Kimagure Orange Road
"Robot Kyou-chan II"
Volume 17, Story 8
WB Volume 10, Story 6
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 09-09-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 105 (145) are only in the WBs!
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p 105 (145)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka kneels, dressed in a kimono and with her hair braided and bow-tied.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _______ _tsu--_
Robot Kyou-chan II robotto KYOU-chan #II#
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Fresh from the Bath with YUagari honoka ni
a Touch of Pink... just-after-the-bath faintly/dimly
SAKURA-IRO...
light-pink-(color)
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p 106 (146)
1
[Madoka stands at the entryway, wearing her ABCB shirt.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? Something important e? DAIJI na HANASHI?
to tell me? important talk
2
Kyousuke: [blankly]
What do you mean, "something nani? DAIJI na HANASHI tte
important to tell me?" what important talk (quote)
3
[Madoka looks back with a touch of sadness.]
Madoka:
...... Me and... ...... atashi to...
4
[Beaming, he takes her by the hand and pulls her in.]
Kyousuke:
Well anyway, come in, come maa tonikaku do--zo do--zo!
in! well anyway
C'mon, come in! sa sa_ HAItte!
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
Madoka:
! !
5
[He leaves her sitting in his room and exits.]
Kyousuke:
Wait here just a minute, chotto matte-te ne
'kay? ______
Something to drink? A cola? nani-ka NOmiMONO demo ko--ra?
something drink or-something cola
______
Oolong tea? u--ron CHA?
Madoka:
.......... ..........
______
Oolong tea. u--ron CHA
6
Kyousuke:
(What could this "important (DAIJI na HANASHI tte nan daro
thing" be about, Ayukawa? important talk (quote) what poss-be
AYUKAWA?
"Me and...?") atashi to...?)
suspense FX: ___ ___
ton ton
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p 107 (147)
1
narration:
Before long, it'll be the mo-- sugu KOUKOU-SEI
last summer vacation of soon/before-long high-school-student
high school life, so...
KATSU SAIGO no NATSU YASUmi da shi...
living the-end 's summer-break is consider
"Go somewhere with me, just futari kkiri de atashi to doko-ka e...
the two of us..." by-just-2-people with-me to-somewhere
2
[He walks into the kitchen, a smile on his face.]
Kyousuke:
(I wish! (nanchatte!
Perhaps that's the important ko-- yu-- DAIJI na HANASHI na
thing she has to tell this-kind-of-important talk is
me...!)
no ka mo shirenai...!)
(nom) it-is-possible
door FX: ____
gii_
3
[He looks in the refrigerator.]
Kyousuke: ______
Huh? Don't we have any are u--ron CHA nakatta kke
oolong tea? huh oolong-tea not-have (?)
Kurumi: [off]
I drank it. atashi NOnjatta
I drank-(finality)
4
[Kurumi is lying on the floor, watching TV.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Sorry, but could you go and WARUi kedo KAtte-kite-kurenai?
buy some for me? sorry-but not-go-and-buy-(for-me)
Kurumi:
When this show's over... kono BANGUMI owattara
this-program when-end
5
Kyousuke: [angrily]
You're making someone HITO o matasete-ru n da
wait. Hurry, hurry!! person (O) be-making-wait (explan)
HAYAku HAYAku!!
Can't you obey your older ANIKI no MEIREI ga
brother's command?! older-brother 's command (S)
kikenai no ka?!
can't-obey (?)
[Kurumi sits up, irked.]
Kurumi:
You think you're so eraso-- ni!
important! with-air-of-importance
If you want me to obey... ki--te hoshikerya...
if-want-to-obey
6
Kurumi: [beaming]
Then hypnotize me. SAIMINJUTSU ni demo kakeru koto ne
hypnotize-or-something (nom)
Kurumi FX: ____ ____ ____
kara kara kara
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p 108 (148)
1
Kyousuke:
What do I do to hypnotize do-- sureba kakerareru?
you? what if-do be-hypnotized
Kurumi:
Do this! ko-- sun no yo!
like-this doing
2
[She reaches over and touches his forehead with her index finger. The air
crackles with the Power.]
