Sunday, February 26, 2006

This is the third review of Andy Gorgadore, somewhat a God in the XPWA he is known for his tireless contribution to whatever fed he joins, so seeing him in the Top 50 would have him in the Top 8 almost every time.
But if he make's CONTENDER in this review then he may be in contention to win the Top 50 this month.. Hopefully.

Well, on to the review. I see some considerable improvement. The description base in his rps are brilliant and he seems to do this allot better from the last time I reviewed him. He, like Jason Sparks performs a similar weakness.. Ranting for 4 paragraph's non-stop near the end of the promo.
Gorgadore has improved much, much so that I feel that he has now earned the CONTENDER rank, but in order to reach ELITE he will need to reduce the rant and concentrate on the description.
Even though he uses more description and put's more emotion into his character and some of the description is down right fantastic, which I approve of much so, I feel that he lack's certain skills that makes the description flow, sometimes breaking into a "Now he does that AND he moves to the bar AND then he turns to his friend, AND he speaks softly".. I've noticed this a few times in his rps, not much but keeping an eye on this through proof reading and you will become a remarkable writer in the description fields, worthy of an ELITE.

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Saturday, August 28, 2004 6:42 PM

Well I have been asked by the Handler of Andy Gorgadore to re-review his character and see whether he qualifies to be a CONTENDER.

Well I feel a bit disappointed as the quality of Gorgadore's character has dropped and I know Gorgadore is capable of being far better than this, some of his rps have way too much swearing in it.. I know he is trying to put emotion into his character as his current storyline sees him fighting against The Sadistic Shepard Himself.. Minds Eye.
But Gorgadore is swearing too much and his skills don't show the quality in describing the plot and location the way he used to in the past.

Most of his rps are a reflection into his days with 10 Minute Major and with other things about his past.
I hope Andy hasn't hit a writers block as I feel that might be what it is as he is not writing to his full potential. I feel that he must stay as MID-CARDER Status for now.
He needs to reflect on his early work as Gorgadore and see where he can go from there.
Oh and Andy it was Drink, not drugs Big Boss went to rehab for. lol

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Friday, February 27, 2004

You may be fooled in thinking that this is Andrew Hetherington... But it's an entirely different character all together.
This new creation of Andrew Hetherington is great reading. It is the tale of a young rookie by the name of Andy Gorgadore. He battles with his long time rival Huckelbury to finally get noticed by a UWA scout.

This is the tail of how a 16 year old rookie copes in the big leagues of UWA. This sounds like an entertaining character indeed.
But the way he writes the story of his life is one hell of an improvement. His rps are readable, the grammar is fantastic and the spelling is great! It's one of the main reasons I can read it.
He describes everything in the thoughts to the description of his life with such crystal clarity.
It was like watching an episode of the wonder years, the trials and tribulations of a young teenager trying to grow up and make a name for himself.

All I can say is... A few more rps like the 3 Andy Gorgadore has just wrote and I will need to boost this guy to CONTENDER Rating. Keep up the fantastic work Andy a definite improvement from Mount Isa's favourite son.