Saturday, August 28, 2004 10:03 PM

Well here's the hardest review I've ever had to write since the Top 50 started LOL
Well let's start with the Characters Persona... Me more than anyone knows of Jonny Fly's attitude as I have fought in some of my biggest matches against this man in steel cages, Destruction Derby's and every other match you can think of lol.

He Narrates a hell of alot of cockiness in his rps every time, slagging off every big name that UWA and TNT has to offer including yours truly in 40 lines worth of blood boiling psych out!
He does that for the soul purpose of getting everyone to hate him! Which I in a cocky voice would say...
"He does perfectly well" As it has made us very much despised of one another at one point.
But that's what made Fly's character the one to beat! As he gloats on every victory, every beat down and every Title success... Now I begin to understand why Fly has won so much and lost so little.. He sells himself in his character, while people build up their characters through their daily lives, experiences etc.
Fly builds his character from the inside THEN starts with outside environment.

He died earlier in the month through a car accident in the storyline, but you never know.. This might be a devious ploy on Fly's part.

What I never liked about Fly was that all his ranting which I feel he could write in smaller versions that could do equal damage to an opponents . The problem I find is I read and I read and eventually I get bored and move to the actions of the next scene, when it comes to a verbal tongue lashing, Fly has quite a vocabulary for bringing you down, similar to that of Kevin Cosmos.
Like I said, too much get's in Archie's words "repetitive"
"DON'T BE REPETITIVE!!!"
Right that's my impression of Minds Eye over LOL.

Spelling and Grammar at it's finest, couldn't spot a mistake there through spell checkers and proof reading, TOP NOTCH Mike!
Storyline is great as Fly is pursued by Loan Shark's and his Dynasty compadre's are caught up in the middle of it with him showing for once concern on his personality.

Here's something I didn't like about his rps that he doesn't do much now as a long time has passed since then and he has had time to improve on this.
During my feud with Fly a year ago, alot of his verbal attack on Big Boss was mostly Narration and I always foolishly responded to the Narration, which was my mistake as he never mentioned much about me when the scenes were rolling.
At the time he never gave many interview segments unless it was your eve of the big fight moment and by then the damage had been done.
I never liked that as you can't respond to it well if you haven't the ammunition to fire back at your opponent. i
It was a new form of strategy that I never encountered and that was what cost me dearly in the 3 fights I faced him.
Each and every time I messed up with this, or falling into the same trap so to speak.
It was annoying to me, but it was a stroke of genius when you think about it as I wasn't experienced enough to adapt to this new form of strategy.

That was the one Talent that the likes of Minds Eye, Michael Edwards, Nic Totopolous and Sean Segrada never used... Boil them up with Cocky Narration to the point they can't think straight and then hit them with a Great Storyline.. That's what being ELITE means as well as holding the qualities of good spelling, Grammar and Imagination.

If Fly could reduce his taunting narration scenes and put some more facial expressions, mood into his character to express his feelings to the readers and again less talking when bad mouthing his opponent then Fly would almost be unstoppable!!
I hope this criticism is respected Mike as this has taken me 3 hours to read your 3 Rps you've posted me and to pick out your strengths and weaknesses in the best possible way I can, with hard thought.