Kimagure Orange Road
"The Yearned-for Hikaru-chan!"
Volume 17, Story 6
WB Volume 10, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 09-09-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 65 (105) are only in the WBs!
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p 65 (105)--TITLE PAGE
[Rather simple line-drawing of Hikaru, who looks at us in profile out of the
corner of one eye. Her hair is pulled up and banded at the top of her head,
making her look like a turnip. A very beautiful turnip, though. ^_^]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Yearned-for Hikaru-chan! akogare no hikaru-chan!
longing-for (nom)
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ ______
Looking a Bit Serious, choppiri sumashite raburi-- ga--ru!
a Lovely Girl! a-bit composed/ lovely-girl
looking-serious
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p 66 (106)
1
[Exterior shot of the school. Rain falls heavily.]
narration:
It's the rainy season! TSUYU desu!
____
When you go out, don't DEkakeru TOKI wa kasa o
forget your umbrella... go-out/set-off time (T) umbrella (O)
o-WASUrenaku...
not-forget
2
[View from the shoe lockers out the open main doors of the school.]
3
[Shot of rain and puddles.]
rain FX: ____
za--
4
[Hikaru stands at the entrance to the school building, and looks up at the
sky in distress.]
Hikaru:
Oh no-o-o! ikenaai!
____
I forgot my umbrella!! kasa WASUrechatta!!
umbrella forgot-(finality)
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p 67 (107)
1
[The two-headed Hikaru looks left and right.]
Hikaru:
It wasn't raining this ASA wa futte-nakatta no ni naa
morning... morning (T) wasn't-raining even-tho (rhet)
2
narration:
Ahhhh. At a time like this, a--a konna TOKI SEMPAI ga
if only Sempai would come this-kind-of-time (S)
by and freely offer me his ___ ____
umbrella... yatte-kite sutto kasa demo
turning-up smoothly umbrella or-something
sashiDAshite-kuretara naa
if-offer-(me) (rhet)
3
[As if on cue, a hand holds out an umbrella towards her.]
hand/umbrella FX: ___
su_
4
[View pans back. It is Shin'ichi who holds out the umbrella.]
Shin'ichi:
Why don't you come under? HAIranai ka
es su !" ^_^>
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p 68 (108)
1
[Her pov of the dashing Shin'ichi. Yah, okay. So he looks good.]
2
Hikaru:
Oh... ara...
3
Shin'ichi:
Hi... yoo...
4
Hikaru: [beaming]
Wowww! You made it into he----_ anta KOUTOU-BU ni
high school. ! you to-high-school-section
SHINKYUU dekita n da
was-able-to-be-promoted (explan)
I'm so glad! yokatta ne!
Shin'ichi pratfall FX: ___
zu_
5
Hikaru: ___
You were pretty stupid, so anta tte so--to-- aho datta kara
I was quite sure you were you (T) fairly stupid were that's-why
still in junior high.
atashi tekkiri mada CHUUGAKUSEI
I still jr-high-student
yatte-ru no ka to OMOtte-ta wa
are-doing felt-quite-certain-that
6
Shin'ichi: [angrily]
What are you talking about? nani itte n da yo
______
Aren't we in the same class mata ONAji kurasu ni natta
again?! again in-same-class became
n ja nai ka!
(neg/explan) (?)
Hikaru: [smiling apologetically]
I know! SHItte-ru wa yo!
That was a joke!! jo--dan yo!!
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p 69 (109)
1
[He whistles while combing his hair. See? He *can* do two things at the
same time... Hikaru looks aside at us, sweating.]
Shin'ichi:
narration:
But this guy, Harada demo kono HARADA SHIN'ICHI tte KO
Shin'ichi, is crude and but this-boy-called-Harada-Shin'ichi
seems pushy, and I don't
like guys of this type. gasatsu de GOUIN
unrefined/rough be-(and) by-force
sou de atashi
look-as-if-(and) I
NIGATE na no yo ne
person-hard-to-deal-with is (rhet)
_____
ko-- yu-- taipu no OTOKO wa
this-kind-of-type 's guy (T)
2
[Smiling, Shin'ichi holds up his umbrella again. Hikaru drops her gaze and
frowns.]
Shin'ichi: ____
By the way, this umbrella... tokoro de kono kasa...
by-the-way this-umbrella
Hikaru:
I'm sorry, but maybe I WARUi kedo enryo-- shimasu
shouldn't. sorry-but refrain-from
3
Shin'ichi:
Damn! Why not?! che_ nande da yo!
! why is
[She turns her back on him.]
Hikaru: ____
If I'm seen by anyone anta to kasa ni HAItte-ru tokoro
sharing an umbrella with-you am-sharing-an-umbrella case
with you, then it'll
be misunderstood in a nante HITO ni mirare
weird way. the-likes-of by-people are-seen
demo shitara hen na
or-something if-do strangely
gokai sarechau shi ne
be-misunderstood- and-besides (rhet)
(finality)
4
Shin'ichi:
.......... ..........
