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A Sean Kramer film.

 

 

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            The narrative starts off with Rob Riler, the main character, pulling into the office of his new therapist.  He’s not real impressed with the building, located (camera pan) right next to a fast cash and a white castle.  When he finally gets to talk to his psychologist he reviews all the things that went wrong with him.  The therapist notices that he can’t deal with his problems and concludes Rob has developed an anger problem. 

From this scene it fades to how his wife kicked him out of the house.  A voice over narrates that he and his wife split the duties to pay the bills.  He would organize all the bills and his wife would write the checks and send them in (Series of close ups and narrow shots).  Unfortunately, his wife put the check in front of the payment stubs and covered the window of the address for all of the bills.  A week later, they received collection notices and 15 return to sender envelopes.  He then narrates how he hated how they got cell phones.  He thought they would be nice to schedule things and keep in touch when necessary.  Oh, how he was wrong.  His wife saw it as a personal tracking device.  Eventually he blew up (extreme close up and zoom) at his wife and she kicked him out (widescreen shot with bags).

The next scene fades to a voice over to where Riler works.  He is a bathroom attendant at the local hotel dining room.  He emphasizes how he went out of his way to make customers happy.  He washed guest’s hands, flushed toilets for them, and even shot them with squirt guns with soap to get people to wash their hands.  One of the guests complains to his manager and then the manager explains that he has to fire him.  He explains he was not that useful anyway.

The narrative then shifts gears to the other characters that he is eventually going to run into.  Hank and his brother Gilbert are at home.  Gilbert is a giant nerd and Hank feels bad for him.  Hank gets one of the “easy” girls in town to come over to enhance Gilbert’s confidence.  Unfortunately all Gilbert can concentrate on was trying to impress her with his horrible photo album, where he looks asleep standing up in every shot.  He then does a robot dance which makes it even worse.  Hank has to go to the grocery store and asks Gilbert if he wants to come along.  Gilbert says he’s out of orange soda and that he has to go.  He ditches the girl that comes over to see him and they leave to go to grocery store.

As they pull out to leave it fades to the voice over of Rob talking about the book store incident.  He went in to get books for school and had to spend a lot of money.  Since he was going to eat lunch after he went there, he brought his lunchbox into the store.  When leaving the store, the security guard comes up to him (which looks like his therapist) and asks him if he paid for the lunchbox and to open it up.  Rob basically refuses and insults the security guard which causes a big scene and got him banned from the bookstore.

The scene then fades to the other characters going to the grocery store.  Hank makes Gilbert ride in the back seat and stay in the car.  Gilbert is upset and pouting so Hank gets him food.  When Hank leaves Gilbert crawls up to the front seat and acts like he is driving.  As he pans to his left he sees a dog in the car next to him watching him eat.  Gilbert makes a face at the dog and it starts barking like crazy.  While this is going on, Hank is in the grocery store U-scan aisle waiting to check out.  He is being held up by imbeciles that are older than time and don’t know how computers work, can’t see the screen, a lady who forgot one thing, another lady who doesn’t understand how to scan an avocado, and Denny who is arguing with the cashier that the store should know that tomato is a fruit.  While he is in line, rack focus and audio editing will seamlessly transition from the people cashing out and Hank getting impatient in line.  Gilbert is now getting out of the car and getting the dog all riled up.  He is now eating it in the dogs face.  Denny enters the scene and sees someone making his dog go crazy.  He yells at Gilbert in the parking lot and threatens to hurt him.  When Denny is about to get in his car, he notices the dog urinated all over the car and is about to hit Gilbert when Hank is coming back.  He stops the fight and offers Denny a drink.

The scene goes back to the therapist office and he concludes that Rob has an anger problem because he doesn’t do anything about his problems.  Rob tells him that he doesn’t see a diploma on the wall.  The therapist then confides that he is not a real psychologist.  Rob is infuriated, but the “psychologist” cools him down with his great idea- make revenge at the hotel.  Since he was going to meet Denny up at the hotel to eat, the psychologist comes along.

Denny, Hank, and Gilbert show up and they get a table with Rob and the therapist.  They talk about get rich quick ideas, such as copyrighting the word “the” and becoming a rapper.  Denny suddenly gets neurotic about how long his food is taking and then walks directly in the kitchen and causes a huge scene.  Rob brings up his problem with the place and they all shift their thoughts to all revenging the hotel dining room together.  Gilbert realizes he brought his hamster and lets it go.  The camera follows it around as people are screaming.  Hank just walks around screaming in the restaurant.  Rob turns off the whole computer system.  The therapist takes all the crayons away from the children to make them cry.  The whole restaurant turns into chaos.  Rob then confides in a voice over how much better he feels, as a “closed for awhile” on the dining room fades to black.

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