________
Ah... Ah-choo! fu... akkushon!
3
[View pans back. A kid in shorts and sweatshirt kneels next to him, smiling.]
Kyousuke:
Hey-y-y, who is it?!! koraa dare da_!!
kid: _ __ __ __ __
Ah ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha
4
[Black, short hair. 10-11 years old. Cute kid.]
kid:
If you take a nap in a place konna tokoro de utataneshite-ru to
like this, you'll catch a in-place-like-this if-are-taking-a-nap
cold! ____
kaze hi--chau ze
cold catch-(finality) !
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p 110 (170)
1
[The line sounds familiar to him.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
Ayu...! AYU...!
2
[He looks closely at this kid.]
Kyousuke:
Hm? n?
3
kid: [rising, holding a soccer ball]
What are you doing? nani shite-ru no?
what are-doing (?)
Kyousuke:
Eh? e?
4
Kyousuke: _gaki_
Oh... Ohhhh. A kid, hmm... na... nan da KODOMO ka...
5
[Looking irritated, he sits back against the tree, hands resting behind his
head.]
Kyousuke:
As you can see, I was taking mirya wakaru daro hirune!
a nap*. if-see poss-know an-afternoon-nap
kid:
In the middle of the day? konna mappiruma kara?
like-this at-broad-daylight
6
Kyousuke:
That's why it's called a da kara hirune tte yu--
nap*. and-so an-afternoon-nap called
n da yo
(explan)
<*Commentary (CN): As before, Kyousuke is specifically saying he's taking
an *afternoon nap*. In other words, a "siesta.">
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p 111 (171)
1
[View pans way back. The kid stands in front of the sitting Kyousuke, under
the large tree.]
kid:
I see-e-e!! naruhodo------_!
That's funny. omoshiro--i
Kyousuke: ___
I'm sorry, but I'm not WARUi kedo ore wa IMA omoshirokunai
amused right now... sorry-but I (T) now not-amusing
n da...
(explan)
2
kid FX: _____
niko_
3
kid:
Oniichan, do you know oni--chan sakki no
that oneechan back a-little-while-ago 's
there?
one--chan no SHIriai?
's acquaintance
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
4
[The kid balances the soccer ball on a fingertip.]
kid:
You were watching back oni--chan sakki
there, weren't you. a-little-while-ago
mite-ta desho
poss-were-watching
'Cause I heard, "Ayukawa!" n de ayukawa-- tte
cause (quote)
narration:
.......... ..........
I was seen!! mirarete-ta!!
5
kid: [bouncing the ball on the head]
Hey. How do you know her? ne do-- yu-- KANKEI?
what-kind-of connection
Friends? YUUJIN?
Or... soretomo...
Kyousuke: [irritated]
It doesn't matter, does it!! do-- demo i-- desho!!
narration: ____
Precocious kid!! maseta gaki!!
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p 112 (172)
1
[The soccer ball rebounds sharply off his face...]
ball FX: ___
bon
Kyousuke:
Gya! gya_
2
[...and travels back.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-what are you doing?!! na nani sun da yo!!
what do are
3
kid: [catching it off the head] _____ ____
Nice pass!! naisu - pasu!!
_ __ __ __
a ha ha ha
4
[The kid kicks it back.]
kick FX: _____
bo--n
kid:
Arrgg! ei!
narration:
Th-this kid!! ko_ koitsu!!
5
[Kyousuke kicks it back, with all his might.]
Kyousuke: ______
Get lost, boy! atchi ike kono bo--zu!
that-way go this-kid/boy
kick FX: ___
bon
6
kid: [easily catching it off the chest]
Hey!! yo_!!
bump FX: ___
pon
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p 113 (173)
1
kid: [doing a head pass]
You should give up! akirameta HOU ga i-- yo!
gave-up better
ball FX: ___
pan
2
Kyousuke:
Eh? e
3
[The ball knocks Kyousuke off his feet.]
kid:
Those two have been together ano futari zuu--tto
for a lo-o-ong time. those-2-people = all-the-time
MAE kara dekite-ru
for-a-long-time are-able-to-do
n da kara
(explan) that's-why
Kyousuke FX: _____
suka_
4
[View pans back. Kyousuke lies on his back. The ball rolls away.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
dote_
kid: __ ___ ___
Ah! ha! ha! You're not a_ ha_ ha_ hetappi--_
good at this!
