October 3, 2006
This is my third review of Spitfly, this guy already displays unique abilities in creativity, grammar and delivery in what he writes as almost leveling that of the great Michael Edwards.
I'm very excited to see this prospect growing at such an exponential rate; He will be hard to beat let me tell you.
Worried as he waited LAST MINUTE to bring out his 2 minimum rp requirement for this re-review to be possible, which doesn't make my life easier; But I forgive him. :)
Let's get on now to the review..
Likes..
- The poetic description of his character through mood and environment is tear inducing; Never come across such a unique skill. 10 out of 10.
- The way he beats himself up through his thoughts; Describing his misery through, again, his poetic style of writing. You almost feel for this guy as if he was actually real.
To be able to induce emotion through your reader is a very powerful gift and you need to hang on to this Spit.
- Uses a Novel Format which you notice through the handling of conversation by Spit.
Another talent that
Spitfly would be wise to keep or even find ways to make better, if their is such a way?
- The way he comes out with something that at first made me frown but realized at the bottom was just a thought he never wanted to utter.
"Yeah well, my girlfriend has been shot by b****es looking to come after me, they still have her, I'm gonna kill them, but sure, I'll f*** you after three minutes" that's what I wanted to tell her anyway. The shock of thinking he would blurt out such a sentence to the women but turned out to be his mixed thoughts which I found pretty clever.
Dislikes..
- There are moments where the Description of his movements could be better described.
i.e. "My Mammal Sauce" Parts in which I feel more of that poetic talent can be best used with better words.
I threw the case onto my bed and grabbed a black blazer. I grabbed my case and began to exit my apartment before my phone started ringing. I picked it up slowly, an unknown number. It sounds a little rhetorical, adding a style like the above talents I know Spitfly has in his poetic nature.
The Conclusion..
Spitfly never ceases to amaze me. Every month this youngster goes from strength to strength.
His ambition can get him any World Title he wishes, even win a Crucible.
Being an Elite talent already, he is definitely one of the most talented writers i've seen and i've had the pleasure to see this guy mature from a mid-carder through the years of the UWA to becoming who he his today in TNT and XPWA.
His odd mistakes through description seem to be only odd glitches like the odd spelling mistake as he's proved that he has the poetic skill to write a Role playing Masterpiece.
All in all, Spitfly is up there with Mind's Eye, Michael Edwards and the other gifted talents and there is nothing I can teach him now. Only time will improve him further. Good work Spit.
November 28th, 2005 1:17 PM
This will be my Second review of Spitfly, over a Year since the last re-review which I gave Spit a Mid-Carder Status.
I hope to see more improvement this time.. So let's get right too it.
WooooW!! I am impressed by this change in skill, in fact I'm dazed by the sudden increase in high quality that I see here.
All his Rps start brilliantly, the fine poetic detail in the scene is breath taking when starting the build up.
His choice in words are amazing and far surpass that of a Mid-Carder.
Spitfly has changed his Rp Format to a more 'Novel' Format.
He's drastically changed the quantity in which he talks. There is still some promos in which he might dwindle in too much conversation. In Hunger Strikes Pt 2, there is a point in the rp where Spitfly and the sub-character Jamie, exchange words.
There is a big gap in which you read more description into his feelings and surroundings.
Reading down the list of Rps Spit has posted this month I find that he is much greater
than Mid-Carder.
His quality is consistence and I was impressed a few months back on his progress and how he had changed.. Now I'm happy with what I see. Odd mistake but no great mind is perfect.. I reward Spitfly with the Ranking of ELITE.
A long time coming but well worth the wait as the quality he comes up with every week is Consistent and of the highest degree.
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