TORN
Written by Kady and Sarah
Based on some situations originated by James Cameron.
It was 1865. Near
the end of the Civil War. Hard times for everyone. Families often ate rotten
food, or sometimes none at all. Up North a little more, the Yankees of the
North and the Confederates from the South were locked in a deep, bloody Civil
War over whether or not their country would stay together or separate the North
and the South.
A young girl lives
deep in the woods of Virginia...Confederate territory. Her family scrounges up
enough food for them to live on, but not by much. Her older brother, Jacob, had
volunteered to be a soldier in the army. Rose almost cried when he went away.
He was her favorite brother.
One night, she was
making her usual rounds, checking the chicken coop and the barn, when she heard
strange shuffling noises. She ran back to the house, and got her brother, Philippe.
They crept round the henhouse, still hearing the same noises. Philippe yanked
open the door. He looked down, and let out a strangled cry.
"Well, what do
you know, Rose? We done found ourselves a Yank."
"Appears that
way, Philippe. A Yankee soldier, no less."
"Get up, you!
Stand here where I can see you!"
He slowly crawled
out of the chicken coop, and stood to his full height of almost six feet. He
looked about a year or two older than herself, but she couldn't be sure,
because he was so skinny and dirty.
"Please don't
harm me. I was just looking for a warm place to sleep, was all."
"I wouldn't
reckon that we'd believe a Yank," he said. "But I guess we can help
you get home. Where do ya live?"
"I ain't got a
home."
"Well, we'll
get ya cleaned up, and fed a good meal, before we send you on your way."
"I thank you
kindly, now."
"Well, what's
your name, boy?"
"Jack. Jack
Dawson."
"Well, Dawson,
come with me. You can sleep in the hayloft in the barn, and Rose, go get some
of the leftover cornbread from supper."
She ran to the
house as fast as she could. This man, Yank or not, looked like he hadn't eaten
for days, maybe weeks. She sneaked the food to the barn, and watched him eat
everything faster than her eyes would go.
"Thank you,
ma'am, for the food. I'm much obliged."
She turned her head
in disdain, but was already formulating a plan in her head... she was going to
see him again...tonight.
"Now that
you're fed, Yank, it's about time to clean you up. I brought some soap, and you
can use the bucket over there to wash yourself. We'll be waiting outside, so no
funny stuff!"
She turned on her
heel, followed by Philippe, who repeated her warning.
Ten minutes later,
he stepped out of the barn, looking like a new man, or boy. All cleaned up,
with the dried blood and mud off his face. He looked no older than Rose.
"Well, I sure
am beat," Jack said. "I'll head to the hayloft for my first good
night's sleep in a while."
"Rose, Mama's
still visiting Aunt Laura, so she ain't gotta know anything about this.
Understood?"
"Yes."
"I'm not gonna
watch him. I don't know why, but I feel like I trust him."
"Good night, Philippe."
"Good night,
Rose."
She walked back to
the house, and went upstairs to her room. She took off her corset, glad to breath
normally again, and got in her long, flannel nightgown. She was going to wait
fifteen minutes, and then sneak out her window. Philippe was not a sound
sleeper, and the bottom step creaked, so he'd be sure to hear her.
She slowly opened
the window and got out, careful to leave a stick under the frame so she could
get back in. She crossed the roof, and made her way to the barn. A landing was
just five feet away, and she was sure she could make it. She backed up to get a
running start, and soon leaped off the edge. Her fingers just caught the
landing. She shrieked aloud. A face appeared in the barn window. He quickly
pulled her up, and then through the window.
They talked for
hours, and when daylight started to come, they decided on a plan of
action...they were going to run away together. Jack had been alone most of his
life, and had managed to provide well enough for himself and another, so they
were leaving as soon as Rose could collect her things. She jumped back to her roof,
and found a satchel to carry her things.
Dear Philippe,
I'm sorry I have
to leave you like this, but I've fallen in love with Jack. I know what you're
going to say, with him being a Yank and all, but I have looked past that, to
see what a wonderful person he is. Someday, I hope you will find someone to
love as much as I love Jack. I have to say good-bye now, but I wish you the
best, and maybe someday I'll write you. I beg you not to send out a search
party. I know what I'm doing, and will do it, no matter what you say. I wish
you the best, and look forward to seeing you again.
Your loving
sister,
Rose DeWitt Bukater
As soon as it was
full, she tossed it to Jack, and leapt for the ground.
"I didn't know
you were so athletic, for a girl. Especially in that long skirt."
"Well, let's
get going. Philippe should be waking up in a little while. I left him a
note."
"Aw...gosh,
Rose, I wish you hadn't done that. He might know where we're heading now."
"No. I made
sure not to say anything that would give him a clue."
"Rose, I love
you."
"I love you,
too, Jack."
They kissed on the
hill just as the sun rose, as bright and passionate as the lovers themselves.
The End.