5
Kyousuke: [rising]
How the hell do you know omae ittai do--shite
all this? you in-the-world how-come
SHItte-ru n da?
are-knowing (explan)
6
kid: [off]
Because we're siblings! datte KYOUDAI da mon!
because siblings are reason
[The ball flies through the air.]
ball FX: ______
batsu_
7
[Kyousuke catches it.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
ban
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p 114 (174)
1
Kyousuke:
.......... I see. .......... sou ka
2
[Kyousuke's expression grows dark.]
narration:
Then, this kid... ja koitsu...
Is that guy's kid brother?! ano OTOKO no OTOUTO ka?!
that-man 's kid-brother (?)
Kyousuke FX: ___
ki_
narration:
Then, that makes me... dattara naosara
if-it-is still-more
3
[He kicks the ball hard.]
narration: ____
...hate this kid even more!! niku -ttarashii gaki!!
detestable kid
kick FX: ___
bo_!!
4
ball FX: ____
gyun
5
kid: ____
Kya! kya_
ball/kid FX: ___
ban
6
[The ball flattens the kid.]
kid FX: ___
do_
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p 115 (175)
1
Kyousuke:
Ah! I'm sorry... a_! gomen...
2
[He bends over the kid, who lies face first in the grass. He's beating up on
a lot of kids today...]
Kyousuke:
Are you all right...?! DAIJOUBU kaa...?!
3
[Kyousuke lifts the kid up, grabbing under the arms. The kid looks surprised.]
Kyousuke/kid FX:
gui_
4
kid: ____
KYA! kya_
5
kid: _______
PERVERT-T-T! etchi--!
6
narration:
Wh-what was that soft na...nan da ima no ya--rakai mono wa...?!
thing just now...?! what is now 's soft-thing (T)
Kyousuke: [pointing, sweating]
Could it be... omae...
You're a girl? moshi ka shite ONNA no KO?
it-is-possible girl
[She crosses her arms over her chest, protectively.]
girl:
Nobody said I was a boy. DARE-mo OTOKO da nante itte-nai
nobody am-guy has--said-anything
ja nai
is-not
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p 116 (176)
1
[She dusts herself off.]
Kyousuke:
Why is a girl playing nande ONNA no KO ga konna TOKORO de
soccer by herself in a why girl (S) at-place-like-this
place like this? _______
hitori de sakka-- yatte-ru n da?
by-self soccer is-playing (explan)
girl FX: ___ ___
pan pan
girl:
This is my playground. koko ga atashi no ASObi BA
this-place (S) my playground
da mon
is reason
2
[Kyousuke considers.]
3
girl: [happily]
I love exercising . health/body shift 's liking (explan)
Kyousuke:
Don't you have any friends? TOMOdachi wa inai no ka?
friend (T) aren't-there (?)
4
[She looks up, off-panel.]
5
[A view of the large tree.]
girl: [off]
...... That tree! ...... ano KI!
6
[She kicks the ball off the trunk.]
ball FX: ___
bon
7
[The ball rolls back to her.]
ball FX: ____ ____
koro koro
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p 117 (177)
1
girl:
See?! hora ne!
girl FX: _____
niko_
2
[Kyousuke looks at her.]
3
[View looking up at the sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
...... All right. ...... yoshi
Then... jaa
4
[He holds the ball in one hand and winks at her.]
Kyousuke: ___
I'll play with you!! ore ga AITE da!!
I (S) partner am
5
[They pass the ball back and forth with their feet.]
Kyousuke:
If you're a girl, you ONNA no KO nara motto
have to act more like a girl if-it-is more
girl.
