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STATUS: ACTIVE

Alias.. Johnny Hawkings

Height
6'5"
Weight
280 lbs
Born
Queens, New York
Finisher
"Life's Glorifying Agony"
Trademark
"Fade To Black"
Current Feds
GWE
Entrance Music
"Headstrong" by Trapt
Rating
Elite

 

BIG BOSSES REVIEW

Monday, May 29, 2006

This is the second review of Damian Gray, hopefully after this review I will hopefully be able to give him the Elite status that he's after.

Well what's new from Damian this month? Gray has taken on more of a face attitude to his character.
Quoted as being a great father and an apple to the community, Gray has become somewhat a Vigilante hero in the publics eye. Saving people from a Bank Robbery to stopping a hijacking of plane he was currently traveling on.
Seen now as your typical 'All-American' Hero, Damian Gray is much loved by his fans right now.

The Review...

So.. What has changed since I last reviewed him?
His Spelling and Grammar is unchanged, still of top notch quality.
Everything is highlighted and categorized so that we can tell what is speech and what is in his thoughts at present. It is good to see that presentation in his work is excellent.
So far the Rp entitled 'Vindicator' has really impressed me, seeing as I'm not too hyped about the talk show sketch; It tends to be 'Done to death' so you have to put on a really good show in order to pull this sort of sketch off. Damian Gray pulls off this sketch brilliantly.
The emotion and build up to this sketch is fantastic to say the least. I see great improvement in this guy and allot of potential.
Worried that there was only a couple of rp's to have me at 2 minds about upping him to Elite status, the third rp has convinced me that this man is of Elite quality. Good Work bud.

25/10/05

He is 1/2 of the unbeatable tag team of Body Count.
They are the new threat to Bishop & Luke Meznik's long Tag Team Title Reign.
Their both highly skilled and I believe Bishop & Meznik's days as Tag Champs is coming to an end if they perform on the day.
Damian Gray and his partner Robert Kaine are like 2 peas in a pod, both adopt a Rick Rude type personality towards Life & Women.

A similar thing can be said about their rp quality as well.
Although on personnel opinion I feel that Robert Kaine is a little better when it comes to description and the description of emotional feeling, which Damian Gray sometimes performs, just not enough to deal with all the talking in the rp.
But on build up he's excellent and there is little to no improvement needed on that part.
All in all I think that this guy can be of Elite potential like Robert Kaine, he is almost similar to his Elite Partner and I feel that it's only a matter of time before he attains that rank.
Contender is a great start but I think he can get Elite by the end of the Year, hopefully.
Good luck!

 

GRAMMER
Top Notch
STORYLINE
Currently has taken a face role, becoming an all american hero and an excellent father to his daughter.
QUANTITY ON AVERAGE
80 - 150 LINER
DESCRIPTION OF ENVIRONMENT

Excellent at build ups, the emotional side has improved allot from the last review.

LANGUAGE CONTENT
Excellent
FULL RATING
Elite

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Contact Damian Gray at

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