October 25, 2005

Azazal, the 6 foot 9 Monster of XPWA.
Not much is known about him, but what I do know is he has a past with fellow XPWA star Justin Sane and "The Fiend".
Both these men have a rivalry spanning from "The Fiends" Wrestling organization.
Good to build up a rivalry as it get's those that check out the House Shows noticing your work.
Azazal made quite the impression in XPWA as he attacked an announcer on his debut and was eventually arrested.
The impression I get from Azazal's character is he's unstable and easy to piss off.

Moving on to the review.. Azazal needs allot of improvement, as for his debut build up, that was great as reading through gives me the reader the impression of what he said in Larry King as to the rough childhood, the beatings he received by his parents would explain his violent behaviour on Anita Cox. He should stick with this pent up rage storyline as it shows what kind of person Azazal the character is mentally.. Unstable.

Spelling and Grammar needs improvement, I saw quite a few mistakes and missed spaces, nothing a spell check and a good proof read can't cure. At the moment it's a bit too early to see how he performs when it comes to interviews he performs.
A good rper knows that 3 promos of nothing but interviews eventually loses it's shine and get's repetitive. Changing locations and adding small stories into every promo makes the Character more appealing to read and develop into an underground icon by fellow fed heads.
He needs to work on his character description when it comes to emotions and where abouts.
He has the basics, but improvement would make Azazal and studying his opponents and the big names and how they do it will make him go a long way.

Just managing to receive Mid-Carder Status as he has all the basics down, all he needs now is to improve on the talents he has now and keep this feud with "The Fiend" and Justin Sane going as people are watching and this is the time to show XPWA what Azazal is really capable of. Good luck bud.