14 - 10 - 05

Another month another review on the T-50 and this month I have the pleasure to review one of XPWA's biggest talents.
Kris Korps is an Undertaker type persona residing from 'A side of Heaven you never hear of'.
That is the quote that he uses to describe himself and his persona So far through reading a few of his Promos I come to the understanding that Kris Korps is some kind of Angel sent down from Heaven that can communicate with the Spirits, helping them with unfinished business so that they may pass on to the other side.

Kris uses a novel like format in all his rps and they are well thought out.
Reading them are a pleasure, the layout is great and the idea at first dreaded to think of as another Dark Undertaker Wannabe turned out to be a totally different character altogether, fantastic creativity in designing Kris Korps.
The size of his rps are a great size and his description and build up to a Promo is perhaps one of the best that I've seen.

There is just one problem and perhaps the only Brick Wall in the way that is stopping me giving Kris an Elite status.
That would be his spelling.. At first what I thought to be a few typo errors and proof reading mistakes as everyone makes a few mistakes even after spell checking and proof reading.
There are one too many mistakes in his promo's that I've read.
Spelling and Grammar is one of the key skills I expect from an Elite rper and anyone who doesn't meet that target can't reach Elite until they improve on it.
Which is a shame as Kris Korps excels at almost everything else. A spell checker and a good hard proof read through his rps will fix that. For now Contender is what he shall receive. If after a month he reads this and improves on that one factor, then the Elite status is rightfully his.

Spell Checker & Proof Read and you'll receive full status, I know you can pull it off. Good Luck bud.