| Can you tell what's wrong with this picture? If not, go back and read the rules RIGHT NOW!!! First off, let's talk about the background. Ouch! I can barely read it! Try to pair a solid color with a text color that shows up well...if I can't read your story, forget about a dragon. Next, the scenario itself. This girl wants a dragon, yet she lives in a wooden house? I'm thinking no. Also, am I the only one who noticed that this girl is a wee bit...shall we say, nauseating? Number one, her appearance. No silver hair, purple eyes, and all round perfection PLEASE! I like to see a few faults in these people, it makes them more human. Not to say you can't be a blonde, but please keep them normal. Next...her fire lizards. Remember, no more than three other pets, and they shouldn't be all bronzes and golds. We love our other colors too! And if I see one more person who rescued all their pets "just like Menolly!", I'm gonna puke. So don't do it. Now let's move on to the spelling and punctuation. A few mistakes is quite alright, no one is perfect, but try and keep it legible. And lastly- the weyr of JILL??!! Please tell me you can be more creative than that! I know it seems like a lot, but it's really not all that hard, I promise. So please, read the rules and learn from this person's mistake. Good Luck!
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