Written by Wazzie
The Titanic. They called it the
unsinkable ship. They couldn’t have been more wrong. It was sinkable. It sank.
I was there on the ship during
that terrible disaster. It would have been comic if it weren’t so tragic, an
unsinkable ship that sank.
It all started down at the dock.
I suppose that’s the best place to begin, isn’t it? At the start.
"Stop messing around. I
watched you put the tickets in your coat pocket," Anya told her husband,
Gary.
"Yes, but was it this coat?
I can’t find them," he replied.
"You only have one
coat!"
"Found them!" he cried.
"Here you go," he said, handing then to the officer.
"Two adults and two
children," the officer said to them. "This all seems to be in order.
You can go on now."
The four of them walked up the
gangplank and onto the ship, Anya and Gary Ylönen with their twin children,
Reese and Kia.
The Titanic was a magnificent
ship; its sheer size alone was something to be marveled at. Anya recalled
someone saying to her that the Titanic was the largest moving object ever built
by human hands. She looked up at the four funnels with their red paint with
gray tips. Already smoke was pouring out of them.
They walked across the deck and
down into the main part of the ship, then followed signs towards the steerage
sleeping areas to drop off their luggage.
As there were four of them, they
had one small room to themselves, instead of sharing like they would have had
they been alone. The room was bare except for two identical bunk beds.
"I want the top bunk!"
Gary cried out, running into the room and putting the bags down.
"Fine," Anya told him,
laughing at his childish behavior.
As Anya listened, she heard
people outside of the room talking about the first class section of the ship.
Apparently they had multiple rooms for each person and they were all decorated
as fancy as a hotel, with carved wooden panels, expensive paintings, and
carpeted floors. She looked around the bare gray walls until her eyes drifted
to the uncovered floorboards underfoot. Anya suddenly wished she had done
better in life and was in one of the luxurious suites upstairs instead of in
this cold, dark, tiny room.
"I’m going out on the deck
to get some fresh air. All right?" Anya told Gary.
"Fine by me," he
replied.
"I wasn’t asking you. I was
telling you. All right?" she said back to him with a smile and a cheeky
glint in her eyes as she walked out.
Gary just smiled to himself; she
was always saying sarcastic things like that.
Anya walked along the corridor,
peering out of the darkness at the bare plasterboards.
"No expenses spared
here," she said to herself, grinning. All of a sudden, she felt a jolt.
She realized that it could only be the ship setting sail.
"Bon voyage,"
she whispered, grinning again.
As Anya moved upwards through the
ship, she noticed that it became more and more expensive-looking. What the
people outside her room were saying was true. As she reached the first class
section, she stopped and looked around, awed by what she saw. Each section of
the wall had either a magnificent painting on it or was a delicately carved,
detailed wooden panel. The few areas that were bare were newly painted a crisp
white. She looked around at the people and saw that their clothing was even
more stunning than the decorations. The men were wearing smart new suits and
the women expensive-looking dresses covered with jewelry enough to match the
crown jewels!
Anya walked out onto the deck and
the first thing she noticed was a broken top, abandoned by some child. Anya
picked it up and quickly pocketed it. She thought that Gary might be able to
fix it. It would keep the children entertained on this long voyage.
She continued to walk across the
deck until she reached the point at the front of the ship. She peered over the
edge and watched the ship’s point cutting through the waves as if they were
only air, with seemingly no effort. She admired its sheer power, and as she
stood there, a wave a relief washed over her. At last she was getting away from
England, away from the fuss of her family not approving of Gary. At last she
was going to get away and start a new life with him and their children. That
was all she had ever wanted. As she stood there, there was no way she could
have known what horrors were to be bestowed upon her. There was no way she
could have known how her dream was to be taken from her again. If she had, she
would have thrown herself over the edge of the ship rather than face what she
was to be put through.
The rest of the day slipped by in
a flash. The four of them stayed out on the deck playing games, only returning
down to the inside of the ship for meals.
There was a party after dinner
was finished and every steerage passenger attended. The richer people were too
proud to come down. Anya, Gary, Kia, and Reese danced until after midnight,
only stopping when the musicians stopped due to tiredness. After the party, the
four of them returned to their cabin, still laughing as they climbed into bed.
It was on the fifth night when
everything started to go wrong. Anya and Gary had just carried the children
back to the cabin after they had both fallen asleep. They were only six and
were not used to late nights. They had put them both to bed and were about to
head back to that night’s party when they felt a tremendous shudder.
"What the heck was
that?" Gary cried.
"Don’t ask me," Anya
replied.
They both stood there for a
minute, holding onto the bunk beds in case it happened again. When it became
clear that there would be no repeat performance, they walked out of the cabin
and returned to the party.
After the shudder, the party was
less lively and everyone seemed very tense. There were fewer people dancing and
very few of the musicians continued to play.
After about half an hour, people
started to notice a trickle of water running across the floor. One by one,
everyone stopped what they were doing and started to stare at this trickle of
water. As they watched the trickle became a small stream running across the
floor, more and more water came and the stream flowed more strongly. Someone
screamed, and hell broke loose.
The scream had released everyone
from the spell the water had put on them. People were running around like
headless chickens, screaming, panicking. Anya looked around at them. She felt
like she was fixed to the spot, unable to move. She stared at everyone yet
didn’t realize what was happening until Gary grabbed her hand and pulled her
out of the room, then down the corridor toward their cabin. He ran in, picked
up Reese, and handed him to Anya, then went back and got Kia. They all started
running up towards the deck.
