Tuesday, October 5, 2004 9:19 PM

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He is a founding member of the Xtreme Revolution, he wont's to show the Hardcore division that he is the true Xtreme Icon. Along with his partner the beautiful Crystal and his com padres Q-Ball, Gorgadore and Hova they are spreading the words of Xtreme in UWA.
Steve keeps the history of events and places them in his rps to remind us how far Steve has developed, which I like cause it gives Steve Xtreme background, history of his career in UWA.
I like how he brought the personality of the cameraman out to be a devious journalist trying to get a scoop through sucking up to him.
Steve's description of Environment, building up the stage for the characters is decent skilled and can be impressive at times. On and off at that point, he's new to E-fedding, not been here a year but he is already showing terrific promise

A bit too much swearing in his rps, needs to be toned down a tad, he can display his anger in other forms as I use my own words.. Instead of F***ing I use Freaken, Kurt Angle does the same thing in WWE. You can give frustration without needing to swear as Promos of that language content would end up after the watershed, or better still make it go F*BEEP*ing make it look like it's been censored it'll give some brilliant realism to the rp.
I have talked to him about his spelling as it tends to let him down. He now spell checks his promos but through close proof reading I still find words that are spelt right but are different description like "barley" instead of using "barely" mistakes like this are easy to give us all the slip seeing as both are spelt right but are mixed up in their meaning.

I think for now a MID-CARDER rating will do. But future reviews may impress me into giving a much higher rating. We shall see...