Kurumi:
Obey whatever anyone HITO no MEIREI wa nan demo
commands, unconditionally!! person 's command (T) anything
ZETTAI kikinasai_!!
without-condition obey-(command)
Kurumi FX:
pi
3
Kyousuke: [blankly]
...... Yes. ...... hai
Kurumi: ______
All right. Then go buy yoshi de wa u--ron CHA
oolong tea yourself. all-right then oolong-tea
JIBUN de KAtte-oide
by-self go-and-buy
4
Kurumi: [smiling] ____________
After that, pay me for ato atashi ni aisukuri--mu
ice cream. the-rest for-me ice-cream
o-KANE harattoite
money paying-(for-future-sake)
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
5
[Madoka stares at the ground, in thought.]
6
[View pans back. She's seated on the edge of his bed.]
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p 109 (149)
1
[She looks across the room, at his desk...]
2
[...at a picture of Kyousuke, Hikaru and herself. Hikaru is in the middle,
clinging to and smiling at Kyousuke. Kyousuke has a smile, himself. Madoka
has a soft smile.]
3
[Madoka picks up and studies the framed picture.]
4
[She focuses in on Kyousuke and Hikaru.]
5
[Madoka profile.]
6
[Tight shot of her hands holding the framed picture.]
7
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
breaking glass FX: [off] _________
pari----n
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p 110 (150)
1
[Madoka looks up.]
2
[A view of the closed bedroom door.]
Kurumi: [off]
Oh no-o-o! ikene----_
_____
You broke a cup, oniichan. koppu watchatta oni--chan
cup broken-(finality)
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Get another one. Hurry, koppu mo hitotsu HAYAku HAYAku!
hurry! cup too one quickly
3
[Madoka stands, still holding the framed picture in her hands.]
4
[She sets it gently back down.]
picture FX: ___
ton
5
[She looks down at it, with a tiny smile.]
6
[Smiling, Kurumi sticks her head in the door.]
Kurumi:
Welco-o-ome! irasshai mase--------_
door FX: ______
gacha_
7
[Still smiling, Kurumi sets a tray down on a low table. Madoka kneels on the
floor on the other side.]
Kurumi:
Here you go! do--zo!
Manami-chan is over at a IMA manami-chan TOMODACHI n toko
friend's place right now. now friend's-place
itte n no
going
________
Sorry for the racket! dotabata shite-te gomennasai!
are-making-a-racket/struggling
Madoka:
.......... Thank you. .......... arigatou
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p 111 (151)
1
[Kyousuke sits at the table, eyes vacant. Madoka turns towards him. Kurumi
parks herself at the table and watches.]
Madoka: [to Kyousuke]
Umm... Actually... ano... jitsu wa
2
[Madoka glances at Kurumi, who smiles.]
Madoka FX: ______
chira_
Kurumi: _ ___
Eh heh! e he_
3
[Madoka grabs his wrist and pulls him out of the room.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
Umm... Not here. chotto... koko ja na n da
a-bit at-this-place is (explan)
kara
that's-why
4
[Looking concerned, Kurumi holds up a hand.]
door FX: _____
batan
Kurumi:
Yikes... Wait! Right now, arya.......... matte! IMA
oniichan's...! wait now
oni--chan wa..........!
5
[View of a park near the Kasuga apartment building.]
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p 112 (152)
1
[They stand in the park across the street, near some benches and a public
phone.]
Madoka:
What I have to say... HANASHI tte... taishita koto
Isn't important. talk (quote) important-thing
ja nai n da
is-not (explan)
2
[Madoka smiles up at the sky.]
