I like this method and Kaine's conversation sketches will be staggering if we saw more of the above implemented into his work, this is a 'Novel format'; All your doing is writing a story like any book you find on a book shelf.
Also i've noticed that Kaine can stretch out conversations to the point where it can get annoying, reading space after space. Which I feel is his only fault at the moment which Kaine needs to get a hold of.
Practice makes perfect and Kaine is evolving, hopefully my words of wisdom accelerate his potential and make him a feared man through the E-Fed scene. I can see it happening.

Sunday, August 28, 2005

A good friend of mine I talk to allot on Messenger, he is also new to the XPWA and has already won the XPWA World Title.
So being asked by Rob to review him, I will prove that winning the World Title was either pure luck or that he fully deserves the Title through obvious talent.

A Little on Robert Kaine's Character background.. He is known to all as 'Every Women's Carnal Fantasy'
Known to all as 'Ravishing' Robert Kaine.. The Late Rick Rude being one of his long time Wrestling Favorites.
His Character prides himself on being irresistible to the ladies and has a great build up on all his storylines.

As for his all out writing quality. The Spelling is Top Notch rarely making an obvious mistake or Typo error. The Description of the rps, i.e. prologue's, build up as well as emotional and Environmental description are excellent.
The Size of his Rps are of decent size although the odd few can be a little too large but the quality is excellent. One thing I have noticed about Robert Kaine from time to time he shows a skill known as Novel Format, which gives me the impression that he isn't far from writing a full rp like this, if so his writing skills are going to turn allot of heads and the most dedicated Fed-heads will take notice.
Quite similar to my own Rps as I sometimes go into the same type of Novel Format in hopes of writing like that eventually.

The conclusion of reading through several of Robert Kaine's Rp's has convinced me by far that his quality is of Elite standard, always room for improvement.. Well so is the case with all Elite Rper's as I would say 'Keep Learning New Things'.
Even Archie Moore A.k.a. Mind's Eye perhaps one of the greatest ever E-Fedders that I have had the pleasure to read always stated.. "That even after 7 Years he still had allot to learn"
I pride myself on the same advice for my own character, learning from the best in hope of being one myself someday.
Kaine is very talented and isn't too far away from becoming a well remembered E-Fedder in the XPWA/UWA/TNT Alliance.

Keep up the Good Work and keep on learning new skills.