All the way, they saw people in
various stages of panic and distress, old men jumping around, rich women
worrying that their new dresses might be ruined by the water, children
screaming with excitement, not quite understanding what was happening, They
just ran past them all and headed upwards. They reached the deck and saw a
lifeboat about to be lowered. They ran towards it and almost reached it when a
crewman stopped them.
"Women and children
only," he said.
Gary turned to Anya.
"Go. Take the children.
Don’t let anything happen to them. Make sure that they are safe. Do it! Do it
for me."
Anya didn’t say anything. She
just nodded. Gary bent down to Reese and Kia and gave them both a hug.
"Go with Mummy. Everything
is going to be all right. Don’t be scared." Anya noticed a tear in the
corner of his eye. She stepped into the boat and Gary lifted the children in
after her. As the boat was being lowered to the water she waved good-bye to him.
As he waved back, he smiled at her, and unable to keep it back, he mouthed to
her, "It’ll be all right."
She smiled back at him. As their
eyes met, they somehow knew they would never see each other again.
As the lifeboat got further away
from the Titanic, Gary’s figure became blurred into the mass of people still on
the ship, frantically trying to get off, yet Anya somehow knew that he was
still watching to see that they got away safely.
Anya was too wrapped up in her
misery to notice the cold. She took off her coat and wrapped it around the
children, who lay asleep side-by-side at her feet. After what seemed like
hours, she looked up at the Titanic. It was tipped up on end, almost vertical.
Suddenly, there was a mighty thundering crack and half the ship fell back down
towards the water. It had snapped clean in half!
Anya watched as the lights
flickered and eventually went out in both parts of the ship. Three of the
ship’s four funnels had already been detached from the ship and had sunk. The
fourth was half under the water and was sinking rapidly.
One half of the ship was half
underneath the water. Anya watched it until it had completely submerged into
the sea’s dark and murky depths. She turned to look at the other half. It stood
on end and was slowly sinking down. Anya saw people hanging off the sides of
the ship and some of them were falling off. She felt like she was watching a
silent movie. She knew the people falling off must have been screaming, but she
could not hear them at all.
The rest of the ship sank and the
whole lifeboat watched in silence, all with respect. Many of them, like Anya,
still had friends and family on the ship when it went down. She hoped
desperately that Gary had gotten off before the ship had gone down, but she
knew in her heart that he hadn’t.
Suddenly, as if a blanket had
been lifted off her, she felt how cold it was. She lay down next to her
children and tried to go to sleep, hoping that when she awoke she would find it
had all been horrible nightmare, knowing that it wouldn’t happen. She closed
her eyes and drifted off, the gentle rocking of the boat soothing her.
While she was asleep, she dreamed
of Gary. She dreamt that he had asked her to make one last promise to him. Make
sure that Reese and Kia were all right, make sure that nothing happened to
them. Promise that they would all make it through.
When Anya awoke, it was daylight.
She found that someone had draped a coat over her during the night and she was
glad of the warmth. The first thing she noticed was a ship sailing towards
them. She looked down towards her children and began to shake Reese awake
gently.
As he came around, he said,
"Where’s Daddy, Mum?"
"He’s…not here yet,"
she told him, fighting back tears.
Anya leaned over Reese and
started to shake Kia, but she wouldn’t wake. Anya rolled her over and looked
into her face. It was chalk white. The cold had gotten her in the night. She
was dead.
Anya thought, It’s bad enough
when someone who has had the best part of their life dies, but for a child,
just six, it shouldn’t be possible. Anya just felt numb. She couldn’t feel
her body. All the emotions that had been running through her had just been cut
off. She couldn’t speak, cry, or do anything. She had lost her husband and her
daughter and this terrible ordeal was still not over. She sat in silence, not
noticing anything.
The next time she became aware of
anything was when she was aboard the Carpathia. It was the ship she had seen in
the distance whilst in the lifeboat. The ship had thrown down a rope ladder and
those who were able helped those who were not climb up to safety. The young
helped the old. The men helped the children. Everyone just wanted to be up and
away from the water.
As Anya stood by the railings on
the deck of the Carpathia, she looked out over where the Titanic had sunk. The
water was the grave of Gary and Kia. She half-wished she hadn’t survived. She
had broken that promise she had made to Gary, that she would make sure the
children were all right. Anya looked down at Reese, who was holding her hand.
There was no way she could leave him now. He had no one else.
"It’s just you and me
now," she said to him.
That all happened about ten years
ago. At first I wrote this for Reese. He wanted to know what had happened to
his father and sister. But then I thought that others might want to know what
happened on that fateful first and last voyage of the Titanic--the death it
caused of so many of its passengers and the suffering of its few survivors.
Two thousand, two hundred people
were on the ship. Twenty lifeboats, some only half-full of people, were sent
down. One lifeboat returned to get people out of the water. Only six returned
to safety.
The broken spinning top I found
whilst on board the Titanic, I still have. I keep it as what you might call a
souvenir.
You never get over losing loved
ones in such a tragic way. The memories still haunt me, but it makes you
appreciate life more. Most people take it for granted that they are still here.
I could never do that now. I’m glad that I got a chance to see my son grow up,
but I still long for the day that I am back with Gary and Kia.
The End.