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STATUS: INACTIVE

Height
6'5"
Weight
270 lbs
Born
???, ???
Finisher
Cryptic Justice
Trademark
Justice is Blind
Current Feds
???
Entrance Music
"Adventure Today" by The Aquabats
Rating
Contender

 

 

BIG BOSSES REVIEW

A low down on Mighty Whitey...

Where is he from....I sure as hell don't know....Who is he? Do you really want to know? Of course you do why else would you be wasting your precious moments in life to read a bio on the man....who's not a myth...nor a legend...just a zero who swears on his future tombstone that he really is a hero.... Mighty Whitey "The White Wonder" Miraculous Missionary is man most likely not like any other he walks the streets in a white super hero suit with the “ability” of having super strength or so he claims.

No more then a average joe suffering from delusions, and hallucinations, he sees what isn't there and hears words that aren't be spoken. Wanting nothing more then to bring truth and justice to the world Mighty Whitey patrols the streets with Speedy his “talking” cow, who he claims is not only capable of speaking but in his eyes the fastest moving object on the land, in search of crime and evil doers.

Interviewers and criminals be ware....you don't find Whitey....he finds you.

The Review...

Always great to meet a character like this with the ability to make his readers laugh and enjoy the E-Fed game.
His super Hero Persona makes for a refreshing change as there are far too many different egos out there with the same gimmick in mind of being the 'Much loved' or the 'Darkest man on the planet'.
His character is based on the Delusional sense of 'old skool' super heroes; Where children respect their elders and that criminal behavior is based around some mastermind criminal influencing the weak minded.

Basing some drunken teens as influenced on his current opponents wrong doings, no proof at all, yet this does not stop our resident super hero from drawing his own conclusions.
I find this character very amusing and enjoyable to read. All that is missing is the custom Super Hero Catchphrase(s) and this guy would attract allot positive feedback from his fellow rpers if he isn't already; But he has a talking cow for a sidekick!! Even better lol

His style lies in allot of conversation with Speedy, his talking cow and super hero sidekick, followed by the narration of Whitey's thoughts.
Description of his movement's are described through his 'Thought narration'.
Telling the story through his own words, reminds me of one of them old black and white style detective movies where the detective tells the tale as he goes along.
Quite a clever method as Whitey's humorous wit is added to the tale to put a smile on your face as you read through.

Description on environment and the emotions of the character is still in it's early stages and you can only see this guy getting better over the months and I certainly hope he does. For now I give the rank of Contender, he is a fine talent and he is on his way to getting better. GWE will do good to keep an eye on this guy.

 

GRAMMAR
Excellent
STORYLINE
Super hero, with a talking cow named Speedy as his side kick.
Fighting crime in a Hurricane type fashion. Humor and villain bashing makes for interesting reading.
QUANTITY ON AVERAGE
150 - 175 LINER
DESCRIBING ENVIRONMENT

Good, but improvement is needed.

LANGUAGE CONTENT
Mild
FULL RATING
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