July 2, 2006

This is my second review of Arch Angel.
Have to say after the first review I was really impressed by this young talent and had very little to say on his faults; I feel it's only a matter of time before he makes Elite.. Maybe this is the review? We'll find out.

Reading up on the Latest Episode of "Fallen Forum's" GWE's (Un)Official online media installment which I think is jointly written by Arch Angel and Robert Kaine; Either way I love this show.
Arch Angel as your host, Fallen Forums is a great read to say the least. Arch is an excellent speaker, his build up is excellent.
As a talk show and general comedy reel to help loosen up the members of GWE with a good read/giggle. It's a very popular show with the members and I can see why?

Everything he talks about in his rps doesn't come without that dash of humor that we come to expect from Arch Angel. It fit's in perfectly and tells a tale which you can't help but follow like a Shepard's lamb; It's like your seeing it through his characters own crazed eyes.
He make's a plane flight promo fun to read because his character's hilarious with that mix of Paranoia which those with split personality inhibit. As one would expect from his persona.

Angel is becoming one of my favorites and he knows his stuff on all sides of the review.
I feel Angel more than qualifies for an Elite rating.
Although I would say.. Keep on practicing and you'll only get better with time.
Congrats.

April 30th, 2006

After 2 months wait.. Apologies in advance for the delay. Arch Angel has finally been added to the Top 50. Reading up on some of his plot and storyline which I find quite an interesting read. Always good to scope out fresh new talent to the table, see the creative juices flowing.

At such an early point, it is hard to work out what Angel's persona is all about?
I have only been reading the last 2 months of his work, which has given me a slight idea of what drives Arch Angel. His character seems to be very complex and takes several pieces of his work to understand the plot behind this fellow.
But from what I've made out, Angel is a man suffering each day from mental health problems as well as split personalities, violent outbursts and a number of flash backs from his troubled past.
Tortured by his unfolding memories in which he murdered, in revenge a man called Priest who set out to kill him but failed in his attempt only for Angel to reap his revenge. It also seems through working out his character that Angel suffers from a split personality disorder. Always is he tormented by the character known as Jack, who seems to be the devil of Arch Angel's personality, his dark side which takes over much to the fear of Angel's beloved Elizabeth.

Always seems to make a poetic description of his surroundings which I like much so. Top notch spelling and grammar, hardly seeing a mistake only through typo I suspects.
A negative aspect in his character i've found is he tends to break out into swearing from time to time. Description on mood is Excellent, Rps are large in size, around 200 lines or more on average.
Something I've also noticed is I see the quality from Angel's rps shift from time to time.
Description of his mood and environment is of Elite standard but shifts into shoot segments which break out into swearing now and then, kind of spoils the build up.

My decision is.. Arch Angel is a Contender on the verge of an Elite status. I feel that given a couple of months more Arch Angel will be of Elite standard, I can see it happening.
Dealing with the interaction side to describing his fight, perhaps narrowing it down a bit and control bad language to an extent, you need a tad here and there but not too much as it takes away the impact that a well created promo can make.
Then I think his interview segments will match the Elite quality of his narration and description segments.
Apart from that, this guy is getting better every Rp I read. Keep up the good work bud.