ONNA no KO rashiku shinakucha
like-a-girl must-do
Or you won't be popular OTOKO no KO ni motenai yo
with boys in the future! to-boys not-be-popular
SHOURAI!
the-future
6
[He kicks it to her.]
ball FX: _____
po--n
Kyousuke:
A girl should have longer ONNA no KO tte yu-- no wa da ne--_
hair, and be more sexy, girl it's-said-that (rhet)
and...
motto ko-- KAMI ga NAGAku tte
more like-this hair (S) lengthy
IROppoku tte...
sexy
7
[The ball gets intimate with his face.]
ball-in-face FX: _____
zudon
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p 118 (178)
1
[She pulls down one eyelid and sticks out her tongue.]
girl:
Who asked you!! yoke-- na o-sewa!!
needless help/aid
_______
be----_
2
[View looking up at the trees.]
girl: [off]
But, oniichan... demo oni--chan..........
3
[He slowly sits up. She kneels nearby.]
girl:
Do you like that kind of so-- yu-- ONNA no KO ga KONOmi na no?
girl? that-kind-of-girl (S) taste is (?)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
4
[He looks off to one side.]
narration:
.......... ..........
That's Ayukawa I'm trying AYUKAWA da na itte-mirya
to describe. is if-try-and-tell
5
[His pov of the girl. She looks a bit unhappy...]
6
[...but soon breaks out into a radiant smile.]
girl FX: _____
niko_
7
girl:
Oniichan, you're a nice oni--chan i-- HITO da ne
person. nice person are
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p 119 (179)
1
[She looks up into the tree.]
girl:
If it were me... atashi dattara
I if-it-is
I'd prefer you, oni--chan no ho-- ga i-- naa...!!
oniichan...!! better (rhet)
2
[His eyes widen.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
po_
3
[Very flustered, he looks off to the side.]
Kyousuke:
Ah, that's right. a so-- da
Oops! ikene_
I left ojiichan waiting oji--chan mataseta manma datta
a long time. kept-(him)-waiting ????? was
4
[As he leaves, he looks back over his shoulder.]
Kyousuke:
Bye. I'll come again. jaa na mata kuru yo
again come
girl:
Ah, wait. a matte
5
girl:
Will you really come again?! HONTOU ni mata kuru?!
really again come
Kyousuke:
Sure! aa!
6 (inset)
[She looks unhappy.]
girl:
.......... ..........
6
[She kicks the ball hard.]
ball FX: ___
bon
7
[The ball comes to rest high up in a branch of the tree.]
branch/leaves FX: ____
gasa
8
girl:
Uh-oh. a ikkene
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p 120 (180)
1
[Kyousuke walks down the street, searching from side to side.]
Kyousuke:
How strange... okkashi-- naa
Where the heck did ojiichan oji--chan doko itta n daro?
go? where went (poss-explan)
2
[A view of a bookstore.]
Kyousuke: [off]
But... shikashi...
What in the world is this? ittai kore wa?
in-the-world this-(one) (T)
banner: ______
Copies. kopi--
3
[He holds a familiar book in his hands.]
little girl:
Excuse me. This... ano-- kore...
book: [upside-down]
Shuueisha's Manju of Japan SHUUEISHA NIHON manjuu
Japan
Everything you always HYAKKA manjuu dasu!!
wanted to know about manju!! many-subjects bring-out/publish
4
[He turns it around and looks at the cover. View has shifted so that we can
now see the same little, blonde, long-haired girl looking up at him.]
Kyousuke:
Ah... a......
5
[Kyousuke pats the little girl on her head. She smiles in contentment.]
Kyousuke hand FX: ____ ____
nade nade
Kyousuke:
Ahhhh... aa...
Thank you, little lady. arigato ne-- ojo--chan
6
[His pov of the little girl, who looks up at him a bit sadly here.]
7
[He kneels down to get a closer look.]
Kyousuke:
(But... (shikashi...
For some reason, this girl nan da ka kono KO hikaru-chan ni
looks like Hikaru-chan.) for-some-reason this-girl
nite-ru naa)
is-resembling (rhet)
8
little girl:
It's weird... HEN na no--
This book is for next year. kono HON RAINEN no na no ne
this-book next-year (nom) is
How come it's already out? do--shite mou DEte-ru no?
why already is-appearing
[Kyousuke stares at the book.]
