Emailed by "jfkingofstuds123@hotmail.com"
"Hi Siphon X! I hope you're the guy that can finally help me on my almost perfect beatdown. There are a few things like Gemini and skilled Dark Mag that i still need but could you help me with my AP Beatdown.

Monsters: 18

1x Invader of the Throne (I can't afford Creature Swap)
1x Breaker (finally, a easy to get 1900!)
2x Goblins (2300, yet there easy prey for Spears!)
1x Kycoo (The king of the graveyard!)
1x Cyber Jar (oh, how you give me advantages!)
2x Spears (Goblin, Orc, and flip monsters arch enemy!)
1x Tribe Virus (just got it in a box, and it does wonders, but can you use it's effect any time?)
1x Jinzo (I HATE TRAPS)
1x Kuriboh (wow hes helpful!)
1x Witch (my pretty little searcher!)
1x Bazoo (I love getting rid of those pesky flips in my grave!)
1x Yata (LOCK POWER!)
1x Exiled (I'll replace it once i get my Sk. Dark MAg.)
1x Twin-Headed Behemoth (never let my opponent attack directly)
1x Chaos Command Mag. (not effected by those pesky flips he attacks!)
1x Helpoemer (Yatas best friend!)

Magics: 17

1x Dark Hole (clears the field!)
2x MST's (i desperatly need Heavy storm, and Harpies)
1x Pre. Burial (800 for Jinzo, impressive!)
1x United (a very useful card for a beefy field!)
1x Monster Reborn (0 Lp for Jinzo, even better!)
1x Double Spell (amazingly helpful!)
1x Pot of Greed (2 cards, 2 more ways to win!)
1x Swords (what a pesky a** card!)
1x Axe of Despair (I love 1000 attack!)
1x Confiscation (hand control!)
1x Raigeki (TOTAL field control)
1x Forceful Sentry (ULTIMATE Hand control!)
1x Snatch Steal (BETTER than COH!)
1x Change of Heart (reduces field for them, increases field for me!)
1x Tribute to the Doomed (discard Helpoemer to destroy who, who shall I pick!)
1x Graceful (again, discard Helpoemer and give myself 3 exttra cards!)

Traps: 6

1x Magic Cylinder (drool!)
1x Mirror force (drool!)
1x COTH (drool!)
1x Trap Hole (drool!)
1x Imperial (drool!)
1x Torrential (drool!)

So their you have it and please HELP ME! "

First I would like to say thank you for submitting your deck to me.  Next, I will move onto the actual fix:
41 cards is too many, so i will slim it down to 40
-1x Invader of the Throne
Great.  Now I need to move onto the cards that are useless in a beatdown.
-1x Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
-1x Bazoo the Soul Eater
-1x Yata (its not a disrutpion, trust me, it wont help)
-1x Twin Headed Behemoth
-1x Chaos Command Magician
-1x Helpoemer (why did u have that in there in the first place?)
-1x Double Spell
-1x Confiscation
-1x Tribute to the D.
-1x Trap Hole
for a total of ten cards.  Now, in a beatdown, monsters should run a bit heavy, so I will leave the ratio at 17:17:6 (-1 monster from Invader of the T.).  Now that we see that, additions will be necessary:
+2x Gemini Elf
+2x Skilled Dark/Luster
+1x Sinister Serpent
+1x Dark Ruler Ha Des
+1x HFD
+1x MST
+1x Nobleman of C.
+1x Ring of D.
That sets you at the before mentioned ratio of 17:17:6.  The reason Yata isn't in there should be obvious; this is not a Disruption, you even said so yourself.  Too many tribute monsters will cause a catastrophe in game strategy.  I suggest 2 maximum in a beatdown, both being negating cards (but i will always love DRH better).  Double Spell actually more or less screws you over; its terrible in a top decking situation.  All three prenegs is too much so I ripped out confiscation.  The cards i listed may be hard to obtain but it will be well worth it.  Now that you have yata free, you could trade it for possibly even a Gemini.  That's all for now,
~Siphon-X~

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