5
Shin'ichi:
Are you still going out omae mada ano KASUGA toka yu-- yaro-- to
with that Kasuga guy? you still with-that-so-called-Kasuga-
fellow
tsukiatte-ru no ka
are-going-out-with (?)
Hikaru: [threateningly]
That's none of your anta ni wa kanke-- nai
business! to-you (contrast) connection there-isn't
desho!
poss
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p 70 (110)
1
[Yuusaku walks out the building with his umbrella. He looks to his left to
see Hikaru.]
Yuusaku:
Ah! a
2
Hikaru: [brightly]
Oh, Yuusaku! ara YUUSAKU!
3
Hikaru:
What perfect timing. cho--do yokatta nee
____
Won't you share your kasa HAIrete-tte-kurenai?!
umbrella with me?! umbrella not-go-and-share-(with-me)
Yuusaku: [wide-eyed]
Eh? e?
4
Yuusaku: [blushing] _ ___
M-me?! o ore ga?!
S-sure. With pleasure!! ha hai yorokonde!!
5
[Yuusaku takes note of Shin'ichi.]
6
Yuusaku:
Hm? n?
7
[Shin'ichi stares daggers back.]
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p 71 (111)
1
[Hikaru hooks Yuusaku by an arm and leads him away. Yuusaku continues to
stare back at Shin'ichi.]
Hikaru:
Well, let's go, Yuusaku! sa iko--_! YUUSAKU
Yuusaku:
S-sure. u un
2
[Shin'ichi stands and watches the pair walk away.]
3
Shin'ichi: [glaring]
THAT GUY! aitsu!
4
[Yuusaku looks back.]
5
Yuusaku:
.......... What is it? .......... nan da?
6
[Yuusaku's pov of Shin'ichi.]
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p 72 (112)
1
[View looking up at the sky.]
Shin'ichi: [off]
The rain's stopped! AME agatte-ru ze
rain is-stopping !
2
[Hikaru holds out a hand and looks up at the sky.]
Hikaru:
Oh. It's true. ari HONTOU da
3
[She walks away.]
Hikaru: ____
Then there's no need ja mo-- kasa Irete-morau
to have you share your then any-more umbrella have-let-in
umbrella any more!
HITSUYOU mo nai ya_!
necessity too not-have
Yuusaku:
Eh?! e?!
4
Hikaru: [waving]
See ya! ja ne!
5
Yuusaku: [waving, blushing]
Ah! S-see ya! a_ ji...ja ne!
Shin'ichi:
Wait a minute! chotto mate yo_!
6
[Shin'ichi holds out his umbrella to her.]
Shin'ichi: ____
Take this umbrella. kono kasa motte-yuki na yo
this-umbrella take-(away)
Yuusaku FX: ___
mu_
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p 73 (113)
1
[She studies it.]
Hikaru:
.......... Hmm. .......... fu--n
2
Hikaru: [beaming]
Then, I'll borrow it! ja karitoku!
then borrow-(for-future-sake)
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Thank you. G'bye! sankyu sainara_!
3
[The two boys stand side-by-side, smiling and waving.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
G-g'by-y-ye! sa sainara~~~~~~_!
4
[Same as panel 3.]
5
[They turn to each other.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: ___
Ah! ha_
6
Yuusaku: ________
That goodbye just now IMA no sayonara wa ome-- ni itta
wasn't directed at you. now 's farewell (T) to-you said
n ja ne-- n da yo
(neg/explan)
Shin'ichi: ___
Oho. Then, who besides me hou ja ore IGAI no
would she have said it to? then I besides/in-addition-to
Heh heh heh.
DARE ni yu-- wake? he he he
to-who say reason
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p 74 (114)
1
[The skies turn dark. Lightning shatters the heavens.]
lightning FX: ___
ka_
2
Shin'ichi: [glaring]
What are you to Hiyama? omae HIYAMA no nan na n da?
you 's what are (explan)
3
[Yuusaku glares back.]
4
[The two face off in the open, just outside the entrance to the school
building.]
Yuusaku:
A childhood friend!! osananajimi da!!
Shin'ichi:
Oho! hohoo_!
Yuusaku:
And what are *you*? omae koso nan na n da?
you indeed what are (explan)
Shin'ichi: ____________
A classmate! kurasume--to da!
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p 75 (115)
1
[Tight shot of the umbrella grasped in Yuusaku's left hand.]
2
[The umbrella explodes.]
Yuusaku FX:
gunyo~~~~~~
umbrella FX: ____ ____
boki baki
3
[Shin'ichi's eyebrows rise and he sweats.]
4
Yuusaku:
...... I better tell ...... itte-oku kedo
you... ___
I'm a 2-dan in karate...! ore tte KARATE NI-DAN na n da...!
I (T) karate 2-dan am (explan)
5
Shin'ichi: ___
zo_
6
Shin'ichi: ___________
Do you know the "Hot Rod" omae hottoro--do tte
motorcycle gang? you hot-road?/hot-rod? (T)
BOUSOUZOKU SHItte-ru ka?
motorcycle-gang are-knowing (?)
