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Refuge- Part 1

Author: mirawesting@hotmail.com
Content/Safety level for children: CAUTION

She stood motionless on the balls of her feet twelve meters away from him. When she moved, she was silent but when she was still, the air around her seemed to crackle with some sort of inhuman energy. This was the first time that Riddick had seen her but her smell was familiar...very. After a month on the second rate trading vessel, Riddick knew the distinct scent of all eleven other passengers although he had only been formally introduced to two.

"Who's she?" Jack piped up from his left. They'd been restrained in such a way that they could not see each other and conversation had been minimal for a few weeks.

Riddick did not answer her. Partially because he did not know. Mostly because he was still busy watching the girl -

-As she watched him. Intently. Although he could not be sure, she looked as if she were making a decision; like a cat poised directly between hissing and purring. A simple once over would have convinced most that this particular female was better suited to the latter but something in her stance suggested hidden danger. Maybe it was the way she held herself, perfectly positioned to either attack or defend. Maybe it was her smell - clean, deep and dark. Maybe he'd seen enough evil to recognize in human immediately.

Maybe it was just the fact that she was in a room that no other civilian would even approach. And she was drawing closer to him. When she was only a few feet away, she crouched and continued her scrutiny up close. Riddick let her. Meeting her gaze when it finally fell on his face, he waited for her to finish her appraisal.

"You're the killer." Her voice was husky, unexpectedly so. "How many did you kill?"

"I didn't count." It was a lie but lying was not his worst sin.

"How long is your sentence?"

"Life."

A slight smile curled the curled the corner of her lips causing Riddick's blood to heat. What kind of reaction was that? Fear, he'd understand. Loathing, pity, shock even but...pleasure, fiendish glee - she was asking for a world of pain. "What do you want?" Cool menace was evident in his voice.

The woman winked at him almost impishly. Suddenly, there was a movement behind her, a hand came to rest on her head. The hand of a tall, middle-aged man. Average looks, perfect posture, non-descript dress - clearly a synthetic life form. Ten years before Earth's government had spent hundreds of billions of credits to create an artificial intelligent in the perfect image of man. Problem was they were too perfect - perfectly polite, perfectly educated, perfectly average. Humans could pick them out of a crowd at a hundred paces. The government had sacked the program and employed the existing prototypes in a variety of administrative positions in schools, orphanages and prisons. Riddick wondered what one was doing out in the middle of explored space. Synths, typically, did not venture far from where they were placed.

"Mr. Riddick, I assure you her curiosity is not idle." The synth tapped the girl on the head once and she stood. "Detri, you know the rules." Turning away from Riddick she shrugged and strolled off in Jack's direction.

Before the synth could follow her, another man joined them in the holding room. After a month of solitude, it felt like a party - a bad one. Riddick recognized the new man as the captain of the freighter. James McMasters. He'd introduced himself to the merc who'd captured Jack and Riddick when they'd come aboard.

"You said you could keep her under control!" The captain was a jumpy man too young for his position. Having a murderer on his ship had made him uneasy but he was plainly terrified as he watched Detri slowly circle the room. Riddick observed the situation with great interest. "Instead she's in here comparing MOs with the other serial killers."

"Detri is not a serial killer. And she was only discussing prison terms with this man. She has an intense interest in the legal system." The woman under discussion had again approached Riddick, the sardonic grin back across her face. This time he studied that face carefully. Her features were pretty in an off-kelter kind of way - eyes and lips too large, up-turned nose, sharp chin and high, high cheekbones. There was what he assumed was a very old scar starting high on her forehead and disappearing into her hairline. The surgery had robbed him of the ability to ascertain precise colors but her skin was light as was her hair. Blonde or strawberry.

It was not the face of a killer but no one was disputing that that was exactly what she was. Her body was firm, not willowly, but womanly with an edge. However, she was not large. Five foot five, he concluded. "Who did you kill? A kid? Someone sick?"

She took a step closer an leaned down so that their faces were mere inches apart. "Soldiers."

"Get that bitch away from my prisoner!" The merc, Lucas, stomped into the room. "Put that crazy piece on a leash, Adams."

Detri laughed deeply and touched her fingertips to Riddick's shoulder. Then, as Lucas moved forward, she slid across the room with another chuckle. "You forget," the synth started, "Detri is not my prisoner. She was released. She has done her time."

"Three years for three lives. Your girl won a sympathy play, don't make her any less of a psycho." Lucas was an uneducated but highly self-appreciative man. He had the build of the typical merc but not the cunning. Riddick had no doubt that he and Jack would be free very soon. They would never have been captured in the first place if Lucas had been working alone. The other merc had been good. Men like Lucas and the late Johns could never have competed against Snyder in his prime. But the merc should have retired. Riddick almost regretted having to kill the old timer.

The synth was not worried as his charge sized Lucas up. "Extenuating circumstances, Lucas. Her childhood made her unique but I assure you, she's perfectly sane."

"Sure." The merc used sarcasm as a veil for his uneasiness as Detri continued her assessment. Like a predator, Riddick noticed, she circled occasionally closing in for a better look and quickly backing down. And Lucas acted like prey, jittery, too cautious.

"Trust me," Detri's voice was low and seductive. She slinked closer to Lucas.

He backed away. "Why should I?"

Detri returned her gaze to meet Riddick's. "I'm rehabilitated." She winked at the shackled man and strode out through the same door from which she'd entered.

"She might not be your prisoner, Adams, but she's in your charge." Captain McMasters did his best imitation of speaking firmly. "Keep her away from the prisoners." With this he, too, left muttering something about investing in a ship with cryo-pod capacity.

That left Adams and Lucas to square off. The odds were weighed heavily in Adams' corner. Not because synths were so much superior to the average human male but because Lucas was far inferior. "Maybe someone bought your 'little girl lost' defense, Synth, but I don't."

"Have you heard her story?"

"She was abandoned. Just like thousands of kids every year."

If a synthetic life form could show exasperation, this one did. "She and tweleve others were abandoned by their own parents when she was eight because their mining community was infested by a nest of endomorphs. The adults saved themselves and left these children to die."

Lucas rolled his eyes. "Endomorphs."

"Ask Mr. Riddick, a nest of endomorphs can be terribly unpleasant. Territorial beasts. And hungary."

Riddick could easily picture the gaping jaws of the creature that had killed Fry as she stood before him. Detri was a survivor if she'd lived through a similar experience.

"She lived for ten years, Lucas, a little girl, hundreds of angry predators, ten years. She watched her friends be eaten, she hid, she fought. When the military landed they didn't identify themselves. She grew up fighting everything that moved - she simply reacted."

"I don't see a lot of remorse," Lucas sneered.

Adams shrugged. "Prison didn't help."

"So you're telling me she's stable?"

Again the shrug. "Her psych evaluation is borderline. All three of the surviving children share a similar profile. I don't know how or what she thinks, no one does, but I've studied her for over four years now. She won't attack unless provoked. Leave her alone and you have nothing to fear."

"I'm not afraid of her."

"Then, you're not very smart."

End Part 1

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