Madoka:
Hikaru told me... I was hikaru ni ne... yasashi-- tte
kind... by-Hikaru sweet/kind (quote)
iwarechatta
was-said
Still, I wonder if I'm a yappari atashi wa hikaru ni totte wa
kind big sister to Hikaru. still I (T) for-Hikaru (T)
yasashi-- one--san na no ka naa
sweet/nice big-sister am I-wonder
3
[She turns to him.]
Madoka:
Hey, do you think so, too, nee KASUGA-kun mo sou OMOu ?
Kasuga-kun? hey too like-that think
4
[Kyousuke portrait. Blank as ever.]
5
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
Kyousuke FX: _____
bo~~_
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p 113 (153)
1
[His pov of Madoka. She looks back without expression.]
2
[She drops her gaze.]
3
Madoka: [smiling]
ALL RIGHT! yoshi!
4
[She motions towards a park bench.]
Madoka:
Then, sit here for a bit! ja chotto koko ni suwarinasai!
then a-bit at-here sit
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
5
[View of the entryway to a movie theater.]
sign:
Now Playing!!! JOUEI -CHUU!!!
screen-projection inside
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p 114 (154)
1
[Inside, Hikaru watches the movie raptly. She holds an open bag in her hands
and munches on sembei. Flanking her are Yuusaku and Shin'ichi. But they're
busy glaring at each other, around the oblivious Hikaru.]
Hikaru FX: _____
pori_
2/3
[Closer views of the two. They think the same thought bubble.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
(Shi-i-it! (kuso------_!
Why am I here with this nande koitsu nanka to issho ni......
guy...? why with-this-guy together
Hikaru-chan is too nice.) hikaru-chan yasashi -sugiru n da
sweet/nice to-excess (explan)
yo na--)
4
[Hikaru is engrossed in the movie.]
Hikaru FX: _____
pori_
5
[Her pov of the screen. A well-dressed couple stare into each other's eyes.]
actor: ____
You... Are the one I want kimi o...tsurete nigete-yukitai
to run off with. you (O) take-(and) want-to-run-off-(with)
6
[Hikaru blushes and looks dreamily down at the ground.]
Hikaru: ______
I'm so weak when it comes atashi tte ko-- yu-- serifu ni
to words like these. I (T) to-this-kind-of-words
yowai n daa
susceptible/weak (explan)
Hikaru FX: ______
uttori
[The two boys are surprised.]
bag: _____
Souka Sembei SOUKA sembe...
= rice-cracker
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p 115 (155)
1
[Both look towards Hikaru.]
Yuusaku:
.......... ..........
2
Shin'ichi:
.......... ..........
3
[View of some stairs near the park. No one is about.]
Madoka: [off]
Hikaru... Seems troubled hikaru... IMA nayande-ru mitai
now. now is-troubled seem
4
[The two sit on the bench and look straight ahead.]
Madoka:
You know about Yuu-kun and YUU-kun to HARADA-kun tte SHItte-ru yo ne
Harada-kun, don't you. and (T) are-knowing
5
Madoka: [off]
She was invited by the two futari kara KON'YA EIGA ni
of them to a movie tonight, from-2-people tonight to-movie
and said it was wrong to
refuse, so it seems she sasowarete-te kotowaru no WARUi
went anyway... be-invited-(and) refusing bad
tte ichio-- itchatta
(quote) anyway went-(finality)
mitai da kedo...
seems but
But Kasuga-kun... Is that KASUGA-kun... i-- no?
okay?
6
voice: [off]
Is that... sore...
What you really feel? HONTOU ni KIMI no HONSHIN na no?
really your true-sentiment/ is
real-intention
[Madoka turns towards Kyousuke.]
Madoka heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Madoka:
HUH?! e?!
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p 116 (156)
1
[Madoka realizes that another couple is talking on a bench nearby. You may
recognize the guy. The blonde girl, Nekomi, is new. The couple clasp hands
and stare into each other's eyes.]
Nekomi:
Umao-san... UMAO-san...