That name's known a bit kono HEN jaa chitto wa
around this area... in-this-neighborhood-(T) a-little/few (T)
NA ga SHIrete-iru
name (S) are-able-to-know
to wa OMOu kedo...
think-that but
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p 76 (116)
1
Shin'ichi: ___ _____
My close pal is the ore no SHITAshii dachi ga
leader. my-close-pal/buddy (S)
_____
heddo o yatte-iru n da
head (O) is-doing
He's a 3-dan in karate... KARATE SAN-DAN no na...
2
Yuusaku FX: _____
piku_
3
Yuusaku: [darkly]
.......... Don't know .......... SHIranee naa
him...
4
Shin'ichi FX: ___
mu_
5
[Overhead view of the stormy skies.]
lightning FX: _____
pika_
thunder FX: ________ ________
gorogoro gorogoro
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p 77 (117)
1
[View looking up. The skies cut loose in a torrent of rain.]
rain FX: ___
za_
2
[Exterior shot of the school building.]
3
[A view of rain and puddles.]
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p 78 (118)
1
[Shin'ichi stands, drenched.]
Shin'ichi:
...... Hey! ...... oi_!
2
[Yuusaku stands, drenched.]
Yuusaku:
...... What?! ...... nan da?!
3
[View pans back. They square off.]
rain FX: ___________
za--------_
4
Shin'ichi: ___
How are we gonna get ore-tacha do-- yatte kaeru n da yo
home? we what doing go-home (explan)
5
[Yuusaku stares at his demolished umbrella.]
Yuusaku:
.......... ..........
6
[Exterior view of the school building.]
Shin'ichi/Yuusaku: [off] __________
AH-CHOO! fuakkushon!
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p 79 (119)
1
[Rain falls at an intersection.]
rain FX: ______
za----
2
sign:
Takeyama Beauty Parlor BIYOUSHITSU TAKEYAMA
3
[Kyousuke stands alone against the side of the building.]
4
[Hikaru walks by under her borrowed umbrella. She spots him.]
Hikaru:
Ah, Sempai!! a sempai_!!
5
[He blushes and looks nervous and surprised.]
Kyousuke:
Ah, Hikaru-chan!! a hikaru-chan_!!
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 80 (120)
1
[Smiling, she extends the umbrella towards him. He flinches back, looking a
bit reluctant.]
Hikaru:
Here you go, Sempai. Please do--zo SEMPAI HAItte-kudasai na!!
come under!! come-under-(please)
2
[Sweating, he glances to his right.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
3
[Embarrassed and face flushed, he forces a smile.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? B-but... e de demo...
4
[Beaming, Hikaru hooks his arm and hauls him off.]
Hikaru:
It's okay, it's okay! i-- kara i-- kara!
Kyousuke:
Ah! a_!
5
Hikaru: _______ ____
Lucky! I'm under the same rakki-- SEMPAI to aiaigasa
umbrella with you, Sempai! lucky with-Sempai under-the-same-
umbrella
shichattaa!
did-(finality)
6
[Kyousuke casts a backwards glance as he walks off with Hikaru.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
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p 81 (121)
1
[Pov shifts. Madoka hides behind the corner of the building they just left.]
2
[She sneaks a peek around the corner.]
3
Kyousuke:
(She might get mad at being (oitekibori jaa okoru daro-- naa......)
left behind...) left-behind poss-get-mad (rhet)
Kyousuke FX: _____
tara_
[Kyousuke looks unhappy.]
4
[But his face changes to one of surprise.]
5
[Madoka is beaming and waving to him.]
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
6
[He waves back, but his smile is a sickly one.]
narration: ____ _
Ahhhh. That smile means a--a ano...niko tte yu-- yatsu ga
it'll get scary later on... that smile say-that thing (S)
ato de kowai n da yo na--
later-on frightening (explan) (rhet)
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p 82 (122)
1
[Madoka watches, hand still raised in farewell.]
2
[She drops her hand. Her gaze, too.]
3
[She stands there for a moment, watching without expression.]
4
[Overhead, a bolt pierces the air.]
lightning/thunder FX: _____ ________
pika_ gorogoro
5
[Madoka portrait. She's pensive.]
6
[She stands under the awning, looking out.]
Madoka:
Terrible... Downpour... sugoi... doshaburi..........
rain FX: _______
za----_
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p 83 (123)
1
Madoka:
I can't very well avoid sakete bakari iru
this either...can I. avoiding only is-there
wake ni mo ikanai... na
can't-very-well-do-either (rhet)
2
[She steps out into the rain. And says something prophetic.]
Madoka:
I'll go, after all! yappari iko tto!
Madoka FX: ___
da_
3
[Holding her schoolbag over her head and grimacing, she races through the
pouring rain.]
narration:
It looks as though there's do--yara SANGAKU KANKEI ni mo
a forecast of heavy rain for it-looks-as-if in-triangle-relation too
the triangle relationship,
too! OOAME no YOKAN..........desu!
heavy-rain/ 's premonition/ is
downpour forboding
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