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
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p 121 (181)
1
[He flips through the book.]
pages FX: ____ ____
para para
2
Kyousuke:
1982 version? 1982-NEN BAN?
3
[View down the street. He overhears a couple as they walk near.]
man: _________
Kobe's Port pier is nearly KOUBE no po--topia mou sugu
here. 's port-pier? soon/before-long
da ne
is
woman:
Are you going? iku no?
4
[He stares wide-eyed off panel.]
Kyousuke:
..........?! ..........?!
5
[Sweating, he bends down to ask the little girl.]
Kyousuke:
Little lady, what year is ojo--chan IMA nanNEN?
this? now what-year
little girl:
1981. 1981 NEN
6
[He collapses to his knees.]
Kyousuke:
?! ?!
7
[He glares off to one side.]
narration:
That means... to yu-- koto wa...
8
narration: ___
That jiisama... ano ji--sama ore o......
that-grandpa me (O)
Pretending to go to some chotto KINJO e to itsuwatte...
place nearby... a-bit to-neighborhood pretending-to
Brought me to the past!! MUKASHI ni tsurete-kita na!!
to-long-ago brought-along
Grandpa: [flashback, off]
Okay? Don't open your eyes ii ka washi ga 3 tsu kazoeru AIDA
until I count three!! okay I (S) count interval
ME o akeru n ja nai zo
open-eyes (explan/neg) !!
Grandpa: [flashback, off]
Three. SAN
Grandpa: [flashback, off]
Two. NI
Grandpa: [flashback, off]
One. ICHI
Grandpa: [flashback,]
All right! yoshi!
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p 122 (182)
1
[A flashback pic of the couple kissing in the park.]
Kyousuke: [off]
(Th-then, that Ayukawa...?!) (ji jaa ano AYUKAWA wa?!)
then that-Ayukawa (T)
2
[A look of shock comes over his face.]
Kyousuke:
(...isn't Ayukawa?!) (AYUKAWA de wa nai?!)
3
[Kyousuke runs.]
narration:
Where the hell has jiichan ji--chan ittai doko e
gone?!! in-the-world to-where
itchatta n da!!
gone-(finality) (explan)
Kyousuke: ___
(Is he going to leave me (ore o 1981-NEN ni oite kibori ni suru
behind in 1981?!!) me (O) in-1981 leave-behind
tsumori ka--_!!)
intention (?)
4
[He sees something off-panel.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
5
[It's the young, tomboyish, brunette girl from before. She's up in the
branches of the tree.]
6
[She looks down at him. He looks up in fright.]
Kyousuke:
Th-that's dangerous!! a abunai!!
Wh-what are you doing?!! na nani yatte-ru n da!!
what are-doing (explan)
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p 123 (183)
1
girl: ______
But, without the ball, I datte bo--ru ga nai to
can't play with you... because ball (S) if-not-have
oni--chan to issho ni ASObenai kara...
with-you together can't-play that's-
why
2
[The branch she's sitting on gives way.]
branch FX: ____
baki
girl: ____
Kya! kya_
3
[Kyousuke looks up in horror.]
narration:
L-look out!! a abunai!!
4
[The speech bubble crackles with the Power.]
Kyousuke: [off] _chikara_
(All right! I'll use the (yo--shi! koko wa NOURYOKU de...)
Power here...) all-right here (T) by-Power
5
narration: _chikara_
I... I can't use the chi...NOURYOKU ga tsukaenai!!
Power!! Power (S) can't-use
[The girl begins her long fall to the ground.]
girl:
KYAAAA! kyaa--_
6
[Elsewhere, Grandpa continues his search.]
Grandpa:
Hey, Kyousuke! o--i KYOUSUKE!
narration:
If he interferes with aitsu ga *koko* de nani-ka ni
anything *here*... that-guy (S) at-here by-something
KANSHOU shitara...
if-interfere
It'll change the present GENZAI made KAete-shimau
as well... even-the-present change-(finality)
kara na...
that's-why
I have to find him quickly nani-ka shidekasanai uchi ni
before he does something! something not-do before
HAYAku mitsukenakereba!
quickly must-find
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