You have a wife and kids... anata ni wa OKU-san mo KODOMO
to-you (contrast) wife and children
mo iru shi
too there-are and-besides
So we shouldn't take our atashi-tachi kore IJOU issho ni
relationship any further we beyond-this together
than this.
ite wa ikenai KANKEI na no yo
mustn't-be-here relations are
2
[He embraces her tightly.]
Umao:
Nekomi-san!! NEKOMI-san!!
Umao/Nekomi hug FX:
gaba_
3
[Eyes drawn wide, Kyousuke and Madoka look back over their shoulders at the
couple.]
4
[Blushing, Madoka gets to her feet.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
Hey, let's go somewhere chotto BASHO kaemashou
else. place/spot shall-go-home
Madoka stand-up FX: _____
suku_
5
Nekomi: [off]
Ahh, you mustn't! aa ikenai wa!
But, hug me tighter!! demo motto TSUYOku dakishimete!!
but more strongly hugging/embracing
[Kyousuke's face registers the command.]
6
[Kyousuke grabs Madoka by the wrist and pulls her down next to him.]
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
Madoka:
Ah! a!
Kyousuke:
Yes! hai!
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p 117 (157)
1
[Kyousuke takes the surprised Madoka by the arms.]
2
[She looks up into his (blank) eyes.]
Madoka:
.......... Kasuga-kun. .......... KASUGA-kun
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
3
[Kyousuke and Madoka remain in a loose embrace.]
Umao: [off]
Even I know it isn't itsu made mo konna koto
good to go on like this forever this-kind-of-thing
forever.
tsuzukete-ru no wa
be-continuing/carrying-on (nom) (T)
yoku nai tte
not-good (quote)
___
ore datte wakatte-ru sa
even-I am-knowing
But... demo...
4
Nekomi: [off] ____
Do you like me more? atashi no HOU ga suki?
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p 118 (158)
1
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
[Madoka looks up at him in surprise.]
Madoka heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Madoka:
Huh?! e?!
2
[Looking totally flustered, Madoka looks to the side.]
Madoka:
Th-that just now was the i...IMA no wa tonari yo tonari_!!
next bench!! now (nom) (T) neighboring
3
Kurumi: [off]
Oniichan! oni--chan!
[Madoka looks off-panel, wide-eyed.]
Madoka: ___
Ah! ha_
4
Madoka: [off]
A-anyway, if you're to tonikaku ukauka shite-ru to hikaru o
careless, Hikaru will be anyway if-be-careless (O)
taken away!!
torarechau yo!!
be-taken
Go and rescue her!! itte tsunagitomete-rasshai!!
go-(and) go-and-barely-save
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p 119 (159)
1
[Madoka shouts after Kyousuke, who is running off.]
Madoka: _______
She should be at a movie shinema 1 toka yu-- EIGA-KAN ni
theater called Cinema 1!! cinema-1 a-certain at-movie-theater
iru hazu da kara!!
should-be-there that's-why
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
2
[She watches him run away, with a soft smile.]
3
[She drops her eyes and gently punches herself in the head.]
Madoka hand FX: ______
kotsun
Madoka:
Something like this... konna koto ja...
Would disqualify me from one--san SHIKKAKU da na!
being a big sister! disqualified-from is
4
[Exterior view of the entrance to the theater.]
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p 120 (160)
1
[Again, Yuusaku and Shin'ichi share the same thought bubble. They glare at
each other around the oblivious Hikaru.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
(I can't be hanging out with (itsu made mo konna yatsu to
this guy forever! forever with-this-kind-of-fellow
tsukiatte-rareru ka yo!
can-go-out-with (?)
When this movie ends, it kono EIGA ga Owareba ISSHUN
will be pitch-dark here this-movie (S) if-end an-instant
for an instant.)
