Monday, March 14, 2005 2:38 PM

The Current storyline of Jimmy Vetalo.. His long lost brother Josh emerges from the dead.
Through a phone call he finds that his brother Josh has spent the last 5 years of his life in prison, for a crime he did not commit.
The culprit. Sonny, Vetalo's father-in-law and enemy!

I am really excited about this progression in storyline.
When it comes to storyline, Vetalo is one of the leading players in the game.
His build up to a big fight is excellent keeping the people locked on the developments of Vetalo.

His Role plays are a little on the large side, I feel that he can do just as well with an rp half the size.
Spelling and Grammar are good, no problems there.
Presentation is excellent, you can follow who's who? No problem at all.
But the sheer size spoils it when you read allot of rps.. Size takes the enjoyment out of reading it through.
Size and the lack of Environmental Description are Vetalo's biggest let downs and he needs to improve on these 2 weaknesses before I can offer him an ELITE rating.
He's getting there, perhaps in another month or 2 of improvements may see a change, I know Vetalo can do it.

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Monday, September 27, 2004 7:47 PM

The Other Half of the High Rollers, Jimmy Vetalo is your Italian Gangsta, not to mention a tall Italian Monster.
A TNT Grand Slam Winner Vetalo has never been short of Success.
Now in UWA with his partner Rollin' Thunder they are bringing the thrills to UWA.

Communicating with others and developing a strong personality through their characters is perhaps his strongest quality.
His spelling is good and his Grammar decent.
He sometimes swears, not much but he needs to be careful how much he uses vulgarity as he may lose points for it, but no reason to panic as he is doing well.
I quite like the Design of his Layout, it's pretty cool the way he mixes colours together. as well as his banner.

But I feel he misses the ELITE status as his rps are a little too large and sometimes he can go on a bit with certain things such as communication with other characters and description.
Apart from that he is a great talent and his character is getting better and better each time I read his promos.