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STATUS: INACTIVE
Height
6'5''
Weight
279 lbs
Born
San Antonio, Texas
Finisher
The Kenta Slam
Trademark
The Real Driver
Current Feds
???
Entrance Music
"Back in Black" by AC/DC
Rating
MID-CARDER

 

 

BIG BOSSES REVIEW

Friday, October 29, 2004 8:50 PM

"The Real Man" Reed Harrington, member of the High Rollers and the New TNT World Heavyweight Champion.

Reed Harrington, defeating the TNT World Champion Nicky Mills, as his fued over his wife leaving him for the 'Outlaw' Nicky Mills may not be finished yet.
So his storyline has been quite fruitful as he is a reliable roleplayer, even with computer problems he managed to get the 4 rps written and posted for such an important PPV like the Crucible.
Maybe

Well down to the review... His spelling is good, his grammer ok but there is still a place for improvement.
Allot of his rps are based on hanging out with his fellow High Rollers.
Which isn't bad as it gives the impression that they are showing unity in this stable.
Like your typical male bonding ritual as they argue about American Football and Baseball. You can get into the men talk gimmick as they gel as a unit.

I didn't like the Letterman Promo much, didn't seem that realistic to me as there was allot of swearing and no warnings off Letterman about it. Letterman shows some humour in his show when he interviews people, he's charismatic and he seemed very quiet in that show. Reed is trying to show his anger at being stabbed in the back by the women he loved. We certainly see the anger! But far too much anger when it starts to sound like Ranting, cause not everybody will read through it all.
Something I like is he also mentions the last promo in a description build up to keep his readers up to date.. I like that.

His rps are too big for my taste I'm afraid, his third rp is stupendously huge!!
I feel that maybe he's on the verge of a CONTENDER But I think that I need to put him on MID-CARDER for now and see where he goes.

 

GRAMMER
OK, COULD IMPROVE THOUGH.
STORYLINE
MEMBER OF THE HIGH ROLLERS.
HIS WIFE LEAVING HIM FOR NICKY MILLS.
QUANTITY ON AVERAGE
100 - 230 LINER
DESCRIPTION OF ENVIRONMENT

OK, BUT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

LANGUAGE CONTENT
SWEARING A BIT AT TIMES, NEEDS TO TONE DOWN A BIT.
FULL RATING
MID-CARDER

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Contact Reed at

rowdyreed419@hotmail.com

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