JOUNAI ga makKURA ni naru)
on-the-premises (S) become-pitch-dark
2/3
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
(Then, in one stroke, I'll (sono TOKI IKKI ni hikaru-chan o
swipe Hikaru-chan and run that-time in-a-stroke (O)
off.)
kassaratte nige-dasu n da)
swipe-(and) start-to-run-away (explan)
4
[Tight shot. The boys extend hands towards the unsuspecting Hikaru.]
bag: __
Souka Se... SOUKA se...
= rice-cracker
5
lights off FX: ___
pa_
[Three pairs of eyes look towards us in the dark. Ya gotta love the middle
pair of eyes. ^_^]
6
[The outer pair of eyes turn towards the unsuspecting middle pair.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
NOW!! ima da!!
7
[A heroic-looking Kyousuke thrusts open the doors to the darkened theater.]
doors FX: ____
gii_
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p 121 (161)
1
[A pitch-dark panel.]
FX:
gui!
2
[Another pitch-dark panel.]
voice:
C'mon! Hurry!! sa_ HAYAku!!
3
[View of the theater entrance.]
voice: [off] __ __ __ __ __ __
Wah ha ha ha ha ha! wa ha ha ha ha ha
4
[Yuusaku looks back over his shoulder.]
Yuusaku:
Did it-t-t!! yatta------_!!
5
[Shin'ichi looks back over his shoulder.]
Shin'ichi:
Serves him right!! zama-- miro!!
6
[View pans back. The two stand side-by-side and smile at each other.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
Well, now it's just the saa kore de futari kkiri!
two of us! well now/with-this just-2-people
7
[View pans back further. The boys are clasping hands.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
...... HM? ...... n?
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p 122 (162)
1
[On the sidewalk, elsewhere, Hikaru catches her breath. Kyousuke has her
firmly grasped around a wrist.]
Hikaru: ___ ___
haa haa
2
Hikaru:
Ahh, I was surprised. a-- bikkuri shita
was-surprised
To think you'd come here SEMPAI ga kite-kureru nante!!
for me!! (S) come-(for-me) the-likes-of
It was just like the story marude sakki no
in the movie just now. just-as-if a-little-while-ago 's
__________
EIGA no suto--ri-- mitai
movie 's story seem
But why...? sore ni shite mo do--shite mata...?
still/but why again
3
[He looks down into her eyes with conviction.]
Kyousuke:
You're the one... hikaru-chan o...
I wanted to run off with, tsurete NIgetakatta n da
Hikaru-chan. take-(and) wanted-to-run-away (explan)
4
[His words give her pause...]
Hikaru FX: ___
po_
5
[...and she leaps into his arms.]
Hikaru:
I'm so happy-y-y!! ureshi----_!!
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p 123 (163)
1
[They stand on the sidewalk. Hikaru continues to smile and clasp him around
the neck. Kyousuke stands with his arms at his sides, staring forward like
a zombie.]
Hikaru: ______
Sure enough, Sempai, you're yappari sempai ga ICHIBAN suteki!!
the greatest!! sure-enough (S) most wonderful
Kyousuke:
...... Yes. ...... hai
2
[In the park, Madoka listens quietly while Kurumi talks.]
Kurumi:
Yeah. And then, I un sore de atashi oni--chan ni
hypnotized oniichan to and-so/then I to-oniichan
obey whatever anyone tells
him, so I'm worried... HITO no yu-- koto nan demo kiku
person (nom) say anything obey
SAIMIN kaketa mama datta kara
hypnotized as-it-is was that's-why
SHIMPAI de......
worrying
Madoka: [gaze dropped]
I see... sou...
Hypnotized, hm... SAIMINJUTSU ne...
Madoka:
(It's no wonder he was (do--ri de nani itte-mo
saying "yes, yes" no matter it's-no-wonder what even-though-say
what anyone said.
hai hai yu-- wake da
yes-yes say reason is
___
Such a Yes Man...) ano #YES# man wa...)
that-yes-man (T)
3
[The two boys stand side by side and stare back at us in disbelief.]
Yuusaku/Shin'ichi:
(..........) (..........)
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